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She’s (Still) Too Young
I lost her once. It won’t happen twice.
I went to extremes to make her mine—and when the secret was revealed that I’d purchased too-young Veda from her father, she left me. Now that I have her home and I can breathe again, my life's goal is to keep her. Forever.
Unfortunately, her eighteenth birthday means she can walk away at any time. Earning her trust means facing the ultimate test of my sanity. Giving her the choice I didn’t give her in the beginning and hoping like hell she chooses me.
I went to extremes to make her mine—and when the secret was revealed that I’d purchased too-young Veda from her father, she left me. Now that I have her home and I can breathe again, my life's goal is to keep her. Forever.
Unfortunately, her eighteenth birthday means she can walk away at any time. Earning her trust means facing the ultimate test of my sanity. Giving her the choice I didn’t give her in the beginning and hoping like hell she chooses me.
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First published May 15, 2016
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October 5, 2016
3.5 Smut Scale Stars
Wut wut?
There's a completely inappropriate, offend-people's-morals-for-sheezy-and-get-pulled-from-amazon sequel?
AND it's FREE???!!!
Sign me the fuck up!!!
Wut wut?
There's a completely inappropriate, offend-people's-morals-for-sheezy-and-get-pulled-from-amazon sequel?
AND it's FREE???!!!
Sign me the fuck up!!!
May 16, 2016
This one was just as hot as the first one, and it shows us that the H's obsession for his 'Angel' hasn't slowed down one bit, and I loved that!
There's a surprise twist almost by the end, and Ramsey expected something, since Veda showed signs of hiding something, but it ended up surpring him, nonetheless.
Given the size of the story, most issues are barely touched on the surface, when we really want them to be explored and explained more in depth. But I guess that's not the point of the smuttiest erotica, in which this book fits to a T!
There's was something that bothered me, and I'm all for a good anti-hero,
The ending was much better than the first book, but still I wanted more f the epilogue!
So, if you're looking for a very short, filthy hot smut, this is the book for you! ;)
There's a surprise twist almost by the end, and Ramsey expected something, since Veda showed signs of hiding something, but it ended up surpring him, nonetheless.
Given the size of the story, most issues are barely touched on the surface, when we really want them to be explored and explained more in depth. But I guess that's not the point of the smuttiest erotica, in which this book fits to a T!
There's was something that bothered me, and I'm all for a good anti-hero,
The ending was much better than the first book, but still I wanted more f the epilogue!
So, if you're looking for a very short, filthy hot smut, this is the book for you! ;)
May 22, 2016
3* STARS!
For this short story, I think it doesn't need to have 2 parts. The continuation is too short and didn't really matter. It was decent and predictable. Ramsey Beckett has been pussy-whipped by 17 years old girl, after all. No surprises. He's still dirty man who's in lust with her. Ramsey was blindsided by his blonde angel. But Veda admit she's in love with him the moment he's starting to care.
For this short story, I think it doesn't need to have 2 parts. The continuation is too short and didn't really matter. It was decent and predictable. Ramsey Beckett has been pussy-whipped by 17 years old girl, after all. No surprises. He's still dirty man who's in lust with her. Ramsey was blindsided by his blonde angel. But Veda admit she's in love with him the moment he's starting to care.
“She told me if I ever need advice dealing with young girls, I could ask her for advice.” Veda stiffens, but relaxes slowly when I pet her bottom and hum against her ear. “I told her I only have one young girl to worry about. And I keep her happy by licking her sweet, warm pussy before I leave for work in the morning.”
“Didn’t your father ever give you a birthday spanking?” I tuck my middle finger between her cheeks, testing that little pucker I’ve yet to conquer. Soon. “One slap for each year.”
“No, he never did.”
“Pretty little birthday girl. All dressed up for her party.” Slap. “What a spoiled princess you are, Veda. Wrapping me around your pinkie finger and getting anything you want.”
