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First published February 2, 2016
This novel was provided free of charge by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Surprisingly fun read!
This is the story of two men who couldn't be more different. One is a wizard, the other a master swordsman. One is what we today would call a nerd and the other a jock. One is an orphan, the other a prince. They do have two things in common, they are best friends and thieves. In fact, they happen to be very good thieves.
Azaroth, the wizard, has revenge on his mind when he plans on stealing a very special book. Okay, not special it's just plain EVIL. It doesn't matter how good your intentions are if try to use it you'll only end up bring about the end of the world. Of course, Azaroth and Sefalin aren't the only ones who want it.
So starts the adventure and the action and it's non-stop from pretty much the first page to the last page. There is magic! Sword fighting! What more can you ask for! It was downright fun! Now I have to admit that some of the sword fighting was a bit over the top. I just couldn't help but say "yeah right" a few times but hell it's a fantasy novel so who the hell cares. If someone is throwing fireballs around, who am I to complain about a few unrealistic sword fighting moves?
Character development was done well enough for a book of this length. I got to like Sefalin much more than Azaroth which is interesting because the author gives much more of a backstory to Azaroth than Sefalin.
Now, why I didn't give it five stars: I had problems with the plot. There where places in the book where suddenly you would find yourself in someplace new and you have no clue how the story got there. Suddenly there are new characters and you have no idea who they are. There's pretty much no set up for the new characters. After reading five or six pages I would finally go, "oh I get what's going on now." Then with the next chapter, bam, you're back to the normal plot and characters and you're left scratching your head. The whole process broke up the flow of the plot and I think it could have been handled in a better way. However, in the end, the climax was well done and satisfying.
Finally, I think I should mention the violence. This is not a book for young readers or the faint of heart. If you are bothered at all by blood and gore, then this is not the book for you. Otherwise, it was a quick, fun read.
1) The occasional dialog quirks (e.g. Sefalin's accent seems to shift here and there),I appreciated the fact that the main female character Orayna was resourceful, spirited, brave, and not shy about jumping into the fight when things got dicey.
2) a weird plot omission ,
and 3) an ending that tries a little too hard to setup a sequel