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Within the Veil
They never should have met. But they might be made for each other.
Feya Broon, a Scottish half-gypsy, knows what it is to go hungry. Trapped in the Edinburgh tenements with a father lost to his past and only the faded memory of her mother's faith, Feya is desperate to provide for her siblings. When an ill-conceived plan leads to thievery, she finds herself in the last place she'd ever want to be--captured by an English palace guard. But there's something about this man that tears at every preconceived notion she's ever had.
Alasdair Cairncross never dreamed he'd be forced to transport a gypsy woman halfway across the wilds of Scotland. The timing is disastrous, considering his fiancée's imminent arrival and his father's political goals. Not only that, but the fiery young woman threatens to lay bare secrets Alasdair would rather keep hidden. And the farther they travel together, the more conflicted he finds himself with duty--both to the crown and to the plans his family has for him.
As their walls begin to crumble, Feya and Alasdair must fight to survive a decades-old feud, a Highland kidnapping, and the awakening of their own hearts.
Feya Broon, a Scottish half-gypsy, knows what it is to go hungry. Trapped in the Edinburgh tenements with a father lost to his past and only the faded memory of her mother's faith, Feya is desperate to provide for her siblings. When an ill-conceived plan leads to thievery, she finds herself in the last place she'd ever want to be--captured by an English palace guard. But there's something about this man that tears at every preconceived notion she's ever had.
Alasdair Cairncross never dreamed he'd be forced to transport a gypsy woman halfway across the wilds of Scotland. The timing is disastrous, considering his fiancée's imminent arrival and his father's political goals. Not only that, but the fiery young woman threatens to lay bare secrets Alasdair would rather keep hidden. And the farther they travel together, the more conflicted he finds himself with duty--both to the crown and to the plans his family has for him.
As their walls begin to crumble, Feya and Alasdair must fight to survive a decades-old feud, a Highland kidnapping, and the awakening of their own hearts.
452 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 24, 2016
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About the author
Brandy Vallance
3 books272 followersBrandy Vallance fell in love with the Victorian time period at a young age, loving the customs, manners, and especially the intricate rules of love. Since time travel is theoretically impossible, she lives in the nineteenth century vicariously through her novels. Unaccountable amounts of black tea have fueled this ambition. Brandy hopes to avoid a similar fate as the writer, Honoré de Balzac, who met his death via caffeine poisoning. At this point, the balance may not be tipped in her favor. Brandy's love of tea can only be paralleled by her love of Masterpiece Theater Classics, deep conversations, and a good book.
Brandy is the 2013 Operation First Novel winner and the 2012 winner of the ACFW Genesis Contest for historical romance. www.brandyvallance.com
Brandy is the 2013 Operation First Novel winner and the 2012 winner of the ACFW Genesis Contest for historical romance. www.brandyvallance.com
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August 17, 2016
Lushly descriptive and emotionally evocative with touches of humor and spunk to drive the romance along, Within the Veil is not only lovely to read but entertaining, as well. Add this one to your TBR -- it should not be missed! Highly recommended! ~USA TODAY
Passionate and riveting (with an absolutely gorgeous cover) Brandy Vallance's sophomore novel is impossible to put down until every last glimpse of Alasdair and Feya has been fully savored. The romantic tension steals your breath, yes, but the timely themes of racism and discrimination, synesthesia and abstinence, elevate this story to one of beautiful depth and make it exceedingly relevant for today's readers. ~RT BOOK REVIEWS, TOP PICK
One of the most passionately and powerfully written tales I've had the pleasure of reading, Within the Veil is an irresistible blend of Victorian Britain and Gypsy history with a refreshingly unique hero and unforgettable heroine. Written with the same panache that won her the Operation First Novel Contest, this second novel is sure to win many reading hearts. I only hope Feya and Alasdair's story has a sequel!
~Laura Frantz, author of A Moonbow Night
Lush and poignant, Within the Veil is a treasure in the historical fiction field. From the first page, Brandy Vallance's determined characters jumped into my heart and made me root for them equally--even as they fought each other and surprised me on every page. Vallance feeds all the senses and emotions while leading us through a fascinating story of Gypsies in Scotland--and the horrible racism that knows no age. Fans of Liz Curtis Higgs' Scottish novels will love Within the Veil, and readers of all historical romance will lose themselves in this gripping, page-turning read.
~Sally Bradley, author of Kept
Passionate and riveting (with an absolutely gorgeous cover) Brandy Vallance's sophomore novel is impossible to put down until every last glimpse of Alasdair and Feya has been fully savored. The romantic tension steals your breath, yes, but the timely themes of racism and discrimination, synesthesia and abstinence, elevate this story to one of beautiful depth and make it exceedingly relevant for today's readers. ~RT BOOK REVIEWS, TOP PICK
One of the most passionately and powerfully written tales I've had the pleasure of reading, Within the Veil is an irresistible blend of Victorian Britain and Gypsy history with a refreshingly unique hero and unforgettable heroine. Written with the same panache that won her the Operation First Novel Contest, this second novel is sure to win many reading hearts. I only hope Feya and Alasdair's story has a sequel!
~Laura Frantz, author of A Moonbow Night
Lush and poignant, Within the Veil is a treasure in the historical fiction field. From the first page, Brandy Vallance's determined characters jumped into my heart and made me root for them equally--even as they fought each other and surprised me on every page. Vallance feeds all the senses and emotions while leading us through a fascinating story of Gypsies in Scotland--and the horrible racism that knows no age. Fans of Liz Curtis Higgs' Scottish novels will love Within the Veil, and readers of all historical romance will lose themselves in this gripping, page-turning read.
~Sally Bradley, author of Kept
August 31, 2016
Beautiful and well written, Within the Veil is easily one of the best books I've ever read. It starts out heavy with poetic metaphors. Each and every word felt authentic to the time period and setting. I was sucked in immediately and consumed with the story until the very last word. The pacing was fast, from the dark despair Feya had at the start of the book to the Light she embraced toward the end. The adventures took me through the hills of beautiful Scotland. The romance really blew me away, the sweetness and longing, the quick wit and vivid details, all of it was a delicious treat! There were unexpected twist scattered throughout. And the characters.....Oh my...I'm just at a lost for words to describe them. I will say my curiosity had me scrolling through the author's Pinterest board. I wanted to see with more than my mind's eye the tenements, the castle and Alasdair's jacket. This novel will entertain you and more importantly uplift you spiritually. Go. Read. This book!