“Ahhh, God. You know this pussy gets you anything you want, don’t you, angel? It’s so very tight for Ramsey, so Ramsey spends his money. I love doing it, too.”
May 29, 2016
Pointless. That's the only thought I was left with after finishing this second installment. Literally, nothing new happened in this one, aside from one "ew" rather than taboo sex scene. I got intrigued by the first book and disappointed by the second.
The writing is good, but author's story telling skills are lacking. Though I see the potential. I'll be keeping an eye on this author.
The writing is good, but author's story telling skills are lacking. Though I see the potential. I'll be keeping an eye on this author.
September 21, 2016
SPOILERS AHEAD! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.
Yes, this was just too much crap for me to enjoy.
The drama with the dad yuck. I get that they are excited by exhibition of public forum thing, but having the dad watch while his daughter gets a$$ f@&$ for the first time was just nope!!!
And I know it's the whole taboo sh!t here but it's not cool with me because it's her real dad!
I don't like reading stories like these that include a real parent and this just felt like a step too far for me. Personally.
If it had been a step dad or something I would have been maybe acceptable.
But Not this.
It's one thing to talk about it but another to have him see it!!!
For me it was just GROSSSSS!
I guess again I am against the general consensus. That's alright.
I was always a rebel when it came down to it. If everyone likes something I always have to question, but why? What makes this so good?
If it's your thing, great enjoy.
Just not mine.
Happy reading.
Yes, this was just too much crap for me to enjoy.
The drama with the dad yuck. I get that they are excited by exhibition of public forum thing, but having the dad watch while his daughter gets a$$ f@&$ for the first time was just nope!!!
And I know it's the whole taboo sh!t here but it's not cool with me because it's her real dad!
I don't like reading stories like these that include a real parent and this just felt like a step too far for me. Personally.
If it had been a step dad or something I would have been maybe acceptable.
But Not this.
It's one thing to talk about it but another to have him see it!!!
For me it was just GROSSSSS!
I guess again I am against the general consensus. That's alright.
I was always a rebel when it came down to it. If everyone likes something I always have to question, but why? What makes this so good?
If it's your thing, great enjoy.
Just not mine.
Happy reading.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 8, 2017
This one fell a bit flat for me. It was hot and quick but u felt Ramsey and Veda had more potential to be more fully developed characters than they were.
This book kind of flirted with Daddy kink but wouldn't fully commit to it. I would've preferred one or the other rather than the on the fence thing we had going. I was really hoping Veda was going to step it up in this one and become a bit more of a femme fatale, I felt like she totally had that in her but instead, Ramsey sort of sexed her into submission. We were teased with this sort of wedge between Veda and Ramsey that had something to do with Veda's dad and I was curious to learn what that was but again, I ended up a bit disappointed with that reveal.
Overall, this one had good sex scenes but I think my expectations were too high after my interpretations of the first book.
**I read this as part of my Kindle Unlimited Subscription
This book kind of flirted with Daddy kink but wouldn't fully commit to it. I would've preferred one or the other rather than the on the fence thing we had going. I was really hoping Veda was going to step it up in this one and become a bit more of a femme fatale, I felt like she totally had that in her but instead, Ramsey sort of sexed her into submission. We were teased with this sort of wedge between Veda and Ramsey that had something to do with Veda's dad and I was curious to learn what that was but again, I ended up a bit disappointed with that reveal.
Overall, this one had good sex scenes but I think my expectations were too high after my interpretations of the first book.
**I read this as part of my Kindle Unlimited Subscription
April 17, 2018
More like 2.49 stars.
Romances with underage characters getting with much older characters isn't normally my thing, but since the heroine was just shy of 18y/o, and Jessa Kane writes some amazing jealous/possessive heroes, I figured why the hell not? The first book (which isn't available on Amazon since one of the characters is underage) was pretty good. I liked the hero's intensity and resourcefulness, but I didn't like that he verged into doormat territory. Yes, apparently I don't like it when men OR women are walked all over, it just took this book for me to realize since it's the first opportunity I've had to figure that out. Anyway, yes, Ramsey let Veda get her way too. Effing. Much. I get that she's young, and dances around aimlessly an obscene amount in public like a toddler wearing a tiarra.
