Ok, I'm going to say right up front--I have mild OCD, which causes me problems with poorly edited/written works, and well, this one had me totally peeved.
The story (novella length at best, but slightly longer than a short story) could have been a fun read, but the author needs to take a few classes to learn more about their craft. The "feel" of the characters was off--the MC, who is supposed to be an adult about the age of 27 or so, acts and feels more like a high schooler. She also refers to her father as "the old man" about half the time, which very few woman/girls do. At one point in the middle of the story, when she's talking to the H, she doesn't know why her father gave up his job as an attorney, when it says right at the beginning of the story that he'd had a heart attack, and decided to "stop and smell the roses" essentially. The H is supposed to be a famous actor who is about the same age as the MC, but he sometimes acts like he's closer in age to her father than to her.
The author should have sprung for a professional editor for this work. He/she uses the wrong words a lot (their instead of there, two for to or too, etc. etc. etc.) There are partial sentences that run into other sentences. Sometimes to the point where you are left wondering what the heck the sentence is supposed to actually SAY. Run on sentences, improper punctuation, misspelled words (this is in addition to the use of the wrong word previously mentioned) and sometimes forgetting what sex the person talking is (the MC is a "he" in one sentence while the H is a she in a different place in the book.)
However, you will notice that I did give the book 2 stars--those stars are because I could see the promise in the story. And, if I didn't have the issues that I do with my OCD, I might have enjoyed it a great deal more, but those issues kept me from getting totally lost in the story. And they slowed down my reading time tremendously as well. I am a 350-400 page book-a-day reader normally, and this 76 page story took me 3 days to get through because I kept having to put it aside while I got over the OCD issues.
If you don't have those kinds of issues, I think you might enjoy the book. On the other hand, if you DO have the issues, stay away from this book.