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Darcy and Elizabeth: A Promise Kept
Darcy and Elizabeth - A Promise Kept is a Pride and Prejudice variation. Not a simple retelling, it is an intriguing new story that does not follow canon.
Five years after his disastrous proposal at Kent, Fitzwilliam Darcy receives a letter from Charles Bingley regarding a promise made when their friendship ended. Should Darcy keep the promise, it will throw him into the company of the one woman he has struggled for years to forget--Elizabeth Bennet.
Having just entered a secret agreement with Lady Markham, will Darcy put his future in jeopardy by stepping in to help Bingley? Has time and distance helped him overcome his regard for Elizabeth, or will he fall as madly in love with her as before?
Is true love to be found in a promise kept?
Five years after his disastrous proposal at Kent, Fitzwilliam Darcy receives a letter from Charles Bingley regarding a promise made when their friendship ended. Should Darcy keep the promise, it will throw him into the company of the one woman he has struggled for years to forget--Elizabeth Bennet.
Having just entered a secret agreement with Lady Markham, will Darcy put his future in jeopardy by stepping in to help Bingley? Has time and distance helped him overcome his regard for Elizabeth, or will he fall as madly in love with her as before?
Is true love to be found in a promise kept?
464 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 5, 2016
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Brenda J. Webb
11 books104 followersWelcome to my author page; let me tell you a little about myself.
First, I have never followed soap operas, I hardly have time to watch television at all. Thus, if any of my characters match names of soap opera characters, I assure you it is a coincidence. I come up with the names all by myself. Now that that is addressed, I shall move on. "big smile"
I worked for years in the accounting world until I traded my career for life on a small farm. A voracious reader and romance movie aficionada, one day I happened to notice that one of my favorite Jane Austen books had been made into a movie. It was the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice and I went to the theatre to see it instead of waiting, as usual, for the DVD or online video release. Nothing can compare to seeing this production on the big screen. It captured my imagination and made me want more of these beloved characters or others like them. I began buying all of Jane Austen's novels on Amazon.com and discovered the Jane Austen Fan Fiction genre.
I read everything I could find and then decided to write a story of my own, which was posted on a fan fiction site. A nice response from my readers convinced me to publish the story. I began a forum, DarcyandLizzy.Com, where I post my stories before they are published. It features many other writers as well.
First, I have never followed soap operas, I hardly have time to watch television at all. Thus, if any of my characters match names of soap opera characters, I assure you it is a coincidence. I come up with the names all by myself. Now that that is addressed, I shall move on. "big smile"
I worked for years in the accounting world until I traded my career for life on a small farm. A voracious reader and romance movie aficionada, one day I happened to notice that one of my favorite Jane Austen books had been made into a movie. It was the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice and I went to the theatre to see it instead of waiting, as usual, for the DVD or online video release. Nothing can compare to seeing this production on the big screen. It captured my imagination and made me want more of these beloved characters or others like them. I began buying all of Jane Austen's novels on Amazon.com and discovered the Jane Austen Fan Fiction genre.
I read everything I could find and then decided to write a story of my own, which was posted on a fan fiction site. A nice response from my readers convinced me to publish the story. I began a forum, DarcyandLizzy.Com, where I post my stories before they are published. It features many other writers as well.
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April 16, 2016
Dear reader,
When you pick up a book penned by Ms Webb you are set on a tumultuous journey filled with adventure,danger and excitement all happily centred on ODC.
This book included all of the above and so much more! Set five years after the fateful events in Kent,we become instantly embroiled in the affairs of Bingley and Darcy, as the latter endeavours to safeguard the interests of the former-both physically and financially.
Having agreed to do as such,he unwittingly encounters a certain governess ....none other than Mrs Elizabeth Gardiner nee Bennet.
Despite initially appearing nonchalant,they gradually admit their love for each other and agree to marry.
A simple premise I hear you say?
Oh! The opposite is the case as we are introduced to first one,then another 'gentleman' of disrepute held bent on carrying out their own agendas,thus preventing Darcy and Elizabeth's HEA.
What follows are scenes of duels, assassination attempts,marriage proposals and indeed a wedding!
This book is a fantastic read,a real page turner and I highly recommend it.
I personally loved it and the inclusion of the epilogue left me with a warm,comforting feeling inside.....a feeling of contentment knowing that Darcy,Lizzy and their extended families would be productive,fulfilled but more importantly happy.
Thank you Ms Webb for such an enjoyable read!
When you pick up a book penned by Ms Webb you are set on a tumultuous journey filled with adventure,danger and excitement all happily centred on ODC.
This book included all of the above and so much more! Set five years after the fateful events in Kent,we become instantly embroiled in the affairs of Bingley and Darcy, as the latter endeavours to safeguard the interests of the former-both physically and financially.
Having agreed to do as such,he unwittingly encounters a certain governess ....none other than Mrs Elizabeth Gardiner nee Bennet.
Despite initially appearing nonchalant,they gradually admit their love for each other and agree to marry.
A simple premise I hear you say?
Oh! The opposite is the case as we are introduced to first one,then another 'gentleman' of disrepute held bent on carrying out their own agendas,thus preventing Darcy and Elizabeth's HEA.
What follows are scenes of duels, assassination attempts,marriage proposals and indeed a wedding!
This book is a fantastic read,a real page turner and I highly recommend it.
I personally loved it and the inclusion of the epilogue left me with a warm,comforting feeling inside.....a feeling of contentment knowing that Darcy,Lizzy and their extended families would be productive,fulfilled but more importantly happy.
Thank you Ms Webb for such an enjoyable read!
April 12, 2016
I own all of Brenda’s novels and even in reading this one while it was a Work In Progress (WIP) had determined that this newest one would join the others on my kindle. I was then lucky enough to win a copy from a raffle. All her tales are 5 star stories for me and have or will be read multiple times.
While rereading this in its entirety there were so many scenes of such poignancy that I was rendered blurry eyed. But this is one of my ways of rating a book and/or movie…how many tissues did I use for this one? I didn’t keep count.
This story begins five years after Hunsford. Darcy, in honoring the need to provide his family with an heir to continue the line, to take care of his estates, his tenant and his employees makes a choice to offer his hand to someone available (a marriage of convenience) but not the choice of his heart as that is not even possible. He has earned many a gray hair, in seclusion from society, burying himself in his work and trying to forget his refused proposal but also in attempting to correct all the faults Elizabeth laid at his door. However, a long-time childhood friend, Millicent (Lady Markham), a widow with two children, in being offered his hand, wisely demands that they delay any final decision to wed for a year, as she intuitively knows his heart is not hers. Having been in love with Darcy dating back many years she is hoping that the plan to be in each other’s company during that time will warm his feelings towards her AND help him get over what Millie is sure is a broken heart from some previous attachment.
Shortly thereafter Darcy, ever a man of honor (and this trait is one Brenda portrays so well in her writings), responds to a request from an old friend and acquaintance…even though that friendship has laid dormant all those years. Yes, Bingley calls for his help. This one act sets in motion the coming together of ODC and the intrigue begins.
First we have the situation with the Bingleys: Jane is pregnant, Charles is extremely ill with a cough and with stomach problems. He looks to be at death’s door. And on top of all this Charles’ businesses have taken a dive…a dive which seems to have an onset with his taking his cousin into the business. The doctor has recommended a respite for his health to be taken in southern climes, on the Mediterranean, but Charles must put his family, his estate and his business into trusted hands while away. Darcy is the man.
Secondly, (and here is the underlying reason for all those years of a friendship on ice) Elizabeth is now residing with her sister and has with her Emily, a “daughter” and she goes by the name of Mrs. Gardiner. She claims to also be a widow. Those who know P&P will understand why Jane asked Bingley to cut ties with Darcy after Elizabeth reveals all to Jane: all her feelings, the proposal, her stinging refusal and then that “letter” from Darcy and his part in keeping Jane and Bingley apart.
