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Champions of Aetaltis
More than three hundred years have passed since the fall of the Atlan Alliance, and the people of Aetaltis have finally brought order to their fractured world. Fledgling nations have grown into powerful kingdoms, thriving merchant states have re-established old trade routes, and the priests of the Enaros have rebuilt their great temples.
But in this time of hope, the shadow of an ancient evil has emerged from the darkness to threaten the world once again.
Discover a new world of adventure in this collection of pulse-pounding stories written by some of the greatest fantasy authors alive. From the vine enshrouded ruins of a lost jungle temple to the seedy back alleys of the villainous city of Port Vale, experience the thrill of heroic fantasy with these gripping tales of action and adventure.
But in this time of hope, the shadow of an ancient evil has emerged from the darkness to threaten the world once again.
Discover a new world of adventure in this collection of pulse-pounding stories written by some of the greatest fantasy authors alive. From the vine enshrouded ruins of a lost jungle temple to the seedy back alleys of the villainous city of Port Vale, experience the thrill of heroic fantasy with these gripping tales of action and adventure.
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480 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 12, 2016
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May 29, 2016
Let me tell you of the days of High Adventure...
This review is from: Champions of Aetaltis (Paperback)
If you're looking to dive into a classic world of wizards and warriors, this is your read. Each author brings their own unique take on such a vast and awesome landscape that you'll simply burn through the book and want for more. One in particular was the story "A Whole Hearted Halfling" by Melanie Meadors—classic fantasy with a great moral and a dark twist; something all readers should take the time to checkout on their way through the epic world of Aetaltis.
This review is from: Champions of Aetaltis (Paperback)
If you're looking to dive into a classic world of wizards and warriors, this is your read. Each author brings their own unique take on such a vast and awesome landscape that you'll simply burn through the book and want for more. One in particular was the story "A Whole Hearted Halfling" by Melanie Meadors—classic fantasy with a great moral and a dark twist; something all readers should take the time to checkout on their way through the epic world of Aetaltis.
September 24, 2016
CHAMPIONS OF AETALTIS is an anthology edited by Marc Tassin and John Helfers which is published by Mechanical Muse. It marks the first Kick-Starter I've ever backed. I made the jump both because the book was filled with such amazing writers, and because I trusted Marc Tassin to put out a top-notch product. I certainly was not disappointed. I rarely ever read all the stories in an anthology. I usually jump around choosing specific writers I like, or titles that snare me, leaving the rest for another time. That's how I started with CHAMPIONS OF AETALTIS as well, reading stories by authors I've met at the GenCon writers symposium panels, but upon completing each story, I found myself wanting to continue on to see what was happening in other sections of the realm. In the end, I read them all.
Aetaltis is a fantasy world created by Marc Tassin for which he and others have begun releasing products playable with the Pathfinder Role Playing System. As I don't play Pathfinder, I'm glad he created this way for people like me to enjoy the fun. Each tale does an excellent job introducing a hero or group of heroes embroiled in an early adventure in the world. I loved the detailed map included in the front of the book noting the location where each story takes place. There were a few mentions of races for which I knew nothing about (the drothmal and chee-bat, for instance) but I assume that's due to my not having played the game before, and it didn't really detract from the stories.
I always like to list my favorites when reviewing an anthology. That proved an incredibly difficult task in this case because all of them were so fantastic. I don't want to use that as an excuse though, so here are my top five favorite stories, in the order in which they appear in the anthology. They were: "The Bridge" by Larry Correia, "Bellar's Thorn" by Jean Rabe, "The Secret of The Holy Crystal" by Marc Tassin, "The Undercity Job" by Dave Gross, and "A Deeper Darkness" by David Farland. I easily could have listed twice as many, so suffice to say, you won't be disappointed with any story within this CHAMPIONS OF AETALTIS anthology.
THE STORIES:
1. "Mother of Catastrophes" by Erin M. Evans - Melloryn, an elvin spy, and her partner Davros are tasked with finding the irresponsible son of a nobleman who's gone into the dreaded, magic-warping woodlands known as the Elliyan Wilds. A tough, female orog named Aghi is sent along with them to help deal with the hideous creatures and deadly plant life that reside there. It's rumored the forest sprung up following a mishap from an elvin queen's attempt to become a god.
2. "My Doom May Come Soon" by Ed Greenwood - Tarla, a beautiful, acrobatic wall-climbing thief, joins with an insecure alchemist named Faelren to do the bidding of some Master Thieves in the city of Port Vale. While forced to carry out their wishes, she formulates a plan to take down their army of cut-throats and stave off her own doom as long as possible.
3. "The Bridge" by Larry Correia - Lavro, the lone drothmal warrior who's refused to abandon his post guarding a strategic bridge, meets a courteous fighter named Decimus. Lavro has trouble comprehending why Decimus, who's an incredibly skilled master combatant, doesn't act like anyone else he's met before. This is a really great story about the shifting viewpoints of people from different cultures.
