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Unwilling: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
Mr. Bennet discovers his days are numbered, so he immediately begins to set his affairs — and his five unmarried daughters — in order. Knowing they will fare best should at least one of them find a suitable husband, he cannot refuse any respectable suitors.
The high-spirited Elizabeth suspects something isn’t right in the halls of Longbourn, but nothing prepares her for a certain haughty gentleman from Derbyshire. While Mr. Darcy is exceedingly wealthy and handsome, in Elizabeth’s eyes, he is also proud, high-handed, and insulting. And unfortunately, desperately in love with her.
Suddenly, Elizabeth is forced to rethink her previous opinions. And accept a choice she never had the chance to make.
The high-spirited Elizabeth suspects something isn’t right in the halls of Longbourn, but nothing prepares her for a certain haughty gentleman from Derbyshire. While Mr. Darcy is exceedingly wealthy and handsome, in Elizabeth’s eyes, he is also proud, high-handed, and insulting. And unfortunately, desperately in love with her.
Suddenly, Elizabeth is forced to rethink her previous opinions. And accept a choice she never had the chance to make.
271 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 2, 2016
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Elizabeth Adams
27 books305 followersElizabeth Adams is a book-loving, tango-dancing, Austen enthusiast. She loves old houses and thinks birthdays should be celebrated with trips—as should most occasions. She can often be found by a sunny window with a cup of hot tea and a book in her hand.
She writes romantic comedy and comedic tragedy in both historic and modern settings.
You can find more information, short stories, and outtakes at eadamswrites.com
She writes romantic comedy and comedic tragedy in both historic and modern settings.
You can find more information, short stories, and outtakes at eadamswrites.com
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May 2, 2016
Pride, Prejudice, and Stories
I had a delightful time reading this book! The story starts with Mr. Bennet finding out his days are numbered, prompting him to seriously consider his children and wife's prospects upon his demise. Instead of locking himself in his bookroom, he takes charge in making sure his daughters are marriageable, if not through their dowries, at least through their talents. He hires masters for music, French, and he himself teaches the girls literature and history. Kitty and Lydia are no longer out, and Lydia is moved back to the nursery.
Mr. Bennet then decides to bring his family to Margate to enjoy the seaside, but before they all go, Jane is to go to London to visit the Gardiners, and Elizabeth is to go to Kent to visit Charlotte. Of course, Elizabeth meets Mr. Darcy in Kent. And Mr. Darcy. Dear, sweet Mr. Darcy. He is such a sweetheart. He is so obviously enamored with Elizabeth; I almost felt bad reading the part where he was "courting" her because Elizabeth had no idea of his feelings and intentions. Zero. Nada.
By the time the Bennets have arrived in Kent to pick up Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy has made up his mind to ask for Elizabeth's hand in marriage. Instead of immediately proposing to her, he goes to Mr. Bennet to ask permission. Mr. Bennet, knowing he could not possibly reject a respectable suitor, gives his permission and blessing. The next day, Mr. Darcy proposes, and Elizabeth had no choice but to say yes.
The rest of the story revolves around their engagement, with Mr. Darcy waxing poetic declarations of love in his first letter to Elizabeth, and with Elizabeth coming to terms with her impending marriage to a man she once abhorred. Mr. Darcy finds out she doesn't feel as strongly as he does, but he tries his best to warm her up to the idea of spending the rest of her life with him. Slowly but surely, the two learn more about each other, and Elizabeth learns to see Mr. Darcy in an unbiased light. I loved that she did not fall in love with him immediately.
What I also liked about this book was that Jane learned to be more discerning. She still tried to see the good in people, but she wasn't as naive as she was. She questions Mr. Bingley's character and intentions, and if she’s better off with her steadier suitor.
Without major conflicts like Wickham, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, and Caroline Bingley, this was a fairly light read. Seeing Mr. Darcy have free reign in expressing his love and affection made me grin and feel butterflies in my stomach.
I had a delightful time reading this book! The story starts with Mr. Bennet finding out his days are numbered, prompting him to seriously consider his children and wife's prospects upon his demise. Instead of locking himself in his bookroom, he takes charge in making sure his daughters are marriageable, if not through their dowries, at least through their talents. He hires masters for music, French, and he himself teaches the girls literature and history. Kitty and Lydia are no longer out, and Lydia is moved back to the nursery.
Mr. Bennet then decides to bring his family to Margate to enjoy the seaside, but before they all go, Jane is to go to London to visit the Gardiners, and Elizabeth is to go to Kent to visit Charlotte. Of course, Elizabeth meets Mr. Darcy in Kent. And Mr. Darcy. Dear, sweet Mr. Darcy. He is such a sweetheart. He is so obviously enamored with Elizabeth; I almost felt bad reading the part where he was "courting" her because Elizabeth had no idea of his feelings and intentions. Zero. Nada.
By the time the Bennets have arrived in Kent to pick up Elizabeth, Mr. Darcy has made up his mind to ask for Elizabeth's hand in marriage. Instead of immediately proposing to her, he goes to Mr. Bennet to ask permission. Mr. Bennet, knowing he could not possibly reject a respectable suitor, gives his permission and blessing. The next day, Mr. Darcy proposes, and Elizabeth had no choice but to say yes.
The rest of the story revolves around their engagement, with Mr. Darcy waxing poetic declarations of love in his first letter to Elizabeth, and with Elizabeth coming to terms with her impending marriage to a man she once abhorred. Mr. Darcy finds out she doesn't feel as strongly as he does, but he tries his best to warm her up to the idea of spending the rest of her life with him. Slowly but surely, the two learn more about each other, and Elizabeth learns to see Mr. Darcy in an unbiased light. I loved that she did not fall in love with him immediately.
What I also liked about this book was that Jane learned to be more discerning. She still tried to see the good in people, but she wasn't as naive as she was. She questions Mr. Bingley's character and intentions, and if she’s better off with her steadier suitor.
Without major conflicts like Wickham, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, and Caroline Bingley, this was a fairly light read. Seeing Mr. Darcy have free reign in expressing his love and affection made me grin and feel butterflies in my stomach.
April 6, 2016
I enjoyed this unusual premise and especially appreciated the changes in the Bennet family. Mr. Bennet is motivated to take full charge of his family instead of hiding in his bookroom. This occurs after Mr. Bingley and the rest of his household, including Mr. Darcy, have left Netherfield. Masters come to Longbourn to teach art, music and French, with Mr. Bennet himself teaching his daughters literature, history and geography while Mrs. Bennet directs them in the duties of mistress of the house. They even spend time learning some basic cooking skills. Kitty and Lydia are no longer out, and discipline for disobedience is severe and consistent. "Unwilling" perfectly describes the initial reaction, especially by Lydia, but Mr. Bennet's efforts result in a less chaotic household. Mrs. Bennet's nerves calm considerably once he takes a more active role in managing the girls and exerts himself to be kinder and less dismissive of her.
Mr. Bennet also becomes as concerned as his wife about finding suitable husbands for his older daughters although, naturally, he takes a much different approach. Jane is off to the Gardiners for a London season. Elizabeth goes to Kent to visit her friend Charlotte Collins and finds Mr. Darcy there at Lady de Bourgh's estate. Mr. Bennet joins her there briefly before bringing her and the rest of the Bennet family to Margate. While he's at Hunsford, Darcy approaches him for permission to marry Elizabeth prior to proposing to her. With Mr. Bennet's strong encouragement, she reluctantly agrees.
The rest of the book focuses primarily on Elizabeth trying to adapt to her engagement and then her marriage to Darcy, who is a complete mystery to her at first. Again, "unwilling" aptly describes her feelings about it all.
My favorite segment by far is when Darcy and Elizabeth exchange letters during their engagement. His first to her is a beautiful love letter, but she's uncomfortable because she doesn't share those feelings. She writes a wooden reply, and Darcy responds in kind. With each sentence or two they write, their thoughts of insecurity and how lame and boring their words must sound create a comical juxtaposition. The missives slowly improve once Elizabeth opens up more.
That's a perfect example of a pattern that recurs throughout the book, with Darcy reaching out with the best intentions and Elizabeth reacting negatively. Then he feels rejected and retreats, and eventually they communicate and she becomes more satisfied with him.
One of the secondary stories features Jane's changing attitudes under her father's influence as she comes to understand that all the world isn't as good as she would prefer to believe. She struggles with her feelings when Mr. Bingley reenters her life, especially in contrast to a steadier potential suitor whose family's sincerely warm manners don't resemble Caroline Bingley's in the least.
Unfortunately, I felt that the book ran out of steam around the time Darcy and Elizabeth marry. The first half of the story interested me much more than the second half. It turns into a chronology. As their marriage begins, she still doesn't love him or really understand him at all, while he is desperately in love with her. Their relationship gradually grows despite some comparatively minor setbacks and miscommunication similar to the example I gave above. But a character study still requires something driving the action. Neither Caroline Bingley nor Mr. Wickham nor Lady Catherine creates a serious obstacle. With no antagonist, no major conflict, and no single pivotal turning point, it's a good reflection of real life, but it doesn't make for compelling reading.
After such a promising beginning, I was disappointed that the rest of the story felt so flat. I was especially surprised because it was easy to give 5 stars to this same author's The Houseguest: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary and Green Card.
Other reviewers have mentioned the epilogue, and I agree that it provides a very satisfying account of the fates of all the Bennet offspring and their families.
