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Unacceptables MC #2
Unspeakable
A heart-revving, thrilling romance from Wall Street Journal & USA Today Bestselling Author, Kristen Hope Mazzola It's finally my time...Everyone has their damn breaking point, why did the president of my MC's daughter have to be mine? She was everything I wanted, and nothing I could have. Being a prospect was hard enough. Living with my father that I had only known for a few years wasn't making life any easier. And there I was, ready to jeopardize it all for love. I went to Vilas to figure out where I came from, little did I know that I wasn't just going to be passing through. This life was pumping through my veins my whole life, I just didn't know it until I walked into the Unacceptable's bar for the first time.Raine Hellock was my kryptonite and come hell or high water, I was going to figure out how to make her UNSPEAKABLE is the 2nd book in the Unacceptables MC Series. All of the books in this series can be read as standalones. This is not for the faint of heart! But if gore, violence, and extreme sexual situations are your cup of tea, this is the read for you.Reading amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2vIL0xgTis The amzn.to/2 amzn.to/2xzEY2o amzn.to/2mkw9qU amzn.to/2r8Upi0
108 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 7, 2016
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Kristen Hope Mazzola
65 books1,106 followersWall Street Journal and USA Today bestselling author Kristen Hope Mazzola is a Florida native now happily rooted in North Carolina with her loving husband and two lazy basset hounds. After several years away from publishing, she has returned to the romance world with a renewed passion for storytelling and a bold, reimagined vision for her Shots on Goal universe. She writes every flavor of contemporary romance— from steamy rom-coms to gritty biker tales to emotional, heart-thumping sports love stories.
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August 19, 2019
Another hit for Kristen
Another great short story by Kristen. I love when they aren’t too short or too long. Hers are just right. You get some grit from the suspense and some smexy time with the characters and we get to stay connected with the family. This book features Raine the daughter of Abel from book one! Can’t wait to get into book three. This book is available on kindle unlimited at the time of my review! ENJOY!!
Another great short story by Kristen. I love when they aren’t too short or too long. Hers are just right. You get some grit from the suspense and some smexy time with the characters and we get to stay connected with the family. This book features Raine the daughter of Abel from book one! Can’t wait to get into book three. This book is available on kindle unlimited at the time of my review! ENJOY!!
August 8, 2017
3.75 STARS
March 14, 2016
4.5 Stars
A Short, Sweet and Sexy Story!!!! I LOVED both Ryder and Raine:)
This was a fast paced love story, the writing and characters were great and the ending...omg, LOVED it!!!!!!
A Short, Sweet and Sexy Story!!!! I LOVED both Ryder and Raine:)
This was a fast paced love story, the writing and characters were great and the ending...omg, LOVED it!!!!!!
October 21, 2018
Ryder and Raine
I wish we had gotten a bit from the three years from Ruder showing up to the present time of the book but still loved it. Super short and easy read. I can’t get enough.
I wish we had gotten a bit from the three years from Ruder showing up to the present time of the book but still loved it. Super short and easy read. I can’t get enough.
March 12, 2016
Unspeakable: An Unacceptables MC
Kristen Hope Mazzola
3.5 stars
Unspeakable is the second book in this series. I had not read the first but there is enough back story to know what is happening if you continue through Chapter 3. At first I was a little confused but then it became clear who was who. The book is a little short for what I wanted and the story line is to the point. This is a love story for sure but I think as we move along we might see some more of Ryder along the way. Maybe I am reading into the story line but it seems there is a cross road that Ryder is moving toward as he is asked to do some pretty serious things to show his allegiance to the MC.
Raine is Abel’s daughter and Ryder is Holt’s son. Until a few years prior Holt didn’t even know his son. Getting away from his mother was the best thing Ryder had done until he met Raine; also the day he met his father.
This short story takes us on the trip through Ryder proving himself to the club and also Abel. He wants more for his daughter than the MC life. He never wanted her to be with a member of his club. He wanted her out of the MC life along with his son. Raine and Ryder are determined to defy the odds and show Abel that they are destined to be together. He can push all he wants but neither one of them will give up on what they have. Walking away from each other isn’t an option.
I loved meeting Cricket and the rest of the gang. I wanted more and I wanted a little more depth to the story. I felt like there was more to Raine and Ryder’s story that we didn’t get to see. Maybe there was more in previous but I didn’t feel lost … just more. We always want more.
Thank you for the ARC! Review to post to Ramblings From Beneath The Sheets.
Kristen Hope Mazzola
3.5 stars
Unspeakable is the second book in this series. I had not read the first but there is enough back story to know what is happening if you continue through Chapter 3. At first I was a little confused but then it became clear who was who. The book is a little short for what I wanted and the story line is to the point. This is a love story for sure but I think as we move along we might see some more of Ryder along the way. Maybe I am reading into the story line but it seems there is a cross road that Ryder is moving toward as he is asked to do some pretty serious things to show his allegiance to the MC.
