Will returned home as a prosperous young man beyond his dreams, after inheriting his uncle’s ranch. Life seems perfect in every way…except one. He feels a hole inside and a new bride is the perfect solution to his pain. He requests a mail order bride, and when his bride-to-be steps off the train, he can’t believe his luck. She’s beautiful and smart.…yet full of secrets about the past she is running from.
Will
I believe in God’s plan and I know that he wanted me here. He wants me to take over my uncle’s ranch. Will I find the perfect bride to live my new life with?
Rebekah
He doesn’t know I’m running. I hope he never finds out. This is my last chance to be free.
Will is the perfect man and he deserves the perfect wife. With my past, how could I ever expect to be blessed with a man like Will? I will do my best to be the wife of his dreams but I know marriage is built on the foundation of honesty. Will I be able to work up the courage to tell him about my past?
Not terrible, there's a lot of promise in this story. Nice character development, not perfect but at least the reader can see beyond the beautiful, sexy, perfect humans that exist within this world. After reading a few short stories by this author, Richard Christian, the familiar troublesome troupes of to much coincidence, way to neat wraps ups, and the absolutely attractive perfect female character still exist, but there's improvement within all of it. I wish it could of been a tad longer, go more in depth with certain character motivations because they were interesting ideas.