Mr. Bennet also becomes as concerned as his wife about finding suitable husbands for his older daughters although, naturally, he takes a much different approach. Jane is off to the Gardiners for a London season. Elizabeth goes to Kent to visit her friend Charlotte Collins and finds Mr. Darcy there at Lady de Bourgh's estate. Mr. Bennet joins her there briefly before bringing her and the rest of the Bennet family to Margate. While he's at Hunsford, Darcy approaches him for permission to marry Elizabeth prior to proposing to her. With Mr. Bennet's strong encouragement, she reluctantly agrees.
The rest of the book focuses primarily on Elizabeth trying to adapt to her engagement and then her marriage to Darcy, who is a complete mystery to her at first. Again, "unwilling" aptly describes her feelings about it all.
My favorite segment by far is when Darcy and Elizabeth exchange letters during their engagement. His first to her is a beautiful love letter, but she's uncomfortable because she doesn't share those feelings. She writes a wooden reply, and Darcy responds in kind. With each sentence or two they write, their thoughts of insecurity and how lame and boring their words must sound create a comical juxtaposition. The missives slowly improve once Elizabeth opens up more.
That's a perfect example of a pattern that recurs throughout the book, with Darcy reaching out with the best intentions and Elizabeth reacting negatively. Then he feels rejected and retreats, and eventually they communicate and she becomes more satisfied with him.
One of the secondary stories features Jane's changing attitudes under her father's influence as she comes to understand that all the world isn't as good as she would prefer to believe. She struggles with her feelings when Mr. Bingley reenters her life, especially in contrast to a steadier potential suitor whose family's sincerely warm manners don't resemble Caroline Bingley's in the least.
Unfortunately, I felt that the book ran out of steam around the time Darcy and Elizabeth marry. The first half of the story interested me much more than the second half. It turns into a chronology. As their marriage begins, she still doesn't love him or really understand him at all, while he is desperately in love with her. Their relationship gradually grows despite some comparatively minor setbacks and miscommunication similar to the example I gave above. But a character study still requires something driving the action. Neither Caroline Bingley nor Mr. Wickham nor Lady Catherine creates a serious obstacle. With no antagonist, no major conflict, and no single pivotal turning point, it's a good reflection of real life, but it doesn't make for compelling reading.
After such a promising beginning, I was disappointed that the rest of the story felt so flat. I was especially surprised because it was easy to give 5 stars to this same author's The Houseguest: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary and Green Card.
Other reviewers have mentioned the epilogue, and I agree that it provides a very satisfying account of the fates of all the Bennet offspring and their families.
June 13, 2025
Discipline weighs ounces; regret weighs tons -- author unknown
Loved Mr. Bennet in this story -- finally taking control of his family. Instilled discipline so he wouldn't have regrets. Took care of Mrs. B's future by requiring Collins to provide a cottage for her and a livable allowance (although in the end it wasn't needed).
Great story that is very well written. Grammar, spelling and word usage errors are at a minimum.
The author was one of the few who didn't include Lady C's rant at EB -- obstinate, headstrong girl, I'm ashamed of you! -- she is only mentioned as being a non-attender at the wedding. I've read that excerpt so many times it was refreshing to miss it.
Loved Mr. Bennet in this story -- finally taking control of his family. Instilled discipline so he wouldn't have regrets. Took care of Mrs. B's future by requiring Collins to provide a cottage for her and a livable allowance (although in the end it wasn't needed).
Great story that is very well written. Grammar, spelling and word usage errors are at a minimum.
The author was one of the few who didn't include Lady C's rant at EB -- obstinate, headstrong girl, I'm ashamed of you! -- she is only mentioned as being a non-attender at the wedding. I've read that excerpt so many times it was refreshing to miss it.
April 6, 2016
First, I wish this book was longer! Second, I wish this book was longer!
This book captured my imagination and wouldn't let go. The premise alone was interesting but to see it play out throughout the pages was magical. What would the Bennet family be like if Mr. Bennet took the time to not only be kind to his wife but respectful of her as well. To take his daughters in hand and set age appropriate guidelines of the time. To insist that Elizabeth accept Mr. Darcy as a husband when she really was unwilling. To teach Jane that all people are not good and kind and to put herself first. Then to tame the beast of a child that was Lydia. But at the core of this story, is the depth of love that Darcy has for Elizabeth. The letters they wrote to each and his attempt to win her love after they married was a joy to read. Yes, he is still proud and high-handed, but he is willing to change. Oh I just didn't want the story to end where it did but the epilogue was beautiful, if bittersweet.
This book captured my imagination and wouldn't let go. The premise alone was interesting but to see it play out throughout the pages was magical. What would the Bennet family be like if Mr. Bennet took the time to not only be kind to his wife but respectful of her as well. To take his daughters in hand and set age appropriate guidelines of the time. To insist that Elizabeth accept Mr. Darcy as a husband when she really was unwilling. To teach Jane that all people are not good and kind and to put herself first. Then to tame the beast of a child that was Lydia. But at the core of this story, is the depth of love that Darcy has for Elizabeth. The letters they wrote to each and his attempt to win her love after they married was a joy to read. Yes, he is still proud and high-handed, but he is willing to change. Oh I just didn't want the story to end where it did but the epilogue was beautiful, if bittersweet.
June 19, 2016
Delightful, charming, low angst, life changing events, excellent epilogue, OMG surprises
Oh my goodness, I simply loved this book. It is a…sit by the fire on a rainy day with your favorite drink and a comforter across your legs… type of book. The writing was well done, the characterizations were spot on, and I will definitely read this again. I am so glad I bought it. It is most excellent.
This is a story about a man who is facing his own mortality. Mr. Bennet has been given a death sentence by his doctor and good friend. Now what is he to do? He swears his friend to secrecy and determines to not tell his family of his weakened heart and declining health.
In looking back over his life, Mr. Bennet is not happy with what he sees. Longbourn is entailed away from the female line and he worries what will become of his wife and daughters. There is an old saying about putting your house in order and that is exactly what Mr. Bennet decides to do. He has neglected his duty to his family for far too long.
A general could not have implemented a more strategic plan. Everything at Longbourn must change and he sequesters himself in his study as he works out a plan of action. First, he needs to start with his wife; she has to be on board in order for his plan to work. He calls her into his study for a conference and with a promise of a summer at the seaside, tells her of his plans. She is hesitant; however, a summer at the seaside is worthy of a few changes.
Next, the girls are called and his plans are laid out before them. There will be changes within the Bennet household starting immediately. Various masters will be called on to work with each of the girls in French, drawing, singing, and music.
Mr. Bennet will discuss literature, history and various reading materials [non-religious, directed at Mary] with each of the girls. Those who are not working with a master will spend time in practice on the pianoforte.
Mrs. Bennet will work with the girls on how to run an estate, manage the household budget and ledgers, and time will be spent in the kitchen learning how to cook and run an efficient kitchen.
Social functions are out. And speaking of out… it was announced that Kitty and Lydia were no longer out. Lydia did not take well to this pronouncement, or to the fact she couldn’t walk to Meryton, or visit the officers, or have them visit her, or dance at assemblies, or see Mr. Wickham [note: yeah, he’s still there; however, with Lydia out of commission, he no longer has access to the family].
I will not spoil what happened when Lydia goes head to head with her father. You must read this to believe it. We are given a detailed explanation as to why Lydia is who and what she is… it is an excellent psychological profile.
Note: remember when Elizabeth visited Rosings and Lady Catherine asked all those personal questions regarding her sisters and their accomplishments? Well, this time the answers are completely different, point for the Bennet family.
Now that Mr. Bennet has his house under control and good regulation, he next needs to get advantageous marriages for the older girls. The workings of this are poignant and sad at the same time as Mr. Bennet hates losing his two favorite daughters. However, he needs to know they will be provided for and will be able to help his other daughters and wife after he is gone.
Darcy and Elizabeth: There are tears when Mr. Bennet brings about the marriage of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. This is the best part of the book as they adjust to married life. They are coming to the marriage from two different worlds and those worlds often clash. Misunderstandings galore keep our couple on their toes as they try to adjust to life together. There is laughter, tears, minimal angst and all the adjustments of married life. The evolution is slow and methodical as we see the strategies ODC uses on each other as they each attempt to get their own way. It is so cute to watch them learn about each other. There are no graphic sex scenes; however, there is a sensuality regarding ODC that is tastefully done and a bit steamy.
Jane, Bingley and another suitor: This was so interesting as Jane viewed Bingley’s actions from a different perspective, thanks to her discussions with her father. There is also another suitor that puts a wrinkle in Bingley’s fight for happiness.
Mr. and Mrs. Bennet: seaside view, ocean walks, and sunsets over the water… changes come also to the Bennet seniors. Aaaaah, it is so cute. Hey, older couples can smolder too.
Epilogue: OMG!!! I did not see THEM coming even though there were clues; however, our dear author was sneaky with how she disguised her clues. Got me good, she did, hit me right between the eyes. I gasped out loud when I read them. I couldn’t decide if I wanted to stand up and shout or weep with joy. EXCELLENT!
There were minimal errors; I suppose you can’t catch them all.
Oh my goodness, I simply loved this book. It is a…sit by the fire on a rainy day with your favorite drink and a comforter across your legs… type of book. The writing was well done, the characterizations were spot on, and I will definitely read this again. I am so glad I bought it. It is most excellent.
