Or Else What Asked The Flame.

by Mathias Svalina, Paula Cisewski

Genres: Poetry

E-chap

First published January 1, 2008

Reviews

[danielle; ▵ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Rereading

[jess sanford · Rating 2 out of 5]

Relatively incomprehensible, but the language and structure are surprisingly enjoyable. Needs to find itself a bit more and figure out what it really wants to do to resonate with reasonable strength, in my opinion.

[Bunnyhoopla]

"you cheek a fence of finches/ from the classrooms/ in the sunlight/ of August" and " my hands generated/ your parents" and "ash drab and sick milk" and "my name is blindfold" and...well i like it lots. yep.

[Dana Miranda · Rating 4 out of 5]

the language and incomprehensible meaning astound and amaze me with each line.