I really wished I could like this more. But it was sloggy and wordy, like the author was putting words on paper to 'write', not to engage me or tell a story. It was a LOT of words that got tedious, after a while.
The story was also in the middle of a series, which we're NOT told, and that always pisses me off. When we come into the middle of something as readers, with all of this history and previous baddies and relationships, it feels like turning a TV show on halfway thru. It really, really sucks.
And then there's the stupidity: Pg 74 - "I don't know who Stephanie is, but if she was with Tate and now isn't, she better hope we never meet!" WHAT. IS. THAT?!?!?
Pg 89 - "If Megan believed God had any part in her life before, she no longer did."
Pg 163 - "If Tate left her, where would her security lie? With God."
Why the 180? Because the author said so. It came absolutely out of NOWHERE, and was shoddily done. Worse?
Pg 164 - "She didn't need Tate, she needed what Tate had. Peace... by being held by the Creator." Except Tate didn't tell her he'd found faith. He told her about his B&B and marriage, but he didn't tell her the marriage dissolved when he found the Lord. The author told *US* that, but Megan never got that info. So... more eye-roll-worthy writing.
Pg 99 - "Gun down." "You'll have to kill me, first, and then you won't get information." (((insert the point where you incapacitate the baddie... BUT NO. Because crappy writing.)))
So yeah, I wanted to like the book, but the author didn't do a good enough job for that. And I'm not saying the characterizations weren't good or the action boring or anything. It just... lacked. Clarity, because it's in a series, and good writing.
Sorry. It was good enough for me to get all the way thru, which is *something* for a LI Suspense, and thus the three stars. But not good enough to keep, or look for the others in her series.