This is a story about a man who is facing his own mortality. Mr. Bennet has been given a death sentence by his doctor and good friend. Now what is he to do? He swears his friend to secrecy and determines to not tell his family of his weakened heart and declining health.
In looking back over his life, Mr. Bennet is not happy with what he sees. Longbourn is entailed away from the female line and he worries what will become of his wife and daughters. There is an old saying about putting your house in order and that is exactly what Mr. Bennet decides to do. He has neglected his duty to his family for far too long.
A general could not have implemented a more strategic plan. Everything at Longbourn must change and he sequesters himself in his study as he works out a plan of action. First, he needs to start with his wife; she has to be on board in order for his plan to work. He calls her into his study for a conference and with a promise of a summer at the seaside, tells her of his plans. She is hesitant; however, a summer at the seaside is worthy of a few changes.
Next, the girls are called and his plans are laid out before them. There will be changes within the Bennet household starting immediately. Various masters will be called on to work with each of the girls in French, drawing, singing, and music.
Mr. Bennet will discuss literature, history and various reading materials [non-religious, directed at Mary] with each of the girls. Those who are not working with a master will spend time in practice on the pianoforte.
Mrs. Bennet will work with the girls on how to run an estate, manage the household budget and ledgers, and time will be spent in the kitchen learning how to cook and run an efficient kitchen.
Social functions are out. And speaking of out… it was announced that Kitty and Lydia were no longer out. Lydia did not take well to this pronouncement, or to the fact she couldn’t walk to Meryton, or visit the officers, or have them visit her, or dance at assemblies, or see Mr. Wickham [note: yeah, he’s still there; however, with Lydia out of commission, he no longer has access to the family].
I will not spoil what happened when Lydia goes head to head with her father. You must read this to believe it. We are given a detailed explanation as to why Lydia is who and what she is… it is an excellent psychological profile.
Note: remember when Elizabeth visited Rosings and Lady Catherine asked all those personal questions regarding her sisters and their accomplishments? Well, this time the answers are completely different, point for the Bennet family.
Now that Mr. Bennet has his house under control and good regulation, he next needs to get advantageous marriages for the older girls. The workings of this are poignant and sad at the same time as Mr. Bennet hates losing his two favorite daughters. However, he needs to know they will be provided for and will be able to help his other daughters and wife after he is gone.
Darcy and Elizabeth: There are tears when Mr. Bennet brings about the marriage of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. This is the best part of the book as they adjust to married life. They are coming to the marriage from two different worlds and those worlds often clash. Misunderstandings galore keep our couple on their toes as they try to adjust to life together. There is laughter, tears, minimal angst and all the adjustments of married life. The evolution is slow and methodical as we see the strategies ODC uses on each other as they each attempt to get their own way. It is so cute to watch them learn about each other. There are no graphic sex scenes; however, there is a sensuality regarding ODC that is tastefully done and a bit steamy.
Jane, Bingley and another suitor: This was so interesting as Jane viewed Bingley’s actions from a different perspective, thanks to her discussions with her father. There is also another suitor that puts a wrinkle in Bingley’s fight for happiness.
Mr. and Mrs. Bennet: seaside view, ocean walks, and sunsets over the water… changes come also to the Bennet seniors. Aaaaah, it is so cute. Hey, older couples can smolder too.
Epilogue: OMG!!! I did not see THEM coming even though there were clues; however, our dear author was sneaky with how she disguised her clues. Got me good, she did, hit me right between the eyes. I gasped out loud when I read them. I couldn’t decide if I wanted to stand up and shout or weep with joy. EXCELLENT!
There were minimal errors; I suppose you can’t catch them all.
May 7, 2018
This is an interesting P&P version that I really liked until the final 10% when I felt like it it lost the narrative or had too many POVs or something...
We begin a few weeks after the Netherfield ball, the Bingleys have left and Mr. Collins is engaged to Miss Lucas. Mr. Bennet is told that his heart is failing and he has not long to get his affairs in order. As opposed to being his normal dilatory self he instead rises to this challenge and begins to fix his family. There is much detail to this... so it is a somewhat different Lizzy who arrives at Rosings and whose answers too Lady Catherine are completely different. When the Bennets swing by Rosings on their way to Margate Mr. Darcy first asks Mr. Bennet for Lizzy's hand and as that he is not far from the Great Book Room in the Sky (my joke) he agrees then while concealing his health concerns he convinces Lizzy to acquiesce to Mr. Darcy.
This is one of the weaker parts of the book, I found both Lizzy and Darcy to be unreasonable and unrealistic about their expectations. Despite ability to write and later talk they are constantly at logger heads. Lizzy seems incapable of believing that Darcy loves her.
We have subplots of Mr. Bennet's health / Mr and Mrs. Bennet's relationship and the relationship Jane and Bingley. The parts that happen after Lizzy's marriage seem to be a bit distracting.
We begin a few weeks after the Netherfield ball, the Bingleys have left and Mr. Collins is engaged to Miss Lucas. Mr. Bennet is told that his heart is failing and he has not long to get his affairs in order. As opposed to being his normal dilatory self he instead rises to this challenge and begins to fix his family. There is much detail to this... so it is a somewhat different Lizzy who arrives at Rosings and whose answers too Lady Catherine are completely different. When the Bennets swing by Rosings on their way to Margate Mr. Darcy first asks Mr. Bennet for Lizzy's hand and as that he is not far from the Great Book Room in the Sky (my joke) he agrees then while concealing his health concerns he convinces Lizzy to acquiesce to Mr. Darcy.
This is one of the weaker parts of the book, I found both Lizzy and Darcy to be unreasonable and unrealistic about their expectations. Despite ability to write and later talk they are constantly at logger heads. Lizzy seems incapable of believing that Darcy loves her.
We have subplots of Mr. Bennet's health / Mr and Mrs. Bennet's relationship and the relationship Jane and Bingley. The parts that happen after Lizzy's marriage seem to be a bit distracting.
January 11, 2024
2024 - Coming to the end of a second listen and I reread my previous review to see if I felt about Darcy the same way I do now and wouldn't you know I do. This Darcy is a Creep!! Selfish, Controlling, it's all about what he wants!
Elizabeth swallows a lot, for the most part in silence (very unlike her). With no major Aha! moment, he only transitions a little. I miss the Darcy self-teaching moment where he takes a really long look in the mirror and makes major changes. Yes, he becomes considerate, but it still seems based on his own wants and desires.
2023 -As I am coming to the end of listening to this on audiobook, I was so conflicted, with so many positive reviews I felt something must be wrong with me.
A beautifully written book, with some very poignant scenes. Bennet dying and trying to fix his family. A slow (very slow) burn, with no angst and a HEA.
But -
OK, I have read everyone's reviews and I am in an absolute minority, but this Darcy skeevies me out!! I kept waiting the whole story long for his AHA moment. There was a minor one, following a tiny quarrel between ODC. Yet, it didn't feel like an epiphany as far as I am concerned.
This Darcy is Controlling, and loves her with lust- not love and respect. Yes, they both get there in the end, tho lord knows he doesn't deserve it!
D goes to Mr. Bennet for her hand, not giving E the element of right of choice. He decides their wedding date and where, and until E schools him, was going to try and control which of her family she could stay in contact with. While the engagement period and the letters written between them go far in teaching them more about each other, in D's mind there is still much fixation on his physical need for E.
Once they marry, he is still treating her like a child, managing her and expecting her acquiescence, whenever, wherever. Again his thoughts are all sex motivated (I know, I know they are newlyweds), the little tid-bits he gets that he shouldn't be selfish are minuscule and in my head I keep yelling - Buy a frickin Vowel!!!! Yet, his thoughts whine over and over on why E isn't as in to him as he is with her. Because - SHE DIDN'T LOVE YOU!!! again she gets there in the end, blah, blah, blah...
Writing this and thinking on the whole story, it comes to me that what was missing is- he never found out that E not only didn't love him, at the time of her father forcing her to marry him, she despised him! Without that teaching aspect of the Darcy character, I came away with the feeling that there was everything manipulative about D. The last time I felt this was was reading Blinded by Prejudice. Also a very finely written story, but left me with the impression of Loss of choice/Control/Manipulation. Apparently it pushes a button.
Oh well.
Elizabeth swallows a lot, for the most part in silence (very unlike her). With no major Aha! moment, he only transitions a little. I miss the Darcy self-teaching moment where he takes a really long look in the mirror and makes major changes. Yes, he becomes considerate, but it still seems based on his own wants and desires.
2023 -As I am coming to the end of listening to this on audiobook, I was so conflicted, with so many positive reviews I felt something must be wrong with me.
A beautifully written book, with some very poignant scenes. Bennet dying and trying to fix his family. A slow (very slow) burn, with no angst and a HEA.
But -
OK, I have read everyone's reviews and I am in an absolute minority, but this Darcy skeevies me out!! I kept waiting the whole story long for his AHA moment. There was a minor one, following a tiny quarrel between ODC. Yet, it didn't feel like an epiphany as far as I am concerned.
This Darcy is Controlling, and loves her with lust- not love and respect. Yes, they both get there in the end, tho lord knows he doesn't deserve it!
D goes to Mr. Bennet for her hand, not giving E the element of right of choice. He decides their wedding date and where, and until E schools him, was going to try and control which of her family she could stay in contact with. While the engagement period and the letters written between them go far in teaching them more about each other, in D's mind there is still much fixation on his physical need for E.