*Note: Real-life representation of how Veda was described dancing. You're welcome.*
And I really admired Kane's ability to write such a believably immature teenage female, but when Veda started demanding Ramsey fire all of the "pretty" women that worked for him, I wanted to slap her. And then I wanted to slap him, because he really should've pointed out that not only is it illegal to fire people based on appearance (he didn't technically fire them, just transferred them all to different buildings/cities), but that it's really heartless to demand something so harsh based on jealousy alone. Who knows if those women have families to support? What if they're single mothers? If Ramsey was going to take on the responsibility of an underage girlfriend, he should've contributed to her growth and maturity rather than enable her selfish behavior.
Then there's the dad. I wasn't a huge fan, but he really didn't have much of a choice but to give Ramsey what he wanted, because he realized Ramsey was going to get his way no matter what. Then he disappeared for the remainder of the first book. Second book, he's like a totally different person. He's self-medicating with alcohol to cope with the guilt of selling his daughter, so he definitely doesn't have his shit together. But that doesn't erase the fact that he was - albeit overprotective and possessive of Veda and her mother - a decent father that had a pretty good relationship with his daughter. So when he watches Ramsey and Veda But still, even with that, he didn't deserve the ending he got. He tried to
That ending just ruined it for me. Oh well...
Romances with underage characters getting with much older characters isn't normally my thing, but since the heroine was just shy of 18y/o, and Jessa Kane writes some amazing jealous/possessive heroes, I figured why the hell not? The first book (which isn't available on Amazon since one of the characters is underage) was pretty good. I liked the hero's intensity and resourcefulness, but I didn't like that he verged into doormat territory. Yes, apparently I don't like it when men OR women are walked all over, it just took this book for me to realize since it's the first opportunity I've had to figure that out. Anyway, yes, Ramsey let Veda get her way too. Effing. Much. I get that she's young, and dances around aimlessly an obscene amount in public like a toddler wearing a tiarra.
*Note: Real-life representation of how Veda was described dancing. You're welcome.*
And I really admired Kane's ability to write such a believably immature teenage female, but when Veda started demanding Ramsey fire all of the "pretty" women that worked for him, I wanted to slap her. And then I wanted to slap him, because he really should've pointed out that not only is it illegal to fire people based on appearance (he didn't technically fire them, just transferred them all to different buildings/cities), but that it's really heartless to demand something so harsh based on jealousy alone. Who knows if those women have families to support? What if they're single mothers? If Ramsey was going to take on the responsibility of an underage girlfriend, he should've contributed to her growth and maturity rather than enable her selfish behavior.
Then there's the dad. I wasn't a huge fan, but he really didn't have much of a choice but to give Ramsey what he wanted, because he realized Ramsey was going to get his way no matter what. Then he disappeared for the remainder of the first book. Second book, he's like a totally different person. He's self-medicating with alcohol to cope with the guilt of selling his daughter, so he definitely doesn't have his shit together. But that doesn't erase the fact that he was - albeit overprotective and possessive of Veda and her mother - a decent father that had a pretty good relationship with his daughter. So when he watches Ramsey and Veda But still, even with that, he didn't deserve the ending he got. He tried to
That ending just ruined it for me. Oh well...
May 17, 2016
Absolutely fantastic!!! The second of She's too young series it was as beautiful as the first one and once again the author delivered a short story were many things happened without loosing focus on the characters and making it even more interesting adding a little bit of action in it!!
After the first book Ramsey promises never to let Veda go again from his life and he will do anything this possessive character to keep her. After throwing her a party for her eighteenth birthday many things are about to shake a little because secrets are about to blow but love always conquers all so..don't be afraid because this story continues to remain sweet with it's enjoyable dialogues and it's sexy/hot scenes.
