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The Hero of Hornska #1
The Adventures of Sir Edric
Sir Edric’s Temple:
When Sir Edric Greenlock, the Hero of Hornska, is summoned to attend the King in the dead of night he fears imminent execution. The King, however, has something else in mind. Priceless royal seals have been stolen, and the King dispatches Sir Edric to retrieve them in a mission that could optimistically be described as suicidal.
Along the way he'll battle rockheaded golems, terrible sorcery and the Ursk: a race of brutal slavers who consider humans to be edible currency.
Accompanied by his pathologically loyal manservant Dog, the prudish elf Lysandra, and a man called Colin, he must travel to the Unholy Temple to retrieve the royal seals from a mysterious thief.
Sir Edric’s Treasure:
It isn't always nice to be wanted, as Sir Edric discovers when an enormous bounty on his head attracts bounty hunters to him like dung attracts flies. To escape near certain capture, he embarks on a daring quest to pay off his bounty by winning the inheritance of the dying, and obscenely wealthy, Archibald Thrift.
Accompanied by his trusty manservant Dog, Raella the librarian and Belinda, a ten foot nun, he must find the Eye of Wisdom to win Archie's wealth. But he'll need all his cunning to best his rivals for Archie's legacy, and the bounty hunters won't give up their prey easily...
When Sir Edric Greenlock, the Hero of Hornska, is summoned to attend the King in the dead of night he fears imminent execution. The King, however, has something else in mind. Priceless royal seals have been stolen, and the King dispatches Sir Edric to retrieve them in a mission that could optimistically be described as suicidal.
Along the way he'll battle rockheaded golems, terrible sorcery and the Ursk: a race of brutal slavers who consider humans to be edible currency.
Accompanied by his pathologically loyal manservant Dog, the prudish elf Lysandra, and a man called Colin, he must travel to the Unholy Temple to retrieve the royal seals from a mysterious thief.
Sir Edric’s Treasure:
It isn't always nice to be wanted, as Sir Edric discovers when an enormous bounty on his head attracts bounty hunters to him like dung attracts flies. To escape near certain capture, he embarks on a daring quest to pay off his bounty by winning the inheritance of the dying, and obscenely wealthy, Archibald Thrift.
Accompanied by his trusty manservant Dog, Raella the librarian and Belinda, a ten foot nun, he must find the Eye of Wisdom to win Archie's wealth. But he'll need all his cunning to best his rivals for Archie's legacy, and the bounty hunters won't give up their prey easily...
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First published January 1, 2013
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February 7, 2018
Thaddeus White asked me to read his novel "The Adventures of Sir Edric". It is about a knight who is far from chivalrous going on adventures similar to such a knight. I want to say it is a parody of epic adventures. It is certainly a comedy. It is also the third book by Mr.White that I have reviewed and I have thus gained a high opinion of his ability as an author. This book is no exception. I will examine Plot, Character and Polish and then assign a grade.
PLOT
First, this book is actually two stories. I think they were separate at one point but now they are together in this book. They are "The Adventures of Sir Edric Volume" and "Sir Edric's Treasure".
The first one is similar to a Redemption Quest but it is played like a stealth suicide mission. The second is more like a treasure hunt. I say it is a parody because of the motivations for these quests and dissonance between what Edric says and what he thinks.
The first is presented as a heroic adventure for king and country but Edric suspects that the king is sending him on a suicide mission in retribution for committing adultery with the queen. The beautiful sorcereress accompanying him, who would likely be a love interest (Defrosting Ice Queen style) in a straight version, is actually his jailer who maintains a low opinion of him throughout. Instead of taking action himself, he foists all the dangerous stuff on his braver and more competent manservant.
The second has the same qualities as the first but a significantly different set up, which makes it the same sort of enjoyable but a different sort of interesting because Edric is in a situation more suited to his true nature.
Much of the comedy in these stories comes from Edric talking like a chivalric and heroic knight while thinking thoughts that instead reflect a pragmatic and misogynistic mercenary. There's also Schadenfreude from the dangerous, embarrassing, or painful things that happen to him, usually as a result of his actions but also like a karmic kick. For readers like myself, there is a third source of comedy in the use of the tropes. Literary concepts like Boring Return Journey are lampshaded, examined, and/or mocked.
Both stories have an ending suitable for this story's tone. I like them. They close the conflict but they are not happily ever after sorts.
CHARACTERS
Sir Edric is a noble and used to be an active knight. Now he's more sedate, and by "sedate", I mean only rouses himself to go to a whore house. Aside from this laziness, he has about every other vice you could name: greed, snobbery, misogyny, irreverence, cowardice, lack of empathy, hypocrisy etc. There's one scene where he's pretending to be a monk as a disguise and someone asks him for religious advice, and he does so in exchange for a fee. A Nominal Hero if there ever was one, but it suits him in this world of grey and grey morality. Indeed, the only reason he's not a Villain Protagonist is because he doesn't actively do anything evil, and he usually has something, or in the case of Lysandra, someone, to keep him focused on heroic acts.
It also makes him a comedic duo with his manservant, Dog. He is the wise guy doing something immoral, pragmatic or whatever, and Dog is the straight man who reacts to it.
