Unseen

Harry Potter Works #4

by Astolat

Drarry Fanfic
When he wasn’t wearing it, he got jumpy, always waiting for someone to come at him wanting something—and now they did it even more urgently, if they ever saw him, because most of the time, nobody did.
10,885 words complete
Art by Alekina

Genres: Fan Fiction, Fantasy, M M Romance, Harry Potter, Short Stories, Romance, Magic

33 pages, fanfiction

First published April 1, 2016

About the author

I've written fanfic and made vids in a really ridiculous number of fandoms. Over the years, I've also used the pseudonyms shalott and the lady of shalott. All my work is available on the AO3 and you can also find me online in various other places.

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https://www.youtube.com/user/astolatvids
http://intimations.org/fanfic/ (outdated)

You are welcome to add and review any of my stories here if you like, and I also love comments at AO3 or any of my other online haunts. I also have a blanket permission policy for noncommercial transformative work of my work (eg, podfic, remix, fanart, etc) -- I love to be linked to anything you do, but you don't need to ask permission.

Reviews

[Diane · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is one that definitely stuck with me. Harry's slippery-slope addiction to being invisible is one unique and painfully brilliant idea, and then the dramatic climax offers another (which I'll avoid spoilers about, but it indirectly/inversely reminds me of what Caz does in Bujold's The Curse of Chalion). The character reactions and interactions, not just Harry's arc, are perfect, too. The eventual Drarry feels natural, unlike how some short stories with romance leave me during very skeptical.

[karlakolumna · Rating 3 out of 5]

Loved the premise of this fic, but the execution felt a bit rushed to me, I guess...

[Bitchie]

I don't know when I'll read this, but the artwork is so awesome!

[☾⋆⁺ Nurse After Dark · Rating 3 out of 5]

Content Rating: Mature
Setting:Post-War
Tags: hiding until its second nature, until it isn't anymore, Fury, Auror!Harry

Draco climbed up after him and straddled his thighs, looking down at him almost curiously: look what turned up in my bed, I wonder how it got here. “I have no idea when I even started to like you,” he said, half accusingly.

I enjoy this writers post-War Draco, hes got a good blend of haughty, scathing and manages to slide into the AU!Draco we need for a HP X DM pairing somehow.

[Tailtiu · Rating 4 out of 5]

3,5*

[Amelia · Rating 4 out of 5]

戰爭結束了，殺死佛地魔的Harry聲名大噪，走在街上不斷被人們搭訕，這讓Harry相當困擾，所以他拿出隱形斗篷，避免與這些人打交道。
這篇超好看
原著還是同人都有過Draco發現隱形斗篷下的Harry的劇情，我的天

[Mindy Schaper · Rating 5 out of 5]

What can I say, I love a caring, perceptive, smart Draco.

[TT · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually rather liked this, for a short story it does cover a lot, my only ningle is that for both guys to be 'grown ups' and for Harry to be an Auror, he still felt adolescent to me in his conversations and reactions. Neat short tho, and of course abso GORGEOUS artwork!

[Julesmarie · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fascinating premise, based on a gorgeous fanart!