We learn that events in canon have taken a different turn after Hunsford. Lydia was not rescued, M/M Bennet are not with us and Elizabeth has taken a position to support herself. THERE the second problem entangles itself in not only Elizabeth’s life but also then embroils the Colonel and some of his cohorts, Bow Street Runners and Darcy and is partly taken from history itself; Lord Castlereagh, in service for the crown, is in danger from Elizabeth’s former employer, Count Van Lynden…a man intent on tracking her down for several reasons.
Part of what I loved about this story is how deeply Darcy feels; how once confronted with seeing Elizabeth again he acknowledges where his heart lays and how he rants and raves against circumstances keeping them from uniting, time and again. But he remains a man of honor even when passions ignite and bring them to an edge. “Lock your door, Elizabeth.” Five years have passed; he knows the value now of seizing the moment b/c we don’t know what the morrow will bring. And he also has to consider Millie and their understanding. Does Millie become a foe (like Caroline) or can she accept what she sees for herself in Darcy’s eyes?
This story like the author’s other novels has more than one story line to keep us glued to the pages: several romances develop, an ongoing pregnancy, a “kidnapping”, political intrigue with an assassination plot, murder, poisoning, betrayal and embezzlement all intertwined so well. And one last thing that warmed my heart: we read of our dear characters offering up prayers for the health and safety of each other as danger, mayhem, wounds and illnesses lurk like shadows over the welfare of loved ones. (Although a Christian, I don’t like preaching or sermons, i.e. Mary Bennet’s tendency, to intrude on the progress of a story but this was done perfectly…and with meaning.)
Put this book at the top of your TBR pile if not in your hands immediately, dear friends. You must love it.
While rereading this in its entirety there were so many scenes of such poignancy that I was rendered blurry eyed. But this is one of my ways of rating a book and/or movie…how many tissues did I use for this one? I didn’t keep count.
This story begins five years after Hunsford. Darcy, in honoring the need to provide his family with an heir to continue the line, to take care of his estates, his tenant and his employees makes a choice to offer his hand to someone available (a marriage of convenience) but not the choice of his heart as that is not even possible. He has earned many a gray hair, in seclusion from society, burying himself in his work and trying to forget his refused proposal but also in attempting to correct all the faults Elizabeth laid at his door. However, a long-time childhood friend, Millicent (Lady Markham), a widow with two children, in being offered his hand, wisely demands that they delay any final decision to wed for a year, as she intuitively knows his heart is not hers. Having been in love with Darcy dating back many years she is hoping that the plan to be in each other’s company during that time will warm his feelings towards her AND help him get over what Millie is sure is a broken heart from some previous attachment.
Shortly thereafter Darcy, ever a man of honor (and this trait is one Brenda portrays so well in her writings), responds to a request from an old friend and acquaintance…even though that friendship has laid dormant all those years. Yes, Bingley calls for his help. This one act sets in motion the coming together of ODC and the intrigue begins.
First we have the situation with the Bingleys: Jane is pregnant, Charles is extremely ill with a cough and with stomach problems. He looks to be at death’s door. And on top of all this Charles’ businesses have taken a dive…a dive which seems to have an onset with his taking his cousin into the business. The doctor has recommended a respite for his health to be taken in southern climes, on the Mediterranean, but Charles must put his family, his estate and his business into trusted hands while away. Darcy is the man.
Secondly, (and here is the underlying reason for all those years of a friendship on ice) Elizabeth is now residing with her sister and has with her Emily, a “daughter” and she goes by the name of Mrs. Gardiner. She claims to also be a widow. Those who know P&P will understand why Jane asked Bingley to cut ties with Darcy after Elizabeth reveals all to Jane: all her feelings, the proposal, her stinging refusal and then that “letter” from Darcy and his part in keeping Jane and Bingley apart.
We learn that events in canon have taken a different turn after Hunsford. Lydia was not rescued, M/M Bennet are not with us and Elizabeth has taken a position to support herself. THERE the second problem entangles itself in not only Elizabeth’s life but also then embroils the Colonel and some of his cohorts, Bow Street Runners and Darcy and is partly taken from history itself; Lord Castlereagh, in service for the crown, is in danger from Elizabeth’s former employer, Count Van Lynden…a man intent on tracking her down for several reasons.
Part of what I loved about this story is how deeply Darcy feels; how once confronted with seeing Elizabeth again he acknowledges where his heart lays and how he rants and raves against circumstances keeping them from uniting, time and again. But he remains a man of honor even when passions ignite and bring them to an edge. “Lock your door, Elizabeth.” Five years have passed; he knows the value now of seizing the moment b/c we don’t know what the morrow will bring. And he also has to consider Millie and their understanding. Does Millie become a foe (like Caroline) or can she accept what she sees for herself in Darcy’s eyes?
This story like the author’s other novels has more than one story line to keep us glued to the pages: several romances develop, an ongoing pregnancy, a “kidnapping”, political intrigue with an assassination plot, murder, poisoning, betrayal and embezzlement all intertwined so well. And one last thing that warmed my heart: we read of our dear characters offering up prayers for the health and safety of each other as danger, mayhem, wounds and illnesses lurk like shadows over the welfare of loved ones. (Although a Christian, I don’t like preaching or sermons, i.e. Mary Bennet’s tendency, to intrude on the progress of a story but this was done perfectly…and with meaning.)
Put this book at the top of your TBR pile if not in your hands immediately, dear friends. You must love it.
October 23, 2017
Daring, assassination plot, spy thriller, unrequited love realized and OMG drama, I could not put it down. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I loved it.
There was drama, spy thriller escapades as our dear Colonel worked with undercover agents trying to prevent an assassination attempt while Darcy tried to unravel the unusual circumstances surrounding the decline in Bingley’s business as well as his health. Throw in the surprise appearance of Elizabeth [who he hasn’t seen in five years] with a child and you have the mix for a mad adventure.
There is no need for me to provide an outline or go into great detail as there are several excellent reviews already posted. I also read an excerpt Webb posted on the Austen Authors website. I was hooked right away and could hardly wait for the publication. The wait was worth it.
In addition to the numerous story lines… our heroes had to deal with a plethora of villains. They ranged from a simple thug looking to make a coin to the homicidal bordering on insane. One villain in particular was a sociopath with no heart or soul. There will always be evil men with agendas that go against society in order to promote their own plans for revenge or gain, whether money or fame.
Our beloved Colonel was most excellent and in the end gained his heart’s desire. I loved seeing him in action as he worked to prevent the assassination. What a man. His brother, the heir, finally saw his way to becoming a better man. Lord and Lady Matlock were ever ready to do their best for their sons and nephew.
Mr. Darcy…Webb provided us a view of him never seen before… with an even deeper dimension to his character and talents [if you can believe it] then we have seen in other variations. OH MY GOODNESS.
Note: There were liberties taken… questionable liberties with propriety that would be considered imprudent and perhaps indecent for the times. Thank goodness Webb didn’t have ODC anticipate their vows and we were not given graphic sexual contact that would counterman their honor and dignity.
The tension and action sequences were absolutely gut wrenching. On the one hand you had Darcy struggling in Scotland as he fought to save Elizabeth and on the other hand our dear Colonel, along with his agents in London, were fighting for the Crown in order to save a man’s life. Whew! Action packed as they unraveled the machinations of the assassination attempt.
****SPOILER**** ****End SPOILER****
Read it… I plan to read it again after I rest and recover from the excitement. It is a keeper.
There was drama, spy thriller escapades as our dear Colonel worked with undercover agents trying to prevent an assassination attempt while Darcy tried to unravel the unusual circumstances surrounding the decline in Bingley’s business as well as his health. Throw in the surprise appearance of Elizabeth [who he hasn’t seen in five years] with a child and you have the mix for a mad adventure.
