2.5 STARS
A decent read, but did not live up to my expectations. When I first heard they were expanding the Dishonored-verse to novels I was very excited and eagerly waiting for the release of this book.
And then I actually read it...
I really wanted to like this book. I wish I had reason to give it 5 stars. Dishonored is my favorite game (and arguably my favorite fantasy world) of all time. Yet I initially settled on 3 stars. And when I began realizing how this book I had been waiting for for several years had disappointed me in more than one way, it felt justified to lower the rating to 2 stars (or 2.5).
There are a couple of enjoyable moments in the book, but nothing necessarily exhilarating. There is potential in it, story-wise, yet I feel like when the last page of the last chapter was turned, the experience felt rather forgettable, for me, as well as for Corvo and Emily. This book feels like it exists in a vacuum, with nothing carrying over to Dishonored 2, not even the slightest. I don't much feel like my experience is richer after reading this book.
The antagonist, and his quest, had potential, and actually peaked my interest several times, yet failed to deliver in the big picture. And the secondary antagonist was interesting in her first scenes, but then rapidly grew very annoying and tiresome.
There were some nice callbacks to the old days, to the Dishonored game. The author did a good job setting up the story in a post-Dishonored 1 world.
Now on to the writing itself - It honestly felt like the second draft of the manuscript, rather than a polished work. The narrative style was at times clunky, relying heavily on arbitrary metaphors that eventually began feeling more tedious than clarifying. The dialogue didn't feel very natural in some places and honestly even came off a bit cringy (for example between Emily and Wyman). Also, the way he described character reactions was monotone and rather repetitive. It felt like everyone only kept either smiling, smirking or laughing out loud in response to things, genuinely or otherwise (example: The antagonist doesn't say anything for a long time, then suddenly something that is said makes him briefly laugh nefariously, before descending back into silence. Until it's exposition time, that is).
And then there were the repetitive actions that certain characters took. I must say I got sick of reading how on every other page Galia "ran her hand through her greasy blonde hair". There must be more ways to describe the actions of a character.
And the biggest problem I had was that the author didn't seem to trust the readers to be able to follow or remember things and facts. It really became frustrating quickly. Constantly, it felt as if we needed a reminder of what had happened, both prior to the book, as well as earlier in the book.
I mean, if even toward the end of the book, the character you've known the entire book still needs to be introduced in a tense scene as:
"He was Corvo Attano. He was Royal Protector. He was father to the Empress of the Isles"
...then eventually you just start rolling your eyes.
It felt like it still constantly needed to be stressed that Corvo indeed IS Emily's father, much like he was at the beginning of the book, who is ALSO the Royal Protector, to Emily, who is THE EMPRESS, whose mother was JESSAMINE, who was MURDERED, FIFTEEN YEARS AGO.
And don't forget, Galia ran her hand through her greasy blonde hair! Important character trait!
However, I must say I did very much enjoy the Epilogue. Sadly, it was only at the final part of this book that the author truly made me invested in the moment and actually made me feel something, taking me, along with the characters, back to the day that spawned the events of Dishonored in the first place.
In conclusion, I would have enjoyed this book more if I weren't a die hard fan of Dishonored. I wished to experience something more, as it was my first new visit back into this rich, captivating world in over three years. And this book did not live up to the expectation. In truth, I wish they had simply chosen to write a novelization of the first Dishonored game (along with Daud's DLCs) instead, to give us that experience in a literary medium expanding and adding on what the game had given us, while preparing us for Dishonored 2.
However, as Adam Christopher will be writing two more books in the Dishonored-verse, both released some time in 2017, I will definitely give him another chance, since I hear that those books should be moving away from Corvo and Emily, and perhaps he can deliver a better story (and hopefully, this time, with a smoother, more enjoyable writing style) when he is free of the boundaries that The Corroded Man set by being narratively sandwiched between Dishonored 1 and Dishonored 2.
Hopefully he'll be leaving behind Dunwall and perhaps heading to Morley or Tyvia or northern Gristol (or, heck, maybe even to Pandyssia) to give us an experience that sets it apart from the types of stories we received in Dishonored, Dishonored 2, and The Corroded Man.