Lord, this one was... a struggle.
For starters, the plot was almost non-existent. I truly do not know why this was a trilogy, when this entry into the series consisted of almost entirely filler. Eventually we find out the reasons behind everything that's been going down, but it didn't require 300 pages for us to get there. Instead it's full of the Scooby gang just venturing out and fighting some demons and then regrouping, talking about the demons, and then going out again. And we have some flashbacks throughout 20 years of Russian history and scientists carrying out experimental physics tests, something that just felt too science-fiction for Buffy. And the final missing piece to all of this? Some gang warfare!
So all in all, a pretty uninteresting combination.
Add into that some incredibly uncharacteristic dialogue (Giles and Wesley greeting each other with "God save the Queen"? Willow acting as though she can't tell the difference between Giles and Wesley? Anya just making constant blunt references to sex?) and it was very hard to push myself through.
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ORIGINAL REVIEW (3/5)
Read 27/03/2013 - 29/03/2013
I really wanted to enjoy this one more than the first, and some parts were better. Unfortunately, the parts that mildly irritated me in the first book became even more grating this time round.
Firstly, Anya's speech. As a general rule, I was impressed with how all the characters were written, and how the authors got 'into' the characters that are so beloved and so recognisable. The exception to this is Anya, who just felt incredibly uncomfortable. Rather than being adorably clueless and blunt like in the show, a lot of her 'bluntness' felt very forced, and like it was stuck in where it didn't fit, just to try and get a laugh.
Another thing that seemed odd in this book was that people would appear to just come and go for no real reason. Buffy and Riley were out doing recon, returned to Giles' house for literally a paragraph or something, before going back out again. It almost felt like there were a lot of scenes that were 'forced' just to bring cohesion, since there are lots of story threads going on in different areas of L.A/Sunnydale (another example - Gunn decides he needs to travel to Sunnydale, meets Buffy and fights some vamps, and then immediately decides to return to L.A. again... I just think, why bother moving him at all?
The final thing that irritated me was the inclusion of so many un-Buffy-esque elements. As mentioned in the review for The Burning, I'm not a fan of Buffy fighting and investigating gangs. And while there are supernatural elements to the gang's activity, there is still a whole intricate subplot involving actual gang warfare, which felt a little alien to include in the Buffyverse.
Similarly, the Alternity plotline felt very sci-fi, which isn't something that is overly explored on the shows much. Admittedly, there is a lot of crossover between sci-fi and fantasy, but Buffy and Angel do normally fit comfortably on the fantasy side. The psychic abilities, and talk of portals sounds very fantasy, but when you add in a USSR organisation creating a piece of hardware that opens up portals to alternate realities, it does get very sci-fi-ish as opposed to the fantasy side, which, again, feels a little uncomfortable to have Buffy stuck in the middle (although less uncomfortable than gang warfare).
Other than that, though, the characters are enjoyable enough to read, and the general plotline, although weak in parts, is definitely not unreadable.