While it is easy to see him as someone who relies on Dog to do all his fighting for him, he's not incompetent. He demonstrates skill with a crossbow, a sword and in quick tactical thinking. It's just that he's pragmatic enough to stay away from immediate danger and talk or trick his way out of a fight in the first place.
Dog is described in book blurbs as "pathologically loyal", which is indeed true. The things he does out of feudal duty truly stretch the bounds of credible belief. That's part of the humor in his character because Sir Edric definitely doesn't deserve it. For instance, "Dog" is not his real name but something Sir Edric decided on because he didn't like Dog's real name. Nor does he get any credit or appreciation. Without Dog, Erick would never accomplish or survive half of the stuff he does.
He is an example of Good Is Not Soft as he is a courteous fellow that still kills enemies with little hesitation.
His past is mysterious because he has skills that do not coincide with some him being some random commoner.
Personally, I see Edric as a supporting protagonist and Dog as the hero of this story. He's much more traditionally heroic with his loyalty, bravery, and feats of daring do, etc. except he is Edric's sidekick. Yes, it is a strange blend of roles which one of the things I like about this book.
Lysander is the third character to span both stories. She is an elf sorcercess assigned to assist Sir Edirc on his first adventure, and make sure he doesn't abandon his quest. She is a Celibate Heroine who wears a Dangerously Short Skirt. She appears to follow a standard Defrosting Ice Queen arc but still thinks him a cowardly sex-obsessed jerk in the end. Her humor comes in the form of her being a sheltered academic unused to adventuring, and the banter she has with Edric over his unwillingness to aspire to noble action.
POLISH
Both stories look good spelling and grammar wise. However, there is one thing in the second book that is odd.
There is this scene at the start of a chapter that comes out of nowhere. It is not connected to the previous chapter and does not connect to the following scenes. It is an argument that does not have any basis in previous conversations; "how dare you! Have you no respect?" I don't see what that refers to. It can't possibly refer to tripping over an invisible object and the response would make no sense in context. It involves a permanent shift so I can't dismiss it as a Big Lipped Alligator Moment. There is even a text-breaker area of blank space between it and the next scene that suggests it is isolated.
Trickster Eric Novels gives "The Adventures of Sir Edric" an A+ for Temple of Doom, a B+ for "Treasure" and an A+ over all.
This has been a free review request. The author requested an honest review so I provided one.
PLOT
First, this book is actually two stories. I think they were separate at one point but now they are together in this book. They are "The Adventures of Sir Edric Volume" and "Sir Edric's Treasure".
The first one is similar to a Redemption Quest but it is played like a stealth suicide mission. The second is more like a treasure hunt. I say it is a parody because of the motivations for these quests and dissonance between what Edric says and what he thinks.
The first is presented as a heroic adventure for king and country but Edric suspects that the king is sending him on a suicide mission in retribution for committing adultery with the queen. The beautiful sorcereress accompanying him, who would likely be a love interest (Defrosting Ice Queen style) in a straight version, is actually his jailer who maintains a low opinion of him throughout. Instead of taking action himself, he foists all the dangerous stuff on his braver and more competent manservant.
The second has the same qualities as the first but a significantly different set up, which makes it the same sort of enjoyable but a different sort of interesting because Edric is in a situation more suited to his true nature.
Much of the comedy in these stories comes from Edric talking like a chivalric and heroic knight while thinking thoughts that instead reflect a pragmatic and misogynistic mercenary. There's also Schadenfreude from the dangerous, embarrassing, or painful things that happen to him, usually as a result of his actions but also like a karmic kick. For readers like myself, there is a third source of comedy in the use of the tropes. Literary concepts like Boring Return Journey are lampshaded, examined, and/or mocked.
Both stories have an ending suitable for this story's tone. I like them. They close the conflict but they are not happily ever after sorts.
CHARACTERS
Sir Edric is a noble and used to be an active knight. Now he's more sedate, and by "sedate", I mean only rouses himself to go to a whore house. Aside from this laziness, he has about every other vice you could name: greed, snobbery, misogyny, irreverence, cowardice, lack of empathy, hypocrisy etc. There's one scene where he's pretending to be a monk as a disguise and someone asks him for religious advice, and he does so in exchange for a fee. A Nominal Hero if there ever was one, but it suits him in this world of grey and grey morality. Indeed, the only reason he's not a Villain Protagonist is because he doesn't actively do anything evil, and he usually has something, or in the case of Lysandra, someone, to keep him focused on heroic acts.
It also makes him a comedic duo with his manservant, Dog. He is the wise guy doing something immoral, pragmatic or whatever, and Dog is the straight man who reacts to it.
While it is easy to see him as someone who relies on Dog to do all his fighting for him, he's not incompetent. He demonstrates skill with a crossbow, a sword and in quick tactical thinking. It's just that he's pragmatic enough to stay away from immediate danger and talk or trick his way out of a fight in the first place.
Dog is described in book blurbs as "pathologically loyal", which is indeed true. The things he does out of feudal duty truly stretch the bounds of credible belief. That's part of the humor in his character because Sir Edric definitely doesn't deserve it. For instance, "Dog" is not his real name but something Sir Edric decided on because he didn't like Dog's real name. Nor does he get any credit or appreciation. Without Dog, Erick would never accomplish or survive half of the stuff he does.
