What have I just read? This is absolutely crap, everything about this book was utter shit.
Spoilers below.
The plot had so much potential, I have read a book similar to this plot and it was honestly amazing! Connected by A.E Murphy - completely adored this. Well anyway, the delivery of the plot in Beg was ridiculously poor. I mean it could have worked but there was time jumps and what not so there was NO CONNECTION between the characters whatsoever. I was just sitting there reading Cam's point of view where he states how much he dislikes her and how she's ugly or fat I think. Next fucking chapter, he finds her so damn beautiful! Excuse me, but what the fuck did I miss? How can you go from 0-100 real quick? Consistency is key so if she is fucking ugly, let her be ugly for the whole damn book, how is she beautiful all of a sudden? I know this is fiction but lets be realistic for once. It's cool if the author wants the girl to come across pretty in the book at a later date but make it happen gradually and effortlessly so the readers can believe it.
"Something about her swollen body that has captivated me" That is a fucking weird reason to find her 'seductive' as he stated. Maybe it's the way the sentence was written, but I find that very weird and cringy. I'm not saying pregnant women bodies are ugly, however the way he went from hate to finding her beautiful and wanting her, was terribly fast and unrealistic.
The book didn't flow at all, I didn't understand why he felt one thing and then felt the opposite one second later. There was no clarity, nothing was described properly and the characters were underdeveloped. Character building is key, fucking essential af but this was not included in the book. His attraction and feelings for the girl (forgot her damn name) was sudden and obviously felt off-key to me. Also, coming to the end of the book, Cam said he wants to fucking marry her!! How in the fuck did he come to make this decision, what are his reasons? This is just absolutely ridiculous. What kind of bullshit is this pls?
AND I HATE THE FACT THIS IS A THREE PART SERIES. BECAUSE OF THE FUCKING END, I WANT TO READ THE NEXT DAMN PART. I'M SO MAD THAT THIS WAS AWFUL AS IT COULD HAVE DEVELOPED INTO SUCH A BEAUTIFUL LONGER READ.