Mine

by Daisy Philips

Annie was attracted to her new neighbor from the start, but he was too young, too hot, too much for her. But that didn’t stop her from fanaticizing.

From the moment Dane set eyes on Annie, he knew she was destined to be his. He tries to be patient, but when he sees her with another man, he knows he has to take desperate measures to get her to see thing his way.

Note - this story includes abduction and "consensual non-consent" and may disturb some.
Please also note that this is an 8,500 word short story.

63 pages, Kindle Edition

Published February 15, 2016

Reviews

[Barbara➰ · Rating 1 out of 5]

Wow...this was...not very good. Way too many errors such as using "she" when it was supposed to be "he", overuse of exclamation points, and what the hell is "He surprised a snort"? That was an actual line in the book....To top it off, the whole stalker/kidnapping story line didn't work for me. Yes he stalks her while living next door but when he "kidnaps" her, they have one sex scene, then they're having a normal conversation about him working for her father etc like they're a couple...not very "kidnapperish" as she says to him at one point. This was just not at all what I was expecting.

And it ends at 64% on my Kindle app. Which is probably a good thing...

[Hana ♡ · Rating 3 out of 5]

I felt like this had potential to be really good... I was getting pretty into it and then it just ended. With the way it started I didn't feel like it was going to be a shorter story but the ending felt really abrupt to me.

An overall okay story with a stalker H. He didn't seem too alpha to me but he was pretty determined to be with the h.

H is 27 and h is 32 I believe.

[Deserie williams]

self note: not for me. just my personal triggers. Maybe one day!

[Jennifer McGurk Finn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dane just moved next door to Annie. Her Father hired him to keep an eye on her and he took the job so he could recover from a gunshot wound to his leg. Annie is a kindergarten teacher who is estranged from her Senator Father. She's attracted to her new neighbor but thinks he is too young and too sweet for her. She wants a man who will take charge and dominate her. Dane has watched her masturbate and knows she likes videos with forced abductions and he plans to make her fantasies real.

[Jen ❥ · Rating 3 out of 5]

I liked this one but there were LOTS of typos, to the point it was distracting and annoying. The story was right up my alley but could have been longer and more detailed. Overall, it's a quick and entertaining escape for those who enjoy stalker type heroes.

[Aղցela W. · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a short quick read that I liked. Annie has been fantasizing about her hot young neighbor Dane. Annie has dark fantasy's about being kidnapped. Dane wants her and is waiting to make his move. When Annie starts dating someone else he knows the time has come and he makes his move. When he kidnaps her Annie finds out Dane has been watching her for several months and knows what she wants and needs and he is just the man to give it to her. This book was hot and made me want more. This book had a few errors in it. This was my first time reading this author. I am looking forward to reading more from her.

[100sweet · Rating 4 out of 5]

Really enjoyed this one. The H was STALKERIFIC which is my favorite. Just wish it was longer.

[Sania · Rating 4 out of 5]

Standalone/Cliffhanger: Standalone
Ages of H and h: h is 32 and the H is 27(he's younger than h )
Multi-Luv'n/Ménages: No
Was There Descriptive Sex: Yes
Descriptive Sex &/Or Drama Between H/h With OW/OM: Yes kind of
>>If So, Before or After H/h Hookup: h goes out with her friends and brings home OM, H goes over to under flash pretenses to tell OM to go away.
Contains Cheating: No
Amount of Sex In The Book: A decent amount.
HEA/HFN/etc Ending: HEA
Will This Meet My 'Safety Gang' Buddies' Approval: Yes
Any Triggers/Warnings: Yes
>>Detail: There's dubious consent. H is spying on h without her knowing for her father. It's all a little :/.
Do You Recommend This Book: Yes.
Will You Re-read This Book: Maybe
Would You Read More Books By This Author: Yes

My Thoughts

[seton]

More like 45 pages than 70. Lots of previews in the back. Not sure it's even worth the 99 cents since it wasnt proofread.

[Nina · Rating 3 out of 5]

This short story was ok. It could have used a bit more proofreading though. Also, the overuse of exclamation marks were quite distracting. It started to sound like the characters were just yelling at each other.

I think if this story was to be expanded, it could be good as I see it does have potential.

*Note: the story ended at 68% mark on my kindle.

[Nicole · Rating 5 out of 5]

I liked this short story. It was unexpected for me.

It was a short story and sometimes that's exactly what you want/need. I appreciated that.

Unlike so many authors it was nice that Daisy put in the description that it might be a trigger for some people.

[Lynn · Rating 2 out of 5]

Way too short, I'm still not even sure what was going on in this story.

[J]

DNF.