I received an ARC of this title from the author in exchange for an honest review, which is one of the reasons why this is such a difficult review for me to write. I've been an editor and proofreader for decades, as well as being an English teacher, and quite frankly, the 4- and 5- reviews I've seen posted about this book leave me wondering if those reviewers read the same hot mess that I did.
Yes, I know this is an ARC, and so I'm not even going to discuss typos, but I struggled to find a single paragraph that even approached being grammatically correct. Among the problems that made reading this novel torturous were misplaced modifiers, changing tense in mid-sentence, incorrectly used pronouns, redundant nouns, dangling participles, sentences ending with prepositions, sentence fragments, archaic phrasing and more.
I'm a fan of stepbrother romances, but as I've stated when reviewing other novels in this sub-genre, there's nothing taboo about stepsiblings becoming involved with one another, especially when those characters have never even met until adulthood, as Leighton and Gracey do in this novel. Since I'm mentioning the characters, let me add that the portrayal of Gracey's mother and sisters read like a bad version of Cinderella. Alexis, Pandora and Isabella were totally one-dimensional, their dialogue was both stilted and juvenile, and Gracey, who at least starts out as one of the lone likable characters, does a complete about-face in mid-novel, when she suddenly changes from being a rather sweet, innocent and timid virgin into a controlling, foul-mouthed, sex-crazed slut in the back of a limo who has no problem losing her virginity by climbing onto Leighton's reportedly monstrously huge erection. This scene, was, without question the most totally unbelievable and utterly un-sexy sex scene I've ever read.
I kept on reading, waiting and hoping for this novel to improve, but by the time Gracey's family makes such an obvious attempt to frame Leighton and Gracey for her stepfather's murder, and we jump backwards in time to Part Three, where we learn about just how dysfunctional the relationship was between the deceased patriarch, Philip, and the love of his life, schizophrenic Isabella, who in one of her manic episodes decides that the solution to her schizophrenia is becoming pregnant--something Philip is willing to do with great vigor, I'd had enough. I simply could not continue reading this novel and I did not finish it.
My apologies to Ms. Brother for this negative review, but you asked for honesty, and I've given my honest opinion.