There is no need for me to provide an outline or go into great detail as there are several excellent reviews already posted. I also read an excerpt Webb posted on the Austen Authors website. I was hooked right away and could hardly wait for the publication. The wait was worth it.
In addition to the numerous story lines… our heroes had to deal with a plethora of villains. They ranged from a simple thug looking to make a coin to the homicidal bordering on insane. One villain in particular was a sociopath with no heart or soul. There will always be evil men with agendas that go against society in order to promote their own plans for revenge or gain, whether money or fame.
Our beloved Colonel was most excellent and in the end gained his heart’s desire. I loved seeing him in action as he worked to prevent the assassination. What a man. His brother, the heir, finally saw his way to becoming a better man. Lord and Lady Matlock were ever ready to do their best for their sons and nephew.
Mr. Darcy…Webb provided us a view of him never seen before… with an even deeper dimension to his character and talents [if you can believe it] then we have seen in other variations. OH MY GOODNESS.
Note: There were liberties taken… questionable liberties with propriety that would be considered imprudent and perhaps indecent for the times. Thank goodness Webb didn’t have ODC anticipate their vows and we were not given graphic sexual contact that would counterman their honor and dignity.
The tension and action sequences were absolutely gut wrenching. On the one hand you had Darcy struggling in Scotland as he fought to save Elizabeth and on the other hand our dear Colonel, along with his agents in London, were fighting for the Crown in order to save a man’s life. Whew! Action packed as they unraveled the machinations of the assassination attempt.
****SPOILER**** ****End SPOILER****
Read it… I plan to read it again after I rest and recover from the excitement. It is a keeper.
July 22, 2022
Oooh another BW drama filled epic. If you like the author, this will not disappoint.
Another reread in which I enjoyed more than the first time. I liked that to there was plenty of drama, very little was of the type which stemmed from misunderstandings or overheard half conversation for ODC.
Another reread in which I enjoyed more than the first time. I liked that to there was plenty of drama, very little was of the type which stemmed from misunderstandings or overheard half conversation for ODC.
September 16, 2018
I wish the author had given us more of what made her former employer "evil." We really never get the whole story. I love the author so maybe I need to read it again. Usually, as in the Count of her previous book, there was no need to explain.
Reread: Yes, I still agree with what I thought the last time I read this book, I wanted more. Her employer was a bad man as evidenced by his current behavior in the book but wanted more backstory on what it was like for E while the family was together. Still loved it. Small point. I think it is good to want more. Shows how much I liked the book. :)
Reread again: Same review as before.
Reread: Yes, I still agree with what I thought the last time I read this book, I wanted more. Her employer was a bad man as evidenced by his current behavior in the book but wanted more backstory on what it was like for E while the family was together. Still loved it. Small point. I think it is good to want more. Shows how much I liked the book. :)
Reread again: Same review as before.
July 25, 2017
Promises, Poignancy, and Passion
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Sequel
TIME FRAME: 5 years after the close of Pride and Prejudice
MAIN CHARACTERS: In addition to Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth Bennet, the Bingleys, and the Fitwilliams, we are introduced to Lady Markham (Mr. Darcy’s childhood friend who is now a widow), Mr. Howton (Mr. Bingley’s troublesome and lazy cousin), Lord Van Lynden (a dangerous man from Lizzy’s past), and Emily (who is extremely adorable!).
SYNOPSIS: Mr. Bingley is in desperate need of some help and Mr. Darcy is the only person he can turn to, even though they have not spoken or seen each other in five years. After years of loneliness and heartache, Darcy is finally in a place where he is moving on with his life. He has even proposed to his childhood friend, Lady Markham, whom he cares for and loves…as a friend. But while assisting the Bingleys, Darcy finds out what has become of Elizabeth Bennet, the woman who will forever claim every inch of his heart, and her reappearance in his life begins to wreck havoc with all his carefully laid plans…
WHAT I LOVED:
– Wondrously Original: Gosh! How does Ms. Webb dream up these enthralling and unique scenarios?!? The premise of this story stunned me (not much is disclosed in the back cover blurb) and the opening chapters which introduced some new characters and drama had me riveted! I love stories by Brenda Webb because she is quite the proficient at creating new dynamic characters that steer her variations into completely uncharted waters. Her plots and twists are truly unlike any others. I love that this one took place five years later, had a bit of estrangement between the Bingley and Darcy families, and had Darcy contemplating a marriage of companionship.
– Mr. Darcy: I adore how Ms. Webb portrays Mr. Darcy – he is always fiercely and irrevocably in love with Elizabeth, honorable to a fault, and heart-meltingly adorable. And in this variation, readers witness his vigilant protection of Bingley family, his kind gentleness towards Elizabeth and Emily, and how adorably impatient he can be when apart from Elizabeth. And not to mention…he is an artist… *swoon* (Was that really necessary, Ms. Webb? We are already head over heels for your Mr. Darcy, did you have to make him even more swoon-worthy?!? JK!)
– The Turmoil: Who wants some angst and drama? This story is brimming with it! There is an assignation attempt, mismanaged funds, numerous deceptions, and more than one love triangle all happening at the same time! Ms. Webb masterfully creates a delicious amount of tension and turbulence in this tale, and it becomes so engrossing that this book is almost impossible to put down! I loved all the drama of these scenarios – they didn’t feel over-the-top or implausible, and I greatly appreciate how Ms. Webb skillfully executes and interweaves each story-line.
– Equal Parts: I appreciate how well-balanced this story was. There were equal parts sinister plots and tender scenes, dangerous characters and heroic characters, romantic relationships and family/friendly relationships, emotional angst and ardent love. It was a terrific mixture!
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
– Falling Action: While I was consumed and enthralled by the first half of the book, I did sort of feel my interest wane during the falling action and conclusion. I’m overall satisfied with the story’s resolution, but maybe the pacing of it was a little too drawn out for my taste. Maybe after such an exhilarating opening premise, the falling action pales a little by comparison.
NOTE: While I’d still rate this book for Mature Audiences, there really was only one brief and not explicit intimate scene in the last 30 pages.
CONCLUSION:
Darcy and Elizabeth: A Promise Kept is an inventive and epic Pride and Prejudice variation that brings action, intrigue, emotional turbulence, and passion to our beloved characters in a thrilling way. I dearly hope Ms. Webb continues to write these supremely original and exquisitely compelling variations!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Sequel
TIME FRAME: 5 years after the close of Pride and Prejudice
MAIN CHARACTERS: In addition to Mr. Darcy, Elizabeth Bennet, the Bingleys, and the Fitwilliams, we are introduced to Lady Markham (Mr. Darcy’s childhood friend who is now a widow), Mr. Howton (Mr. Bingley’s troublesome and lazy cousin), Lord Van Lynden (a dangerous man from Lizzy’s past), and Emily (who is extremely adorable!).
SYNOPSIS: Mr. Bingley is in desperate need of some help and Mr. Darcy is the only person he can turn to, even though they have not spoken or seen each other in five years. After years of loneliness and heartache, Darcy is finally in a place where he is moving on with his life. He has even proposed to his childhood friend, Lady Markham, whom he cares for and loves…as a friend. But while assisting the Bingleys, Darcy finds out what has become of Elizabeth Bennet, the woman who will forever claim every inch of his heart, and her reappearance in his life begins to wreck havoc with all his carefully laid plans…
WHAT I LOVED:
– Wondrously Original: Gosh! How does Ms. Webb dream up these enthralling and unique scenarios?!? The premise of this story stunned me (not much is disclosed in the back cover blurb) and the opening chapters which introduced some new characters and drama had me riveted! I love stories by Brenda Webb because she is quite the proficient at creating new dynamic characters that steer her variations into completely uncharted waters. Her plots and twists are truly unlike any others. I love that this one took place five years later, had a bit of estrangement between the Bingley and Darcy families, and had Darcy contemplating a marriage of companionship.