4. "Ashes of Victory" by Elizabeth A. Vaughan - Chief Magisterium Adelphus is perplexed by a dispute he's charged with ruling over. A dwarven Scribe named Valtos is demanding the return of sacred items that the human adventurer Roncrate liberated from one of their ancient homes that has been overtaken by foul creatures. It's odd because dwarfs virtually never seek judgment from humans. Even stranger, the older dwarf demands resolution in the form of trial by combat against his much younger adversary. Adelphus knows there's more at play here than is visible on the surface. Adelphus and Valtose are two great characters you can't help liking and with whom you want to spend more time.
5. "Tower of The Golden God" by Steven S. Long - A spice hunter named Torvin stumbles across an ancient tower hidden deep within the Zhamayen Jungle which houses immense treasure and terrible danger.
6. "Bellar's Thorn" by Jean Rabe - Bellar leads his stalwart band of dwarven adventurers into a lost cavern system said to hold an ancient treasure horde. The journey there on their wheeled, overland ship is perilous enough, but once they arrive they find it's protected by ghastly guardians. I particularly loved what they encountered near the conclusion of the story.
7. "The Warlady's Daughter" by Lucy A. Snyder - Elyria is a young woman, not yet 18, who spends her days helping her uncle's bakery business. Her mind often wanders to tales of adventure rather than the boring tasks he's set for her. One day an army of warrior women arrive and inform her uncle that it's time for Elyria to join them. She's shocked to learn her mother is actually a great warrior whom she's never met. Elyria must deal with learning her past has been a lie while being trained as a warrior herself in a town that doesn't believe women should be fighters.
8. "Upon Reflection" by Aaron Rosenberg - A dwarf named Thalgon leads his two adventuring friends into his people's caverns to save an ancestor who's contacted him through magic to tell him he's been trapped deep inside for a long time and to ask his help. The caverns are filled with goblins and other dark menaces that will test both their skills and their wits.
9. "A Whole Hearted Halfling" by Melanie Meadors (2015) - Kendra is a young halfling who's been training with her village's primary defender, a human mage named Gaeben, who possesses a powerful magic staff. She's recently learned disturbing news about him which leads her to avoid seeking his aid in dealing with a malicious ogre threatening the town.
10. "Vendetta" by Richard Lee Byers - A mercenary in search of riches stops in a small town to lodge for the night. He's only just arrived when he's forced to protect a woman and her child that are being attacked by their father who's been transformed into a monster. The townspeople, grateful for his help, say they believe the transformation is the result of a spell cast on the town by an evil wizard from their nearby rivals. As none of them are trained fighters, they want to hire him to slay the wizard.
11. "True Monsters" by John Helfers - This story begins with a group of young dwarves sneaking into a graveyard to catch a glimpse of Torg, an orog serving as its gravedigger. Terrified by his appearance, they flee the area. In truth, Torg is a gentle giant who constantly resists the darkness inside him to be a productive servant to the local church. Later, when the eldest of the dwarven children named Ella takes charge helping to find a friend who has run off and become lost, she encounters a deadly danger.
12. "Books Are No Good" by Cat Rambo - After a book-loving inn-keeper's inn is accidentally burned down, she and her adopted daughter head out seeking adventures such as those she loves from her books.
13. "The Secret of The Holy Crystal" by Marc Tassin - Eathen is a young scholar traveling the realm documenting accounts of interest from those who participated or witnessed them. He's frustrated when every monk he interviews about a group of heroes battling an evil creature relates the exact same account word-for-word. This is explained by the fact that the order share a hive-mind connected by a magic crystal. He's about to leave when a spirited young acolyte points out a flaw in the story they all told him. This leads the two to try and figure out why the monks would break their solemn codes to lie about the battle. This is a very fun adventure with great characters.
14. "The Undercity Job" by Dave Gross - A band of undersized adventurers of various races take a job that requires them to go beneath the city of Hawk's Crest to find a lost boy. The ruins of a forgotten city sprawled out below the sewer system is filled with traps, monstrous creatures and an evil cult. The crew must survive these menaces to complete their task, while dealing with a group of heavies after them above ground. This is a fantastic, imaginative heist story filled with great characters and lots of fantasy adventure goodness.
15. "A Deeper Darkness" by David Farland - A young, immortal dragon rider breaks into a rogue orcish prison in order to save an important Atlan noblewoman being held captive there. She was brought to the prison by a powerful entity made of shadow. Aside from these dangers is the mysterious vapor in the torture chamber that transforms anyone who contacts it into hideous monstrosities. This was a fantastic story! I really loved it and wanted it to continue on.