He is an example of Good Is Not Soft as he is a courteous fellow that still kills enemies with little hesitation.
His past is mysterious because he has skills that do not coincide with some him being some random commoner.
Personally, I see Edric as a supporting protagonist and Dog as the hero of this story. He's much more traditionally heroic with his loyalty, bravery, and feats of daring do, etc. except he is Edric's sidekick. Yes, it is a strange blend of roles which one of the things I like about this book.
Lysander is the third character to span both stories. She is an elf sorcercess assigned to assist Sir Edirc on his first adventure, and make sure he doesn't abandon his quest. She is a Celibate Heroine who wears a Dangerously Short Skirt. She appears to follow a standard Defrosting Ice Queen arc but still thinks him a cowardly sex-obsessed jerk in the end. Her humor comes in the form of her being a sheltered academic unused to adventuring, and the banter she has with Edric over his unwillingness to aspire to noble action.
POLISH
Both stories look good spelling and grammar wise. However, there is one thing in the second book that is odd.
There is this scene at the start of a chapter that comes out of nowhere. It is not connected to the previous chapter and does not connect to the following scenes. It is an argument that does not have any basis in previous conversations; "how dare you! Have you no respect?" I don't see what that refers to. It can't possibly refer to tripping over an invisible object and the response would make no sense in context. It involves a permanent shift so I can't dismiss it as a Big Lipped Alligator Moment. There is even a text-breaker area of blank space between it and the next scene that suggests it is isolated.
Trickster Eric Novels gives "The Adventures of Sir Edric" an A+ for Temple of Doom, a B+ for "Treasure" and an A+ over all.
This has been a free review request. The author requested an honest review so I provided one.
April 1, 2016
I received a free copy of this book courtesy of the author in exchange for an honest review.
I’m not going to go into detail or write separately about the two stories included in the book as I wouldn’t want to give away any spoilers, but suffice to say that in both cases are intrepid, courageous and gentlemanly hero or in this case Sir Edric Greenlock the Hero of Hornska and his trusty, faithful man servant Dog go on adventures meeting an assortment of weird and wonderful characters along the way and end up getting themselves involved in all sorts of twists and turns, high jinks and escapades.
The main character Sir Edric is a Knight though he’s not a valiant, gallant and chivalrous he’s more of a cowardly and adulterous Knight, he shares his adventures and misdemeanours with his loyal manservant Dog and various other characters, Lysandra the Elven sorcess and Colin the Adventurer in his first tale Sir Edric’s Temple and in Sir Edric’s treasure his second tale, Raella an Elven librarian and Belinda a 10 foot Nun.
Yes, for those reading this I did just write a 10 foot Nun!
My favourite character was Dog, Edric’s trusty manservant, amongst other things he’s well educated, proficient in both combat and weaponry and is always on hand to offer suggestions and ideas on how to ably assist Sir Edric, helping him out when needed and always with a droll response, acting as the perfect foil for Sir Edric and his comments.
The cast of characters from the main to the small part are all well thought out and the world building is of a high standard with a decent amount of lore and history added to the mix. I found both to be of a higher level than some serious fantasy books I’ve read and just because this is comedic it isn’t dumb, it’s fantasy done well only instead of being serious it’s fun and you can really tell the author has put alot of effort into creating his characters and their world.
There’s no swearing or use of the F-word instead the author uses ye olde style words like strumpet, rumpy pumpy, rapscallion and plums, it’s a nice touch and adds to the authenticity of the stories being told. After finishing the book I can say that the language fits the characters, especially Sir Edric, if we take sex as an example, another book may describe it as ‘fucking’ and to me that wouldn’t have felt right for this book whilst Sir Edric would describe it as either ‘a tumble’ or ‘rumpy pumpy’ and they perfectly fit his character and the tone of the book.
Our titular hero has a penchant for silly, bawdy, raunchy, ribald, racist (he refers to Elves as Pointy Ears), cynical and occasionally sexist comments and thoughts.
A couple of random examples of the humour, one from each of the two stories are:
-“You can’t fight if you’re drunk,” she nagged. You’ve clearly never been on a battlefield. Or in a pub, for that matter. “I am not drunk,” he protested. “What a horrid slur. I’m merely sampling a little wine to stiffen the sinews and embolden the spirit.”
And:
-“Good morning, Edric. How’s your wife?” Orff greeted him. “Happily distant.” Sir Edric finished off his first cup of wine and poured out a second. “But you did not come all this way just to discuss the wicked witch of wedlock.”
In the interest of fairness and this being an honest review I’ll admit that the humour won’t be to everyone’s taste, it’s the nature of the beast, not everyone reads the same genre of book or likes the same style of music and not everyone laughs at the same things but for me more often than not the jokes and comments hit the spot and I found myself smiling and chuckling. If the above examples made you smile, titter, giggle, smirk, guffaw, chuckle, laugh or cough to hide any of the mentioned then this is the book for you!