– Mr. Darcy: I adore how Ms. Webb portrays Mr. Darcy – he is always fiercely and irrevocably in love with Elizabeth, honorable to a fault, and heart-meltingly adorable. And in this variation, readers witness his vigilant protection of Bingley family, his kind gentleness towards Elizabeth and Emily, and how adorably impatient he can be when apart from Elizabeth. And not to mention…he is an artist… *swoon* (Was that really necessary, Ms. Webb? We are already head over heels for your Mr. Darcy, did you have to make him even more swoon-worthy?!? JK!)
– The Turmoil: Who wants some angst and drama? This story is brimming with it! There is an assignation attempt, mismanaged funds, numerous deceptions, and more than one love triangle all happening at the same time! Ms. Webb masterfully creates a delicious amount of tension and turbulence in this tale, and it becomes so engrossing that this book is almost impossible to put down! I loved all the drama of these scenarios – they didn’t feel over-the-top or implausible, and I greatly appreciate how Ms. Webb skillfully executes and interweaves each story-line.
– Equal Parts: I appreciate how well-balanced this story was. There were equal parts sinister plots and tender scenes, dangerous characters and heroic characters, romantic relationships and family/friendly relationships, emotional angst and ardent love. It was a terrific mixture!
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
– Falling Action: While I was consumed and enthralled by the first half of the book, I did sort of feel my interest wane during the falling action and conclusion. I’m overall satisfied with the story’s resolution, but maybe the pacing of it was a little too drawn out for my taste. Maybe after such an exhilarating opening premise, the falling action pales a little by comparison.
NOTE: While I’d still rate this book for Mature Audiences, there really was only one brief and not explicit intimate scene in the last 30 pages.
CONCLUSION:
Darcy and Elizabeth: A Promise Kept is an inventive and epic Pride and Prejudice variation that brings action, intrigue, emotional turbulence, and passion to our beloved characters in a thrilling way. I dearly hope Ms. Webb continues to write these supremely original and exquisitely compelling variations!
Austenesque Reviews
June 26, 2016
3.5 Stars
July 2, 2016
I think Brenda Webb does the best job of any author in creating a well written storyline that builds up suspense with villains surrounding Elizabeth Bennet (cast as a damsel in distress) and Mr. Darcy rushing to the rescue. Ms. Webb has done it effectively in her previous books based on the primary characters of Pride and Prejudice, and she does it once again here.
Five long years have passed since Elizabeth refused Darcy's offer of marriage. His friendship with Bingley has been interrupted since that time, as well. Bingley unexpectedly reaches out to him, and Darcy doesn't hesitate to go to Canfield Manor, Bingley's estate. When Darcy arrives, he's shocked to find that Bingley is gravely ill. He agrees to protect the Bingley family and business interests while his friend travels to the better climate of Spain in hopes of improving his health. Jane Bingley is unable to accompany her husband, as she is pregnant with their third child. Even more unexpectedly, Elizabeth is in residence and introduced to Darcy as Mrs. Gardiner, now a widow with a 3-year-old daughter, Emily. Unfortunately, even though Darcy finds himself still in love with her, he has recently become unofficially engaged to Countess Millicent/Millie Markham, a lifelong friend who is also widowed with two young children.
Thus, the angst is already registering even before the story starts to pick up steam. It turns out that Elizabeth and Emily are hiding from Lord Van Lynden, and with good reason. In addition, Bingley's business is losing money, and at first it's not clear whether the cause is mismanagement due to his illness or whether he's being swindled by his business partner, David Howton. Colonel Fitzwilliam serves as Darcy's confidante and right hand man throughout the book. Lord and Lady Matlock factor strongly in the story, too, and Fitzwilliam's eldest brother, Viscount Leighton, is an immoral gambler, rake and drinker. A political conspiracy is afoot to assassinate the British Foreign Minister, Viscount Castlereagh, with Elizabeth unwillingly drawn right into the middle of the conspirators.
It's easy to love this characterization of Darcy. He's so sweet with the children, especially Emily. He's an accomplished artist and creates paintings that reveal his heart. He's a faithful friend, tirelessly wading through ledgers and documents related to Bingley's business and hiring extra investigators and guards at his own expense when he starts to suspect there's danger. And there are many lovely moments of longing and passion that he and Elizabeth share. I find some of the dialogue and declarations of love between Darcy and Elizabeth to be too far over the top for me, but this does fit with the general melodramatic tone of the book. When it comes down to it, Darcy is actually way too good to be believed, too!
As for Elizabeth, she seems to be missing the wit and sauciness that I look for in her character. She's warm and brave, and she obviously loves Darcy, but it seems to me that Millie's character has more of the spunk that I'm used to seeing in Elizabeth. Just as Darcy is overly heroic, Elizabeth can be resourceful but mostly comes across as just the object of his adoration.
There's a strong cast of characters in addition to Darcy and Elizabeth. Little Emily is adorable, although though much better behaved than the average 3-year-old. I always love when Colonel Fitzwilliam is presented as a strong wing man to Darcy, as he is here. Millie has a lovely rapport with Darcy and Fitzwilliam, her childhood playmates, and you can sense their mutual respect. Caroline Bingley and the Hursts don't appear much in this book, but their characters are consistent with the originals and their presence is significant in pushing the story along. Even the individuals in the group plotting to kill Viscount Castlereagh are given distinct personalities.
This melodrama has so many subplots that it's impossible to even hint at all the threads here. It's truly impressive the way Ms. Webb weaves them all together into one cohesive tale. By letting the reader in on what the villains are doing, she also builds a lot of tension as you see the threats lurking around the corner for our hero and heroine. I freely admit that this is all way beyond the bounds of credibility, so you have to suspend disbelief and just go with it.
Five long years have passed since Elizabeth refused Darcy's offer of marriage. His friendship with Bingley has been interrupted since that time, as well. Bingley unexpectedly reaches out to him, and Darcy doesn't hesitate to go to Canfield Manor, Bingley's estate. When Darcy arrives, he's shocked to find that Bingley is gravely ill. He agrees to protect the Bingley family and business interests while his friend travels to the better climate of Spain in hopes of improving his health. Jane Bingley is unable to accompany her husband, as she is pregnant with their third child. Even more unexpectedly, Elizabeth is in residence and introduced to Darcy as Mrs. Gardiner, now a widow with a 3-year-old daughter, Emily. Unfortunately, even though Darcy finds himself still in love with her, he has recently become unofficially engaged to Countess Millicent/Millie Markham, a lifelong friend who is also widowed with two young children.
Thus, the angst is already registering even before the story starts to pick up steam. It turns out that Elizabeth and Emily are hiding from Lord Van Lynden, and with good reason. In addition, Bingley's business is losing money, and at first it's not clear whether the cause is mismanagement due to his illness or whether he's being swindled by his business partner, David Howton. Colonel Fitzwilliam serves as Darcy's confidante and right hand man throughout the book. Lord and Lady Matlock factor strongly in the story, too, and Fitzwilliam's eldest brother, Viscount Leighton, is an immoral gambler, rake and drinker. A political conspiracy is afoot to assassinate the British Foreign Minister, Viscount Castlereagh, with Elizabeth unwillingly drawn right into the middle of the conspirators.
It's easy to love this characterization of Darcy. He's so sweet with the children, especially Emily. He's an accomplished artist and creates paintings that reveal his heart. He's a faithful friend, tirelessly wading through ledgers and documents related to Bingley's business and hiring extra investigators and guards at his own expense when he starts to suspect there's danger. And there are many lovely moments of longing and passion that he and Elizabeth share. I find some of the dialogue and declarations of love between Darcy and Elizabeth to be too far over the top for me, but this does fit with the general melodramatic tone of the book. When it comes down to it, Darcy is actually way too good to be believed, too!
