I received a free copy of this book through a Goodreads giveaway.
I'm always up for a good mystery/thriller, but this one had me scratching my head (more because of the writing rather than the content).
My biggest complaint is all the vast tracts of information dumped on us in huge portions. It comes across like the author is telling the reader 'hey, look at all this scientific mumbo-jumbo, ain't I smart?' Most of the time almost all this information is completely superfluous to the story, and could be cut and not be missed. Along the same lines is the fact that 90% of this scientific mumbo-jumbo needed to be put into layman's terms, ESPECIALLY when the scientists weren't talking to each other. You don't get extra brownie points for making some stuff practically impossible for even readers of above average intelligence to understand.
I have one word on second person PoV... EEW. Here's four more on the subject: Just. Don't. Do. It.
And what's the deal with the random Indian (Aztecan? Native? I really don't know what the correct thing to call him would be) kid that is immune to the anthrax? Every scene he's in makes me want to shake me head (or throw the book at the wall in frustration) when the author tries (and in most cases fails miserably) to try to get across this is someone with little to no contact with the outside world. Sometimes he knows too much for stuff to be believable. Sometimes he knows too little for stuff to be believable. But I can say one thing for certain - there is no way he would have taken the monkey collar is he believed in the old ways as it is made out that he does. One, he'd be terrified of some sort of curse. Two, someone from such a remote village wouldn't be so prone to avarice (unless there's a very very good reason) because chances are the currency is next to useless in his village. Give me a reason why is important to him to make this money and I'll believe it. But until then, it's just a really crappy (and lazy) plot point to get a carrier of the anthrax into the general population.
There is nothing I hate more than an author ignoring specific facts that they had deliberately set out at one point in the book (in one of the famous info-dumps that I detest), and then completely ignore 100 pages later. In this instance, is regarding the Racal suits. It's made very clear when they're putting them on for the first time and taking them off for the first time that it's a two person job because all the zips are stuff are on the back or in places that are hard to reach, coupled with everything needing to be duct-taped once sealed. Note fast forward to the morning of day 2 on the site, and Mason mysteriously is able to suit up and get working in the lab without waiting for someone else or waking them up. You can't have it both ways. Either it's a two person job or it's not. I realize this is a small nitpick, but it was something I picked up on right away, and it made me put the book down.
Now, I've never seen what a mobile level 4 biosafety unit would look like inside (would be cool to walk through one someday though), but I've got little nitpicks here too. I'm imagining the thing as a large shipping container that's been modified. Taking these dimensions into account, I'm having real issues with the whole sleeping on cots thing. Wouldn't bunks be a WAY more efficient way of utilizing space?
One thing that bothered me a lot about this book is that whenever we jumped into the head of a non-doctor, they STILL described things in the same way that a doctor would. The average person isn't going to say (or think) that there was mucosa in the sink. They're going to call it crud or snot or something less, well, clinical than mucosa. It's imperative as a writer to know how the person whose head you're in at the moment would think or talk, and not how the narrator or the author themselves would talk.
The romance portions of the book are completely out of place, and seem add if they were thrown in at the last minute with no clear thought to how they affected or fit in with the main plot. Honestly, the story is no better for their presence, so IMHO should never have made it into the final edits at all.
Overall, I kind of feel let down by this book. How the disease was spread could have been handled much better than it was. Trying to make the book appeal to women by adding an unnecessary romantic aspect was a mistake, because it made the plot weaker instead of stronger. Killing the two main evil guys at the end seemed way took much of a cop out, even though the reason behind it sort of makes sense -- but it's really hard to reconcile a global epidemic of this size happening and the people who could have potentially answered for it get the East way out leaves a bad taste in my mouth.