Reading this novel is what happens when you're an insomniac with a Kindle at 2:00 am. You don't want to get up for the day just yet, and yet you can't turn on the bedroom light to read that brainy book on your nightstand either for fear of waking someone else up. All this said, here goes...
As a reader I expect a few things. When reading chick lit, my expectations are not the same as when I read a non-fiction for instance. In either case there are levels of "good" in terms of the writing involved. Some authors can write the crap out of chick lit, while others seem to write the crap into it. Hmm. Maybe this review is going sour too soon, but as a reader, one of the things I absolutely demand of an author is that they get their main character's name consistently spelled right. If nothing else, at least do that! This book annoyed me to no end as the author/the main female character or both, consistently seemed to forget what the male lead's name was. I kid you not! I actually spent a good portion of my time reading this e-book, highlighting all the instances I noticed where Marcus was spelled either with a "c" or a "k" and sometimes the two versions were used on the exact same page a mere line or two apart. What the Holy Hell?!
Overall, this isn't a smutty read, which is a plus. There's no sex, at least in the part I was highlighting through. There is the typically overdone, poor girl meets rich guy Cindarella element. The main character Rebecca is sometimes funny in a genuine way but her character seems more developed by her job as a hospice nurse and the owning of a three legged cat than any real memories/actions. I'd like to have seen her spend more time in hospice personally. Perhaps the characters there would have made me care more about her. The acting auditions she attends were mentioned but not really created as visual scenes leaving me to wonder if being an actress was that important to her at all. As for her relationship with Mar?us, where is it? There's looks and kisses, but based on what exactly? Because he's so hot and she's apparently so hot? I just didn't buy it, even after he offers her $20 grand to act his girlfriend to replace his playboy image.
Oh, and is the balcony scene from "Pretty Woman" up for grabs in terms of writing now?