I received a free copy of this book to read and review for Wicked Reads.
This is a hard book to write a review for. While I enjoyed the story line, there were definite problems I had with it as well.
The storyline was quite complex and the characters I found we pretty well rounded. I got quite wrapped up in finding out what was really going on as there is a lot of mystery behind the story and it kept the pages turning quickly.
However, that being said, I have to admit that I didn't like the way the color card was used. Skin color was capitalized like it was a statement instead of simply the color of their skin. Not to mention, that the main woman states blatantly that she "doesn't date White men". It took away greatly from the story in my opinion.
Then there is the fact that there were a few words that were used incorrectly, like the author used a thesaurus and didn't look up what those words actually meant.
Lastly, there were portions of the book that were told to the reader instead of showing us. Characters would be in the middle of a conversation and then instead of continuing the back and forth between their speech, we'd be told that one or the other simply said something.
Example:
"So you're going to try and find him, huh?" When he nodded, yes, Jae told him she was going with him and dropped her feet to the patio floor.
It really ruined the flow of the story in my opinion.
However, these are all issues that I have personally so I'm sure others will have no problem simply enjoying the plotline.