I won this novel from a blog giveaway. I was not ask to give a review.
I won this novel from a blog giveaway. I was not ask to give a review.
June 22, 2016
Brandy Vallance knocked my socks of with her debut novel The Covered Deep. Since that time, I’ve been following her on social media in eager anticipation of a sophomore novel. Within the Veil is here and (let me tell you!) it was soooo worth the wait. One of my favorite aspects of this story was how Brandy's characters grapple not only with one another but also with their faith. By not shying away from the more difficult topics of discrimination, poverty, and sexual purity this historical novel has relevant applications for us today.
Readers are introduced to Feya as she's slogging though life in the tenements of Edinburgh. Ever since her mother's passing, her father has existed in a continual state of inebriation. With the absence of both parents, she's forced to shoulder most of the responsibility for the care of three younger siblings. In a desperate effort to feed her family she makes a series of choices that are neither wise nor moral, though birthed out of a sacrificial love for the bairns. In time, the consequences of her actions led to a crisis of faith that both challenge and inspire me.
Alasdair Cairncross and Feya Broon would have had enough conflict just being cast into their roles as cop and robber, but Vallance doesn't stop there! In virtually every way she's made these two appear to be complete opposites. However, a secret from the Cairncross past could prove to be a bridge between their worlds. With more twists than a soft serve cone, you'll want to devour this book over the summer!
I received this book from the author for my honest review. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
Side Note:
A personal encounter with Romani gypsies during a recent mission trip provided me with a unique perspective into Feya's story and endeared me to her character almost instantly. While Brandy Vallnace has set Feya's story in 1885, prejudice towards gypsies still exist today.
Readers are introduced to Feya as she's slogging though life in the tenements of Edinburgh. Ever since her mother's passing, her father has existed in a continual state of inebriation. With the absence of both parents, she's forced to shoulder most of the responsibility for the care of three younger siblings. In a desperate effort to feed her family she makes a series of choices that are neither wise nor moral, though birthed out of a sacrificial love for the bairns. In time, the consequences of her actions led to a crisis of faith that both challenge and inspire me.
Alasdair Cairncross and Feya Broon would have had enough conflict just being cast into their roles as cop and robber, but Vallance doesn't stop there! In virtually every way she's made these two appear to be complete opposites. However, a secret from the Cairncross past could prove to be a bridge between their worlds. With more twists than a soft serve cone, you'll want to devour this book over the summer!
I received this book from the author for my honest review. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
Side Note:
A personal encounter with Romani gypsies during a recent mission trip provided me with a unique perspective into Feya's story and endeared me to her character almost instantly. While Brandy Vallnace has set Feya's story in 1885, prejudice towards gypsies still exist today.
July 19, 2016
What I Loved...
I recently read this quote and thought it summed up how I feel about Within The Veil perfectly.
"In a romance like this, the happily ever after is expected, the story is the journey." ~ Beth Erin
The journey of Feya and Alasdair is beautifully written. An emotionally satisfying read. Its been a few days and I still haven't picked up a new book to read. A definite book hangover.
What I Liked...
Lately, I have been so intrigued with bi-racial or ethnic heroes and heroines and I was happy to find that here.
POSSIBLE SPOILER: I really enjoyed that most of the book Feya and Alasdair are together, Usually books don't have the hero and heroine together so often, but Brandy did it so well. It didn't feel like overkill. For this plot it was necessary. But I enjoyed every minute of it. I guess this should have gone under the "What I Loved" section...END SPOILER
Other...
The cover is GORGEOUS! and I did picture Feya that way in my head.
POSSIBLE SPOILER: I was left wanting for a different ending between Alasdair's parents. They had chemistry. But it was tied up...I am just greedy...lol. END SPOILER
This book is a true gem and it is difficult reviewing without telling something juicy of the plot and I love you all too much to take away from the experience. So my suggestion is to go out and get the book. It's a beautiful story. A TRUE Christian fiction.
Disclaimer: This book was provided through Netgalley. The opinion of this book is my own and I was not paid or compensated for my review.
I recently read this quote and thought it summed up how I feel about Within The Veil perfectly.
"In a romance like this, the happily ever after is expected, the story is the journey." ~ Beth Erin
The journey of Feya and Alasdair is beautifully written. An emotionally satisfying read. Its been a few days and I still haven't picked up a new book to read. A definite book hangover.
What I Liked...
Lately, I have been so intrigued with bi-racial or ethnic heroes and heroines and I was happy to find that here.
POSSIBLE SPOILER: I really enjoyed that most of the book Feya and Alasdair are together, Usually books don't have the hero and heroine together so often, but Brandy did it so well. It didn't feel like overkill. For this plot it was necessary. But I enjoyed every minute of it. I guess this should have gone under the "What I Loved" section...END SPOILER
Other...
The cover is GORGEOUS! and I did picture Feya that way in my head.
POSSIBLE SPOILER: I was left wanting for a different ending between Alasdair's parents. They had chemistry. But it was tied up...I am just greedy...lol. END SPOILER
This book is a true gem and it is difficult reviewing without telling something juicy of the plot and I love you all too much to take away from the experience. So my suggestion is to go out and get the book. It's a beautiful story. A TRUE Christian fiction.
Disclaimer: This book was provided through Netgalley. The opinion of this book is my own and I was not paid or compensated for my review.
November 8, 2016
4.5 stars TOP PICK
June 24, 2016
I hate to say this, especially because I'm clearly in the minority here, but this book really didn't work for me. The story is fine, it's not a terrible book. But I had a hard time getting through it. It just felt very melodramatic and overwrought to me. Everything that could have been explained in a few words was described in several sentences instead. The minute descriptions were so long that I forgot what it was that was originally being referred to. Yes, sometimes that's great and provides mood and atmosphere. But sometimes it's okay to just say, "She shut the door." Every movement doesn't need be embellished. It became very distracting and I often had to go back a few sentences to remember what we had been talking about to begin with.