As for Elizabeth, she seems to be missing the wit and sauciness that I look for in her character. She's warm and brave, and she obviously loves Darcy, but it seems to me that Millie's character has more of the spunk that I'm used to seeing in Elizabeth. Just as Darcy is overly heroic, Elizabeth can be resourceful but mostly comes across as just the object of his adoration.
There's a strong cast of characters in addition to Darcy and Elizabeth. Little Emily is adorable, although though much better behaved than the average 3-year-old. I always love when Colonel Fitzwilliam is presented as a strong wing man to Darcy, as he is here. Millie has a lovely rapport with Darcy and Fitzwilliam, her childhood playmates, and you can sense their mutual respect. Caroline Bingley and the Hursts don't appear much in this book, but their characters are consistent with the originals and their presence is significant in pushing the story along. Even the individuals in the group plotting to kill Viscount Castlereagh are given distinct personalities.
This melodrama has so many subplots that it's impossible to even hint at all the threads here. It's truly impressive the way Ms. Webb weaves them all together into one cohesive tale. By letting the reader in on what the villains are doing, she also builds a lot of tension as you see the threats lurking around the corner for our hero and heroine. I freely admit that this is all way beyond the bounds of credibility, so you have to suspend disbelief and just go with it.
November 12, 2016
I have read and enjoyed all of Ms. Webb's Pride & Prejudice variations. I find her plots well developed and intricate. This one is no different. As the book description says, it is five years after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford and he has not seen Charles Bingley since nor Elizabeth. When Bingley cut all ties with Darcy, Darcy did offer up his promise that if he ever needed his help, he just had to ask. During these 5 years, he immersed himself in his duty and responsibilities and is currently trying to convince a childhood friend to marry him. That would be Lady Markham and what a lovely character is she. And so the story begins.
Charles Bingley requests his help to take charge of his business and family while he is sent away to recover his health. What ensues are several dramatic plots not only against Charles Bingley, Elizabeth and 'her child', Emily, but also the BritIsh Foreign Minister, Lord Castlereagh. Several villains and the nefarious Lord Van Lynden are out for blood. Lord Van Lynden is a man without a conscience and out for revenge against the Foreign Minister. Amongst all this subterfuge is Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam trying to connect all the dots.
Overall I enjoyed this story but did find some things tied up too neatly. Darcy and Elizabeth's love for each other was beautifully written but I then expect no less from Ms. Webb.
Charles Bingley requests his help to take charge of his business and family while he is sent away to recover his health. What ensues are several dramatic plots not only against Charles Bingley, Elizabeth and 'her child', Emily, but also the BritIsh Foreign Minister, Lord Castlereagh. Several villains and the nefarious Lord Van Lynden are out for blood. Lord Van Lynden is a man without a conscience and out for revenge against the Foreign Minister. Amongst all this subterfuge is Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam trying to connect all the dots.
Overall I enjoyed this story but did find some things tied up too neatly. Darcy and Elizabeth's love for each other was beautifully written but I then expect no less from Ms. Webb.
May 1, 2016
How will a promise made to Charles Bingley alter Darcy and Elizabeth’s lives five years after Darcy’s proposal at Hunsford?
Rating: 5 stars out of 5
Source: I received an ARC of this book from the author for a fair and honest review.
If you’re looking for a JAFF retelling that takes you down a long, curvy, and utterly romantic path, then Brenda Webb’s new release should be placed on your TBR list! After writing several popular JAFF stories, Ms. Webb is back with her latest Darcy and Elizabeth story, titled “Darcy and Elizabeth: A Promise Kept,” and I’m here to say that Brenda Webb packs all of her best moves into this story. Similar to her other books, Brenda takes a non-canon approach to this epic tale, peppering her story with a whole new cast of villains and obstacles along the way.
Fast forward five years since Darcy’s infamous Hunsford proposal to Elizabeth, where he finds himself still struggling to put the pieces of his personal life solidly back together. Knowing that he must eventually marry and that many “suitable” ladies are willing to become the future Mistress of Pemberley, he decides to enter into an informal agreement with an old friend, Lady Markham. As a mother and a young widow with lingering romantic feelings for Darcy, Lady Markham is eager to enter into this agreement, with the hopes that it ultimately will lead to her marriage with Darcy.
After some discussion, Darcy and Lady Markham decide to spend more time in each other’s company to determine the future of their relationship. However, her long-standing friendship with Darcy has made her all too aware that Darcy’s eyes reveal that he is guarding a long-held secret ever since his return several years ago from Kent; he’s still torn apart inside over his love for Elizabeth Bennet.
After settling into this new arrangement with Lady Markham, Darcy receives a letter from Charles Bingley, an old friend that he hasn’t seen in five years. Soon, Darcy learns that Bingley is quite ill and that he needs Darcy to fulfill a promise he made to Bingley several years ago. Can Darcy reenter the Bingley’s lives without facing Elizabeth Bennet again, and if he does come face to face with her all of these years later, what will the outcome be for both of them?
“Darcy & Elizabeth: A Promise Kept,” sweeps us up into an epic story that skillfully weaves together multiple storylines while bringing several interesting new characters into the fold. As Darcy tries to help Charles Bingley save his family, along with his business, it soon becomes apparent that foul play is involved. However, the cast of criminals is larger than initially expected, taking Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and their associates down multiple pathways in their quest to help the Bingley family. At the bottom of this, Darcy must also figure out how Mrs. Elizabeth Gardiner, née Bennet, fits into this picture and how his plans with Lady Markham will alter all of their lives.
Brenda Webb spins a story that is action-packed, while at the same time giving her readers a great romance story that has all of the sweetness and longing associated with lovers who find themselves rekindling the greatest love of their lives. Never one to take us on a simple journey, Brenda Webb finds a way to orchestrate several engrossing storylines and pull them together in unexpected ways. This is a story that will allow you to become immersed in a maze of deceit and revenge, while savoring the bonds that families build together based on respect, trust, and love.
Rating: 5 stars out of 5
Source: I received an ARC of this book from the author for a fair and honest review.
If you’re looking for a JAFF retelling that takes you down a long, curvy, and utterly romantic path, then Brenda Webb’s new release should be placed on your TBR list! After writing several popular JAFF stories, Ms. Webb is back with her latest Darcy and Elizabeth story, titled “Darcy and Elizabeth: A Promise Kept,” and I’m here to say that Brenda Webb packs all of her best moves into this story. Similar to her other books, Brenda takes a non-canon approach to this epic tale, peppering her story with a whole new cast of villains and obstacles along the way.
Fast forward five years since Darcy’s infamous Hunsford proposal to Elizabeth, where he finds himself still struggling to put the pieces of his personal life solidly back together. Knowing that he must eventually marry and that many “suitable” ladies are willing to become the future Mistress of Pemberley, he decides to enter into an informal agreement with an old friend, Lady Markham. As a mother and a young widow with lingering romantic feelings for Darcy, Lady Markham is eager to enter into this agreement, with the hopes that it ultimately will lead to her marriage with Darcy.
After some discussion, Darcy and Lady Markham decide to spend more time in each other’s company to determine the future of their relationship. However, her long-standing friendship with Darcy has made her all too aware that Darcy’s eyes reveal that he is guarding a long-held secret ever since his return several years ago from Kent; he’s still torn apart inside over his love for Elizabeth Bennet.
After settling into this new arrangement with Lady Markham, Darcy receives a letter from Charles Bingley, an old friend that he hasn’t seen in five years. Soon, Darcy learns that Bingley is quite ill and that he needs Darcy to fulfill a promise he made to Bingley several years ago. Can Darcy reenter the Bingley’s lives without facing Elizabeth Bennet again, and if he does come face to face with her all of these years later, what will the outcome be for both of them?
