This was a bad book. I was looking for an opening quote but can't find one.
Someone attempts to murder Dr. Ella and her patients. When Zach comes to investigate, for some reason he takes Ella with him on all his investigations.
Ella is a doctor. Her husband died, and he was a real prick. She serves the Amish community in Georgia.
Um... what can I say about this book?
One, it suffers from the same problem I get with 90% of Romantic Suspense, and that is that the love story takes a backseat to the mystery. Also, when you put both a mystery book and a love story in the same book, I feel like neither gets the attention and careful crafting they deserve. It's rare I find a Romantic Suspense book that I truly enjoy.
Two, the book suffers from a lot of stupid moments. Here's one example:
"Is this your normal modus operandi?" she asked.
"You speak Latin?"
OH, FOR FUCK'S SAKE! *Carmen is yelling at the book* I know what modus operandi means, and I don't fucking speak Latin!!! Most people know what modus operandi means!!!! Or m.o. It's just basic.
The idea that he thinks she speaks Latin because she knows the phrase "modus operandi" is so dumb.
And this is only one of the many moments that are going to have you questioning your sanity.
Another infuriating thing about the book - and again, I find this to be a staple in a lot of Romantic Suspense - is that late in the book, Zach accuses Ella of being the murderer. And he's very cruel about it. I have a lot of problems with this. First off, if he can think she's a MURDERER this late in the game then the romance is basically dead. Second off, he is so mean about it.
"Did you drive to Memphis or were you already there?" he asked, his voice stern.
"What?"
"It's evident by your facial expression when you talk about your husband that something was amiss in your marriage. You wanted to fix everything, but you couldn't. Would it be better to have your husband die rather than face what was to come? Had he asked for a divorce? Was there insurance? You could have built an even larger clinic if he had a big policy, but that money wouldn't be paid if it was suicide. You didn't think about that, did you, Ella?"
Tears filled her eyes, and she fought to keep them in check. "I can't believe you would suspect me." She pointed to the door. "I'd appreciate you leaving now."
So I thought she was being really strong and kicking this asshole out of her life, but she ends up APOLOGIZING to him. YES. SHE apologizes to HIM.
"I'm sorry if I came off as antagonistic."
YOU are sorry? If YOU came off as antagonistic?! YOU have nothing to apologize for! He's the one who accused YOU of murder! JFC. Grow a spine.
Three, Giusti is OBSESSED with the word/concept of "affirming." She uses it ALL THE TIME.
p. 245
She was taken aback by his comment. He was probably just being nice and making idle chitchat, but she was so accustomed to Quin's negativity that she hadn't expected anything as affirming and supportive. For some reason, she suddenly wanted to cry.
p. 324
"I'm not used to getting compliments from beautiful women."
Her smile faded and a look of confusion washed over her face.
He glanced at her. "You're not blushing because you don't believe what I just said."
"No one has ever called me beautiful." Her voice was low.
"Shame on everyone else then."
"You're not only affirming," she said, "but also prone of offering compliments. That's a winning combination."
p. 418
"You're a doctor. I'm in good hands."
"Ever the optimist and always affirming."
p. 436
"And you're always quick with praise." She smiled. "Which is so... well, affirming. I'm thanking God that both of us survived."
p. 440
Ella appreciated the boy's compliment and the artful way his mother had used affirmation to build up her son before she corrected him.
Glancing at Zach, Ella thought of the many times he had affirmed her, which was so opposite from Quin.
p. 441
"And thank You for new beginnings," Zach continued. "For affirmation and love, for peaceful settings and for all Your blessings."
p.322
He laughed. "You must have a low opinion of law enforcement types."
"That's not true. It's just that I picked up on your obvious antagonism toward the medical profession."
He held up his hand. "Present company excluded."
"I'm not so sure," she teased.
"Cross my heart." He traced the sign on his chest, then glanced at her and winked. "Really. You're the exception to the rule, Doc."
She rolled her eyes. "And I thought you were so affirming."
p. 357
"You asked what I do on weekends. Often I cook and then freeze what I fix in smaller containers. That way if I'm busy with patients late into the day, I can eat a nourishing dinner without having to spend time getting everything made."
"Smart lady."
She turned back to him and smiled. "You're an affirming person."
p. ??? "My father was a positive man. Perhaps I learned affirmation from him."
Was affirmation/affirm the cool Christian buzzword in 2016 or something? Because it's in here A LOT. And none of these are sentences I would ever say. "Oh, you're such an affirming person!" WTF?
The story also has a lot of references to God, but not so many that you are going crazy. Maybe 26 times.
Giusti also has a tendency to end her chapters on super-dramatic notes. It's silly. It reminds me of GOOSEBUMPS, the children's series. Goosebumps is actually better, IMO. Here are some examples.
What she realized made her tremble with fear. Last night, the police were looking for an assailant who had broken into her clinic and attacked two women.
Today that assailant had become a killer.
And the person he wanted to kill was her.
Or how about:
She and Zach had come to the Fisher home hoping for information. But they may have found even more. They may have found the assailant.
Or how about:
But Ella had felt the pressure on her back. Someone had wanted her to fall. Someone had known the train was approaching, and he'd shoved her off the platform.
Or how about:
Getting over Ella would take time, but he would succeed. He had to. He had no other choice than to say goodbye to her and to what he had hoped would develop between them.
What Zach had hoped for would never be.
Not now.
Not ever.
It's ridiculous and hilarious. You can end each chapter with ominous music: Dum dum DUM!
LOL Hard to take seriously.
Another huge problem with the book is the complete lack of sexual chemistry between these two. As is expected in a Christian romance, I guess. No sense that these two want to be anything more than friends. It's so platonic it hurts.
TL;DR - There's nothing I can recommend about this book.
ROMANCE CATEGORIES:
Contemporary Romance
Inspirational Romance
Military Romance - Zach is military police
Romantic Suspense
Police Romance
Doctor Romance
Widow Heroine
He's Military Police, She's a Doctor