Raine is Abel’s daughter and Ryder is Holt’s son. Until a few years prior Holt didn’t even know his son. Getting away from his mother was the best thing Ryder had done until he met Raine; also the day he met his father.
This short story takes us on the trip through Ryder proving himself to the club and also Abel. He wants more for his daughter than the MC life. He never wanted her to be with a member of his club. He wanted her out of the MC life along with his son. Raine and Ryder are determined to defy the odds and show Abel that they are destined to be together. He can push all he wants but neither one of them will give up on what they have. Walking away from each other isn’t an option.
I loved meeting Cricket and the rest of the gang. I wanted more and I wanted a little more depth to the story. I felt like there was more to Raine and Ryder’s story that we didn’t get to see. Maybe there was more in previous but I didn’t feel lost … just more. We always want more.
Thank you for the ARC! Review to post to Ramblings From Beneath The Sheets.
March 7, 2016
This is the follow up to Unacceptable: A Step-brother romance. Is it about Able’s daughter Raine and Holt’s son Ryder. The book begins much like the first one. Ryder comes looking for his father and finds a whole lot more in Vilas. Ryder winds up falling for Raine and the feeling is mutual. However Able wants more for his daughter than what being with someone in the MC will give her. You can’t choose who you fall in love with though. They are young but that doesn’t change the depth of their love or what they are willing to deal to be with each other. Once Able finds out about them the crap hits the fan. However will that stop them from being together or just drive them to prove their love more? Ryder is a prospect now he needs to prove himself worthy of being patched in to the MC and prove to Able that he is worthy of Raine. I really enjoyed getting to read more about the characters in the first book again. It is kind of funny how mad Able is about Ryder and Raine after all he is married to his step-sister. Their love is fantastic and strong but he doesn’t want his daughter to have to deal with the constant worry like Crickett and the other ladies do. Ryder is willing to do whatever is necessary to prove how much he loves Raine and will do whatever is needed to protect her. I would to read more about these characters. Kristen is a fantastic author and I love all her books. I always look forward to reading more by her. Another fantastic job Kristen.
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review.
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review.
March 13, 2016
A hot and quick MC read!
Unspeakable is a one wild and crazy ride, following Raine and Ryder as they fight for their love. Raine is Abel’s daughter (the president of the MC) and Ryder is a prospect. These two are in love, but Abel wants them to have nothing to do with each other.
This book was definitely hot and sexy, and I loved Ryder and Raine dearly. They fought for the love that they have for one another and for everything they wanted. Things definitely got tough for these two, but over and over again they prevailed and I really enjoyed every single part of their story.
If you are looking for a bloody, forbidden romance, Unspeakable is definitely one to add to your TBR list today! I read this book in one sitting! I am hoping we will get more stories of other members of the Unacceptables MC crew because all of them intrigue me, and really, I just want more of Raine and Ryder!
Unspeakable is a one wild and crazy ride, following Raine and Ryder as they fight for their love. Raine is Abel’s daughter (the president of the MC) and Ryder is a prospect. These two are in love, but Abel wants them to have nothing to do with each other.
This book was definitely hot and sexy, and I loved Ryder and Raine dearly. They fought for the love that they have for one another and for everything they wanted. Things definitely got tough for these two, but over and over again they prevailed and I really enjoyed every single part of their story.
If you are looking for a bloody, forbidden romance, Unspeakable is definitely one to add to your TBR list today! I read this book in one sitting! I am hoping we will get more stories of other members of the Unacceptables MC crew because all of them intrigue me, and really, I just want more of Raine and Ryder!
March 5, 2016
What a short wild ride! There is a lot of story packed into this little book.
I loved the somewhat forbidden aspect of their love story. She was off limits because she was the MC President's daughter. He was a prospect who hasn't made his way up in the ranks to be patched in yet.
Rain and Ryder were sneaking around to be together and fell in love. Such a sweet story! They have to go up against her overprotective father because he wants more than the MC life for his babygirl. Ryder has to prove himself loyal and Rain has to prove she is strong enough to handle loving a MC member.
This book had everything that makes an MC novel a great read dirty bikers with a don't give a sh#t attitude, smoking hot sex, Outlaw criminal behavior and a love story.
My only complaint is it was to short. I want more!!!
I loved the somewhat forbidden aspect of their love story. She was off limits because she was the MC President's daughter. He was a prospect who hasn't made his way up in the ranks to be patched in yet.
Rain and Ryder were sneaking around to be together and fell in love. Such a sweet story! They have to go up against her overprotective father because he wants more than the MC life for his babygirl. Ryder has to prove himself loyal and Rain has to prove she is strong enough to handle loving a MC member.