Once they marry, he is still treating her like a child, managing her and expecting her acquiescence, whenever, wherever. Again his thoughts are all sex motivated (I know, I know they are newlyweds), the little tid-bits he gets that he shouldn't be selfish are minuscule and in my head I keep yelling - Buy a frickin Vowel!!!! Yet, his thoughts whine over and over on why E isn't as in to him as he is with her. Because - SHE DIDN'T LOVE YOU!!! again she gets there in the end, blah, blah, blah...
Writing this and thinking on the whole story, it comes to me that what was missing is- he never found out that E not only didn't love him, at the time of her father forcing her to marry him, she despised him! Without that teaching aspect of the Darcy character, I came away with the feeling that there was everything manipulative about D. The last time I felt this was was reading Blinded by Prejudice. Also a very finely written story, but left me with the impression of Loss of choice/Control/Manipulation. Apparently it pushes a button.
Oh well.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 21, 2016
There are several reviews which provide an excellent overview of this variation: Nissa’s, Claudine A. Pepe’s and J. W. Garrett’s. As I don’t want to be redundant I will not repeat the complete outline.
Most of us have expressed how we love compromise situations or others in which ODC find one or both being forced into a marriage they did not want or in which one wants this pairing and the other does not have any desire to be with, much less married to, the other. This is a situation in which Darcy has won the agreement of Mr. Bennet for the hand of Elizabeth in marriage. “If I may give you a piece of advice,” Mr. Bennet said. “Go slowly with Elizabeth. My daughter does not tell me everything, but I believe I am correct when I say her feelings are not equal to yours.”
Darcy, as in canon, has no idea that Elizabeth holds several grudges against him (and we all know those from canon). Elizabeth has accepted this arrangement but as the title tells us UNWILLINGLY. The author does a very fine job of building the love from Elizabeth’s side while also having Darcy address faults that he is unaware of…until Elizabeth tells him. I did so love the part where he tells her that he will do anything for her in trade for her kisses.
The main premise here as the book description and other reviews tell us is the change in Mr. Bennet. He finally becomes the father and the husband we all want him to be. I absolutely loved the way the author has him “persuading” his wife to fall into line with his plans. (“A little sea bathing would set me up just fine.”) And I also adored the way he handles Lydia’s rebellion against any and all changes. Then there is the scene, after OCD’s wedding, in which the four sisters meet in one bedroom and speculate about Darcy and Elizabeth and what is happening now that they are married. Girly giggles and bouncing on their beds and hugs galore!
This story has little angst but provides another variation of how our dear couple overcomes misunderstandings, pride and prejudices. But it is in the way that is done that this author provides a story which rates an overwhelming endorsement from many as well as from me. This is another one which I will reread in the future.
Most of us have expressed how we love compromise situations or others in which ODC find one or both being forced into a marriage they did not want or in which one wants this pairing and the other does not have any desire to be with, much less married to, the other. This is a situation in which Darcy has won the agreement of Mr. Bennet for the hand of Elizabeth in marriage. “If I may give you a piece of advice,” Mr. Bennet said. “Go slowly with Elizabeth. My daughter does not tell me everything, but I believe I am correct when I say her feelings are not equal to yours.”
Darcy, as in canon, has no idea that Elizabeth holds several grudges against him (and we all know those from canon). Elizabeth has accepted this arrangement but as the title tells us UNWILLINGLY. The author does a very fine job of building the love from Elizabeth’s side while also having Darcy address faults that he is unaware of…until Elizabeth tells him. I did so love the part where he tells her that he will do anything for her in trade for her kisses.
The main premise here as the book description and other reviews tell us is the change in Mr. Bennet. He finally becomes the father and the husband we all want him to be. I absolutely loved the way the author has him “persuading” his wife to fall into line with his plans. (“A little sea bathing would set me up just fine.”) And I also adored the way he handles Lydia’s rebellion against any and all changes. Then there is the scene, after OCD’s wedding, in which the four sisters meet in one bedroom and speculate about Darcy and Elizabeth and what is happening now that they are married. Girly giggles and bouncing on their beds and hugs galore!
This story has little angst but provides another variation of how our dear couple overcomes misunderstandings, pride and prejudices. But it is in the way that is done that this author provides a story which rates an overwhelming endorsement from many as well as from me. This is another one which I will reread in the future.
May 1, 2019
This is totally my kind of book. I didn't like the epilogue too much (I'm not a fan of epilogues anyway), but the book is super lovely.
August 27, 2016
4.5 stars! What If Mr. Bennet Was ‘Willing’ to Manage His Family?
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: A couple days after the Netherfield Ball
MAIN CHARACTERS: The Bennet family, Mr. Darcy, and Mr. Bingley
SYNOPSIS: After learning that he might not live beyond a year or so more, Mr. Bennet decides to do what he didn’t do all along – manage his daughters, take responsibility for their futures, and economize. His new plans include masters, hours of study, budgets, and not rejecting any marriage proposals from “respectable and solvent” suitors. This includes Mr. Darcy, who – you guessed it – proposes to Elizabeth while she is in Kent!
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Different Mr. Bennet: I really enjoyed seeing Mr. Bennet in action! He was decisive, firm, and clever. I loved seeing how he convinced Mrs. Bennet to join him on his plans and how he handled Lydia’s disobedience (we all know she had it coming!) In this story Mr. Bennet is a much more prominent figure and very much in the center of the story’s conflict since he faces some guilt and uncertainty about Elizabeth’s marriage to Mr. Darcy. I loved spending more time with Mr. Bennet and witnessing how he can effect such a change in his family if he takes the trouble. Especially with Mrs. Bennet!
- Jane Bennet: This story is mostly Darcy and Elizabeth centric (you won’t see much of Wickham, Lady Catherine, or Caroline), with some spotlight on Jane Bennet as her father tries to open her eyes to the unpleasant but realistic aspects of human nature. I loved how important it was to Mr. Bennet to give Jane this education and I enjoyed how it made her look at her suitors differently.
- An Enamored Darcy: Who doesn’t love to see Darcy so besotted and ardently in love? It’s too adorable! I loved seeing his joy in being betrothed to Elizabeth, how he was so ready to give his heart to her, and his patience with her while he waited for her to return some of the affection and love he has for her. I loved the scenes with the letters and when Darcy would steal some kisses (especially the ‘man full grown’ kind!) Be ready to fall in love again, readers!
- Gently and Awkwardly: I would describe this tale as low-angst and low-drama. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship is not one fraught with tension, high emotion, or turbulence. Darcy is endearingly sweet as he tries to win Elizabeth’s heart, and Elizabeth – while wary and uncertain about her future with Darcy – spends her time trying to learn more about him and understand his character instead of focusing on her discontent. I enjoyed how awkward it felt – they are on different pages and their feelings for each other are not equal. But the course of the relationship did change, not swiftly and dramatically, more gentle and gradual. I thought this was a beautiful and realistic portrayal of how our beloved couple would act in such a situation.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Elizabeth on Repeat: Just a minor quibble really. In this story Elizabeth frequently needed to know the plan and receive explanations of the future – what is the plan for marriage, what is the plan for the wedding trip, what kind of marriage does Darcy envision them having, etc. I don’t mind Elizabeth wanting to learn more about her future and having some uncertainties, but it started to feel a little bit repetitious at some points.
WHAT’S UNIQUE ABOUT THIS STORY: Mr. Bennet has left the sanctuary of his library and is a man of decision, action, and force.
CONCLUSION:
Unwilling is a beautifully charming Pride and Prejudice variation that examines the potential of the Bennet family to improve themselves and the effect of such improvements. Readers who want to see Mr. Bennet as an active father and husband and Mr. Darcy as an ardent and understanding suitor should definitely give this lovely book a try!
Austenesque Reviews
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
TIME FRAME: A couple days after the Netherfield Ball
MAIN CHARACTERS: The Bennet family, Mr. Darcy, and Mr. Bingley
SYNOPSIS: After learning that he might not live beyond a year or so more, Mr. Bennet decides to do what he didn’t do all along – manage his daughters, take responsibility for their futures, and economize. His new plans include masters, hours of study, budgets, and not rejecting any marriage proposals from “respectable and solvent” suitors. This includes Mr. Darcy, who – you guessed it – proposes to Elizabeth while she is in Kent!
WHAT I LOVED:
- A Different Mr. Bennet: I really enjoyed seeing Mr. Bennet in action! He was decisive, firm, and clever. I loved seeing how he convinced Mrs. Bennet to join him on his plans and how he handled Lydia’s disobedience (we all know she had it coming!) In this story Mr. Bennet is a much more prominent figure and very much in the center of the story’s conflict since he faces some guilt and uncertainty about Elizabeth’s marriage to Mr. Darcy. I loved spending more time with Mr. Bennet and witnessing how he can effect such a change in his family if he takes the trouble. Especially with Mrs. Bennet!
- Jane Bennet: This story is mostly Darcy and Elizabeth centric (you won’t see much of Wickham, Lady Catherine, or Caroline), with some spotlight on Jane Bennet as her father tries to open her eyes to the unpleasant but realistic aspects of human nature. I loved how important it was to Mr. Bennet to give Jane this education and I enjoyed how it made her look at her suitors differently.