“Darcy & Elizabeth: A Promise Kept,” sweeps us up into an epic story that skillfully weaves together multiple storylines while bringing several interesting new characters into the fold. As Darcy tries to help Charles Bingley save his family, along with his business, it soon becomes apparent that foul play is involved. However, the cast of criminals is larger than initially expected, taking Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and their associates down multiple pathways in their quest to help the Bingley family. At the bottom of this, Darcy must also figure out how Mrs. Elizabeth Gardiner, née Bennet, fits into this picture and how his plans with Lady Markham will alter all of their lives.
Brenda Webb spins a story that is action-packed, while at the same time giving her readers a great romance story that has all of the sweetness and longing associated with lovers who find themselves rekindling the greatest love of their lives. Never one to take us on a simple journey, Brenda Webb finds a way to orchestrate several engrossing storylines and pull them together in unexpected ways. This is a story that will allow you to become immersed in a maze of deceit and revenge, while savoring the bonds that families build together based on respect, trust, and love.
July 11, 2021
Great Variation
Sooo good! I loved everything about this story. Some angst, but not over much, with some intrigue to keep it all flowing nicely. Good character portrayals and dialogue, with some wonderfully expressed loving words between ODC. Very well written. Highly recommend.
Sooo good! I loved everything about this story. Some angst, but not over much, with some intrigue to keep it all flowing nicely. Good character portrayals and dialogue, with some wonderfully expressed loving words between ODC. Very well written. Highly recommend.
March 20, 2017
This is the last of the Webb books yet to read. I'm not really sure what took me so long because once I got the fever I could not help myself. I purposely saved this one for last as an unlikely couple was way more stressful on me, lol. The side characters are in this one as well. Not the villains but doctor Camryn and Walker are here. What I found unique in this one was Darcy was disowned by Charles at the request of his wife. Jane wanted to spare Lizzy of seeing a man she despised. Darcy always the gentleman honors Bingleys request but makes a vow that should he ever need him he will be there in an instant. Five years have passed and there are other reviews that go over Millie so I won't recap on that other than to say I liked her. There is her name and Emily that put me in the mind of other books I have read by the author which was fine because this one still stood on its own. Speaking of Emily I loved the bond her and Fitzwilliam share and while this had angst just like her other books I found it more tolerable than ones like an unlikely couple. I felt that way because while in the previous mentioned book Lizzy is set so against Darcy because of others filling her head with lies and part of my aggravation was Elizabeth telling her aunt how against being his wife she was. This one shows the softer side of our girl as immediately after Darcy's disastrous purposal she doubts her words she said back. Five years have passed and while she poses as a mother she still can't take her eyes off," The Man." Darcy himself has learned to accept he shall never have her but just like Lizzy as soon as they lock eyes she once again owns his heart. Again Darcy assisting her in protecting Emily taking them both to pemberely was reminiscent of another of my favorite books Webb has written. This gave us time as the reader to spend time with the couple. A lot to love about this one with colonel Fitzwilliam finding his love and we get to enjoy seeing him get worked up at his wife and her condition. If you've read others by this author and enjoyed her magic you won't be disappointed with this one. Just like stated at one point by Lizzy his word is his bond. Enjoy!
August 4, 2016
I very much enjoy Brenda Webb's writing and "Darcy and Elizabeth: A Promise Kept" was no exception. It was an interesting switch on the usual variation, taking place several years after Elizabeth refused Darcy's proposal in Kent. There were just a couple of things that took the story down from 5 to 4 stars for me, and I will elaborate further down in the review.
Due to Jane's belief Elizabeth still does not like Mr. Darcy and would be uncomfortable in his presence, Charles Bingley breaks off his friendship with Darcy just after his marriage to Jane. Darcy accepts this gracefully, but promises to be there for Bingley should he ever need his help. It is now five years later and Bingley calls on Darcy for his assistance. Charles must leave for Spain without taking his family and needs Darcy to watch over his business interests and family while he is gone. This was very well done and believable. I could see Darcy doing this.
During the prior five years, Darcy has never married, but believes he has reached a point where he can move on. Just as Bingley asks for his help, Darcy finally determines he must marry, and if it cannot be Elizabeth, the next best would be to marry one of his best friends from childhood, Lady Melinda Markham. Mellie, as she is called, is a widow with two young children. She believes Darcy suffers from unrequited love and has asked him to give their relationship time to bloom before announcing an engagement. She believes herself in love with him, however, and hopes a one year postponement will give him time to realize his love for her.
Elizabeth is now known as Mrs. Gardiner and has a young child with her, Emily, who she refers to as her daughter. However, this is a ruse to protect herself and the child from the child's evil father Lord Van Lynden. When the safety of Elizabeth and Emily is threatened, Darcy brings them to Pemberley. Coincidentally, this is as Lady Markham and her family are arriving for an extended stay, with the idea of Darcy and Mellie working on their romantic relationship.
The story proceeds along several lines with multiple plots under way. Bingley's cousin has been robbing him and worse, and may escape to America. Van Lynden is involved in a plot to assassinate a high ranking foreign secretary, Lord Castlereagh. Colonel Fitzwilliam is involved in the attempt to stop the assassination and capture the perpetrators. Jane Bingley is expecting a baby and all are attempting to keep her subdued, so are trying to keep much from her. Darcy and Elizabeth, of course, are still in love but not sure how the other feels. Lady Markham is not sure what is happening, but is starting to get an inkling. Meanwhile, Colonel Fitzwilliam is hiding his own feelings.
I so enjoyed the development of each of the various plots, stories and romances. Brenda J. Webb has a way to keep you involved and questioning what will happen next. The dialogue is well done and the relationships are very interesting.
However, there were a few holes here and there that could have resolved things sooner, or just seemed unlikely. There were some minor ones, like a name mixup that I found highly unlikely. And, the romantic resolution was just a little too convenient. I also found a couple of the other characters a little unnecessary - Mr Smith and Carney, specifically.
The main hole, however, for me was - why was Darcy pursuing Lord Van Lynden and not the government authorities who had evidence of his involvement in the assassination plot? This just didn't make sense to me, and some of the threat to all parties being resolved as it was could have been simpler if Van Lynden was simply pursued and captured as the criminal he was. Darcy could have accompanied the soldiers, etc., but working independently seemed a little odd.
However, this was a very enjoyable and intriguing set of escapades with our usual happy ever afters and wonderful romance. I do recommend this for lovers of JAFF. And, I look forward to Brend J. Webbs next story!
Due to Jane's belief Elizabeth still does not like Mr. Darcy and would be uncomfortable in his presence, Charles Bingley breaks off his friendship with Darcy just after his marriage to Jane. Darcy accepts this gracefully, but promises to be there for Bingley should he ever need his help. It is now five years later and Bingley calls on Darcy for his assistance. Charles must leave for Spain without taking his family and needs Darcy to watch over his business interests and family while he is gone. This was very well done and believable. I could see Darcy doing this.
During the prior five years, Darcy has never married, but believes he has reached a point where he can move on. Just as Bingley asks for his help, Darcy finally determines he must marry, and if it cannot be Elizabeth, the next best would be to marry one of his best friends from childhood, Lady Melinda Markham. Mellie, as she is called, is a widow with two young children. She believes Darcy suffers from unrequited love and has asked him to give their relationship time to bloom before announcing an engagement. She believes herself in love with him, however, and hopes a one year postponement will give him time to realize his love for her.
Elizabeth is now known as Mrs. Gardiner and has a young child with her, Emily, who she refers to as her daughter. However, this is a ruse to protect herself and the child from the child's evil father Lord Van Lynden. When the safety of Elizabeth and Emily is threatened, Darcy brings them to Pemberley. Coincidentally, this is as Lady Markham and her family are arriving for an extended stay, with the idea of Darcy and Mellie working on their romantic relationship.