Sir Edric is a character who is well worth your time and the book itself is well written in an easy to read style, fun filled and made me smile from the first page through to the last. I thoroughly enjoyed it.I’d say that this book is ideal for both fantasy fans and booklovers in general looking who are looking for something different, fans of the humour/comedy book genre and anyone with a passing interest in reading who is in need of something to cheer them up and make them smile as believe me, this book will make you smile!:)
Fun fantasy that is highly recommended!
And as Sir Edric would say Huzzah!
I’m not going to go into detail or write separately about the two stories included in the book as I wouldn’t want to give away any spoilers, but suffice to say that in both cases are intrepid, courageous and gentlemanly hero or in this case Sir Edric Greenlock the Hero of Hornska and his trusty, faithful man servant Dog go on adventures meeting an assortment of weird and wonderful characters along the way and end up getting themselves involved in all sorts of twists and turns, high jinks and escapades.
The main character Sir Edric is a Knight though he’s not a valiant, gallant and chivalrous he’s more of a cowardly and adulterous Knight, he shares his adventures and misdemeanours with his loyal manservant Dog and various other characters, Lysandra the Elven sorcess and Colin the Adventurer in his first tale Sir Edric’s Temple and in Sir Edric’s treasure his second tale, Raella an Elven librarian and Belinda a 10 foot Nun.
Yes, for those reading this I did just write a 10 foot Nun!
My favourite character was Dog, Edric’s trusty manservant, amongst other things he’s well educated, proficient in both combat and weaponry and is always on hand to offer suggestions and ideas on how to ably assist Sir Edric, helping him out when needed and always with a droll response, acting as the perfect foil for Sir Edric and his comments.
The cast of characters from the main to the small part are all well thought out and the world building is of a high standard with a decent amount of lore and history added to the mix. I found both to be of a higher level than some serious fantasy books I’ve read and just because this is comedic it isn’t dumb, it’s fantasy done well only instead of being serious it’s fun and you can really tell the author has put alot of effort into creating his characters and their world.
There’s no swearing or use of the F-word instead the author uses ye olde style words like strumpet, rumpy pumpy, rapscallion and plums, it’s a nice touch and adds to the authenticity of the stories being told. After finishing the book I can say that the language fits the characters, especially Sir Edric, if we take sex as an example, another book may describe it as ‘fucking’ and to me that wouldn’t have felt right for this book whilst Sir Edric would describe it as either ‘a tumble’ or ‘rumpy pumpy’ and they perfectly fit his character and the tone of the book.
Our titular hero has a penchant for silly, bawdy, raunchy, ribald, racist (he refers to Elves as Pointy Ears), cynical and occasionally sexist comments and thoughts.
A couple of random examples of the humour, one from each of the two stories are:
-“You can’t fight if you’re drunk,” she nagged. You’ve clearly never been on a battlefield. Or in a pub, for that matter. “I am not drunk,” he protested. “What a horrid slur. I’m merely sampling a little wine to stiffen the sinews and embolden the spirit.”
And:
-“Good morning, Edric. How’s your wife?” Orff greeted him. “Happily distant.” Sir Edric finished off his first cup of wine and poured out a second. “But you did not come all this way just to discuss the wicked witch of wedlock.”
In the interest of fairness and this being an honest review I’ll admit that the humour won’t be to everyone’s taste, it’s the nature of the beast, not everyone reads the same genre of book or likes the same style of music and not everyone laughs at the same things but for me more often than not the jokes and comments hit the spot and I found myself smiling and chuckling. If the above examples made you smile, titter, giggle, smirk, guffaw, chuckle, laugh or cough to hide any of the mentioned then this is the book for you!
Sir Edric is a character who is well worth your time and the book itself is well written in an easy to read style, fun filled and made me smile from the first page through to the last. I thoroughly enjoyed it.I’d say that this book is ideal for both fantasy fans and booklovers in general looking who are looking for something different, fans of the humour/comedy book genre and anyone with a passing interest in reading who is in need of something to cheer them up and make them smile as believe me, this book will make you smile!:)
Fun fantasy that is highly recommended!
And as Sir Edric would say Huzzah!
April 13, 2016
The Adventures of Sir Edric is a comedy fantasy that hits the ground running and does not really let up until the final page. As with many such novels it is not just a question of being funny but it has to have a strong story to carry it.
Sir Edric manages with some aplomb to balance this, although it is unfair to call it a novel, as it is two stories, albeit with strong connections to one another.
It is refreshing to have a lead character who is not a young chosen one, rather a middle aged veteran, who might just be on the wrong side of that line. Allegedly a hero of some note, Sir Edric lives off his reputation and the wits of his servant, Dog. He is a philanderer, greedy and borderline alcoholic and it would have been easy for White to set things up, with him being an almost stereotypical coward, living of the skills of others to make his reputation. But surprisingly there is more to Sir Edric than that. He has a surprising depth, and at least a level of skill to back up his reputation.
The first of the two tales sees the hero sent off on what can only be described as a near death mission by his king. The reason for this is a bit muddled, but Sir Edric has a slight suspicion that it might be something to do with the fact that the queen was having an affair with him.
What follows is a riotous adventure across a fantasy landscape with Edric determined to make a bolt for it at the first opportunity, while complication after complication ensues, and a pesky but attractive female elf keeps him on the right path.