- An Enamored Darcy: Who doesn’t love to see Darcy so besotted and ardently in love? It’s too adorable! I loved seeing his joy in being betrothed to Elizabeth, how he was so ready to give his heart to her, and his patience with her while he waited for her to return some of the affection and love he has for her. I loved the scenes with the letters and when Darcy would steal some kisses (especially the ‘man full grown’ kind!) Be ready to fall in love again, readers!
- Gently and Awkwardly: I would describe this tale as low-angst and low-drama. Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship is not one fraught with tension, high emotion, or turbulence. Darcy is endearingly sweet as he tries to win Elizabeth’s heart, and Elizabeth – while wary and uncertain about her future with Darcy – spends her time trying to learn more about him and understand his character instead of focusing on her discontent. I enjoyed how awkward it felt – they are on different pages and their feelings for each other are not equal. But the course of the relationship did change, not swiftly and dramatically, more gentle and gradual. I thought this was a beautiful and realistic portrayal of how our beloved couple would act in such a situation.
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Elizabeth on Repeat: Just a minor quibble really. In this story Elizabeth frequently needed to know the plan and receive explanations of the future – what is the plan for marriage, what is the plan for the wedding trip, what kind of marriage does Darcy envision them having, etc. I don’t mind Elizabeth wanting to learn more about her future and having some uncertainties, but it started to feel a little bit repetitious at some points.
WHAT’S UNIQUE ABOUT THIS STORY: Mr. Bennet has left the sanctuary of his library and is a man of decision, action, and force.
CONCLUSION:
Unwilling is a beautifully charming Pride and Prejudice variation that examines the potential of the Bennet family to improve themselves and the effect of such improvements. Readers who want to see Mr. Bennet as an active father and husband and Mr. Darcy as an ardent and understanding suitor should definitely give this lovely book a try!
Austenesque Reviews
May 19, 2016
Bravo. This One Rings True.
A rare five star from me. Maybe it was just the right day for the right book, but maybe it was more than that. I've read quite a few in the past couple of weeks and though some were good, they left me ... wanting. I think the difference here is that this author, carefully, thoroughly, filled out her characters and made convincing explanations for their attraction to each other, assumed on his part, reticent on hers. The premise ploy is quickly put forth, and plausible. There was the expected 'back-and-forth' emotionally, but it seemed more grounded in the era and the atmosphere of the story. I never felt there was scene stretching or pointless dithering. When the misunderstandings arose, they were explained, explored, and dealt with in a realistic manner, rather than prolonged and misconstrued as, sadly, is the case with so many stories that utilize Regency etiquette as a tool for convenience and convolution. This excellent author has written a believable romantic version of a situational trope that has been done countless times before, but this one rings true. Very satisfying.
A rare five star from me. Maybe it was just the right day for the right book, but maybe it was more than that. I've read quite a few in the past couple of weeks and though some were good, they left me ... wanting. I think the difference here is that this author, carefully, thoroughly, filled out her characters and made convincing explanations for their attraction to each other, assumed on his part, reticent on hers. The premise ploy is quickly put forth, and plausible. There was the expected 'back-and-forth' emotionally, but it seemed more grounded in the era and the atmosphere of the story. I never felt there was scene stretching or pointless dithering. When the misunderstandings arose, they were explained, explored, and dealt with in a realistic manner, rather than prolonged and misconstrued as, sadly, is the case with so many stories that utilize Regency etiquette as a tool for convenience and convolution. This excellent author has written a believable romantic version of a situational trope that has been done countless times before, but this one rings true. Very satisfying.
June 11, 2025
This to me is the perfect book.
August 12, 2018
In this alternate version of P&P Mr. Bennet learns his health is fragile after the Netherfield ball, which prompts him to change about his entire household: restricts his younger daughter's liberties, hires teachers and instructors of music, languages and art for his daughters and strategizes to have the older two marry soon. Also, takes in hand his estate's finances and his wife's exhuberance, becoming a man worthy of Lady Catherine's praise (sooo weird). Reading about all that was strangely pleasurable and startling as well... Almost disturbing.
Mr. Darcy can have no objection to the connection, so he proposes to Mr. Bennet, who acepts and instructs his dutiful Lizzy to go with it for the benefit of the entire family. Elizabeth does not feel anything for Mr. Darcy and goes on a journey of slowly getting to know her future husband and caring for him. Mr. Darcy courts his bethrothed, and later his wife, in a clueless, sad and romantic fashion, with many missunderstandings, meanwhile Lizzy is reluctant (yet obedient) and committed to respect her new husband. This Elizabeth is so passive and subdued which was very out of character. The storytelling in general was slow paced, draggings, and not very comforting, bacause of the most part, there was only feeling on his side and I could imagine Elizabeth feeling trapped and self sacrificing (not ver romantic).
Still, well written for the most part. Not very exciting. It had its moments here and there...
Mr. Darcy can have no objection to the connection, so he proposes to Mr. Bennet, who acepts and instructs his dutiful Lizzy to go with it for the benefit of the entire family. Elizabeth does not feel anything for Mr. Darcy and goes on a journey of slowly getting to know her future husband and caring for him. Mr. Darcy courts his bethrothed, and later his wife, in a clueless, sad and romantic fashion, with many missunderstandings, meanwhile Lizzy is reluctant (yet obedient) and committed to respect her new husband. This Elizabeth is so passive and subdued which was very out of character. The storytelling in general was slow paced, draggings, and not very comforting, bacause of the most part, there was only feeling on his side and I could imagine Elizabeth feeling trapped and self sacrificing (not ver romantic).
Still, well written for the most part. Not very exciting. It had its moments here and there...
March 15, 2017
I took some key points under advisement after reading the reviews and felt this book would suit me. So many times I did the eye roll thing at Elizabeth's need to paint Darcy the villain. This poor bloke we all know and have love excels at trying to please the woman he loves. In a world with so many books where the Hero runs from showing his feelings this handsome fellow lays it at Lizzy's feet but ever the headstrong stubborn woman she twists his intentions in such a way the man is at a loss. There were times I felt the title should read Bipolar Lizzy, catchy aye? I digress the author did a wonderful job at making you see things from Lizzy's pov and it helped you to be a bit easier with her behavior. I was bothered that after Darcy's first gift, a set of combs, Lizzy treated the whole occurrence in such a rude manner. It was never brought up leaving Darcy thinking, " I can't believe she's not going to say anything?" There was also the fact he never did tell her his age. Lastly, her behavior when she is dealing with her courses. I felt so bad for poor Fitzwilliam and somehow it turned into him being painted a beast and brute. This is coming from a woman's perspective that even I thought her unreasonable. So many times had she just said her thoughts the arguments would not have happened. We all know the primary one at Wickhams tale of woe and when she learns the truth I thought now she will see Darcy as he is. Alas, she still continues to look upon him with indifference. She willfully just would not allow herself to open her heart to him. When you read Darcy he is trying to twist himself in all directions to please her, apologizing at every turn. He was such a good man and when he gives her her birthday gift oh my geoood I was tearing up. Lord in the words of Mrs. Bennet oh palpitations! So thoughtful, romantic you name it the man was walking on water at that point. And so around the point when Lizzy confides to FD that she is indisposed he keeps his distance it is at this point she starts to learn something about herself. Even though he is with her she finds herself missing him, his normal closeness that made her feel suffocated in the beginning has been constant and without the little shows of affection she confesses that she misses him to Darcy. This is what made Darcy a great man he goes within himself and thinks," if I become more lighthearted and jovial it is going to draw her in. If I tease her more as she does me she will feel more comfortable and in our private moments show more of her personality." What Darcy missed at this point was Lizzy did not show her liveliness in the bedroom and he felt she repressed herself too much but instead of holding that in as Lizzy so much he tries to change his approach. Stole my heart this Darcy. When they go out in the boat was another great part of the book oh you'll love seeing the playful pair. The last scene of them together was another playful side you get to enjoy. The epilogue was nice but wish it would have been D/E at some point with their prodigy. Don't worry they have their family, their very large family which was a humorous turn of events but we miss out on that interaction. Overall though a very entertaining book with a beautiful supportive Mrs. Bennet at the right time and a strong Mr. Bennet that I loved. Very well done, enjoy!
December 8, 2025
Very Good!
Reviewed in Canada on January 17, 2019
I loved this Bennet family and the renewed affections of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet made me happy. A super variation.
Update October 9, 2020—I just finished listening to this book on Audible yesterday. The male narrator, Mark Topping, is very good. First read via Kindle Unlimited, I also re-read it in March 2020 when I purchased it for my Kindle library. Love Elizabeth Adams’ books.
Reviewed in Canada on January 17, 2019
I loved this Bennet family and the renewed affections of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet made me happy. A super variation.
Update October 9, 2020—I just finished listening to this book on Audible yesterday. The male narrator, Mark Topping, is very good. First read via Kindle Unlimited, I also re-read it in March 2020 when I purchased it for my Kindle library. Love Elizabeth Adams’ books.
April 25, 2021
Another good book by the author
For a book written by Elizabeth Adams, “The Plot” doesn’t seem to matter. She is such an accomplished and enjoyable to read author, every she writes is worth reading. Highly recommended.
For a book written by Elizabeth Adams, “The Plot” doesn’t seem to matter. She is such an accomplished and enjoyable to read author, every she writes is worth reading. Highly recommended.
July 19, 2023
"Now, you may find this strange, Mrs. Bennet, but I believe we need to prepare our daughters for marriage."
At this, Mrs. Bennet sat straight up and looked queerly at her husband.