This book had everything that makes an MC novel a great read dirty bikers with a don't give a sh#t attitude, smoking hot sex, Outlaw criminal behavior and a love story.
My only complaint is it was to short. I want more!!!
October 18, 2017
3.0 Stars
Unspeakable was based upon Raine(Abel's daughter) and Ryder(Holt's son). Ryder is Holt's long lost son who comes to Vilas on a Bike to find his family Fast forward 3 years, Ryder is a prospect for Unacceptables MC and he is madly in love with Raine. They are having a relationship behind her father Abel who is Raine's father and he is MC Pres of the Unacceptables. Once he finds out well let's just say Ryder will have to prove he is then right one for Raine.
Honestly this is not my favorite book by this author I felt the storyline in this book hits too close Cricket and Abel's story in Unacceptable. I also felt the storyline was rushed, it also felt the author tried to put so much into eight chapters that plots were all over the place. The storyline to book 1 and book 2 maybe very similar but the lead characters in Unspeakable seemed forced to me. Over all 3 Stars. Happy Reading!!!
Unspeakable was based upon Raine(Abel's daughter) and Ryder(Holt's son). Ryder is Holt's long lost son who comes to Vilas on a Bike to find his family Fast forward 3 years, Ryder is a prospect for Unacceptables MC and he is madly in love with Raine. They are having a relationship behind her father Abel who is Raine's father and he is MC Pres of the Unacceptables. Once he finds out well let's just say Ryder will have to prove he is then right one for Raine.
Honestly this is not my favorite book by this author I felt the storyline in this book hits too close Cricket and Abel's story in Unacceptable. I also felt the storyline was rushed, it also felt the author tried to put so much into eight chapters that plots were all over the place. The storyline to book 1 and book 2 maybe very similar but the lead characters in Unspeakable seemed forced to me. Over all 3 Stars. Happy Reading!!!
September 8, 2017
Unspeakable is book 2 in the Unacceptables MC, we get Raine and Ryder's story.
Its short, sweet and sexy and you will fall in love with Raine and Ryder. It's fast paced and like book one I loved the writing and the characters but again wished that it was a bit longer.
Raine is the Presidents daughter while Ryder is a prospect and his father is VP of the MC. Ryder rode in trying to find his dad a few years ago and as soon as he saw Raine he was hooked. He knew he would make her his, but what happens when that girl is the daughter of the president?
Can Ryder prove himself worthy not only to Raine but also to her father that he will love and protect her with everything that he is? Find out today!!
Its short, sweet and sexy and you will fall in love with Raine and Ryder. It's fast paced and like book one I loved the writing and the characters but again wished that it was a bit longer.
Raine is the Presidents daughter while Ryder is a prospect and his father is VP of the MC. Ryder rode in trying to find his dad a few years ago and as soon as he saw Raine he was hooked. He knew he would make her his, but what happens when that girl is the daughter of the president?
Can Ryder prove himself worthy not only to Raine but also to her father that he will love and protect her with everything that he is? Find out today!!
September 13, 2017
This is a short, fast paced, quick read. I really liked it. But with that said, I do wish that we would have seen how Raine and Ryder came to be a couple. They meet and then the next chapter is 3 years later and they are sneaking around hiding their relationship. We didn't get to see how it developed. I also wish we would have seen the first meeting between Ryder and Holt and how exactly that went down.
Even with those two issues, I found this a really enjoyable read. Ryder ended up in Vilas for the same reason Cricket did. To find his dad.
These two characters are great together. I thought Abel may put up more of a stink about one of his members being with his daughter.
Even with those two issues, I found this a really enjoyable read. Ryder ended up in Vilas for the same reason Cricket did. To find his dad.
These two characters are great together. I thought Abel may put up more of a stink about one of his members being with his daughter.
July 31, 2017
Unspeakable is the second book in Kristen Hope Mazzola's Unacceptables series and it is just as good as the first book in the series! This series is my first experience with an MC romance and the more I read, the more I love them. Mazzola perfect combines rough and dirty with sweet and soft and a dash of action in her MC books that I devour each time.
October 14, 2017
Raine and Ryder. Raine is the grown up daughter of Abel and Crickett. At first I thought she was about 18 and he's 21. Then it turns out she's 21 but she acted like a teenager sometimes.
I liked their love but was disappointed in the execution and the story felt choppy. Also, the violence felt gratuitous.
I liked their love but was disappointed in the execution and the story felt choppy. Also, the violence felt gratuitous.