The comparisons often didn't make sense either. For example, "She was tired-tired like the snow falling on a wounded and rocking him into a wakeless sleep." Not only is that far too long and convoluted, but it makes no sense. She was tired like the snow? I realize the author is trying to paint a picture of the exhaustion of the "wakeless sleep" but what is actually technically being compared in the sentence is "tired like the snow" which makes no sense. And it was ALL like that. I also didn't think the Scottish accents were written very well. They sounded cliched and hokey to me. It just got very tiresome, and it was impossible for me to get into the story because of all that.
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The comparisons often didn't make sense either. For example, "She was tired-tired like the snow falling on a wounded and rocking him into a wakeless sleep." Not only is that far too long and convoluted, but it makes no sense. She was tired like the snow? I realize the author is trying to paint a picture of the exhaustion of the "wakeless sleep" but what is actually technically being compared in the sentence is "tired like the snow" which makes no sense. And it was ALL like that. I also didn't think the Scottish accents were written very well. They sounded cliched and hokey to me. It just got very tiresome, and it was impossible for me to get into the story because of all that.
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October 31, 2017
This was my first audiobook ever. I loved the narrator, her accent which really brings the reader to England. I also loved the different voices she did for the different characters either they be man, woman or children.
This was also my first book by this author. I loved the story. Feya and Alisdair are well developed characters with their own touching story. Their journey in this book is beautiful and through everything they go through, they are able to find God and who they really are.
I would really recommend this book and the audiobook to every fan of Christian historical fiction.
Thanks to the author for providing me with a complimentary copy of the audiobook!
This was also my first book by this author. I loved the story. Feya and Alisdair are well developed characters with their own touching story. Their journey in this book is beautiful and through everything they go through, they are able to find God and who they really are.
I would really recommend this book and the audiobook to every fan of Christian historical fiction.
Thanks to the author for providing me with a complimentary copy of the audiobook!
July 8, 2021
I enjoyed this book.
Enemies to lovers... check
And I mean they really, really started out as enemies!
Interesting setting...check. we get to see a different side of Victorian England/Scotland in this story and I really found learning about the Gypsy culture and how they were viewed very interesting.
The hero was downright hard in the beginning, but once she built the romance the chemistry was really good.
These characters really go through quite the journey.
This book's feel kinda reminded me of Kathleen Morgan's books.
Entertaining and interesting.
Enemies to lovers... check
And I mean they really, really started out as enemies!
Interesting setting...check. we get to see a different side of Victorian England/Scotland in this story and I really found learning about the Gypsy culture and how they were viewed very interesting.
The hero was downright hard in the beginning, but once she built the romance the chemistry was really good.
These characters really go through quite the journey.
This book's feel kinda reminded me of Kathleen Morgan's books.
Entertaining and interesting.
October 6, 2017
Wow! What a roller coaster of emotions! This was a very intense story and never a dull moment.
I enjoyed the spiritual content very much especially toward the end when it is explained on how to become a Christian. And the scripture that was shared throughout the book. That was one of my favorite parts.
I listened to this book. I will have to say that due to the Scottish accent and long names it was at times hard to understand. I would have to back up frequently. I would have like to have had a printed copy to reference when things would get confusing.
However I did not care for the intense passion between the characters. It was more than I would have preferred. But I will have to say the author never crossed the line to be unbiblical but she came very, very close.
I received a complimentary copy of this audio-book and was under no obligation to post a review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I enjoyed the spiritual content very much especially toward the end when it is explained on how to become a Christian. And the scripture that was shared throughout the book. That was one of my favorite parts.
I listened to this book. I will have to say that due to the Scottish accent and long names it was at times hard to understand. I would have to back up frequently. I would have like to have had a printed copy to reference when things would get confusing.
However I did not care for the intense passion between the characters. It was more than I would have preferred. But I will have to say the author never crossed the line to be unbiblical but she came very, very close.
I received a complimentary copy of this audio-book and was under no obligation to post a review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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June 26, 2018As a huge fan of The Covered Deep, I was dying to read this book and was not disappointed.
Feya is a Scotch half-Gypsy trapped by poverty among Edinburgh's slums and desperate to feed her starving family, with little thought for cost to herself---or the law. Alasdair Cairncross becomes her fateful and stalwart (and unlikely) protector.
This is a tale of revenge, redemption and grace underscored by intricate secrets and a slow, passionate journey toward love.
As with the Covered Deep, setting plays a starring role as the backdrop for the careful character development. Each is spun in Vallance's customarily competent pen and surprising handle of language.
Part adventure, and intelligently aware of its theological themes, Within the Veil is a sweeping romance and a unique and poignant treatise on love: for land, for justice, for family and for the person you least expect to fall for.
Feya is a Scotch half-Gypsy trapped by poverty among Edinburgh's slums and desperate to feed her starving family, with little thought for cost to herself---or the law. Alasdair Cairncross becomes her fateful and stalwart (and unlikely) protector.
This is a tale of revenge, redemption and grace underscored by intricate secrets and a slow, passionate journey toward love.
As with the Covered Deep, setting plays a starring role as the backdrop for the careful character development. Each is spun in Vallance's customarily competent pen and surprising handle of language.
Part adventure, and intelligently aware of its theological themes, Within the Veil is a sweeping romance and a unique and poignant treatise on love: for land, for justice, for family and for the person you least expect to fall for.
June 28, 2016
Lyrical. Evocative. Completely unforgettable.
These are just a few of the words that come to mind as I read Within the Veil. I read an incredible amount of books, and this book was like a breath of fresh air. While many books in the Christian fiction genre tend to be predictable and more focused on the happily ever after, Vallance focuses on character development. The two main characters were relatable as REAL people and not overly religious or stiffly “too perfect.” While the book was set in Victorian England and Scotland, the characters struggled with real issues and real temptations.
Not only were the characters fully developed and well rounded, Vallance painted an incredible picture of the scenery and the wilds of the Scottish Highlands seemed to come alive for me. This book was incredibly well researched, and I learned more about a piece of English history that I never considered before. I wholeheartedly recommend this book to everyone who loves historical fiction.
A MUST READ.
These are just a few of the words that come to mind as I read Within the Veil. I read an incredible amount of books, and this book was like a breath of fresh air. While many books in the Christian fiction genre tend to be predictable and more focused on the happily ever after, Vallance focuses on character development. The two main characters were relatable as REAL people and not overly religious or stiffly “too perfect.” While the book was set in Victorian England and Scotland, the characters struggled with real issues and real temptations.