May 15, 2016
Super hot read. I knew going in that this was going to be super sexy.
I liked this better than the first one, perhaps because there was more of a story/plot and it was less taboo as she turns 18. I didn't expect the twist that occurred with her father, but it showed how obsessed he was with her because he forgave her so easily.
If you didn't like the first one much, this might still not be for you. But if you want a smutastic read I'd give it a go ;)
I liked this better than the first one, perhaps because there was more of a story/plot and it was less taboo as she turns 18. I didn't expect the twist that occurred with her father, but it showed how obsessed he was with her because he forgave her so easily.
If you didn't like the first one much, this might still not be for you. But if you want a smutastic read I'd give it a go ;)
May 15, 2016
It started tabboo and then went a bit flat, but all in all a hot sexy story . I would have loved a twist or something shocking to happen.
November 26, 2020
Ramsey Becket is a slave for his heroine..
JUST WOW!!!That man is willing to forgive her even if she decided to kill him in his sleep.
That is a obsession on a whole another level.
JUST WOW!!!That man is willing to forgive her even if she decided to kill him in his sleep.
That is a obsession on a whole another level.
May 16, 2016
Ramsey is as over the top obsessed as ever in this second book. There was a tiny bit of angst and a small twist that I didn't see coming. It was pretty hot too, I really enjoyed it.
November 13, 2023
We continue with Veda and Ramsey. He finds out a secret she’s keeping. He becomes even more jealous and possessive. They have sex once or twice. The end. I wasn’t feeling this one. Felt like if JK had written a better ending in the first book, this wouldn’t have been needed at all.
December 13, 2020
Not my style at all. Steamy AF as always but nope. Full review soon.
May 18, 2016
I feel dirty...
Holy hotness Batman.
This series is ridiculously dirty. So hot your Kindle will catch fire and your panties will combust. Taboo to the max! While the novella is short, it doesn't lack in story. Though, admittedly, the story takes a backseat to dirty talking, over-the-top possessive Ramsey and his compulsive need for Veda.
“I’m the mermaid to your predator.”
Five Drenched to Ruination Panties.
Review by Miranda at Mommy's a Book Whore.
Holy hotness Batman.
This series is ridiculously dirty. So hot your Kindle will catch fire and your panties will combust. Taboo to the max! While the novella is short, it doesn't lack in story. Though, admittedly, the story takes a backseat to dirty talking, over-the-top possessive Ramsey and his compulsive need for Veda.
“I’m the mermaid to your predator.”
Five Drenched to Ruination Panties.
Review by Miranda at Mommy's a Book Whore.
July 11, 2018
Absolutely amazing!!! Jessa Kane writes with such passion.
I read the first book off her website. And honestly do not understand why Amazon wouldn't allow it. I've read similar books by other authors. I swear Jessa Kane has become my new favorite.
I read the first book off her website. And honestly do not understand why Amazon wouldn't allow it. I've read similar books by other authors. I swear Jessa Kane has become my new favorite.
March 17, 2017
4/5
Hot fast safe read
Hot fast safe read
April 26, 2021
Ehhhh... just a continuation of the first. I felt compelled to finish this story so I just went for it. Pretty much just more of the same as the first book, really.
Veda is still jealous yet she goads Ramsey into reacting the same way. When he doesn’t dance with her at her birthday party filled with every single one of her classmates and their parents, she threatens to ask one of her classmate’s fathers to dance. Yet she acts all cray cray the moment one of her classmate’s mothers touches Ramsey on the arm. Hum... kay.
And why is every single male in this book falling over in lust, salivating and palming their growing hard-on from just a look at Veda? My god... so ridiculous.
Glad I read it just to say I did but glad it’s finally fucking over.
POV: 1st person (MMC Ramsey only)
Veda is still jealous yet she goads Ramsey into reacting the same way. When he doesn’t dance with her at her birthday party filled with every single one of her classmates and their parents, she threatens to ask one of her classmate’s fathers to dance. Yet she acts all cray cray the moment one of her classmate’s mothers touches Ramsey on the arm. Hum... kay.