April 16, 2018
Strong MC family
Loved this book was glad to read more of Abel and Cricket. This book is based on Raine Abel's daughter. And Holts son Ryder there is more of the MC life thrown in this book to make it even better then the first and written in duel POV there love story is amazing and the MC world in it is great can't wait to read more I highly recommend this book and author
Loved this book was glad to read more of Abel and Cricket. This book is based on Raine Abel's daughter. And Holts son Ryder there is more of the MC life thrown in this book to make it even better then the first and written in duel POV there love story is amazing and the MC world in it is great can't wait to read more I highly recommend this book and author
May 14, 2018
Ryder left his home to find out where his real father was, so he was heading to Vilas. He walked into this bar and saw the bartender, Raine, and he was lost until he heard some guys talking about someone named Holt. His dad. But he was risking it all to meet with Raine. Look out for dad, that's his little girl.
July 17, 2017
Unspeakable is the second MC book in Unacceptables series. It was quick read, with hot sexy bikers. This story is a prospect who falls in love for the presidents daughter. I enjoyed seeing past characters. Great Read!
September 1, 2017
This was solid and fast paced. I liked how there was no cheating and they were celibate before they got together. Raine (H) had a TSTL moment and almost got her raped and killed. I liked the epilogue.
April 9, 2018
AMAZING!!
Holy man, if you thought the first book was good, you are in for a treat. Ryder and Raine's HEA is such an amazing story! Fair warning though, this book is a little more gruesome then the first. Starting the third right now!
Holy man, if you thought the first book was good, you are in for a treat. Ryder and Raine's HEA is such an amazing story! Fair warning though, this book is a little more gruesome then the first. Starting the third right now!
April 20, 2018
Loved the next generation!
Unspeakable was a great second novel in the Unacceptables MC series. It tells Raine and Ryder’s story and is really cool to see the next generation all grown up.
Unspeakable was a great second novel in the Unacceptables MC series. It tells Raine and Ryder’s story and is really cool to see the next generation all grown up.
September 27, 2018
Ryder is just learning how to have a relationship with his father, be a prospect and fight his attraction for Raine. Raine is drawn to Ryder in a way no other man has ever been. Together they forge a relationship that can stand the test of time. Loved it!
November 24, 2019
An okay read
This one was an okay read for me. I like the characters but feel like there isn't much to the story. It kind of feels like there are major gaps. I really enjoy the writing style of this author I just wish there was more.
This one was an okay read for me. I like the characters but feel like there isn't much to the story. It kind of feels like there are major gaps. I really enjoy the writing style of this author I just wish there was more.
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January 15, 2026RYDER AND RAINE
This one is Ryder and Raine's story. It's a great, fun, fast-paced, quick read. Able and Crickett's response to their baby being with a biker was great. Even moreso to see Miss Raine was a force to be reckoned with herself. Her and Ryder fit perfectly together.
This one is Ryder and Raine's story. It's a great, fun, fast-paced, quick read. Able and Crickett's response to their baby being with a biker was great. Even moreso to see Miss Raine was a force to be reckoned with herself. Her and Ryder fit perfectly together.
May 19, 2017
Omg... I'm a sucker for MC books!!! Kristen you did a fab job!!! I loved Raine & Ryder!!!!
Loved that he wanted to prove to Raines dad (his MC prez) that he was worthy of his daughter.. ❤️❤️
Loved that he wanted to prove to Raines dad (his MC prez) that he was worthy of his daughter.. ❤️❤️
July 26, 2017
🔥😍🔥 Loved this Book 🔥😍🔥
Book #2 - Unspeakable - was another great book !!! Loved Ryder & Raine and their love story. Totally recommend it 🔥😍🔥
Book #2 - Unspeakable - was another great book !!! Loved Ryder & Raine and their love story. Totally recommend it 🔥😍🔥
November 2, 2017
Another amazing one
Quick and action packed. Another amazing MC book by Kristen Hope Mazzola. Ryder and Raine have a soul kind of love. Love this book and series.
Quick and action packed. Another amazing MC book by Kristen Hope Mazzola. Ryder and Raine have a soul kind of love. Love this book and series.
January 25, 2018
I like that the H knew he wanted to h and did what he could to get her. No ow/om drama.
April 2, 2018
Destiny is so romantic. Sometimes it doesn't matter who your destiny is, you just have to be with them no matter what.
Raine and Ryder's story is fast, dramatic and fantastic.
Raine and Ryder's story is fast, dramatic and fantastic.
October 30, 2018
I really like the book. The characters are great it's got a good story line. Kind of bloody, if you have a weak stomach this book is not for you.
March 26, 2020
Another good read
This is not a straight run on from the first book. This one jumps forward a few years where Raine is grown up and starting to live her own life.
This is not a straight run on from the first book. This one jumps forward a few years where Raine is grown up and starting to live her own life.
April 17, 2020
Just ok
This part of the series was just ok. I loved that it was years down the line from the first book but it was just too jumpy and short.
This part of the series was just ok. I loved that it was years down the line from the first book but it was just too jumpy and short.
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