Just as in the first one we immediately jump into problems. The author can’t even ease us into the new characters before the old feud between the Blackthornes and Creeds comes up. Luke thinks Clay stole the VX nerve gas mines, whatever that is. And they’re duking it out in the bar. Bayleigh comes, and says “why don’t you pick on someone your own size” which was ridiculous because her brother started it and Luke refused to fight. He said one provoking sentence and then Luke charged him.
He looked pointedly down at her, then looked her up and down. Slowly. Thoroughly.
Must the men be so crude and rude? Do they have any class or honor?
&she’s sticking up for Luke even though she saw he was the one that kept going after them. “He’s just a kid,” she said. “If you Blackthornes would leave him alone—”
They didn’t even start that. Tell Luke to leave them alone.
Bay sits there in the stall with the horse that’s having trouble giving birth and asks Summer why she didn’t call this person, or that person, instead of shutting up and helping the horse. Is that what they taught u at vet school, question the owner about why they called you until the animal dies?
“I can’t believe you couldn’t find one person who’d be willing to leave that wake to help out a poor dumb beast,” Bay said, unable to keep the edge from her voice.
Ok, this woman is supposed to be a vet, someone who cares about animals, yet u have her say that. Wth?
&it takes Summer to remind her to help the horse.
“What if Ruby can’t get up?” Summer asked fearfully.
“Then you figure out a way to get her up! And if you can’t you have only yourself to blame.”
Wth kind of thing is that to say?
I liked Owen and Bayleigh much better than Trace and Callie.
The little bit about how Ren and Blackjack first met was completely disgusting and made me think less of her. She cheated on Jesse not once, but 3 times that day. &she knew she was pregnant with his kid. What a slut!
Bay was so annoying, asking questions and persisting about why they didn’t keep searching through the night. There’s absolutely nothing more annoying than someone who can’t shut up. A talkative person who talks a mile a minute is not funny or charming. It’s annoying and unlikable.
It was really messed up when Owen accused his dad of having Jesse murdered when in the first book that had just been cleared up. He was the one that had accused his mother of the murder, so why is he now pointing his finger to his dad after his mom’s already been committed? And then he starts to wonder if his twin brother Clay could have stolen the nerve gas mines. What’s up with the causality of murder accusations and the lack of faith for family members?
It was so rushed how they had sex. There was no reason for it, they just did it. They had a smidgen of attraction and sensual tension between them, but it wasn’t enough for them to have sex. Authors don’t realize that love, or something close to it, should come before they have sex. It makes it more special if they wait a while, not rush to the finish line and then regret it afterwards. I thought Bayleigh was shaping up to be different, but right afterwards she regretted it and brought up the family feud, just like Callie did. Not cool. It doesn’t make them likable that they use someone for comfort, or in this case curiosity, and the immediately regret it and say it can’t happen. And Owen, in a very Trace-like fashion, just forces himself on her in an intimate way after she says it was just a lapse in judgment and was satisfying her curiosity.
“That’s all that happened.”
“The hell it was.”
He yanked her onto her feet and had his mouth open over hers in two seconds flat. He shoved her legs apart, unzipped her jeans and thrust two fingers deep inside her. She moaned and bucked and shook her head in denial, but it was too late.
Wow, go from mild to domineering in 1.5. It isn’t likable that the men, instead of talking it out, jump on them when they’re trying to make a point. They say it isn’t gonna work and the men just pounce on them crudely.
Bay was the typical woman faced with danger. She shook with nervousness; she watched in terror; she cries out in alarm; she’s anxious and fearful and scared. Though she jumps down from the cave and grabs the guy’s gun, she was a complete baby. That action did nothing to redeem her in my eyes. I want a heroine, not someone who’s gonna be a little baby on the sidelines.
Bay, like the typical dumb broad, rushes ahead when she hears a helicopter, and trips a wire. Leave it to a woman. And I don’t even care how that sounds. She’s done one dumb thing after another that was klutzy, but this takes the cake. I don’t like when the women do something as stupid and wrong as this.
As they’re running out of the cave to avoid the blast of whatever she set off, he notices another tripwire and tells her to jump, and even lifts her arm up to urge her to jump, but the toe catches on it and the bomb goes off. Way to go!
It was sweet when Owen made the decision to use the injector on Bay instead of himself, because he could only find one. He knew it meant he would die, but he let her have it anyway.
It was absolutely disgusting the way Blackjack was remembering his good sex with Eve. And he was looking at her because she didn’t have a bra on. I admit I was surprised when he turned down her offer for sex.
