This story didn't grip me until the very end. To be honest, I didn't really care about the characters, nor did I get a sense of a strong connection between Vanessa and Garrett, except for sexual tension. It seemed that certain details were added in last minute or as an afterthought. The cliffhanger ending was unexpected, I will say, and in my mind I did utter the phrase, "Oh no, he didn't!" Other than that, this story didn't really do it for me. 2.5 stars