This was Book 1 in the Two-Lane Wyoming Series and was a free offer on Amazon. Rating: sensual scenes and language [mild profanity]. I had to buy this… you understand… I could not let this pass. The title just grabbed me.
At the tender age of just barely eighteen, Annemarie Garrett made two mistakes that cost her dearly. The first was to trust a smooth talking, tall drink of water and let him seduce her. The second was to trust in her protection which let her down and led to an unplanned pregnancy. That tall drink of water turned out to be twice her age, married with kids of his own and wanted nothing to do with her or ‘her problem’ after she confronted him with the consequence.
Skip forward several years and we find Annemarie and son Cody living on a spread she called Garrett Ranch. Actually, it was five hundred acres of useless scrub brush, rock, with no access to water, or appropriate grazing land. Annemarie did the best she could with what she had. The house was a fire trap or money pit and reminded me of the movie The Money Pit with its slogan ‘Home Crap Home.’ Throwing electrical breakers on a daily basis was becoming old and dangerous. She needed help.
Gabriel Collins, master electrician, grew up with six older brothers and no hope of getting any part of the family ranch. So, he went out on his own trying to make a name for himself establishing his electrical business. When he arrived at the Garrett Ranch… he found things worse than he imagined and better than he imagined when he met Annemarie. You could feel the chemistry between them.
Our author did an excellent job establishing the chemistry between our main characters. It was a slow simmer before going into a full-on rolling boil. I hate when authors jump straight into bed with characters without establishing a relationship between them. That was what got Annemarie into trouble in the first place and she was a bit gun-shy where men were concerned.
What I liked: I loved young Cody, Annemarie’s five-year-old son. He was adorable and made the story. You just knew Gabe, Annie, and Cody would make a great family. They hit it off from the start. Cody adored Gabe and Gabe adored Cody and he adored Annie [his pet name for her]. I could hardly wait before they made it official.
So, where was the angst? Well, with the SOB that got her pregnant in the first place. When paternity was proven, Annemarie demanded he take responsibility for his child. Thomas Grant Jr. had to fess up to having had an affair and producing a child. His wife believed him when he said it wasn’t his fault. Was it ever? Thomas Grant Sr. adored his grand child and forced Junior to set aside a parcel of land for Cody’s future. Junior… of course picked the worst section of the Grant Ranch to sign over for Cody. It had a house with subpar wiring [it was a fire-trap]. There was a barn, dilapidated out buildings, and had a fencing problem. The worst was the washed-out access road to her house that Grant neglected and Annamarie couldn’t afford to fix. It forced her to travel a longer route across Grant property that took her right past the main complex at the Grant Ranch. Yeah, sign him up for father of the year.
When Thomas Jr. saw Gabe hanging around Annemarie, you knew there would be trouble ‘cause Thomas had the attitude… ‘If I can’t have her… no one will.’ What a sleaze. His wife was no better throwing shade at Annemarie every chance she had. She was blatant and cruel. Her son was no better and bullied his half-brother who was half his age. Yeah, that acorn didn’t fall far from the tree. I am angry that Thomas Sr. didn’t rein in his toad of a son. He kept thinking he would get better while in the mean time Annemarie and Cody suffered. Nope… didn’t like that one bit.
This was a delightful story about family, loyalty, doing the right thing, and simply being a human being rather than a rattlesnake. I loved Gabe’s family and their support of him with Annie and Cody. That was sweet. Annie’s family adored Gabe and her together. Everyone was supportive except… Thomas Jr and he showed out big time. The comeuppance was deserved but I wanted more. Guess that was my blood-lust for his hide and my desire that his wife shouldn’t get off so easily. Although she is stuck with Jr. and that brat of a son. That should be pain enough… shame on me.
What I didn’t like: long stretches of what I would call filler. I enjoyed the characters but lots of dialogue and stuff… got in the way of the story. However, that was the way the author wanted to go so… I will leave it there. When the story ended, there was an excerpt from Once Burned a Northstar Novel. [3.5-stars rounded to 4]