Not only were the characters fully developed and well rounded, Vallance painted an incredible picture of the scenery and the wilds of the Scottish Highlands seemed to come alive for me. This book was incredibly well researched, and I learned more about a piece of English history that I never considered before. I wholeheartedly recommend this book to everyone who loves historical fiction.
A MUST READ.
September 12, 2017
Since I read Brandy Vallance’s The Covered Deep awhile a couple of years ago, I have been anxiously awaiting her second novel. I’m pleased to say that Within the Veil was worth the wait and was everything I could have hoped for.
Within the Veil has one of my favorite features in novels: Unique characters. From the main characters Feya and Alasdair to even the minor characters that only show up for a few chapters, they were all distinct and interesting. Feya and Alasdair both have ailments that they have to deal with and this was one of my favorite things—especially Alasdair’s seeing colors. Vallance does a wonderful job of capturing this along with some of the sentiments about it from the era.
There honestly was so much to love about this book. There’s a wonderful coming to faith story for one of the characters. A passionate romance (while I wouldn’t say Vallance crossed any lines here, there may be some things that are a bit much from some readers) and an all around entertaining and unpredictable journey through Scotland.
Since I had the pleasure of having the audio book to review, I will add that I really enjoyed the authenticity Joanna Stephens added to the story with a charming Scottish accent and various voices. It took a bit for me to acclimated to it but once I did, I had no problem understanding the story. And I would dare say even enjoyed it a bit more because of the way her voice helped these characters come a bit more alive. My one regret is that I wish I would have had the text of the story to easily reread portions of or to see names since so many of them in this book are unfamiliar to me. There were a few moments in the story I felt a bit lost in where I think if I could have gone back and reread I would not have felt like I missed something.
All in all, this was a most excellent book and one that I would highly recommend.
**I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.**
Within the Veil has one of my favorite features in novels: Unique characters. From the main characters Feya and Alasdair to even the minor characters that only show up for a few chapters, they were all distinct and interesting. Feya and Alasdair both have ailments that they have to deal with and this was one of my favorite things—especially Alasdair’s seeing colors. Vallance does a wonderful job of capturing this along with some of the sentiments about it from the era.
There honestly was so much to love about this book. There’s a wonderful coming to faith story for one of the characters. A passionate romance (while I wouldn’t say Vallance crossed any lines here, there may be some things that are a bit much from some readers) and an all around entertaining and unpredictable journey through Scotland.
Since I had the pleasure of having the audio book to review, I will add that I really enjoyed the authenticity Joanna Stephens added to the story with a charming Scottish accent and various voices. It took a bit for me to acclimated to it but once I did, I had no problem understanding the story. And I would dare say even enjoyed it a bit more because of the way her voice helped these characters come a bit more alive. My one regret is that I wish I would have had the text of the story to easily reread portions of or to see names since so many of them in this book are unfamiliar to me. There were a few moments in the story I felt a bit lost in where I think if I could have gone back and reread I would not have felt like I missed something.
All in all, this was a most excellent book and one that I would highly recommend.
**I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.**
August 30, 2017
My Thoughts on the Story: I was hooked from the moment it started. This one felt so outside of the box in terms of standard Christian Fiction. And I mean that as a great compliment! I loved it!! The characters were properly developed, even down to the villain. The setting was rich and easy to envision. Vallance stepped out and gave her hero a unique ability or disability, depending on your viewpoint. This helped to set him, and the entire novel, further apart from the norm.
The one thing I would caution is that while Vallance didn’t go too far in terms of passion for a Christian Fiction novel, she went plenty far enough. Within the Veil would be more appropriate for a mature audience.
My Thoughts on the Audio Version: Everyone’s idea of an enjoyable reading voice will be different but this narrator was among my favorites. I liked her overall speaking voice and appreciated how she was able to slip into thicker Scottish accents when needed.
However, it takes a little time to adjust to her speech and be able to follow the story. I had to find some quiet time when I could focus on the story more than anything else.
One thing I would have liked to have seen differently is a longer pause when switching between view points.
Rating and Recommendation: I’m giving Within the Veil 5 stars and recommend it to those who enjoy Christian Historical Fiction, a clean Gypsy story, or a Scottish setting.
~ I received a copy from the author. All thoughts are my own. I was not compensated for this review.
The one thing I would caution is that while Vallance didn’t go too far in terms of passion for a Christian Fiction novel, she went plenty far enough. Within the Veil would be more appropriate for a mature audience.
My Thoughts on the Audio Version: Everyone’s idea of an enjoyable reading voice will be different but this narrator was among my favorites. I liked her overall speaking voice and appreciated how she was able to slip into thicker Scottish accents when needed.
However, it takes a little time to adjust to her speech and be able to follow the story. I had to find some quiet time when I could focus on the story more than anything else.
One thing I would have liked to have seen differently is a longer pause when switching between view points.
Rating and Recommendation: I’m giving Within the Veil 5 stars and recommend it to those who enjoy Christian Historical Fiction, a clean Gypsy story, or a Scottish setting.
~ I received a copy from the author. All thoughts are my own. I was not compensated for this review.
July 26, 2017
Amazing story....very painful description of poverty and life as a gypsy but beautifully powerful redemption tale set in Scotland. I love the descriptions throughout the book of synesthesia and the explanation at the back about this real life disorder that I had never heard of. Excellent writing and heart pumping adventure! Romance on the edge but breath taking.....faith struggles dealt with in a deep and meaningful manner.
September 14, 2017
I have a confession, I sometimes judge a book by its cover. I know you aren’t supposed to, but let’s be honest, we’ve all done it before. That said, I was immediately captivated by the beautiful colors of this cover and knew I wanted to read this book. I was pleased to see that color played an important role in the story and enjoyed reading about synesthesia, a phenomenon I think I had heard of only once before. The author gives some more details about synesthesia in her author’s note as well sharing her own family’s experience.
The writing was beautiful and flowing so that I was easily immersed in the slums, castles and countryside of Victorian Scotland. The tenements of Edinburgh felt claustrophobic with their heavy coal smoke and squalid conditions. The Highlands were gorgeous and expansive.