And why is every single male in this book falling over in lust, salivating and palming their growing hard-on from just a look at Veda? My god... so ridiculous.
Glad I read it just to say I did but glad it’s finally fucking over.
POV: 1st person (MMC Ramsey only)
April 21, 2018
At first, I thought that this could get better since the MC just turned 18, but nah. She's the same annoying Veda we saw last time. And Ramsey is the same jealous posessive man who can talk dirty to his young pet. I never (not even in the first book) noticed if he complimented on something like her brain, because everything was just about her beauty.
October 11, 2022
I wrap them around her and shield her from the onlookers, pressing kisses to her hairline. “I goddamn love you, Veda.”
“No matter what?”
“Yes. Always.” For a long time, we lie there, our bodies meshed head to toe, Veda’s heart beating—racing—without slowing. “No matter what.”
How soon until I have to prove it?
The second book of Veda and Ramsey. This one was still insane and they were became more obsessed with each other, along with a little bit plot twists. (But not about their relationship, the twists was about Veda’s psycho dad)
“Veda, there are going to be people along the way that try to get to me through you. You’re my weakness, my strength, everything in between…and I suspect anyone who has seen me look at you knows it.”
Even now, in the middle of this garden, I ache to devour her. There’s a pounding in my temples and my loins, urging me to find a place to lay her down flat and fill her cunt with my rigid flesh. It’s a need that never lessens, and it’s always only for Veda.
Instalove love and more crazy, more maniac. Hahahahaha, I had to say I love it.
Thank God. She’s mine, despite the fact that I’m a madman. Thank God. “Then marry me, Veda. Leave this place as my wife and remain that way until my time on this earth is over.” Her head turns slightly, and I watch recognition of the moment float into her expression as she notices the minister.
“Of course I’ll marry you,” Veda whispers with a flirtatious curve of her lips. “As long as you don’t mind picking your wife up from school.”
Without looking at the priest, I beckon him closer. “Angel, I prefer it.”
Veda also had the darkness in her heart, same as Ramsey, they both couldn’t live without each other. They were in a new level of crazy relationship.
“Tell me right now if someone really had the bad judgment to come near my wife.”
“No, Ramsey. It was traffic.” Excitement, tempered by affection, makes the blue of her eyes vivid and hypnotic. “But if someone asked, I wouldn’t hide us. I wouldn’t hold back a single thing.”
Love and lust collide and erupt in my middle, my obsession swelling like a tide that never ebbs. My movement is unhurried as I unwind my hand from her collar and lean back in my chair, although urgency pounds in my temples, my gut, my heart.
“You don’t want to hold back a single thing?” I unzip my fly and growl as my cock is freed. “Then be a good girl and come tell daddy all about your day.”
So in love with this one, even the kink part. ♥️♥️♥️
“No matter what?”
“Yes. Always.” For a long time, we lie there, our bodies meshed head to toe, Veda’s heart beating—racing—without slowing. “No matter what.”
How soon until I have to prove it?
The second book of Veda and Ramsey. This one was still insane and they were became more obsessed with each other, along with a little bit plot twists. (But not about their relationship, the twists was about Veda’s psycho dad)
“Veda, there are going to be people along the way that try to get to me through you. You’re my weakness, my strength, everything in between…and I suspect anyone who has seen me look at you knows it.”
Even now, in the middle of this garden, I ache to devour her. There’s a pounding in my temples and my loins, urging me to find a place to lay her down flat and fill her cunt with my rigid flesh. It’s a need that never lessens, and it’s always only for Veda.
Instalove love and more crazy, more maniac. Hahahahaha, I had to say I love it.
Thank God. She’s mine, despite the fact that I’m a madman. Thank God. “Then marry me, Veda. Leave this place as my wife and remain that way until my time on this earth is over.” Her head turns slightly, and I watch recognition of the moment float into her expression as she notices the minister.
