The typos, grammar mistakes and formatting was very distracting, I know mistakes happen when but when you’ve got Hanks as Hangs and Vicky and Vickie as the same character running around multiple times it’s hard to ignore it. The plot was predictable, oddly paced and fizzled out with her ‘jealous ex’, they ended up friends...right.
I also wonder why the author had the hero call her fat, especially when he knew it was such a devastating blow to her. There were better ways to rip the couple apart, ways that made it easier to root for them to reconcile, plus it made Stella look like such a wimp by forgiving him. Actually, the girl had a backbone consistency of a wet paper bag. How she forgave her cheating ex, her body size insulting boyfriend and never once stood up to the evil roommate is astounding to me.
The author is very talented, she just needs an editor.