Feya Broon and Alasdair Cairncross were lead characters I found it easy to connect with. Faults and weakness, dreams and disappointments made these characters feel human and accessible. The romance in this story felt fresh and the author wasn’t afraid to break away from the usual, overplayed formula of Christian romance. Overall, I very much enjoyed this story and look forward to more from this author.
I also listened to the audio version of this book and very much enjoyed the narrator’s performance. Her voice was rich and pleasant and her delivery was animated but not overdramatic.
The writing was beautiful and flowing so that I was easily immersed in the slums, castles and countryside of Victorian Scotland. The tenements of Edinburgh felt claustrophobic with their heavy coal smoke and squalid conditions. The Highlands were gorgeous and expansive.
Feya Broon and Alasdair Cairncross were lead characters I found it easy to connect with. Faults and weakness, dreams and disappointments made these characters feel human and accessible. The romance in this story felt fresh and the author wasn’t afraid to break away from the usual, overplayed formula of Christian romance. Overall, I very much enjoyed this story and look forward to more from this author.
I also listened to the audio version of this book and very much enjoyed the narrator’s performance. Her voice was rich and pleasant and her delivery was animated but not overdramatic.
July 1, 2016
I about cried as I turned the last page of Brandy Vallance’s newly released novel, Within the Veil. And I am so not a crier! This incredibly tender story is absolutely stunning – from cover to cover and every ink stained, heartfelt, adventurous page in-between. Within the Veil’s raw, organic beauty will move you in the depth of your soul. It is an absolute MUST READ!!
Feya Broon is a spirited, lively Scottish half-gypsy woman who stands out amidst the lackluster Edinburgh tenements. After a desperate attempt to steal from royalty in order to feed her family, Feya is captured by the palace guard on duty, Alasdair Cairncross, who must transport her across the wilderness of Scotland for trial. Two people have never been more opposite! While Feya is free-spirited, beautiful, and saucy, Alasdair is a haunted, rugged, and duty bound. These two butt heads more than once, creating magnificent conflict that will keep you turning the pages.
Within the Veil is a truly unique story with its focus on gypsies and the racism directed towards their people, Alasdair’s “mind problem” of seeing auras for everything around him, Feya’s struggle to come to terms with who she is as a biracial woman in a society who doesn’t accept anything less than those of pure genealogy. It is a mesmerizing tale that will take you on a journey through back alley slums littered with desperation, royal palaces filled with gold beyond imagination, and wild woods laced with anticipation. Within the Veil is without a doubt a must read and because I’m so enamored with this novel, I’m going to give a reader a copy of the book for free!! Head over to my blog to enter to win a copy of this novel: http://wp.me/p1j4UP-Uu
Feya Broon is a spirited, lively Scottish half-gypsy woman who stands out amidst the lackluster Edinburgh tenements. After a desperate attempt to steal from royalty in order to feed her family, Feya is captured by the palace guard on duty, Alasdair Cairncross, who must transport her across the wilderness of Scotland for trial. Two people have never been more opposite! While Feya is free-spirited, beautiful, and saucy, Alasdair is a haunted, rugged, and duty bound. These two butt heads more than once, creating magnificent conflict that will keep you turning the pages.
Within the Veil is a truly unique story with its focus on gypsies and the racism directed towards their people, Alasdair’s “mind problem” of seeing auras for everything around him, Feya’s struggle to come to terms with who she is as a biracial woman in a society who doesn’t accept anything less than those of pure genealogy. It is a mesmerizing tale that will take you on a journey through back alley slums littered with desperation, royal palaces filled with gold beyond imagination, and wild woods laced with anticipation. Within the Veil is without a doubt a must read and because I’m so enamored with this novel, I’m going to give a reader a copy of the book for free!! Head over to my blog to enter to win a copy of this novel: http://wp.me/p1j4UP-Uu
June 10, 2016
Reading a Brandy Vallance novel is like stepping into a time transport. I was swept into 19th century Scotland--from the dreary, dank tenements of Edinburgh, through wind-swept highlands, to the unforgiving moors and into gypsy caravans.
With fiery Feya and steady Alsdair leading me, it was an absolutely lovely journey.
Half-gypsy Feya and Queen's guard Alsdair are brought to life with vivid personalities and dreams buried deep. Feya is a strong and worthy heroine, despite the tender workings of her heart, and Alsdair is a swoon-worthy, honorable hero who has an especially fascinating secret he conceals from others.
After Alsdair captures Feya and they're forced to travel together through Scotland, the pages blurred and their chemistry popped. Brandy writes with an eloquent expressiveness that makes the reader sink deep into the story, taking in all the emotions and experiences...feeling the bite of the wind, hearing the cry of Feya's siblings as she promises to find them food, and understanding Alsdair's steely determination to complete his mission for love of country.
The gypsy culture and bits of Scotland's history were intricately woven into the story, and the colorful cast of secondary characters made me smile at times and tremble at others.
Within the Veil is also a beautiful story of redemption and second chances. A particularly poignant scene near the end, with a personal memento that's also spiritually significant, really touched my heart.
Tender, touching, and always lyrical, Within the Veil is another gorgeous historical romance from author Brandy Vallance that I thoroughly enjoyed and highly recommend.
With fiery Feya and steady Alsdair leading me, it was an absolutely lovely journey.
Half-gypsy Feya and Queen's guard Alsdair are brought to life with vivid personalities and dreams buried deep. Feya is a strong and worthy heroine, despite the tender workings of her heart, and Alsdair is a swoon-worthy, honorable hero who has an especially fascinating secret he conceals from others.
After Alsdair captures Feya and they're forced to travel together through Scotland, the pages blurred and their chemistry popped. Brandy writes with an eloquent expressiveness that makes the reader sink deep into the story, taking in all the emotions and experiences...feeling the bite of the wind, hearing the cry of Feya's siblings as she promises to find them food, and understanding Alsdair's steely determination to complete his mission for love of country.
The gypsy culture and bits of Scotland's history were intricately woven into the story, and the colorful cast of secondary characters made me smile at times and tremble at others.
Within the Veil is also a beautiful story of redemption and second chances. A particularly poignant scene near the end, with a personal memento that's also spiritually significant, really touched my heart.
Tender, touching, and always lyrical, Within the Veil is another gorgeous historical romance from author Brandy Vallance that I thoroughly enjoyed and highly recommend.