“Of course I’ll marry you,” Veda whispers with a flirtatious curve of her lips. “As long as you don’t mind picking your wife up from school.”
Without looking at the priest, I beckon him closer. “Angel, I prefer it.”
Veda also had the darkness in her heart, same as Ramsey, they both couldn’t live without each other. They were in a new level of crazy relationship.
“Tell me right now if someone really had the bad judgment to come near my wife.”
“No, Ramsey. It was traffic.” Excitement, tempered by affection, makes the blue of her eyes vivid and hypnotic. “But if someone asked, I wouldn’t hide us. I wouldn’t hold back a single thing.”
Love and lust collide and erupt in my middle, my obsession swelling like a tide that never ebbs. My movement is unhurried as I unwind my hand from her collar and lean back in my chair, although urgency pounds in my temples, my gut, my heart.
“You don’t want to hold back a single thing?” I unzip my fly and growl as my cock is freed. “Then be a good girl and come tell daddy all about your day.”
So in love with this one, even the kink part. ♥️♥️♥️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 16, 2017
Okay, in the second part of this steamy story, Veda returns to Ramsey and has finally turned eighteen. Ramsey has plans for his future wife, but before he can do that, he has to make sure Veda loves him as much as he does her. He's been treating her with kids gloves ever since she got back, but Veda has no qualms in asking him for more. Her father, Jack, returns with an evil secret that may just destroy Ramsey.
I liked this one a lot more than the first, especially Veda. I can't wait to read more of Jessa Kane's books. I'm totally addicted now.
I liked this one a lot more than the first, especially Veda. I can't wait to read more of Jessa Kane's books. I'm totally addicted now.
July 1, 2022
She’s Still Too Young is the second book of Ramsey and Veda.
There’s a plot twist when they meet her father in Amsterdam and turns out she’s been stealing money and he’s okay with it but wish she could’ve told him and that she came back too his with the plan of stealing his money but her love set her back but her father was the one who pressured her into it. Anyways this man is obsessed and can’t be left alone without her after she finishes school like this man times how long it would take for her to get back. The smut was great and I LOVED IT.
Solid 4/5
There’s a plot twist when they meet her father in Amsterdam and turns out she’s been stealing money and he’s okay with it but wish she could’ve told him and that she came back too his with the plan of stealing his money but her love set her back but her father was the one who pressured her into it. Anyways this man is obsessed and can’t be left alone without her after she finishes school like this man times how long it would take for her to get back. The smut was great and I LOVED IT.
Solid 4/5
August 25, 2017
1.5 stars! I tried to like this story, but the heroine was super annoying (so glad it was in the hero's POV). I'm glad these books were free.
August 24, 2019
1/5 Stars ⭐️
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June 5, 2020I mean...I liked this more than the first one. But I read it last night and I already don’t remember most of it. So...
September 9, 2022
what a shitshow
May 22, 2016
The sexy follow up to She's Too Young. In this book Veda is coming to the age of 18. Will Veda choose to stay with Ramsey after her 18th birthday or will she leave? Ramsey will do anything to make his teen girlfriend happy. The one present he decides to give her may make help or break their relationship. Veda is not just an obsession for Ramsey, there is more. Secrets are revealed and drama unfolds. I thought this book was hot and taboo. The only thing I would change was I would like it to have been a little longer. If you are in the mood for a steamy read that pushes some boundaries this is the book for you.
May 20, 2016
Ramsey is still atoning to Veda for basically buying her from her father and then sending him to Amsterdam for work. She was sick of people making decisions for her and that was why she left Ramsey but she came back and she forgives him now. He stills feels guilty and will do whatever it takes to keep her with him. He throws her a huge party for her 18th birthday on the roof of their apartment. He surprises her for her birthday with a trip to Amsterdam to see her father but she doesn't seem happy about it.
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