Elevator Music

by Amelita Rae

On his way to an interview, Saiki gets stuck in a elevator with a handsome stranger. Its pitch-black and he is terrified, so the stranger takes it upon himself to distract his beautiful, young companion. The older man uses rather unconventional methods, but he is very, VERY successful and soon Saiki forgets all about his fear. Short, but sweet, this erotic take on the classic 'stranger in an elevator' trope is immensely satisfying! (This short is also included in the
Yaoi Classic Bundle).

~6,000 words

Genres: M M Romance, Yaoi, Erotica, Romance, Contemporary, LGBT, Short Stories

29 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 28, 2016

About the author

Amelita Rae took a wrong turn on the internet one day. All the innocent young lass wanted to do was watch funny cat videos, but then she discovered Boy's Love and that was the end of any worthwhile contribution she might have otherwise made to the world.

She now spends most of her time writing filthy smut that she tries to frame with farfetched plots and deranged characters, but don't be fooled by her bullshit people, its all just smut.

Reviews

[Drusilla · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is something like a 5-minute read. But a pleasure it was nonetheless. Very amusing and super cute.

Strong arms tightened around him, pressing the full length of Saiki’s body against the other man’s powerfully muscled build. The boy wanted to disappear into that solid chest and never come out again. 🤩💞🤩

[nark · Rating 3 out of 5]

cute cute cute! i loved the random moments when these two just started laughing out of nowhere 🤣

[* A Reader Obsessed * · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 Stars

This right here should’ve been my primer intro to Amelita Rae.

Definitely a fantasy situation and sexy too.

Perfect when you want some well written hot smex. Enjoy.

[vee]

no angst n for what

[Meags · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 Stars

On the way to a job interview, a shy virgin gets stuck in an elevator with a gorgeous giant of a man. When the lights go out the naughty times begin.

This was total PWP, with no time for any character development, but damn it was HOT!! And I was left wanting more. Loved the ending, too; it left a smile on my face.

[Chelsea · Rating 3 out of 5]

Least favourite of Rae's so far. Still a hot sex scene, but that's all it was. No character development or characters at all really and very short.

[Funzee Shu · Rating 3 out of 5]

Another HOT-Smexy-PWP!!!

But I hate the ending. Because I really want to know what happen next behind the CEO office door!!!! *smirk*

[Pingmg · Rating 4 out of 5]

Who doesn’t like an elevator fantasy. Smutty AF.

[Penumbra · Rating 3 out of 5]

Elevator Music is a total PWP, short story. It stars Saiki, the typical blond, blue-eyed, twink virgin, and an older, dominant man we don’t learn the name of until the end of the story.


I’m on a roll with reading this author’s stories over the last couple of weeks. It helps that the stories are short and amusing, because I certainly don’t read it for the writing quality.

Again, this book, like the author’s other ones, has numerous grammar mistakes with odd pov shifts. It also has the descriptors like ‘blond boy, dark-haired man, young boy,’ etc, used again repeatedly. I hoped the author’s writing would’ve improved over time or at least she would’ve gotten a better editor, but the same mistakes are made. However, this book has fewer errors than some of the other ones.

This story is pure PWP. Virginal Saiki is stuck in an elevator on the way to an extremely important job interview and ends up having hot sex with a man who’s also in the elevator. It’s clear who the man is to the readers, but it doesn’t matter. Saiki doesn’t care who the man is, only that there’s a connection between them. He has no qualms about getting deflowered in an elevator.

Cute story with less grammatical errors, but still too many so they’re noticeable and continually pulled me out of the story. Even though it’s good PWP in a short, I can only give Elevator Music, 3 Stars.

[Skye Blue ☆*~ﾟლ(´ڡ`ლ)~*☆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

mmmmmm

Not much to say. Yummy porny goodness. I'm a sucker for the enormous dominant and the smaller submissive twink. Not always...but it's fun.

[Shin Mon Thway · Rating 3 out of 5]

The only flaw for this one is it's very VERY short. The elevator sex scene is fantastic and hot. I'd like to see this transform at least into a novella though.

3 stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️

[Kiarra · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was very ABRUPT. I loved it because the smut was WONDERFUL and the MC seemed like he would be very likable if the story was longer but I hate that it left me wanting more! Usually that's a good thing, but I swear I was feeling a little empty after this one because it felt like the ending just had a wall in front of it and I wanted to tear it down, maybe because it legit ended with the main characters behind a wall who knows LOL

Anyway still a good quick read to check out!

[Carmen · Rating 3 out of 5]

🫣 I keep coming back for more

Amelita delivers ridiculous and bonkers erotica with a lot of steam. If you enjoy suspending your disbelief and just leaning into over the top stories these are always fun. And who wouldn’t want to read a short about a guy on his way to an interview that gets trapped in an elevator with someone else and to distract theirselves they get frisky!? 😘👌

[Rain · Rating 5 out of 5]

*4.5* Is there such a thing as too much elevator sex? This story is lighthearted, humorous, and crazy hot.

