I wanted to like it more than I did....
I wanted to like it more than I did,cheesy title not withstanding...
I adored both Nathan and Ethan they were great guys,sweet,sexy , honesty caring and kind though maybe a bit Too nice w/Carrie at times.... I say too nice because I feel Carrie was a but too immature for them and or a relationship w/ them but at the age of 19/20 I really feel Carrie wasn't ready for a mature relationship w/any man much less two .... Having ONLY her pov really distracted me for what could have been a really Good story w/a bit more depth of both characters and story,but Carrie felt too immature and her thoughts and ideas just felt way too juvenile to taking on a relationship like this.... Carrie was young at 19/20 but she felt like a very Young 19/20..... The way goes on and on about the rumors about their equipment and what her friends would say.... No! Give me a story where their at least 5,6,7-10 years older ,give me more pov's the guys along the Woman's at least and give me more story more depth and I'd be all over that!!! This I can say is a personal fantasy,just taboo enough to make it a bit naughty, and if I could have it for real ? Don't need the steps of course ,though twins might be fun,and I'd like it to be brothers ,best friends might work just NEVER mmf coz I DON'T SHARE!! Especially not like that.... Like I say could have been a Lot better than it was,hate how immature Carrie was and how long the twins let her run from/ push them away and the whole pregnant at the end was just a lame unneeded cliché used mainly by the cheap and cheesy type book this story could have done w/out..... I didn't read the 2nd book because that wasn't why I bought this one , bad enough the 1st story ended at 40% as it was... I'd preferred just one long truly good story than two half hearted ones like this... I doubt I'll read more by this author but I'm glad I tried and I just feel deep down ( why I know not,but I do) she could do soo much better... Thanks