I couldn't sleep yesterday... again. And so, even though I have WAY too much books going on at once at the moment, I picked up this fanfiction* because I knew it would make me feel better.
*I say this lovingly and not as a slur as some reviewers use the word. Fanfiction is genre of its own and I'm reviewing it as such instead of assigning it aspirations it didn't have from the beginning.
In this book Mr Bennet goes through a major personality change and... puts his all household in line. For the sake of this story we must pretend that such decision and dedication is within the possibilities of Mr Bennet's character. Even though I doubt that, it's how fanfiction works, so I'm willing to suspense my disbelieve. After these mental acrobatics this book is actually pretty good. It COULD use a bit more editing since it sometimes gets stuck on rehashing the information we already know from P&P, but otherwise... the story is pretty solid. I especially liked the attention Adams gives to all the Bennet sisters, flashing them out, keeping their personalities, but looking into the positive in them. I actually think that I like her take on Elizabeth the least, not that I disliked her, but it seemed to me that the 2005 adaptation really shined through the narrative in some places. To be honest, I had a bit of disconnect between the protagonists of this retelling and the characters from P&P kind of forgetting who I was reading about (but that happens to me quite often with JA retellings). That said, I really identified with Mr Darcy in a lot of cases - he was so delightfully awkward and petty! (That said he has some moments where I could kill him...)
I also have to say that I kind of loved that one of the little conflicts in the story is about menstruation. And very realistically done at that. Detabooisation!
I actually quite enjoyed this. The characterisation wasn't perfect and I would love it if there was bigger emphasis on consent but all in all it was fun read.
April 4, 2016
Unwilling: A Pride and Prejudice Vagary
This was a very excellent story. In 1811, everyone in the Bennet family changed after Mr. Bennet discovers from his doctor friend that his heart was bad. Given maybe two years, he did a 180 degree turn around. He cut back on his wife and daughters' spending money, told his wife that meals were to be simpler, and hired masters to teach all five daughters the pianoforte, French, drawing while he instructed literature crossed with history. Agreeing with his wife that at least the oldest daughters should be married before he died, he decided he would find men approved by him. All but Lydia took this time to learn. Because she threw a fit, she was sent back to the nursery. The more she yelled her meals were sent to the nursery. Porridge was what she ate daily, and when she threw the spoon she was denied silverware. She fought with the masters, and after weeks of disobedience finally decided to change her attitude and was rewarded with being part of the family again. He also her style of dresses and hair were returned to a child's wardrobe and simpler hairstyle. Jane was in London and Elizabeth in Kent when the Bennets picked them up for their seaside adventure. When the family left Longbourn to pick up Jane in London, and Elizabeth in Kent, one part of his wishes were answered. Fitzwilliam Darcy approached him to ask for Elizabeth's hand in marriage. He gave both his consent and blessing. Now came the hard part: convincing Elizabeth. He knows how she feels about him, but convinces her that must. No one in the family knows of his condition, but Elizabeth thinks that something is wrong. She and Darcy are betrothed and hope to learn more about each other through letters until he arrives in Margate. Darcy writes her a very lovely letter, and she responds with a letter filled with no warmth at all. Mad as the Mad Batter in Alice in Wonderland, Darcy writes her a very stern one sentence letter: We will proceed as planned. She realizes, a bit too late, that her letter was inappropriate given he has expressed his deepest love for her over and over. When the family gets to Margate, her father tells her to give the man a chance. When he arrives at Margate, they take pleasant walks and for the most part, happy conversations. After he leaves Margate for London, the family follows shortly after to prepare for the wedding. His Aunt Lady Constance was going to have the breakfast after the wedding since the house was larger than the Gardiners' house. Dinner at Darcy House was stressful since Darcy seemed to dislike the Gardiners. When Elizabeth confronted him, she was seeing red, and he knew it. When giving his explanations as to why he dismissed them, Elizabeth gave every reason his feelings were not true. Again ashamed of himself, he had to make another apology to Elizabeth. The Bennets stayed at the Gardiners and then returned to Margate. Mr Bennet and Mrs Bennet had relaxed so much that each wanted to sleep with each other. Mr Bennet spent time walking further than the day before and walking up and down the steps to build up his strength. Even at fifty years old, his little swimmers did their job. Jane and Bingley made up for the lost time not returning to Netherfield when he should have. Jane was sad that Elizabeth would not be at her wedding, but the Darcys were still on their wedding trip to the Lakes. On the way north, she and Darcy had another misunderstanding with Darcy again apologizing. When they get to the Lakes, everything is going well. A fortnight into their stay, while Elizabeth taking the lead in making love, she blurts out that she loves Darcy. Fast forward, after the death of both parents, Kitty stayed at Longbourn to take care of her brother, Robin. Mr Bennet died in 1817, Mrs Bennet two years later both being given a chance to spoil their son. When back at Longbourn for Kitty's wedding, Elizabeth takes her brother to Oakham Mount. At ten, he is the next Master of Longbourn. Mrs Bennet was correct about Elizabeth. She and Darcy have 5 boys already, is with child again, and both are hoping for a girl. Loved Darcy in this story. He was for the most part so agreeable and so totally in love with Elizabeth that the love came through his pores. Only their misunderstandings angered him beyond thinking straight, but when confronted by Elizabeth he always apologized that she was correct. Elizabeth is Elizabeth after finally accepting her fate, becomes the teasing, impertinent women he fell in love with. Lydia and Mary were not mentioned towards the end. It would have been nice to know what happened with them since all the sisters became very close after their father put his foot down on just about everything.
This was a very excellent story. In 1811, everyone in the Bennet family changed after Mr. Bennet discovers from his doctor friend that his heart was bad. Given maybe two years, he did a 180 degree turn around. He cut back on his wife and daughters' spending money, told his wife that meals were to be simpler, and hired masters to teach all five daughters the pianoforte, French, drawing while he instructed literature crossed with history. Agreeing with his wife that at least the oldest daughters should be married before he died, he decided he would find men approved by him. All but Lydia took this time to learn. Because she threw a fit, she was sent back to the nursery. The more she yelled her meals were sent to the nursery. Porridge was what she ate daily, and when she threw the spoon she was denied silverware. She fought with the masters, and after weeks of disobedience finally decided to change her attitude and was rewarded with being part of the family again. He also her style of dresses and hair were returned to a child's wardrobe and simpler hairstyle. Jane was in London and Elizabeth in Kent when the Bennets picked them up for their seaside adventure. When the family left Longbourn to pick up Jane in London, and Elizabeth in Kent, one part of his wishes were answered. Fitzwilliam Darcy approached him to ask for Elizabeth's hand in marriage. He gave both his consent and blessing. Now came the hard part: convincing Elizabeth. He knows how she feels about him, but convinces her that must. No one in the family knows of his condition, but Elizabeth thinks that something is wrong. She and Darcy are betrothed and hope to learn more about each other through letters until he arrives in Margate. Darcy writes her a very lovely letter, and she responds with a letter filled with no warmth at all. Mad as the Mad Batter in Alice in Wonderland, Darcy writes her a very stern one sentence letter: We will proceed as planned. She realizes, a bit too late, that her letter was inappropriate given he has expressed his deepest love for her over and over. When the family gets to Margate, her father tells her to give the man a chance. When he arrives at Margate, they take pleasant walks and for the most part, happy conversations. After he leaves Margate for London, the family follows shortly after to prepare for the wedding. His Aunt Lady Constance was going to have the breakfast after the wedding since the house was larger than the Gardiners' house. Dinner at Darcy House was stressful since Darcy seemed to dislike the Gardiners. When Elizabeth confronted him, she was seeing red, and he knew it. When giving his explanations as to why he dismissed them, Elizabeth gave every reason his feelings were not true. Again ashamed of himself, he had to make another apology to Elizabeth. The Bennets stayed at the Gardiners and then returned to Margate. Mr Bennet and Mrs Bennet had relaxed so much that each wanted to sleep with each other. Mr Bennet spent time walking further than the day before and walking up and down the steps to build up his strength. Even at fifty years old, his little swimmers did their job. Jane and Bingley made up for the lost time not returning to Netherfield when he should have. Jane was sad that Elizabeth would not be at her wedding, but the Darcys were still on their wedding trip to the Lakes. On the way north, she and Darcy had another misunderstanding with Darcy again apologizing. When they get to the Lakes, everything is going well. A fortnight into their stay, while Elizabeth taking the lead in making love, she blurts out that she loves Darcy. Fast forward, after the death of both parents, Kitty stayed at Longbourn to take care of her brother, Robin. Mr Bennet died in 1817, Mrs Bennet two years later both being given a chance to spoil their son. When back at Longbourn for Kitty's wedding, Elizabeth takes her brother to Oakham Mount. At ten, he is the next Master of Longbourn. Mrs Bennet was correct about Elizabeth. She and Darcy have 5 boys already, is with child again, and both are hoping for a girl. Loved Darcy in this story. He was for the most part so agreeable and so totally in love with Elizabeth that the love came through his pores. Only their misunderstandings angered him beyond thinking straight, but when confronted by Elizabeth he always apologized that she was correct. Elizabeth is Elizabeth after finally accepting her fate, becomes the teasing, impertinent women he fell in love with. Lydia and Mary were not mentioned towards the end. It would have been nice to know what happened with them since all the sisters became very close after their father put his foot down on just about everything.
