I just couldn’t like Isabella. She’s a selfish girl with rich girl trouble and thinks everyone else’s problems are just not as bad as hers. She has zero empathy, and she thinks nothing of the prisoners’ conditions (which are awful) until she gets to know Stefan. Before that she couldn’t care less if people got tortured, as long as she wasn’t the one doing it. How was she in the guard, again? I understand her motivations, but it made no sense she was the only female guard. Nobody wanted a woman in the guard. She’s in the guard because the plot needs her to be, but there’s no explanation for her being there. She just is.
I didn't like Stefan. He acted like a misogynistic prick a lot of the time. And the rest he was beating himself up for the death of his friend who killed herself. Trigger warnings for suicide are needed. It's brought up a lot, and I didn't like the way it is handled.
There were some inconsistencies, like Stefan’s eyes changing to gold at some point, then back to green, and the most jarring of all, Valko’s age. The portrait of the royal family is described three times (twice in this book and once again in Niko's, in a scene copied almost verbatim from here), and both Valko and Corina are described as children in it. Yet he was the one to retrieve Felicia before Corina was even born. He must have been one hell of a precocious toddler. If this book went through an editor, they were terrible at their job.
The story drags for what seemed like forever, the first half was really boring. And that sex scene in the dungeon, amidst all the filth, was not hot, was not romantic, it was disgusting. But hey, she wanted to get laid so badly she was thinking about it when he lay wounded and she feared for his life, hours after she was sexually assaulted. Tha wasn't treated well either.