Bent Over by the Janitor: A First Anal Sex Erotica Story

by Amy Dupont

I couldn’t believe the situation. I’d become stuck in the plastic crawl tube in the little play park we kept at the office for our clients’ kids. It was late at night, and I was going to have to wait until help arrived. When someone finally did try to pull me out, things got even crazier. The husband and wife janitorial team could do anything they wanted to me, and I was stuck! With her mouth on me, though, I was happy to be stuck. As for the janitor…he was absolutely delighted to give me my first anal sex experience.
Warning: This ebook contains very explicit descriptions of sex including group sex, ffm threesome sex, and first anal sex. Only mature adults who won’t find that offensive should read this story.
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It was stupid. I was a professional woman. I’d built a financial services firm with my sister out of nothing! The idea that I would be turned on by anyone in the blue collar world, much less janitors, was absurd. The idea that I’d be turned on when I was in such an impossible situation was worse than absurd. It was incomprehensible. Nonetheless, as they pulled again, all I could think about was the silly and impossible wish that they’d accidentally end up rubbing at my crotch. Fuck. It was so damned idiotic. Nonetheless, I wanted it, and when they pulled again I couldn’t keep myself from moaning again, this time a little louder. The hands on me immediately loosened, and I could almost imagine their faces, the complete looks of indecision and maybe even a little bit of misplaced guilt. I waited, desperate for their touch and desperate for them not to touch me. Finally, I felt a pair of hands again, and then the other. They tried to pull, and God help me I arched my back a little bit to lift my ass in the air.
They noticed because I felt a hand move up my thigh so that the side of it was against my pussy. I pushed back as much as I could as they tried to pull me out again. The hand rubbed at me. Whoever it was still pretended nothing was going on, pretending to be trying to pull me out. That lasted for a minute or two before all pretense disappeared and the person put his hand fully on my pussy and began rubbing. I moaned like a slut again and the second pair of hands began squeezing at my ass cheeks. I felt like a complete and utter whore. I felt wonderful.

7 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 2, 2013

Reviews

[Gypsi Babii · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a very nice short story

[Akshay · Rating 1 out of 5]

Bent Over by the Janitor: A First Anal Sex Erotica Story Author: Amy Dupont 

Rating: ⭐☆☆☆☆ (1 out of 5 glowing stars) 

Bent Over by the Janitor attempts to insert itself into the saturated landscape of quick-read erotica, but unfortunately lacks the essential ingredients of effective storytelling: character development, narrative cohesion, and even basic grammar.

Pacing and Plot: The story wastes no time and jumps straight into its intended climax, which would be forgivable in the erotica genre if it didn’t come at the expense of any believable buildup. There's no context, no setting, no motive—just abrupt action that feels more mechanical than sensual. Characterization: What characterization? The characters are cardboard cutouts at best. The protagonist is unnamed for much of the story and feels more like a vessel than a person. The janitor is even less dimensional—reduced to a fantasy archetype with no personality or realism. Language and Style: The prose is clunky, riddled with clichés, and occasionally unintentionally comical. Descriptions feel forced and unnatural, bordering on parody. There is a lack of editorial polish, with several grammatical errors that distract rather than entice.

Audience Impact: This piece may serve a narrow niche of readers seeking shock-value erotica, but for those looking for even the most basic elements of storytelling or emotional engagement, this story is a hard miss. Ethical & Thematic Concerns: The story borders on problematic in how it presents power dynamics and consent. These issues are glossed over or completely ignored, which is irresponsible in any genre—especially erotica. Without revealing specifics, it’s worth noting that the lack of emotional or psychological depth makes the so-called "climax" feel hollow. There's no tension, no anticipation—just a scene that plays out like a script lacking any human nuance.

Final Verdict:

This book reads like it was written in haste, without care for narrative structure or respect for its audience. Erotica can and should be smart, sensual, and safe—Bent Over by the Janitor is none of these. It’s a poorly executed attempt at titillation that falls flat on every level.

⭐☆☆☆☆ — One glowing star, only because zero isn't an option.