June 18, 2016
Within the Veil by Brandy Ballance is an exciting Historical Romance, with a backdrop set in the wilds of Scotland.
Meet, Feya Broon, a Scottish half-gypsy, trying to provide for her family and, Alasdair Cairncross, who is ordered to transport Feya across Scotland.
Refreshingly unique and unforgettable characters. A determined heroine and a unique hero, makes a heartwarming story.
Well written tale with engaging and interesting characters and a captivating storyline.
Ms. Ballance weaves the lure of Gypsy history and the lush Scottish countryside. Racism during Victorian Britain, as well as now, has no boundaries.
Steady paced, poignant, and a mesmerizing romance. With secrets, a decades-old feud, political intrigue, a kidnapping, and the blossoming of love, can Alasdair and Feya survive the feud, racism and find their HEA.
I found myself entranced with this story, the characters will steal your heart, with a wide range of emotions, readers will be mesmerized with "Within the Veil". Ms. Ballance is a new author to me and one I'll follow in the future. I hope, Feya and Alasdair will have another story or sequel. Fans of Gypsy history, Scottish history, a sweet Historical Romance, will enjoy "Within the Veil".
Received for an honest review from Net Galley.
Rating: 4.5
Heat rating: Sweet
Reviewed by: AprilR
Meet, Feya Broon, a Scottish half-gypsy, trying to provide for her family and, Alasdair Cairncross, who is ordered to transport Feya across Scotland.
Refreshingly unique and unforgettable characters. A determined heroine and a unique hero, makes a heartwarming story.
Well written tale with engaging and interesting characters and a captivating storyline.
Ms. Ballance weaves the lure of Gypsy history and the lush Scottish countryside. Racism during Victorian Britain, as well as now, has no boundaries.
Steady paced, poignant, and a mesmerizing romance. With secrets, a decades-old feud, political intrigue, a kidnapping, and the blossoming of love, can Alasdair and Feya survive the feud, racism and find their HEA.
I found myself entranced with this story, the characters will steal your heart, with a wide range of emotions, readers will be mesmerized with "Within the Veil". Ms. Ballance is a new author to me and one I'll follow in the future. I hope, Feya and Alasdair will have another story or sequel. Fans of Gypsy history, Scottish history, a sweet Historical Romance, will enjoy "Within the Veil".
Received for an honest review from Net Galley.
Rating: 4.5
Heat rating: Sweet
Reviewed by: AprilR
June 28, 2016
From the first pages of Within the Veil I knew this book would leave me in pieces. Vallance has a particular magic when it comes to characters and imagery. She sits her characters down in your mind’s parlor and proceeds to lay them bare and bind your emotions so thoroughly as to make imaginary people into lifelong friends.
Feya pricks that space in every woman’s heart. You know the one, where fear and self-worth exist in a terrible, endless dance. Feya—with her gypsy ways, her misconceptions, her mistakes, and her fragility masked by murderous glances—leads the reader on a journey of unfolding beauty and worth. Alasdair is every bit her equal, a man so cool he sweats diamonds, but hiding his own layers of vulnerability and struggle. These two run and battle and love and break and mend their way through the exquisitely described Scottish landscape.
This is a story of prejudice and revenge on a grand scale, but also an intimate, thread-by-thread weaving together of two characters from very different backgrounds who never would’ve guessed they needed each other. Be warned, if you pick up this book there’s no going back, no choice but to fall in love, and no chance of remaining unchanged.
Feya pricks that space in every woman’s heart. You know the one, where fear and self-worth exist in a terrible, endless dance. Feya—with her gypsy ways, her misconceptions, her mistakes, and her fragility masked by murderous glances—leads the reader on a journey of unfolding beauty and worth. Alasdair is every bit her equal, a man so cool he sweats diamonds, but hiding his own layers of vulnerability and struggle. These two run and battle and love and break and mend their way through the exquisitely described Scottish landscape.
This is a story of prejudice and revenge on a grand scale, but also an intimate, thread-by-thread weaving together of two characters from very different backgrounds who never would’ve guessed they needed each other. Be warned, if you pick up this book there’s no going back, no choice but to fall in love, and no chance of remaining unchanged.
January 14, 2017
It's nice to read a book on occasion that doesn't always meet one's expectations (provided, of course, it has a positive alternative to one's expectations). I was expecting Feya to be a wandering gypsy, when in fact, she's more an impoverished Scottish girl who doesn't fit in well because of her half-gypsy blood. But in her love and desperation, she quickly proved very relatable, which may or may not have been the case otherwise. I also did not expect
I wasn't expecting Alasdair to be so hard at the beginning--I thought surely, surely, there's a heart in him somewhere. But it took a while to find it; only when he's forced to confront a part of his past does he finally start cracking open the hard shell around his heart. Then once it was begun, he became an appealing hero.
I definitely wasn't expecting the political machinations in the story--prejudice yes, but politics no. But on reading the author's note, the political history of gypsies in Great Britain is the inspiration for the story. And it didn't go in the direction I anticipated, but it worked out.
But while many things were not exactly as I had anticipated, the important things were: it was a satisfying, well-written romance, full of adventure, and pointing deliberately toward God.
I wasn't expecting Alasdair to be so hard at the beginning--I thought surely, surely, there's a heart in him somewhere. But it took a while to find it; only when he's forced to confront a part of his past does he finally start cracking open the hard shell around his heart. Then once it was begun, he became an appealing hero.
I definitely wasn't expecting the political machinations in the story--prejudice yes, but politics no. But on reading the author's note, the political history of gypsies in Great Britain is the inspiration for the story. And it didn't go in the direction I anticipated, but it worked out.
But while many things were not exactly as I had anticipated, the important things were: it was a satisfying, well-written romance, full of adventure, and pointing deliberately toward God.
May 28, 2016
This book is a vacation, spa retreat and a must have if you are stranded on a desert island. Once I started reading I couldn't stop, I needed to know about Ranald, Alasdair and Feya.
Oh my! Sweet Alasdair who was so wounded that he built a wall around his heart just to survive. And it would take a feisty redhead who had wounds of her own to break through the wall with such force that he could not help but surrender. Yes, I fell in love with these characters and these beautiful words (“To fall in love with God is the greatest romance; to seek him the greatest adventure; to find him, the greatest human achievement.")