“Don’t be afraid. I’ve got you,” a deep voice said in his ear.

Amelita has the ability to create some of the hottest scenes, with the sweetest couples, in just a few pages.

[Jamie (TheRebelliousReader) · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 stars. Super short but totally worth it if you're in the mood for just straight up smut with no plot. This will quench that thirst for you I guarantee it. It's less than 30 pages but it still managed to be really cute. I'm not sure how Rae managed to do that but she did.

[SJ · Rating 4 out of 5]

What a cover! Yaoi manga has the most arresting boy love drawings on the covers. I enjoyed this story because you think you know how it will end, but the author tweaks the ending into something different. It was charming.

[Nina · Rating 2 out of 5]

Nope. This didn’t really work for me. I knew it was pure smut going into it, but it just wasn’t it. It felt rushed and dirty rather than hot and spicy due to phrasing and language used and it just didn’t work for me. 🤷🏻‍♀️

[GetBooked101 · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars
A well written short erotica it had some good leading up events and was well story driven I did quite enjoy this one.
Pros
Had a good storyline and a build up to another story
Good character build
Cons
Needed more description within the erotica

[KittyKat · Rating 4 out of 5]

I wish it was longer

[Jacquie Stewart · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quick read

Fun and quick to read. I think this is also available in a box set. Although steamy, it's milder than a lot of this authors other works

[smol fishling ⋆｡⋆☂˚｡⋆｡˚☽˚｡⋆ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Elevator Music By Amelita Rae ⭐⭐⭐ 3 Stars
♡ Mitsuhiro + Saiki ♡
Entertaining read. - It was funny how they randomly start laughing, before and after.
(^^)ｂ

[Claudia · Rating 3 out of 5]

Too short. Still I want to know what happened next!

[antonia🫧 · Rating 4 out of 5]

cute.

[Jessica Swan · Rating 3 out of 5]

this was so short so idk what to write in a review lmfao

[monserrat · Rating 3 out of 5]

3/5 estrellas

[Sunne · Rating 2 out of 5]

Well, if you don't mind reading a story where the main characters are called names like "the younger man", "the older man", "the petite blonde", "the dark haired man", "the boy", "the business man" all the time...maybe you'll like it more than I did.
For me these names distracted so much I couldn't really concentrate on the rest, which was kind of more stupid than sexy in my opinion, but well, that doesn't mean that it isn't hot for someone else.
It was just really not my cup of tea (and yes, names like that are one of my pet-peeves).

[J Alm · Rating 5 out of 5]

A quick short tale

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This story seems more like a beginning than a full story. I was going to give it 4* but it is a great bit of writing but it stops just at it get started.

Saiki is a young man on his way to an important interview, which could give him the sort of career he has dreamed of. He dislikes elevators and elevator music. He gets even more nervous the longer he is in the elevator, as people come and go.

Part way up a big man who everyone seems to respect enters as the others leave. Saiki is strongly attracted to the man and is a little embarrassed at his reaction. All goes well until the elevator breaks down taking out the lights and music. Saiki is startled into grabbing the first thing he could which happen to be the only other person there.

Things move quickly and they both have an adventure during and after the lights go out.

Saiki makes his interview, late and gets a big surprise when he does.

It sort of stops there just when the story was getting started.

I hope Amelita Rae the author would revisit this story and extend it to include the interview and more from Saiki and Mitsuhiro.

[Dan · Rating 5 out of 5]

“Don’t be afraid. I’ve got you.”


Set in Tokyo, Japan.

Saiki is en route to a promising job interview—his final one, as it were, for a personal assistant position. Blonde and petite, with blue eyes.

The mysterious businessman—dark hair, golden eyes. “Enormous” guy, built like a professional wrestler. The kind of man that is exactly Saiki’s type.

The lights go off…and the elevator powers down. Stuck. Alone, together. Whatever will they do? 😳

Anatomy, verbiage, physiology—well-written action.

Mitsuhiro Tsujimoto, the CEO of Bish Industries.

And the laughter. So sweet. 🥰

A wild romp of a fun time.

While the ending is not shocking, it is indeed a happy one. It’s great to read something that is joyfully gay.

And the secretary’s reactions at the end are very cute. 🤭


There was nothing Saiki wanted more than to be overtaken by this man, to be possessed by him entirely.

[Jenny Wood · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just a cute little short story of some fun time in an elevator.
Not usually my kinda read, as I couldn't pronounce any name in the whole thing but I enjoyed the two characters and the way things worked out for them.
Cute

[LadyDarya · Rating 5 out of 5]

Just a light hearted read

This was a great book to pull me out of the doldrums of my thoughts today, which is exactly what I was hoping for when I got it. Humor, sex, and no angst......yeah.