DNF @ 85%.
But Elena, I hear you say. If you were that close, why not finish it?
Listen, I was putting up with the fact that this plot didn't justify a 400+ page novel and a good 40% of the narrative was excessive stage direction. Both lead characters had to describe their every action in detail, right down to clicking through a screensaver to wake up a computer to type up a report. Just say you typed up the report! Or, actually, don't, because it's not at all important to the plot, sum up that you end your ER shifts by doing your paperwork and sometimes that means you end up staying late, which is (or at least could be) an important aspect of your life!
I stuck it through despite this being a best-friends-to-lovers story where the leads hardly seemed like friends at all, because the sex question comes up in the very first chapter and we never get to see what they're like as friends, we only get to see them awkward and at odds with each other until they finally start banging. For most of what I read, they actually don't seem to even like each other.
Still, that wasn't bad enough to make me abandon it. I was skimming past paragraphs of pointless description or everyday minutiae, but I still wanted to find out the plot, so I tried.
I gave up at the beginning of chapter 28, because it should have been chapter 27. And I mean that quite literally. The two chapters are clearly reversed, and this book never should have been released with a mistake that large.
How can I tell? Chapter 27 is from Mia's POV, after a significant family event (which I won't spoil because it's not relevant to my complaint what the event is, only that it happens.) The emotional fallout leads to an important conversation, practically an intervention, for Mia about the state of her love life, and it seems to come out of nowhere, because it references a "talk" with Jay, the love interest, that we don't see happen. I thought it was a weird narrative choice to not actually show the big family event and that talk between our leads, because if the author is detailing screensavers and every sip of a beverage someone takes, why leave out something so big and plot-relevant?
Then Chapter 28 is headed with "Three Weeks Later," and shows Jay showing up to the family event.
...what? Oh, that was supposed to happen first. The event didn't take place three weeks after Mia dealt with the consequences of it, because this isn't a time travel novel and it has to obey the laws of physics. The time skip is between Chapter 26 and "now," except 27 + 28 are in the wrong order, so I didn't know that at first.
This is clearly supposed to be the beginning of the end, the road to the emotional climax that gets our lovebirds back together after the big split that ruined everything...so why publish it in this state? How do two chapters get reversed, and it goes to print this way?