And the moment when Feya realized that God truly loved her and she surrendered to him that was when the true romance began. I don't know what else I can say about this book, it is MAGNIFICENT and I did not want to leave Feya and Alasdair's story. In fact I'm extremely sad to see it end.
Oh my! Sweet Alasdair who was so wounded that he built a wall around his heart just to survive. And it would take a feisty redhead who had wounds of her own to break through the wall with such force that he could not help but surrender. Yes, I fell in love with these characters and these beautiful words (“To fall in love with God is the greatest romance; to seek him the greatest adventure; to find him, the greatest human achievement.")
And the moment when Feya realized that God truly loved her and she surrendered to him that was when the true romance began. I don't know what else I can say about this book, it is MAGNIFICENT and I did not want to leave Feya and Alasdair's story. In fact I'm extremely sad to see it end.
May 30, 2016
This is my first book to have read by this author and I'm excited to read more from her. The journey begins with the heroine, Feya who is desperately trying to feed her starving siblings. She feels she has no other recourse than to steal. The hero, Alasdair is the Palace guard on duty who catches her. This is where all the adventure begins. It was hard to put the book down. The author did a magnificent job of developing the characters and showed the process of growth for both Feya and Alasdair. This growth showed a deep and strong love for each other through the journey. I loved the inspirational message that they both learned. It was to depend on the Lord who created them and not on any one else. The ending was absolutely amazing! I highly recommend this book. *I was given this book by the author and I have given my honest review.
December 2, 2016
Within the Veil was a very captivating read that sucked me into the story right from the beginning. Feya was a strong willed, feisty young woman who was willing to do almost anything to protect and take care of her younger siblings. Alasdair started off not very likeable for me. He seemed a very pompous man, but as the story unfolded and more was revealed about him and the more his character grew, I couldn't get enough of him. In the beginning, Feya and Alasdair both held very strong prejudices. The journey they both went on, the physical, emotional, and spiritual, was very fascinating to watch unfold.
I loved this book and would highly recommend it for people who enjoy historical romance.
I loved this book and would highly recommend it for people who enjoy historical romance.
June 14, 2016
I absolutely loved the uniqueness of this book! I don't think I've ever read a book with this time period/setting. The characters had authentic layers to them (Alasdair's "brain problem" was really original. I actually had a friend who saw everything and everybody in different colors as well, so to read that in a book really piqued my interest) and the spark between Alasdair and Feya could start a forest fire. I would put in a warning here that I'd rate this book PG-13. Nothing scandalous guys! Just might want to review before giving it to your young teenage daughter.
All-in-all a really enjoyable read.
All-in-all a really enjoyable read.
October 31, 2022
WOW! I'm speechless. And I'm going to reread this right after having finished it; it's just that good!
"I must warn you...a really good story has a way of altering the hearer. Are you quite prepared?"
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“To fall in love with God is the greatest romance;
to seek Him the greatest adventure;
to find Him, the greatest human achievement.”
― St. Augustine of Hippo
"There Was Jesus" Zach Williams, Dolly Parton
"I Am Yours" NEEDTOBREATHE
"I must warn you...a really good story has a way of altering the hearer. Are you quite prepared?"
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“To fall in love with God is the greatest romance;
to seek Him the greatest adventure;
to find Him, the greatest human achievement.”
― St. Augustine of Hippo
"There Was Jesus" Zach Williams, Dolly Parton
"I Am Yours" NEEDTOBREATHE
September 6, 2016
Fabulous love story! This book is one surprise after another. I've been reading for decades now and I'm a writer too, so it's very rare anymore that a plot truly surprises me. I kept thinking, I know where this is going. And nope, I'd be wrong. Every time. Awesome, fun fun fun book.
October 8, 2017
This book is a wonderful read! It was filled with stunning imagery. I felt like I was living the story right along with the characters. Feya was a lovable heroine with a quiet strength and a certain desperation. You absolutely wanted to root for her. She is rightfully disillusioned by a life filled with too many hardships, such as her drunken father and the terrors of tenement life. Feya is stubborn and spunky and deeply committed to the well being of her family. That commitment starts her on a journey she couldn't have imagined, and it leads her to Alasdair's front door.
Alasdair is a man with his own demons to fight. He holds himself to a high standard and struggles with his purpose. He is so easy to relate to as he battles between what he's been told and the truth and the expectations of a domineering parent. Abandonment issues threaten to rob him of joy and peace. His sense of duty contrasts with his heart's desire.
This book was such a wonderful ride! I wasn't sure what to expect, but I surely wasn't disappointed. It had all of the right elements for a romance swirled with bits of subtle sexual tension. But Within the Veil delivers a depth many romances do not. It addresses prejudice among English and Scottish people. It tackles misconceptions. I found it educational, providing insights about a phenomenon known as synesthesia that I wasn't familiar with. It ties everything together with exceptional elements of redemption, faith, trust and restoration. The author sprinkled in suspense and adventure, so there is something here for everyone.
Though I received a free code from the publisher for my honest review of this book, I loved it so much that I purchased a copy anyway! I can't wait to read it again. I read many, many books per year, and I rarely read a book again. I also set very high expectations for what I read. This book is one of the best I've ever read, and I congratulate the author on a beautiful job. Thank you. This book is a gift.
Alasdair is a man with his own demons to fight. He holds himself to a high standard and struggles with his purpose. He is so easy to relate to as he battles between what he's been told and the truth and the expectations of a domineering parent. Abandonment issues threaten to rob him of joy and peace. His sense of duty contrasts with his heart's desire.
This book was such a wonderful ride! I wasn't sure what to expect, but I surely wasn't disappointed. It had all of the right elements for a romance swirled with bits of subtle sexual tension. But Within the Veil delivers a depth many romances do not. It addresses prejudice among English and Scottish people. It tackles misconceptions. I found it educational, providing insights about a phenomenon known as synesthesia that I wasn't familiar with. It ties everything together with exceptional elements of redemption, faith, trust and restoration. The author sprinkled in suspense and adventure, so there is something here for everyone.
Though I received a free code from the publisher for my honest review of this book, I loved it so much that I purchased a copy anyway! I can't wait to read it again. I read many, many books per year, and I rarely read a book again. I also set very high expectations for what I read. This book is one of the best I've ever read, and I congratulate the author on a beautiful job. Thank you. This book is a gift.