If there is a problem with this first story it is as though White has decided to throw absolutely everything at it, in an attempt to make it as funny as possible. This actually works against it as there is the feeling that the reader is being overwhelmed with a tsunami of jokes, one-liners, descriptions and other attempts to raise a smile. This does not mean that it is not funny, just that it might be too funny, and the story itself suffers (slightly) from the deluge of humour that overwhelms the tale.
The story itself is a good one, and has a lot to recommend it. The relationship between Dog and Edric is probably the highlight, but some of the little touches – Edric not being a total idiot living off Dog’s skills is definitely a plus, and some of the references to Edric’s past work well, and his marriage is a classic, with references made to his off page wife being a lot more effective than had she been physically present in the story.
There is also the fact that I have discovered that I find any line that uses birds and feathers to be very funny!
The second story is a lot more restrained and works well for it. White has admitted that this is his first real attempt at trying ‘hardcore’ humour and it could well be he is really finding his feet in the second tale.
Once again Edric and Dog are off on a quest. This time an elderly rival, who has amassed a fortune over his years of adventuring and collecting, desires one last artefact – the one he could never obtain. He offers a competition for all his rivals to hunt it down and return it. The winner gets his fortune.
Once again Edric finds his journey complicated by challenges along the way, including distractions such as a librarian elf, bounty hunters, a minotaur and a cyclops nun (yes really). This is the better story of the two, and the humour is more effectively contained and directed.
The character of Sir Edric is a good one, possibly only bettered by Dog, and further adventures would certainly not go amiss.
Sir Edric manages with some aplomb to balance this, although it is unfair to call it a novel, as it is two stories, albeit with strong connections to one another.
It is refreshing to have a lead character who is not a young chosen one, rather a middle aged veteran, who might just be on the wrong side of that line. Allegedly a hero of some note, Sir Edric lives off his reputation and the wits of his servant, Dog. He is a philanderer, greedy and borderline alcoholic and it would have been easy for White to set things up, with him being an almost stereotypical coward, living of the skills of others to make his reputation. But surprisingly there is more to Sir Edric than that. He has a surprising depth, and at least a level of skill to back up his reputation.
The first of the two tales sees the hero sent off on what can only be described as a near death mission by his king. The reason for this is a bit muddled, but Sir Edric has a slight suspicion that it might be something to do with the fact that the queen was having an affair with him.
What follows is a riotous adventure across a fantasy landscape with Edric determined to make a bolt for it at the first opportunity, while complication after complication ensues, and a pesky but attractive female elf keeps him on the right path.
If there is a problem with this first story it is as though White has decided to throw absolutely everything at it, in an attempt to make it as funny as possible. This actually works against it as there is the feeling that the reader is being overwhelmed with a tsunami of jokes, one-liners, descriptions and other attempts to raise a smile. This does not mean that it is not funny, just that it might be too funny, and the story itself suffers (slightly) from the deluge of humour that overwhelms the tale.
The story itself is a good one, and has a lot to recommend it. The relationship between Dog and Edric is probably the highlight, but some of the little touches – Edric not being a total idiot living off Dog’s skills is definitely a plus, and some of the references to Edric’s past work well, and his marriage is a classic, with references made to his off page wife being a lot more effective than had she been physically present in the story.
There is also the fact that I have discovered that I find any line that uses birds and feathers to be very funny!
The second story is a lot more restrained and works well for it. White has admitted that this is his first real attempt at trying ‘hardcore’ humour and it could well be he is really finding his feet in the second tale.
Once again Edric and Dog are off on a quest. This time an elderly rival, who has amassed a fortune over his years of adventuring and collecting, desires one last artefact – the one he could never obtain. He offers a competition for all his rivals to hunt it down and return it. The winner gets his fortune.
Once again Edric finds his journey complicated by challenges along the way, including distractions such as a librarian elf, bounty hunters, a minotaur and a cyclops nun (yes really). This is the better story of the two, and the humour is more effectively contained and directed.
The character of Sir Edric is a good one, possibly only bettered by Dog, and further adventures would certainly not go amiss.
April 3, 2016
It was important to give a pre-battle speech. It made the commander look like he knew what he was doing and made the chaps about to die feel like it might be worth it.
...After being kicked in the cullions...
“Sir, are you injured?” Dog asked.
“No, I’m incubating a muskrat in my trousers and don’t want to wake it up,” Sir Edric replied. “Of course I bloody am!”
Heroism: a brand of stupidity so extreme it’s frequently fatal to the man in question.
I’m so excited to review The Adventures of Sir Edric! The Adventures of Sir Edric contains two stories. First is Sir Edric’s Temple and second is Sir Edric’s Treasure. Sir Edric’s Temple was originally self-published but has since been picked up by a publisher and combined with Treasure in this first volume.
To summarize the stories, they follow a knight, Sir Edric, and his ever present manservant, Dog, as they embark on dangerous quests. It’s a fantasy comedy, heavy on the comedy.