It was sweet to know that Owen funded a camp for kids with disabilities and named it Sam’s Place, after Bay’s brother Sam, who he accidently hurt. Bayleigh finally forgives him, which I expected her to be touched by it, but it figures that only with something big like this would she forgive him.
WTH?! Is all I have to say. I never guessed Jackson would cheat on his wife, especially with Dora, Billy’s mother. I was so disgusted I felt like throwing up. He got her pregnant, and Billy is the kid. Which means that Billy and Summer are half-siblings. Jackson cheated on his wife, which was bad enough, but it would have been better had it been with Ren. But no, it was with Dora, the women with the same poor status as Billy, who isn’t good enough for Summer because of it, yet I guess the same rules didn’t apply for Jackson. And this was after he “loved” Ren, which was absolutely, completely, 100% unforgivable. What disgusting kind of crap is this? Just when I think the author isn’t all bad she has to ruin it with this. The book would’ve been good if the other side characters weren’t in here. I don’t know why she decided to change perspectives in this one when she didn’t do it in the first book.
Blackjack is the devil, and his wife is no different. Blackjack goes and ties Billy up and has 2 men stretch him until he cracks a rib, and then has him knocked unconscious, all to get him away from Summer. It turns out that Summer isn’t his kid, which was what I was hoping for. This story is just spiraling out of control and it’s ruining Bayleigh’s and Owen’s story. The side characters shouldn’t have this much time in someone else’s story.
The stories are so messed up. Everybody treats murder like they’re talking about the weather. They don’t mind accusing someone else, or their own families, of cold-blooded murder. Nobody minds cheating on their spouse, committing adultery with someone they don’t know; they don’t mind having sex with someone they’ve known for only a short time, and they don’t mind marrying someone when they love someone else. Everybody’s getting pregnant with their husband’s children and Bob down the street in a one-night stand. I know this kinda stuff happens, but I don’t want to read about it. It’s disgusting. And the behavior is deplorable. I want characters with standards and morals. Not cheating men and lying, conniving women who sleep with married men and get pregnant after a one night stand because they’re too ignorant or uncaring to use some form of birth control, and don’t know that, yes, sex can result in pregnancy. I feel like they all skipped out on sex-ed in elementary school and didn’t know that you have to use protection.
These women sure do have the problem of saying they can’t be with the man and telling them they have to stop, yet letting him kiss them because they “need it.”
Owen tells her he loves her, and she says she doesn’t love him, so he’s hurt. She tries to kiss him, and he moves away, and she’s all: So. That was it. He hadn’t really loved her. He’d only been saying the words. She’d been right not to trust him with her heart.
You just told him you didn’t love him. What did you expect? Dumb broad. And the whole she’s-been-raped, used, lied to thing…not good.
I found it quite convenient that Bayleigh just happened to do a research paper for every predicament they got into. Nerve gas, so she knew the effects it would have on them. Medicinal plants, so she could nurse Owen back to health. Hydraulics, and the best 1 yet: airplane crashes, so she could advise Owen to soar when the plane’s engine broke down. Now, I’m not pursuing a degree in the veterinary field, so Idk for sure, but why would a veterinary student do research papers on medicinal plants, nerve gas, hydraulics and air planes? Very convenient.
It was so crappy how Jackson let Eve get her way just because she blackmailed him about Summer’s real father. He didn’t want Summer to know he wasn’t her father, so he stayed married to Eve. And when he told Ren about Billy, I expected her to feel hurt and betrayed, but all she said was “poor boy,” about Billy. Idiot. And she needed to know the truth about Jackson’s true nature, what he did to Billy, but he didn’t tell her. I wanted her to find out so she’d finally rethink of her unconditional love for him.
Typical for a romance book, the ending was predictably and nauseously perfect. They get married, and it turns out Bayleigh is pregnant . . . which is surprising because she was supposed to be barren. I didn’t see that one coming, making a barren woman pregnant. And guess what? She’s having twins! I’m so sick of that. I’m a twin myself, but I really get sick of the run of the mill conclusion that ends with a wedding and twins.
I must say that this book was 10 times better than the 1st. I love a story where they’re out in the wilderness, and this didn’t disappoint. Owen and Bayleigh out on the trail was enjoyable and there were a lot of sweet and funny moments between them. The book went downhill when the drama of the other characters came into play. It would have been better without that crap. Idk if I’ll continue with the series. There are certain patterns I’m noticing, like the women clinging to their family responsibilities and insisting they can’t be together because of the feud. And I have a feeling that everyone else’s story will drive me insane, because they probably won’t be anywhere near as good as this one.