The story proceeds along several lines with multiple plots under way. Bingley's cousin has been robbing him and worse, and may escape to America. Van Lynden is involved in a plot to assassinate a high ranking foreign secretary, Lord Castlereagh. Colonel Fitzwilliam is involved in the attempt to stop the assassination and capture the perpetrators. Jane Bingley is expecting a baby and all are attempting to keep her subdued, so are trying to keep much from her. Darcy and Elizabeth, of course, are still in love but not sure how the other feels. Lady Markham is not sure what is happening, but is starting to get an inkling. Meanwhile, Colonel Fitzwilliam is hiding his own feelings.
I so enjoyed the development of each of the various plots, stories and romances. Brenda J. Webb has a way to keep you involved and questioning what will happen next. The dialogue is well done and the relationships are very interesting.
However, there were a few holes here and there that could have resolved things sooner, or just seemed unlikely. There were some minor ones, like a name mixup that I found highly unlikely. And, the romantic resolution was just a little too convenient. I also found a couple of the other characters a little unnecessary - Mr Smith and Carney, specifically.
The main hole, however, for me was - why was Darcy pursuing Lord Van Lynden and not the government authorities who had evidence of his involvement in the assassination plot? This just didn't make sense to me, and some of the threat to all parties being resolved as it was could have been simpler if Van Lynden was simply pursued and captured as the criminal he was. Darcy could have accompanied the soldiers, etc., but working independently seemed a little odd.
However, this was a very enjoyable and intriguing set of escapades with our usual happy ever afters and wonderful romance. I do recommend this for lovers of JAFF. And, I look forward to Brend J. Webbs next story!
July 29, 2016
A P&P what if Sequel, mystery, international intrigue... in this what if we are asked had Lizzy not gone to Pemberley but Bingley returned to Jane; but cut ties with Darcy as not to make Lizzy uncomfortable. Lydia was not saved nor returned to her family. Mr. & Mrs. Bennet have been killed, Jane is married and living in Richmond, Kitty is married and living in Meryton, Mary is married and living near Meryton while Lizzy, now Mrs. Gardiner, is living with Bingley and serving as their governess. Mr. Darcy is yet unmarried; while Georgiana has married and moved to Ireland.
When Darcy receives a letter from Bingley begging for help he immediately heads to their estate. Bingley is very ill, Jane is expecting and Bingley needs Darcy to take charge as he heads to Spain for treatment.
My main criticism of the book / story / plot is that it is too broad and complex. We have the 'who is harming Bingley' Mystery, we have the keep Lizzy safe from her former employer 'intrigue', and the keeping the government Minister safe from the plotters conundrum. We also has the Darcy's other potential widowed bride subplot, the Col. Fitzwilliam's brother is rake incident, Bingley's cousin's planned escape complication, luring Lizzy from Pemberley twist. There is angst atop drama atop suspense... it is like a tragedy sundae.
Another thing I found annoying was the author's use of location titles like stage direction... and some really, really, unnecessary scenes. One that sticks in my mind was Colonel Fitzwilliam arriving at Darcy's townhouse while Darcy was preparing to go out and a dialogue about saddling unsaddling the horses. In a 400+ page book this is just excessive.
However the book is well written, the plots work, the drama is spot on and the story is compelling.
When Darcy receives a letter from Bingley begging for help he immediately heads to their estate. Bingley is very ill, Jane is expecting and Bingley needs Darcy to take charge as he heads to Spain for treatment.
My main criticism of the book / story / plot is that it is too broad and complex. We have the 'who is harming Bingley' Mystery, we have the keep Lizzy safe from her former employer 'intrigue', and the keeping the government Minister safe from the plotters conundrum. We also has the Darcy's other potential widowed bride subplot, the Col. Fitzwilliam's brother is rake incident, Bingley's cousin's planned escape complication, luring Lizzy from Pemberley twist. There is angst atop drama atop suspense... it is like a tragedy sundae.
Another thing I found annoying was the author's use of location titles like stage direction... and some really, really, unnecessary scenes. One that sticks in my mind was Colonel Fitzwilliam arriving at Darcy's townhouse while Darcy was preparing to go out and a dialogue about saddling unsaddling the horses. In a 400+ page book this is just excessive.
However the book is well written, the plots work, the drama is spot on and the story is compelling.
July 5, 2021
A slog.
This book was a long, slow slog. The author has a good grasp of grammar and is capable of putting together a novel. And that’s about all I have to say about it. More comments in my notes. While it’s readable, I didn’t read beyond the 95% mark because I had long since stopped caring about any of the characters. I don’t recommend this book, but that makes it average within the genre. I found the characters rather insufferable and didn’t enjoy spending time with them. For all the big fuss the author makes in the “about this book” pre-amble about how her characters believe in god and like to pray, I found they had, at best, a very shallow understanding of god and prayer. Sort of the Reader’s Digest version of religious understanding.
This book was a long, slow slog. The author has a good grasp of grammar and is capable of putting together a novel. And that’s about all I have to say about it. More comments in my notes. While it’s readable, I didn’t read beyond the 95% mark because I had long since stopped caring about any of the characters. I don’t recommend this book, but that makes it average within the genre. I found the characters rather insufferable and didn’t enjoy spending time with them. For all the big fuss the author makes in the “about this book” pre-amble about how her characters believe in god and like to pray, I found they had, at best, a very shallow understanding of god and prayer. Sort of the Reader’s Digest version of religious understanding.
March 8, 2021
The reason for the 5 year separation was a bit of a stretch and not really believable. You learn fairly early on in the book (like less than 10% of the way through) that it’s because after Elizabeth tells Jane about Darcy rejected proposal, Jane thinks Elizabeth really despises Darcy still and tells Charles to break off his friendship with Darcy. She says at one point, and I quote “I know how much you despise him. That is why I had Charles break off all contact with him after our marriage, so that you would not be thrown into his company ever again. I want you to know that I was greatly upset when Charles decided to leave him in charge of our well-being whilst he is in Spain, and I tried to convince him that it was not a wise decision. Still, he would not listen.”
Really? Sweet Jane who sees the good in everyone? Would ask her husband to dump his BFF of many years.... for something like “I don’t want my sister uncomfortable”.... ?? In the original P&P, Elizabeth goes to visit Charlotte and Collins after Collins’ rejected proposal.... so as you can imagine, this story’s reason for the separation is hard to believe! A complete breakoff?!
Also, Elizabeth lost some of her courage, at least that’s how it seemed like when she seemed to just take certain things as is without attempting to stand up for herself. See spoiler #1 and #2 at end of review if you want to know some examples.
Really? Sweet Jane who sees the good in everyone? Would ask her husband to dump his BFF of many years.... for something like “I don’t want my sister uncomfortable”.... ?? In the original P&P, Elizabeth goes to visit Charlotte and Collins after Collins’ rejected proposal.... so as you can imagine, this story’s reason for the separation is hard to believe! A complete breakoff?!
Also, Elizabeth lost some of her courage, at least that’s how it seemed like when she seemed to just take certain things as is without attempting to stand up for herself. See spoiler #1 and #2 at end of review if you want to know some examples.
January 26, 2018
Unputdownable!
Heart-wrenchingly thrilling, romantic and passionate. This was a page-turner for sure.
Adore ODC in this book, they were perfectly portrayed. The best trait of Webb's books is the amount of pages she saves for happiness in the end. I can take any level of angst when my equilibrium is restored by a lovely happy ending...
This book does not disappoint in that respect.
Five years have passed since the proposal in Kent. Darcy is on the verge of convincing a long time friend into marrying him when his long estranged friend Bingley needs his help.
Rushing to Richmond he finds his friend ill, a very pregnant Jane and his long lost love as the Bingley governess.
Widowed with a child, a lot is amiss, even more is not as it seems and their troubles have barely started. Theft, poisoning, murder attempt of the foreign minister is just some of what lies ahead of ODC and their friends and family. But love conquers all and there is a delightful HEA towards the end.