First and foremost, people easily offended should steer clear of this book. I’d hate to see Sir Edric rated poorly because someone took offense to the character. Sir Edric is a womanizer, a drunk, and a generally selfish person who stumbles into righteous acts quite by mistake. He likes to look at women, a lot. 90% of the women in the story are ogled and pursued by Edric. Heroism happens only when he needs to save himself or the wine. He is far from perfect and he does not strive to be perfect. However, despite all these flaws, you can’t help but root for him. Dog as well. The two play off each other perfectly. Dog has morals, but is unwavering in his service to Edric, and often does most of the fighting and saving. It makes his character as interesting and important as Edric himself. There's obviously more to these characters that are hinted about throughout the two stories, and I can't wait to uncover all their secrets.
For me, the world is developed perfectly. We’re given what we need to know for the story without some history lesson being dumped on us. It feels full and complete. There’s some nifty creatures in the book as well.
The humor is over the top sometimes with the perfect amount of cheese, which I think is great. At one point, the characters are fighting a basilisk and Sir Edric’s servant—Dog—yells: “Death to thee, foul beast!” as he attacks. I love lines like that, and this book is chalked full them. The humor is dry and mainly comes from Edric and his internal thoughts and interactions with others. How he approaches danger is especially humorous. And heaven forbid he runs out of wine!
As with everything White writes, I enjoyed the voice he gave the book. The writing is concise, and the stories read incredibly fast. Not to mention the pacing moves. There’s no dilly-dallying around. I love that, especially since my mind can easily wander if there’s too much exposition. Even with the lack of lengthy descriptions, I was able to picture every scene perfectly, which says a lot of White’s ability to convey images. For those who follow my reviews, you’ll remember I lack a bit of imagination, but not in this book!
So overall, if you’re looking for humor, an unwholesome character, and a great adventure, I highly recommend this book. By the way, if you do end up enjoying this book, I suggest following Sir Edric on Twitter (@HeroOfHornska). You'll get some definite laughs. And if you want to get a feel for the character and his humor before you pick up the book, give him a follow.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
...After being kicked in the cullions...
“Sir, are you injured?” Dog asked.
“No, I’m incubating a muskrat in my trousers and don’t want to wake it up,” Sir Edric replied. “Of course I bloody am!”
Heroism: a brand of stupidity so extreme it’s frequently fatal to the man in question.
I’m so excited to review The Adventures of Sir Edric! The Adventures of Sir Edric contains two stories. First is Sir Edric’s Temple and second is Sir Edric’s Treasure. Sir Edric’s Temple was originally self-published but has since been picked up by a publisher and combined with Treasure in this first volume.
To summarize the stories, they follow a knight, Sir Edric, and his ever present manservant, Dog, as they embark on dangerous quests. It’s a fantasy comedy, heavy on the comedy.
First and foremost, people easily offended should steer clear of this book. I’d hate to see Sir Edric rated poorly because someone took offense to the character. Sir Edric is a womanizer, a drunk, and a generally selfish person who stumbles into righteous acts quite by mistake. He likes to look at women, a lot. 90% of the women in the story are ogled and pursued by Edric. Heroism happens only when he needs to save himself or the wine. He is far from perfect and he does not strive to be perfect. However, despite all these flaws, you can’t help but root for him. Dog as well. The two play off each other perfectly. Dog has morals, but is unwavering in his service to Edric, and often does most of the fighting and saving. It makes his character as interesting and important as Edric himself. There's obviously more to these characters that are hinted about throughout the two stories, and I can't wait to uncover all their secrets.
For me, the world is developed perfectly. We’re given what we need to know for the story without some history lesson being dumped on us. It feels full and complete. There’s some nifty creatures in the book as well.
The humor is over the top sometimes with the perfect amount of cheese, which I think is great. At one point, the characters are fighting a basilisk and Sir Edric’s servant—Dog—yells: “Death to thee, foul beast!” as he attacks. I love lines like that, and this book is chalked full them. The humor is dry and mainly comes from Edric and his internal thoughts and interactions with others. How he approaches danger is especially humorous. And heaven forbid he runs out of wine!
As with everything White writes, I enjoyed the voice he gave the book. The writing is concise, and the stories read incredibly fast. Not to mention the pacing moves. There’s no dilly-dallying around. I love that, especially since my mind can easily wander if there’s too much exposition. Even with the lack of lengthy descriptions, I was able to picture every scene perfectly, which says a lot of White’s ability to convey images. For those who follow my reviews, you’ll remember I lack a bit of imagination, but not in this book!
So overall, if you’re looking for humor, an unwholesome character, and a great adventure, I highly recommend this book. By the way, if you do end up enjoying this book, I suggest following Sir Edric on Twitter (@HeroOfHornska). You'll get some definite laughs. And if you want to get a feel for the character and his humor before you pick up the book, give him a follow.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review.
April 1, 2016
I received this book free in exchange for an honest review.
My Review of Sir Edric's Temple: This was a far shorter story for White, but that works for the book. It was about what I’ve come to expect from him in over-all enjoyableness, although it was funny–as it was meant to be a comedy, he achieved it, though only for those who like somewhat morbid humor and frequently bawdy quips. As I do, it worked for me. His meandering style remains but I’ve come to enjoy it, and his penchant for funny and unusual words also continues. Rumpy-pumpy, really?
