stuff that bothered me:
• unrealistic things that seemed dumb. the police reopened a years-old cold case without actual concrete evidence coming to light. also, they're super intense about finding and prosecuting the person who saved a child from getting killed. apparently enough to harass said child, who was one of the victims in the case.
• also, her teacher offers her a job because the h is interested in mathematics and forensic science, and the teacher wants her to get hands-on experience. and i was like oh okay so it'll be a job that's connected to that field. but then it was a job with kids at an orphanage like ??? made no sense.
• that dumb song that the h sings in her head with lyrics that don't match rhythmically at all ??
• once again, the heroine completely overreacts to that guy who's interested in her. im not saying the guy is in the right, because he's a jerk, but saying he's STALKING her is a gross exaggeration. like, he's literally just running into her by coincidence at school and by a movie theater. please calm down. by 50% he does get more intense and assholeish though but up until then it seemed super weird how the heroine talked about him.
• the conversations aren't as unnatural as in the first book, but they still have weird, stunted moments, and contrived misunderstandings that would've been solved if they could talk like regular people.
• i skimmed the last ~20%.