I absolutely loved this book and heartily recommend it!
Heart-wrenchingly thrilling, romantic and passionate. This was a page-turner for sure.
Adore ODC in this book, they were perfectly portrayed. The best trait of Webb's books is the amount of pages she saves for happiness in the end. I can take any level of angst when my equilibrium is restored by a lovely happy ending...
This book does not disappoint in that respect.
Five years have passed since the proposal in Kent. Darcy is on the verge of convincing a long time friend into marrying him when his long estranged friend Bingley needs his help.
Rushing to Richmond he finds his friend ill, a very pregnant Jane and his long lost love as the Bingley governess.
Widowed with a child, a lot is amiss, even more is not as it seems and their troubles have barely started. Theft, poisoning, murder attempt of the foreign minister is just some of what lies ahead of ODC and their friends and family. But love conquers all and there is a delightful HEA towards the end.
I absolutely loved this book and heartily recommend it!
June 7, 2016
Unforgettable...
In keeping his promise he started them on the path to happiness; but not before, in true Brenda Webb style, they overcame and conquer some seemingly insurmountable obstacles.
A word of advice... don't start reading if you have something important to do, you may end up not doing it!!
In keeping his promise he started them on the path to happiness; but not before, in true Brenda Webb style, they overcame and conquer some seemingly insurmountable obstacles.
A word of advice... don't start reading if you have something important to do, you may end up not doing it!!
April 22, 2016
This book has a very interesting story line. It kept me interested, but it was almost too much and a lot of things in the plot were very sudden.
May 3, 2016
A solid extension of the genre. Like Webb's style throughout.
October 24, 2017
4.5⭐️ Brenda Webb always creates such imaginative plots and subplots while weaving them all together. It's definitely a page turner.
Would of loved for some of the subplots to have a little more page time and clarification. Can't wait to read more of her stories.
Would of loved for some of the subplots to have a little more page time and clarification. Can't wait to read more of her stories.
May 12, 2016
Great book!
I liked everything about this book. The added characters, the suspenseful storyline, the background stories, the love between the main characters and the way the beloved Jane Austen characters stayed true to themselves. I took one star off because I felt like the story line was sometimes more concerned with developing the suspense story and I would have loved to hear and read more of the interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth. The love story was there but way too short and sudden. How about developing the getting together between Darcy and Elizabeth in the same way the other stories around them were developed. That would have made the book perfect....and yes, the love was PG. I like how the respect for marriage was kept alive! But again.....a little more would not have hurt.
I liked everything about this book. The added characters, the suspenseful storyline, the background stories, the love between the main characters and the way the beloved Jane Austen characters stayed true to themselves. I took one star off because I felt like the story line was sometimes more concerned with developing the suspense story and I would have loved to hear and read more of the interaction between Darcy and Elizabeth. The love story was there but way too short and sudden. How about developing the getting together between Darcy and Elizabeth in the same way the other stories around them were developed. That would have made the book perfect....and yes, the love was PG. I like how the respect for marriage was kept alive! But again.....a little more would not have hurt.
August 28, 2017
A delightful adventure. Six years after last seeing each other in Kent, Elizabeth and Darcy are thrown together when Charles Bingley, married to Jane, becomes deathly ill and asks Darcy, who remained unmarried and with whom he had been estranged, to care for his pregnant wife, two daughters, and Elizabeth who remains as their governess while he sails for Spain to improve his health. Darcy keeps his promise to Darcy and cares for Bingley's family and business. But Bingley's cousin, co-owner of Bingley's business, has been cheating him, and Darcy has much to unravel. More adventures and surprises fill this novel which contains nary a dull moment.
I had read this story just over a year ago and very much enjoyed it but somehow never fully reviewed it. It's a wonderful tale that twisted and turned throughout its length. A stunning read! I would give it a 4.5 if I could!
I had read this story just over a year ago and very much enjoyed it but somehow never fully reviewed it. It's a wonderful tale that twisted and turned throughout its length. A stunning read! I would give it a 4.5 if I could!
April 25, 2016
I loved it!!! I lost sleep reading this book. What I loved most about this book is that It didn't drag on and on in endless unnecessary dialogue and it kept my attention. What I couldn't wrap my head around was Richard's marriage and how it came about. I mean I know he loved her but it seemed forced the way her feelings changed from loving one man for so many years then falling in love with Richard in a matter of months. I suppose it did wrap up the story but it wasn't my favorite part. Of course how can you not fall in love with Col. Richard Fitzwilliam:)
August 5, 2016
My review is on Amazon and I read it when it first came out!
April 13, 2016
I will start by saying that I own every book Brenda Webb has written so I had to buy this one. And just like with all her other novels this one does not disappoint. I went into this book wanting to hate the woman who Darcy has entered into a secret agreement with but I ended up liking her. Especially as she doesn't try to cling to Darcy all that much after she finds out that William and Elizabeth love each other. As a added bonus we don't just get one plot to separate our lovers in this story we get two. The reader gets more villains than we can keep up with in this novel and I like it. I am disappointed that some characters get away with their villainy in this tale (Caroline) while the majority are punished. I didn't like how some story lines in this book got pushed to the back burner while some got major center stage action. While I did enjoy this novel it's not my favorite out of all of Ms. Webb's books.
January 26, 2017
A promise leads to true Love
What can I say, I loved every minute of this story. It starts out about five years after Hunsford and because of a promise that Darcy makes to Bingley, our ill fated lovers get a second chance.
Now this story is not all romance but actually fraught with lots of obstacles and angst. But all this sadness makes for a wonderful journey and just to let you know the villains are all new and really cause lots of problems. And there are also new characters that you will love and definitely find diverting. No Collins but a new bumbling fool. This story was perfect and I highly recommend this book to all JAFF readers!
What can I say, I loved every minute of this story. It starts out about five years after Hunsford and because of a promise that Darcy makes to Bingley, our ill fated lovers get a second chance.
Now this story is not all romance but actually fraught with lots of obstacles and angst. But all this sadness makes for a wonderful journey and just to let you know the villains are all new and really cause lots of problems. And there are also new characters that you will love and definitely find diverting. No Collins but a new bumbling fool. This story was perfect and I highly recommend this book to all JAFF readers!
October 5, 2016
Five years have passed since the awful proposal of Darcy to Elizabeth at Hunsford, five years kept apart by misunderstanding. But now Bingley is ill and his business in trouble and he calls upon Darcy to keep his promise and look after his family. Can prior arrangements, intrigue, and a political conspiracy still keep them apart.
We have new main characters in Countess Millicent and Lord Van Lynden. And it is good to see that Colonel Fitzwilliam plays a much bigger role than in the original, with Lord and Lady Matlock also here.
An enjoyable tale with mystery and likeable characters who are thankfully not overshadowed by Darcy and Elizabeth
We have new main characters in Countess Millicent and Lord Van Lynden. And it is good to see that Colonel Fitzwilliam plays a much bigger role than in the original, with Lord and Lady Matlock also here.
An enjoyable tale with mystery and likeable characters who are thankfully not overshadowed by Darcy and Elizabeth
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April 8, 2016Very detailed and interesting!
I loved the historical facts included in this lengthy Pride and Prejudice variation. Could not put this book down! I look forward to any and all books you write!!!
I loved the historical facts included in this lengthy Pride and Prejudice variation. Could not put this book down! I look forward to any and all books you write!!!
December 5, 2021
Nice story
A late in life second chance love story for Darcy and Lizzy. I loved this Darcys and Lizzy ready to make the plunge and admit their love foe each other five years after Lunsford!! Great book!
A late in life second chance love story for Darcy and Lizzy. I loved this Darcys and Lizzy ready to make the plunge and admit their love foe each other five years after Lunsford!! Great book!
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