My Review of Sir Edric's Treasure: I was assured by the author that it was “funnier than a mongoose in a fez,” and I told him that if it wasn’t, that would be reflected in my review…
Well, he was right. Our author’s humor in this fantasy-comedy is totally inescapable, but I don’t mind, because I enjoyed it. I found myself laughing at several points, including many of the aside-snarks by our unlikeably likeable anti-hero, Sir Edric, as he goes on yet another adventure, somehow manages to get women into bed along the way, and gets out of every danger by happenstance, dumb luck, or his trusty manservant Dog. (Who is awesome.)
Something I’ve always liked about White’s books are his word choices. He comes up with some gems, like “rapscallions” or my new personal favorite “flittermice” (bats), but he keeps the rest of his prose on a straightforward level so that these word choices are just fun little dots along the way rather than a sign of an author who is trying way too hard to sound elevated.
While I’ve often commented on his previous stories as being “meandering,” this one feels much more like a straight line, but it’s a quest and that makes sense. There were a few “why is that scene here” scenes, such as the one with Jagra, but since this is not the first Edric tale, I presume these are seeds for future stories. (Pun not intended, but I’m leaving it there.)(Addendum: Now I actually see that this book is titled “Volume One,” so it looks like I was right!)
I’ve been in a reading slump for a while now, maybe even as much as a few months, but this story managed to hold me in place enough to read it in one night and greatly enjoy it. As such, and since I don’t really have any considerable complaints, it’s a 5 Fireball.
Oh, and the chicken at the very end? Priceless.
My Review of Sir Edric's Temple: This was a far shorter story for White, but that works for the book. It was about what I’ve come to expect from him in over-all enjoyableness, although it was funny–as it was meant to be a comedy, he achieved it, though only for those who like somewhat morbid humor and frequently bawdy quips. As I do, it worked for me. His meandering style remains but I’ve come to enjoy it, and his penchant for funny and unusual words also continues. Rumpy-pumpy, really?
My Review of Sir Edric's Treasure: I was assured by the author that it was “funnier than a mongoose in a fez,” and I told him that if it wasn’t, that would be reflected in my review…
Well, he was right. Our author’s humor in this fantasy-comedy is totally inescapable, but I don’t mind, because I enjoyed it. I found myself laughing at several points, including many of the aside-snarks by our unlikeably likeable anti-hero, Sir Edric, as he goes on yet another adventure, somehow manages to get women into bed along the way, and gets out of every danger by happenstance, dumb luck, or his trusty manservant Dog. (Who is awesome.)
Something I’ve always liked about White’s books are his word choices. He comes up with some gems, like “rapscallions” or my new personal favorite “flittermice” (bats), but he keeps the rest of his prose on a straightforward level so that these word choices are just fun little dots along the way rather than a sign of an author who is trying way too hard to sound elevated.
While I’ve often commented on his previous stories as being “meandering,” this one feels much more like a straight line, but it’s a quest and that makes sense. There were a few “why is that scene here” scenes, such as the one with Jagra, but since this is not the first Edric tale, I presume these are seeds for future stories. (Pun not intended, but I’m leaving it there.)(Addendum: Now I actually see that this book is titled “Volume One,” so it looks like I was right!)
I’ve been in a reading slump for a while now, maybe even as much as a few months, but this story managed to hold me in place enough to read it in one night and greatly enjoy it. As such, and since I don’t really have any considerable complaints, it’s a 5 Fireball.
Oh, and the chicken at the very end? Priceless.
April 6, 2016
FLASHMAN. Blackadder. The Stainless Steel Rat. Soltan Gris. Nary a hero worth the name among them. Cowards and scoundrels all.
There's something appealing about rooting for a hero you would want quickly locked away in real life – and Sir Edric is as worthy of a good set of irons as any you might meet.
When first we encounter him, he is in flagrante dilicto with his King's wife – and from there on, we follow the adventures of a man whose two loves are gold and sex, or any opportunity to pursue either.
The book is neatly divided into two distinct adventures – though really the end goal hardly matters in either, as really each is only a maguffin to lead Sir Edric along as he tries to bed a variety of women along his path, from sorcerous elves to lusty librarians, naughty soldiers or pretty much any woman but Sir Edric's dreaded wife.
The hazards along the way are seldom too threatening, with Sir Edric quickly making his escape from the litany of dangers with a bound and away, most of the work being carried out by his faithful dogsbody... Dog, his henchman, who frankly is far more accomplished than his superior.
There are some genius one-liners in here – and chortlesome moments such as Edric's pratfall over the dead body of an invisible assassin.
I found the dangers he faced along the way too slight, however – almost as if some of them were rustled up with a Dungeons and Dragons random encounter table. At one point, he bumps into a local hunter and his wife and daughter seemingly for no reason other than to provide him some necessary bandages and badinage about backwoods life.
The women of the book fare poorly, too, in large part being treated as little more than objects of Edric's lust – though the odd one resists his dubious charms.
For me, the book ends up being too much of a series of events rather than a coherent plot – things happen because the story needs things to happen rather than as a consequence of earlier events.
There remains promise in here, but a tighter plot and a better treatment of female characters would add shine to the zing that helps the pages zip by.
There's something appealing about rooting for a hero you would want quickly locked away in real life – and Sir Edric is as worthy of a good set of irons as any you might meet.
