First, some notes that I thought to write down while reading this:
** I do not like the typos and grammatical errors (and I am not even a native english speaker!!), so the fact that there was quite a bit of them really bothered me! :(
** I really did not like the whole issue that Harry had with Draco about him leaving from New York....first of all if it was really an issue, he should have stayed upset longer than a day, second of all Harry should have understood because let's be honest here, if it was the other way around and Harry had to leave to save the wizarding world, he would have done the same thing.
** towards the end, when Harry was facing Voldemort: "It hadn't surprised him that Voldemort hadn't raised is wand yet. Riddle knew as well as he did that their wands were brothers and couldn't be successfully used against each other. Harry's battle strategy didn't include using his wand, and he realized that Voldemort would have adopted a similar approach when preparing for this confrontation, as well." ??? what the heck??? Harry's wand was snapped, so there is no issue there, I'm really upset about this. Harry's wandless magic should have been a surprise not an expected fact.
Otherwise, I simply loved this book! It was glorious. The story was different, the romance was quite nice, but I absolutely loved the family aspect <3. I hope that many more people read it and enjoy it as much as I did.