I had only ever picked up the Silver Brumby series by Elyne Mitchell, and I know that the quality of the last couple of novels did dip significantly, but it didn't prepare me for a novel that was so disjointed and lacking in real story as I found here. I was incredibly disappointed.
The first section, with Gay and Robin riding around fetching cattle and Gay trying to avoid Queen and her colt became enormously repetitive very quickly and I dragged myself through it. The novel got a little better once it focused more on Fire, but the "mystery" of his father was far too obvious and yet drawn out beyond where it felt realistic. The best part of the novel by far was the last thirty pages or so, and it comes as no surprise to me that this part featured a wild brumby. The rest of the novel felt pedestrian and as though Mitchell didn't know the story she should be telling, while the part with the curious little brumby filly was much more engrossing.
I know I have read this with an adult's more cynical eye, but I don't think I would have had much patience or liking for the book as a child either. Disappointing fare all round.