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176 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 11, 2016
“I assume we’re just busting in the door,” he said.
Torch gave him serious side eye. “Nooo,” he drawled. “That would be tacky. We’re going to wait until they order takeout and are all distracted by yummy fried things or pepperoni things. Then we are going to bust in the door.”
“I assume you’ll confiscate their takeout.”
“Wouldn’t want to leave evidence.” — Rave and Torch
Take my rating and review with a grain of salt, I was reading it between midnight and 3ish am. Not a bad book but what I call fictional popcorn, Dragon Fever is one of those books that is just enough to keep the mind occupied. Definitely has its place in the world but is ultimately forgettable. You will likely want to slap the hero, Rave Dorado, for his pigheadedness. Like the heroine, Piper Ramirez, for her sass and intelligence (even if she doesn't get nearly enough chance to show it). And likely see the stories for the rest of the series. It's not badly written but not brilliant either some of the lines made me smile. Particularly from Torch, Rave's cousin and his second in command. The plot is a simple soulmate plot with a twist. Without his soulmate, Rave will eventually turn to succumb to the genetically passed-on condition, petralys and turn to stone as his king and brother Bale is.
I'm trying to keep to this review as short as possible. So I said I liked the writing or the quotes so I'll add some here.
• “At least we know what time it is, Miss Clocks-Are-a-Construct-of-the-Patriarchy.”
“Well, they are,” Anjali said. She sketched one fingertip skyward, all dozen tin bangles on her wrist falling toward her elbow with a clatter. “The arc of the celestial bodies and the flow of the seasons should be enough to guide our days and nights.”
“Uh huh,” — This says so much about Anj and I really like it as a woman. Of the three Anjali is the hippy child. (Piper and Anjali)
• She knew she shouldn’t stare, but she’d never been approached by such a gorgeous man. No, gorgeous wasn’t quite right. On some other man those sharp cheekbones and taut jaw would be gorgeous, the tousled cocoa-brown hair would be modish.
On this man… It was like the covalent bonds of carbon: in one incarnation, carbon bonds made graphite, soft and black, but one small shift in the bonds created diamond, hard and glittering and crystal clear. — I have to include this as an effective use of profession or training as a way to describe a man. It's just pleasing phrasing too. (Piper)
• “No more please and thank you and polite words. Just…fuck yeah.” — There is such blatant want and need in this one line as is the precise point. (Rave)
• “Geothermal heat and angled mirrors keep everything alive.” A note of diffidence crept into his voice. “Even things that shouldn’t be here.”
She plucked the wine bottle from his lax grasp and took a long swallow. Yet another gasp as the reckless rush of wine swirled through her.
She turned within the confines of his embrace and held the bottle to his mouth. “Maybe these things shouldn’t be here, but they want to be here,” — I'm only including this because I want to say that this place, Rave's space, his grotto was the highlight of the story for me. It's stunning and suits Piper, suits a mate of Rave even though he built it and protected it a sacred well before he met her. (Rave and Piper)
• “Quite the prize you’ve found, brother.”
She shot a narrow-eyed glare in the direction of the lurking shape she could almost but not quite make out. “I’m no one’s prize.”
“Sharper than Damascus steel, more precious than gems,” Bale said. “Clearly a pain in the ass.” — I really like the relationship we see between Bale and Piper. They both comment on it, they are similar. Bale resects her and together they do gang up on Rave. I imagine Piper could play an interesting role in Dragon Fall, Bale and Esme's story. (Bale and Piper)
• “Lars wouldn’t…” She put her hand over her mouth and realized she couldn’t say something she wasn’t sure she believed. Slowly she lowered her hand. “He might. He’s always gotten what he wanted. He wants Esme, always has.”
“Then maybe it’s time we see what Esme wants.” — I appreciate this interaction. That idea of impulsively thinking they wouldn't but knowing on some level that is a lie. Piper is one who wants to see the best in people, Lars (the series' ongoing villain) makes it so hard. Rave's line is equally good acknowledging the import of Esme's wants and free will in the situation. (Piper and Rave)
I like Torch, he honestly made me laugh a couple of times. He is my fave character in the book by far, I love the friend/family member that is willing to call the alpha idiot on his stupidity and make him see the light. As such I think some of what was so offputting about this book was not actually to with the Dragon Fever story itself, but rather the preview of the second book in the Masters of the Flame series. Dragon Fate is Torch and Anjali's story. Honestly the Torch in Dragon Fever and the Torch in Dragon Fate feel like two different people. We know that Torch is head of security for both The Keep and the Nox Incendi, he inevitably has a harsh streak. What I didn't expect was for the first chapter of Dragon Fate to be Torch using his dragon to essentially torture Anjali with flight. I guess we are just seeing the two sides of him, his business side and his tribe side but it's like chalk and cheese. Should it have impacted me and my reading of Dragon Fever as much as it did? No, definitely not. But here we are.
“This is just too bizarre. I can’t even… I don’t know what I expected to happen.”
“Well, you came to Las Vegas for a girls’ night out. Presumably you expected to take some chances, lose more than you could really afford, and make some questionable choices that you wouldn’t have to talk about once you left here.”
She blinked again. “Check, check, and check.”
Which one was he? — Piper and Rave
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