December 12, 2016
After reading several, very positive reviews, I had to read this novel. And I am so glad that I did! While it took me a little while to get completely wrapped up in it, once the story sunk its' hooks in me it did not let go until the very last page! And I have to say that the last part of the story just shines.
Vallance takes us back in time to the Victorian era and brings to life the social and political climate of that time. Specifically, dealing with the Gypsies and how they were viewed and treated. We are caught up in the plight of those set low on the social and economical ladder. We see the prejudices and the corruption that can play out both in society and in politics.
However, what really captured me was how personal Vallance made the plight for us. Seeing Feya's struggle to provide for her siblings and the fear of what might become of them. Journeying with her as she pursued ways to help them, much to her detriment. Fear and desperation claw at her, and she makes some unwise choices. However, I loved seeing through all this how God can take even our mistakes and the things that hurt us and bring forth good; beauty from ashes. This is that kind of story.
Feya and Alasdair's relationship has many ups and downs. Early on, it is most definitely not positive. And to be honest the sudden shift from distrust and dislike to something else was rather quick for me. But that aside, I really enjoyed seeing where their relationship and the adventure went from there. From that point on the pages could not fly fast enough. And I was held with baited breath to see how Vallance would bring forth a desirable end. Which she does! Bravo, one well told and moving story!
Vallance takes us back in time to the Victorian era and brings to life the social and political climate of that time. Specifically, dealing with the Gypsies and how they were viewed and treated. We are caught up in the plight of those set low on the social and economical ladder. We see the prejudices and the corruption that can play out both in society and in politics.
However, what really captured me was how personal Vallance made the plight for us. Seeing Feya's struggle to provide for her siblings and the fear of what might become of them. Journeying with her as she pursued ways to help them, much to her detriment. Fear and desperation claw at her, and she makes some unwise choices. However, I loved seeing through all this how God can take even our mistakes and the things that hurt us and bring forth good; beauty from ashes. This is that kind of story.
Feya and Alasdair's relationship has many ups and downs. Early on, it is most definitely not positive. And to be honest the sudden shift from distrust and dislike to something else was rather quick for me. But that aside, I really enjoyed seeing where their relationship and the adventure went from there. From that point on the pages could not fly fast enough. And I was held with baited breath to see how Vallance would bring forth a desirable end. Which she does! Bravo, one well told and moving story!
May 27, 2025
Within the Veil was a gripping historical romance that had me on the edge of my seat.
I was drawn immediately into the story, my heart breaking for Feya's circumstances. Desperate to feed her younger siblings, she is propelled into doing whatever she can to get them food. But her plans go wrong when she is captured by the handsome guard, Alasdair.
Alasdair must transport Feya across Scotland, but things don't go smoothly and these once enemies must become allies if they are to survive.
Feya and Alasdair sunk into my heart. Both have gone through so much in their lives and have a lot to lose. They felt so real. They had sizzling chemistry and I loved how the romance developed between them. There is a Christian theme threaded throughout. I love how both Characters were struggling with faith in God. Feya struggled with believing in God when so many terrible things had happened to her, and Alasdair neglecting his faith in God to do life his way. The depiction of their faith struggles and temptations were so well done.
The ending was perfect.
Within the Veil was so well written with beautiful descriptive passages. It was hard to put down and I couldn't wait to get back to it whenever I had to stop reading. If you are a fan of historical romance this is one not to be missed. I highly recommend it.
Content: Clean with descriptive passionate kisses and depictions of temptation to do more. Mild violence.
I was drawn immediately into the story, my heart breaking for Feya's circumstances. Desperate to feed her younger siblings, she is propelled into doing whatever she can to get them food. But her plans go wrong when she is captured by the handsome guard, Alasdair.
Alasdair must transport Feya across Scotland, but things don't go smoothly and these once enemies must become allies if they are to survive.
Feya and Alasdair sunk into my heart. Both have gone through so much in their lives and have a lot to lose. They felt so real. They had sizzling chemistry and I loved how the romance developed between them. There is a Christian theme threaded throughout. I love how both Characters were struggling with faith in God. Feya struggled with believing in God when so many terrible things had happened to her, and Alasdair neglecting his faith in God to do life his way. The depiction of their faith struggles and temptations were so well done.
The ending was perfect.
Within the Veil was so well written with beautiful descriptive passages. It was hard to put down and I couldn't wait to get back to it whenever I had to stop reading. If you are a fan of historical romance this is one not to be missed. I highly recommend it.
Content: Clean with descriptive passionate kisses and depictions of temptation to do more. Mild violence.
October 22, 2016
Within the Veil is the second outing from Brandy Vallance. Her first book, The Covered Deep, was surprisingly brilliant for a first novel and this follow up is no less. Feya is a fabulously well rounded character with depth, vitality, and anything but a caricature personality. As she travels through this perilous journey, she learns much more about herself than most characters do over the course of an entire series.
Many of the choices that Feya makes along the way aren’t the best. She chooses poorly again and again. Like many of us, it takes those bad choices to bring us around to what is really the best for us. Be warned – some of these choices might surprise in a book from a Christian author. That doesn’t make them any less realistic or important.
Vallance has given light to a world that is relatively unknown in the Christian fiction realm. Not many write books about gypsies and I guarantee none of them do it with the grace or style Vallance brings to the table.
This is a great book. As long as one reads with the understanding that it’s not an Amish book (I mentioned those bad choices earlier, correct?) then I have no doubt that you will be delighted with the outcome.
Well done Brandy! I’m excited to follow your career and see what you bring to the table next!
Many of the choices that Feya makes along the way aren’t the best. She chooses poorly again and again. Like many of us, it takes those bad choices to bring us around to what is really the best for us. Be warned – some of these choices might surprise in a book from a Christian author. That doesn’t make them any less realistic or important.
Vallance has given light to a world that is relatively unknown in the Christian fiction realm. Not many write books about gypsies and I guarantee none of them do it with the grace or style Vallance brings to the table.
This is a great book. As long as one reads with the understanding that it’s not an Amish book (I mentioned those bad choices earlier, correct?) then I have no doubt that you will be delighted with the outcome.
Well done Brandy! I’m excited to follow your career and see what you bring to the table next!
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