When first we encounter him, he is in flagrante dilicto with his King's wife – and from there on, we follow the adventures of a man whose two loves are gold and sex, or any opportunity to pursue either.
The book is neatly divided into two distinct adventures – though really the end goal hardly matters in either, as really each is only a maguffin to lead Sir Edric along as he tries to bed a variety of women along his path, from sorcerous elves to lusty librarians, naughty soldiers or pretty much any woman but Sir Edric's dreaded wife.
The hazards along the way are seldom too threatening, with Sir Edric quickly making his escape from the litany of dangers with a bound and away, most of the work being carried out by his faithful dogsbody... Dog, his henchman, who frankly is far more accomplished than his superior.
There are some genius one-liners in here – and chortlesome moments such as Edric's pratfall over the dead body of an invisible assassin.
I found the dangers he faced along the way too slight, however – almost as if some of them were rustled up with a Dungeons and Dragons random encounter table. At one point, he bumps into a local hunter and his wife and daughter seemingly for no reason other than to provide him some necessary bandages and badinage about backwoods life.
The women of the book fare poorly, too, in large part being treated as little more than objects of Edric's lust – though the odd one resists his dubious charms.
For me, the book ends up being too much of a series of events rather than a coherent plot – things happen because the story needs things to happen rather than as a consequence of earlier events.
There remains promise in here, but a tighter plot and a better treatment of female characters would add shine to the zing that helps the pages zip by.
May 29, 2016
Sir Edric is a guy who’s either hated or loved by those around him. See typically, a person would behave a certain way because they want to influence the feelings of another. Or to put it another way, when they want someone to like or dislike them, they act accordingly. I think that’s called empathy. Sir Edric doesn’t care about any to any of that. If empathy and scruples were sand, Sir Edric would have enough of each combined to have around two grains of sand.
What Sir Edric cares about is Sir Edric. It was mentioned earlier that people love him or hate him. Well, that really depends how they may benefit or loose when he’s trying to accomplish his own goals. And when I say “goals”, I mean drinking and whoring.
If that all sounds vulgar yet funny, it is. And that’s exactly what The Adventures of Sir Edric is all about. Sir Edric himself is a bit of has-been who many years ago gained renown for his deeds in the Battle of Hornska. While he would rather spend his days drinking and stumbling through brothels, he’s suddenly called upon by his king. His mission: travel to a place called the “Unholy Temple of Despair and Certain Doom” to retrieve some artifacts. He travels with his servant, Dog. Despite the name, he is actually a person who is either named Dog or Edric just calls him that. Think of Dog as a servant with the personality and loyalty of Alfred, but the fighting ability of Batman (the guy has some moves).
The story had me chuckling from beginning to end. Edric is not a hero, a villain, or even an anti-hero. He’s just a guy who does what he can to stay alive and preferably rich. But you can’t help but like him as deplorable as he is. The humor of the book was reminiscent of Curse of Monkey Island, only more violent and if Guybrush was repeatedly trying to get in some wenches pants. Highly recommended if you’re looking for something that’s both funny and doesn’t take itself too seriously. If at all.
What Sir Edric cares about is Sir Edric. It was mentioned earlier that people love him or hate him. Well, that really depends how they may benefit or loose when he’s trying to accomplish his own goals. And when I say “goals”, I mean drinking and whoring.
If that all sounds vulgar yet funny, it is. And that’s exactly what The Adventures of Sir Edric is all about. Sir Edric himself is a bit of has-been who many years ago gained renown for his deeds in the Battle of Hornska. While he would rather spend his days drinking and stumbling through brothels, he’s suddenly called upon by his king. His mission: travel to a place called the “Unholy Temple of Despair and Certain Doom” to retrieve some artifacts. He travels with his servant, Dog. Despite the name, he is actually a person who is either named Dog or Edric just calls him that. Think of Dog as a servant with the personality and loyalty of Alfred, but the fighting ability of Batman (the guy has some moves).
The story had me chuckling from beginning to end. Edric is not a hero, a villain, or even an anti-hero. He’s just a guy who does what he can to stay alive and preferably rich. But you can’t help but like him as deplorable as he is. The humor of the book was reminiscent of Curse of Monkey Island, only more violent and if Guybrush was repeatedly trying to get in some wenches pants. Highly recommended if you’re looking for something that’s both funny and doesn’t take itself too seriously. If at all.
November 10, 2016
I abandoned the book :/
While the part that I read (more than half way) was entertaining and fairly funny, I just couldn't get to grips with Thaddeus' writing style (sorry, Thad - it's me, not you).
But if humorous fantasy is your thing, and you yearn for a good old-fashioned rollicking licentious adventure that includes an entire cast of characters from elves and golems to giants and dragons, this is the book for you.
I was please to receive a mobi review copy from the publisher, Tickety Boo Press, in exchange for an honest review.
While the part that I read (more than half way) was entertaining and fairly funny, I just couldn't get to grips with Thaddeus' writing style (sorry, Thad - it's me, not you).
But if humorous fantasy is your thing, and you yearn for a good old-fashioned rollicking licentious adventure that includes an entire cast of characters from elves and golems to giants and dragons, this is the book for you.
I was please to receive a mobi review copy from the publisher, Tickety Boo Press, in exchange for an honest review.
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