June 3, 2018
This story captured my interest from the start... Mr Bennet is sick and realises that he needs to make some significant changes to try and offer his family some security after his death. He takes his unruly daughters in hand and this is makes interesting reading. Mr Bennet also realises at least one of his daughters needs to marry well and therefore encourages Elizabeth to accept Darcy's proposal, even though she doesn't really want to. He warns Darcy her feelings aren't equal to his and what follows is the story of their engagement and getting to know each other.
There are some really lovely moments in this book. At times, Darcy is really sweet and thoughtful and it was cute to see his relationship with Elizabeth developing. There is some brilliant humour between them. Mrs Bennet is so embarrassing, I really felt for Elizabeth. It is also good to a Jane that is a bit more cynical. However, there were other things that really niggled... Darcy's response to the Gardiner's was terrible and he proves himself to be a total snob. Given his response was so extreme, I was surprised he was prepared to accept Elizabeth. Also, there is a dinner party with his relatives but we never learn what they think about Elizabeth. With Mrs Bennet on form, it felt like an opportunity to create some angst was lost.
There is no real angst, no significant events or turning points and no surprises. Darcy was a bit inconsistent for my liking and Elizabeth was false at times which I didn't really like either. We don't see how Darcy's response to the Gardiner's plays out, nor the response of his family to the Bennets. There was a lot I liked about this book, but quite a lot I didn't. I think this is a 3.5 star for me.
There are some really lovely moments in this book. At times, Darcy is really sweet and thoughtful and it was cute to see his relationship with Elizabeth developing. There is some brilliant humour between them. Mrs Bennet is so embarrassing, I really felt for Elizabeth. It is also good to a Jane that is a bit more cynical. However, there were other things that really niggled... Darcy's response to the Gardiner's was terrible and he proves himself to be a total snob. Given his response was so extreme, I was surprised he was prepared to accept Elizabeth. Also, there is a dinner party with his relatives but we never learn what they think about Elizabeth. With Mrs Bennet on form, it felt like an opportunity to create some angst was lost.
There is no real angst, no significant events or turning points and no surprises. Darcy was a bit inconsistent for my liking and Elizabeth was false at times which I didn't really like either. We don't see how Darcy's response to the Gardiner's plays out, nor the response of his family to the Bennets. There was a lot I liked about this book, but quite a lot I didn't. I think this is a 3.5 star for me.
January 23, 2018
A lovely and romantic story. Slow paced with plenty of time to allow their relationship to develop naturally. No angst but a bit of tension and suspense to keep you engaged.
An ailing Mr Bennet convinces Elizabeth to accept Darcy at Hunsford. She is hesitant but relents. This is a very different Mr Bennet who due to his illness gets a firm grip on his family to make his girls marriageable before he passes. He sees Mr Darcy as saviour of his entire family. Elizabeth is not so impressed.
I thoroughly enjoyed following ODC on their journey to HEA. Recommend this book.
An ailing Mr Bennet convinces Elizabeth to accept Darcy at Hunsford. She is hesitant but relents. This is a very different Mr Bennet who due to his illness gets a firm grip on his family to make his girls marriageable before he passes. He sees Mr Darcy as saviour of his entire family. Elizabeth is not so impressed.
I thoroughly enjoyed following ODC on their journey to HEA. Recommend this book.
December 17, 2025
My 3th read done.
Unfortunately I gotta change my rating from 4 to 3.
Elizabeth annoyed me so much. She had 6 weeks from the proposal to the marriage for 'understanding' Darcy but I had the feeling that she didn't wanted to understand him and afterwards blame him. Elizabeth tried to cry off so often and was shocked afterwards when Darcy was 'mad'.
I enjoyed the book until the wedding, afterwards it stretched.
Unfortunately I gotta change my rating from 4 to 3.
Elizabeth annoyed me so much. She had 6 weeks from the proposal to the marriage for 'understanding' Darcy but I had the feeling that she didn't wanted to understand him and afterwards blame him. Elizabeth tried to cry off so often and was shocked afterwards when Darcy was 'mad'.
I enjoyed the book until the wedding, afterwards it stretched.
September 19, 2016
I received this ebook in a giveaway.
I enjoyed the premise of this story and the change in the Bennett household. The story center mostly on Darcy and Elizabeth but does mention the other sisters. I like that Jane through her transformation learns to think rationally of people and their intentions.
I enjoyed the premise of this story and the change in the Bennett household. The story center mostly on Darcy and Elizabeth but does mention the other sisters. I like that Jane through her transformation learns to think rationally of people and their intentions.
February 23, 2018
Engaging and different
Mr. Bennett is forced to confront the probable consequences of his neglect and a different, but really interesting story develops that retains your attention and me you wondering if things can ever have a happily ever after.
A very worthy tale.
Mr. Bennett is forced to confront the probable consequences of his neglect and a different, but really interesting story develops that retains your attention and me you wondering if things can ever have a happily ever after.
A very worthy tale.
October 16, 2021
She does it for her father but ends up fine :)
4.5 stars
She's a dutiful daughter but as usual pretty obstinate until she realises and almost fainted 😅 I like how she went super pale!
He has to learn a lot as he gave her for granted at the beginning.
Nice story and I like the epilogue several years after.
4.5 stars
She's a dutiful daughter but as usual pretty obstinate until she realises and almost fainted 😅 I like how she went super pale!
He has to learn a lot as he gave her for granted at the beginning.
Nice story and I like the epilogue several years after.
May 16, 2018
POV, punctuation issues diverted attention from enjoyment. Light and fluffy. About ten seconds of conflict. Nice premise well executed with few tropes. Good writing quality if better edited.
January 26, 2024
I think I would have liked it more if I had read it on kindle rather than as an audiobook. It was sweet nonetheless and much naughtier than other Elizabeth Adams JAFF (which I loved). It’s closed door but rated PG-13.
October 17, 2018
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Mr Bennet finds the will to focus on his family and see to their well being. The girls are given the benefit of the masters, and he helps all of them see the world around them. Mr Darcy is as in love with Elizabeth as ever and fortunately for him, he asks Mr Bennet for Elizabeth's hand before he speaks to her. As Mr Bennet wants his family taken care of, he convinces an unwilling Elizabeth to accept his proposal.
Luckily for our dear couple, they have the opportunity to get to know each other through correspondence before the wedding and learn to grow into their happily ever after.
My favorite part of this book is the feelings - of the sisters as well as their lives changed after their sister got married.
Luckily for our dear couple, they have the opportunity to get to know each other through correspondence before the wedding and learn to grow into their happily ever after.
My favorite part of this book is the feelings - of the sisters as well as their lives changed after their sister got married.
February 28, 2026
Quizás tengo que dejar de leer fanfiction de Pride and Prejudice 😔🤣
September 24, 2025
This is the type of variation I cannot help but love despite finding a few problems with it, and despite my giving many variations 3.5/4 stars, based on my enjoyment, this one stands taller than the rest.
Mr Bennet learns he doesn't have many years left to live and realizes he needs to do something for his wife and children before he passes away. He orders his wife to stop entertaining and decreases expenses, hires tutors to make his daughters less silly and more marriage-material, forces Lydia back into the nursery and tells her & Kitty they can no longer be out.
Lydia is the most unwilling in learning her new place in life, but she's eventually worn down by her father's boot.
I always love to see more of Kitty. She's a sister Austen gifted the least personality, she's an impressionable follower who always followed Lydia's foibles. My favourite published P&P variation was about Kitty.
Jane is forced to grow up and realize that she needs a husband who could be a leader and wouldn't be easily swayed by his sisters or friends, she becomes more cynic and realizes not everyone means well.
Mary's improvement is forgotten about, she becomes a better performer but otherwise her new character isn't really shown
There're a few adorable moments between Bennet sisters and them together always put a giant smile on my face.
Mr Bennet also forces Mr Collins to sign legal papers giving Mr Bennet's widow and unmarried daughters a large allowance from Longbourn's income. It was unclear to me, whether Mr Bennet tricked Collins, or simply worn him down.
Mr Bennet should've thought about it long, long before he received news of his health instead of having to stoop to taking advantage of an insipid ill-educated man, and by doing so, he probably took a serious sin on his soul so short before death.
Mr Bennet has a serious introspection on his own fault in the state of his family. He recognizes that his wife was a good wife. She wasn't a smart wife, but she was attentive to him, and genuinely loved him and their daughters. Yes, some more than others, but she put herself last and tried her best to promote her daughters, and did what she could to ease Mr Bennet's life, never receiving any kindness in return. Mr Bennet finds, that as he takes leadership in the family, his wife calms down and becomes a more tolerable partner in life, and he finds he can love her again.I hold the opinion that Mr Bennet is an absolute crap as a father and a husband, he should've broken the entail AS WELL AS saved up for dowries for all his daughters and taken them up the reins, so this plotline was the most pleasing
We don't see much of Fitzwilliam Darcy's family, there's barely even Georgiana present. But what I appreciated is that the author invented more relatives for him - he has uncles, aunts, cousins from both his mother and father's side, all of them tall and titled and surely richand in no way they should appear in the same room as the Gardiners and talk to them like equals. Most of them had no dialogue, but I loved the idea of his VeryImportantFamily being so numerous and therefore inflating Fitzwilliam Darcy's ego and pride even more.
I hate to admit but Mr Darcy gave me an ick a few times. There were a few moments in the beginning and he was too doe-eyed and flowery in love. Then twice or thrice he said something too possessive. He wasn't trying to force kisses on Elizabeth as much as his evil twin brothers from other stories that icked me so bad I had to DNF, but I wish I didn't have to read him wanting the first few kisses while Elizabeth was uncomfortable. Then he was fuming that a regency maiden wasn't immediately wanton in bed.
Although, I have to admit, Darcy serves as a nice juxtaposition to Mr Bennet, because Fitzwilliam tries to take leadership of the family immediately.
And then there're the conflicts, about which you can read lower
There are no serious conflicts.
Although I love drama-free stories from time to time(and there're many times of conflicts I just loathe to read about, there were two serious attempts at a conflict, and one of them remained unresolved which was most unsatisfactory.
Potential conflict #1, Darcy & Bingley:
Potential conflict #2, Darcy in love & Elizabeth not, she admits she hated Darcy's guts in Hertfordshire bc he hurt her vanity and bc of WIckham's lies:
Actual conflict #1, Darcy&Gardiners: This was the worst part of the novel.
Actual conflict #2periodCourses & Darcy acting like a toddler, OK this one was almost as bad as the previous one.
The Smut was worse than I wished. Although it was mostly fade to black, there were a few body parts descriptions that I found too explicit, and wished the novel would've done without them.
I'd say the story/love progression wasn't logical. I think the author tried to keep the story conflict-free. So when the story climaxes in Elizabeth realizing her love for Darcy, for him it's not a big momenteven though previously he thought about how he may be selfish and married her too soon, before feeling secure in her affection
Descriptions were lacking. Most times it wasn't noticeable, but then the narrative would say that Darcy was handling a boat and moved it to shore, and presumably he'd pull his breeches up and take his boots off, but that's not mentioned. There's no break in the narrative to figure out the logical details, and that created a break in the reading experience because I had to stop and think "Wait, WHAT? and then reread a few times to understand how they got into such situation. There were a few moments like that.
Besides lack of action descriptions, Mrs Bennet & sisters didn't show any feelings about Elizabeth's engagement. Darcy courted her drama free, there was not a pip from her family. Only closer to the wedding date, Jane worries a bit about Lizzy's happiness (and it is tied to Jane's relationship problems) and Mrs Bennet shows up to embarrass Lizzy with description Darcy's riches.
I also had to LOL at Elizabeth describing herself as The Smallest Bean. "Why my momma hates me so, I'm shortest and skinniest of the girls".
Names are whack: Darcy's family isn't called correctly. Mrs Bennet also notes how fertile women in her family are, even though her sister is childless. The language isn't entirely modern, but it's not very regency, either.
However, there're a few other delightful details & scenes I haven't mentioned in this review, and I leave them as a surprise to you, future readers.
Mr Bennet learns he doesn't have many years left to live and realizes he needs to do something for his wife and children before he passes away. He orders his wife to stop entertaining and decreases expenses, hires tutors to make his daughters less silly and more marriage-material, forces Lydia back into the nursery and tells her & Kitty they can no longer be out.
Lydia is the most unwilling in learning her new place in life, but she's eventually worn down by her father's boot.
I always love to see more of Kitty. She's a sister Austen gifted the least personality, she's an impressionable follower who always followed Lydia's foibles. My favourite published P&P variation was about Kitty.
Jane is forced to grow up and realize that she needs a husband who could be a leader and wouldn't be easily swayed by his sisters or friends, she becomes more cynic and realizes not everyone means well.
There're a few adorable moments between Bennet sisters and them together always put a giant smile on my face.
Mr Bennet also forces Mr Collins to sign legal papers giving Mr Bennet's widow and unmarried daughters a large allowance from Longbourn's income. It was unclear to me, whether Mr Bennet tricked Collins, or simply worn him down.
Mr Bennet should've thought about it long, long before he received news of his health instead of having to stoop to taking advantage of an insipid ill-educated man, and by doing so, he probably took a serious sin on his soul so short before death.
He could not, would not, feel guilty about providing for his family.200 pages and a few hours later, I'm still not sure how to feel about that. But I relish in feeling conflicted, as I esteem interesting, different and thought-provking higher than safe and boring.
Mr Bennet has a serious introspection on his own fault in the state of his family. He recognizes that his wife was a good wife. She wasn't a smart wife, but she was attentive to him, and genuinely loved him and their daughters. Yes, some more than others, but she put herself last and tried her best to promote her daughters, and did what she could to ease Mr Bennet's life, never receiving any kindness in return. Mr Bennet finds, that as he takes leadership in the family, his wife calms down and becomes a more tolerable partner in life, and he finds he can love her again.
We don't see much of Fitzwilliam Darcy's family, there's barely even Georgiana present. But what I appreciated is that the author invented more relatives for him - he has uncles, aunts, cousins from both his mother and father's side, all of them tall and titled and surely rich
I hate to admit but Mr Darcy gave me an ick a few times. There were a few moments in the beginning and he was too doe-eyed and flowery in love. Then twice or thrice he said something too possessive. He wasn't trying to force kisses on Elizabeth as much as his evil twin brothers from other stories that icked me so bad I had to DNF, but I wish I didn't have to read him wanting the first few kisses while Elizabeth was uncomfortable. Then he was fuming that a regency maiden wasn't immediately wanton in bed.
Although, I have to admit, Darcy serves as a nice juxtaposition to Mr Bennet, because Fitzwilliam tries to take leadership of the family immediately.
And then there're the conflicts, about which you can read lower
There are no serious conflicts.
Although I love drama-free stories from time to time(and there're many times of conflicts I just loathe to read about, there were two serious attempts at a conflict, and one of them remained unresolved which was most unsatisfactory.
Potential conflict #1, Darcy & Bingley:
Potential conflict #2, Darcy in love & Elizabeth not, she admits she hated Darcy's guts in Hertfordshire bc he hurt her vanity and bc of WIckham's lies:
Actual conflict #1, Darcy&Gardiners: This was the worst part of the novel.
Actual conflict #2
The Smut was worse than I wished. Although it was mostly fade to black, there were a few body parts descriptions that I found too explicit, and wished the novel would've done without them.
I'd say the story/love progression wasn't logical. I think the author tried to keep the story conflict-free. So when the story climaxes in Elizabeth realizing her love for Darcy, for him it's not a big moment
Descriptions were lacking. Most times it wasn't noticeable, but then the narrative would say that Darcy was handling a boat and moved it to shore, and presumably he'd pull his breeches up and take his boots off, but that's not mentioned. There's no break in the narrative to figure out the logical details, and that created a break in the reading experience because I had to stop and think "Wait, WHAT? and then reread a few times to understand how they got into such situation. There were a few moments like that.
Besides lack of action descriptions, Mrs Bennet & sisters didn't show any feelings about Elizabeth's engagement. Darcy courted her drama free, there was not a pip from her family. Only closer to the wedding date, Jane worries a bit about Lizzy's happiness (and it is tied to Jane's relationship problems) and Mrs Bennet shows up to embarrass Lizzy with description Darcy's riches.
I also had to LOL at Elizabeth describing herself as The Smallest Bean. "Why my momma hates me so, I'm shortest and skinniest of the girls".
Names are whack: Darcy's family isn't called correctly. Mrs Bennet also notes how fertile women in her family are, even though her sister is childless. The language isn't entirely modern, but it's not very regency, either.
However, there're a few other delightful details & scenes I haven't mentioned in this review, and I leave them as a surprise to you, future readers.
April 27, 2020
You can imagine that a version of Pride and Prejudice mostly satisfies me by the simple fact of thrilling me. I honestly feel that any author who writes Mr. Darcy, Miss Elizabeth and so many other amazing Jane Austen characters has to at least captivate us as dear Jane Austen.
"Unwilling" is a version that surprised me, I found the characters out of line, and that is the intention of the author, she creates a plot where the Bennet see themselves from a more presentable, i would say respectable perspective. We see changes in Mary, Kitty and Lydia, girls who are so inconvenient, but with good tutors are lovely, indeed always have been, but always lacked discipline, and Mr. Bennet craves that at least in front of an imminent death he will have to have been a good father, husband and sought the best for the happiness of his daughters And he did. I cried.
It's a simple version, I feel that the author floated on the characters in a very superficial way, but it brought so much satisfaction that it is exciting. I was moved in many passages, I cried in fact, and although one or two comments have said that the story in the last 20% becomes so understanding, but I can only disagree, because at this point I wished the story would not end.
Elizabeth Adams should undoubtedly write more about the Bennet's, and of course the Darcy's. It's lovely.
"Unwilling" is a version that surprised me, I found the characters out of line, and that is the intention of the author, she creates a plot where the Bennet see themselves from a more presentable, i would say respectable perspective. We see changes in Mary, Kitty and Lydia, girls who are so inconvenient, but with good tutors are lovely, indeed always have been, but always lacked discipline, and Mr. Bennet craves that at least in front of an imminent death he will have to have been a good father, husband and sought the best for the happiness of his daughters And he did. I cried.
It's a simple version, I feel that the author floated on the characters in a very superficial way, but it brought so much satisfaction that it is exciting. I was moved in many passages, I cried in fact, and although one or two comments have said that the story in the last 20% becomes so understanding, but I can only disagree, because at this point I wished the story would not end.
Elizabeth Adams should undoubtedly write more about the Bennet's, and of course the Darcy's. It's lovely.
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