16. "Never A Moon So Bright" by Elaine Cunningham - Oxamia, a shopkeeper who caters to adventurers, is brought a powerful, but cursed, magic staff. This leads her, along with her halfling cleric and elvin mage friends, into conflict with the nefarious necromancer to whom it belongs.
17. "The Wailing Temple" by Mel Odom - In this novelette Crightin and his crew are hired to take Tavesi, a beautiful channeler, to an underground lost city to release a horde of spirits trapped there by a being with god-like powers. Desperate to pay for much needed repairs to his ship and the wages of his crewmen, he agrees to the dangerous mission. The descriptions of the journey to the underground city are really awesome.
Aetaltis is a fantasy world created by Marc Tassin for which he and others have begun releasing products playable with the Pathfinder Role Playing System. As I don't play Pathfinder, I'm glad he created this way for people like me to enjoy the fun. Each tale does an excellent job introducing a hero or group of heroes embroiled in an early adventure in the world. I loved the detailed map included in the front of the book noting the location where each story takes place. There were a few mentions of races for which I knew nothing about (the drothmal and chee-bat, for instance) but I assume that's due to my not having played the game before, and it didn't really detract from the stories.
I always like to list my favorites when reviewing an anthology. That proved an incredibly difficult task in this case because all of them were so fantastic. I don't want to use that as an excuse though, so here are my top five favorite stories, in the order in which they appear in the anthology. They were: "The Bridge" by Larry Correia, "Bellar's Thorn" by Jean Rabe, "The Secret of The Holy Crystal" by Marc Tassin, "The Undercity Job" by Dave Gross, and "A Deeper Darkness" by David Farland. I easily could have listed twice as many, so suffice to say, you won't be disappointed with any story within this CHAMPIONS OF AETALTIS anthology.
THE STORIES:
1. "Mother of Catastrophes" by Erin M. Evans - Melloryn, an elvin spy, and her partner Davros are tasked with finding the irresponsible son of a nobleman who's gone into the dreaded, magic-warping woodlands known as the Elliyan Wilds. A tough, female orog named Aghi is sent along with them to help deal with the hideous creatures and deadly plant life that reside there. It's rumored the forest sprung up following a mishap from an elvin queen's attempt to become a god.
2. "My Doom May Come Soon" by Ed Greenwood - Tarla, a beautiful, acrobatic wall-climbing thief, joins with an insecure alchemist named Faelren to do the bidding of some Master Thieves in the city of Port Vale. While forced to carry out their wishes, she formulates a plan to take down their army of cut-throats and stave off her own doom as long as possible.
3. "The Bridge" by Larry Correia - Lavro, the lone drothmal warrior who's refused to abandon his post guarding a strategic bridge, meets a courteous fighter named Decimus. Lavro has trouble comprehending why Decimus, who's an incredibly skilled master combatant, doesn't act like anyone else he's met before. This is a really great story about the shifting viewpoints of people from different cultures.
4. "Ashes of Victory" by Elizabeth A. Vaughan - Chief Magisterium Adelphus is perplexed by a dispute he's charged with ruling over. A dwarven Scribe named Valtos is demanding the return of sacred items that the human adventurer Roncrate liberated from one of their ancient homes that has been overtaken by foul creatures. It's odd because dwarfs virtually never seek judgment from humans. Even stranger, the older dwarf demands resolution in the form of trial by combat against his much younger adversary. Adelphus knows there's more at play here than is visible on the surface. Adelphus and Valtose are two great characters you can't help liking and with whom you want to spend more time.
5. "Tower of The Golden God" by Steven S. Long - A spice hunter named Torvin stumbles across an ancient tower hidden deep within the Zhamayen Jungle which houses immense treasure and terrible danger.
6. "Bellar's Thorn" by Jean Rabe - Bellar leads his stalwart band of dwarven adventurers into a lost cavern system said to hold an ancient treasure horde. The journey there on their wheeled, overland ship is perilous enough, but once they arrive they find it's protected by ghastly guardians. I particularly loved what they encountered near the conclusion of the story.
7. "The Warlady's Daughter" by Lucy A. Snyder - Elyria is a young woman, not yet 18, who spends her days helping her uncle's bakery business. Her mind often wanders to tales of adventure rather than the boring tasks he's set for her. One day an army of warrior women arrive and inform her uncle that it's time for Elyria to join them. She's shocked to learn her mother is actually a great warrior whom she's never met. Elyria must deal with learning her past has been a lie while being trained as a warrior herself in a town that doesn't believe women should be fighters.
8. "Upon Reflection" by Aaron Rosenberg - A dwarf named Thalgon leads his two adventuring friends into his people's caverns to save an ancestor who's contacted him through magic to tell him he's been trapped deep inside for a long time and to ask his help. The caverns are filled with goblins and other dark menaces that will test both their skills and their wits.
9. "A Whole Hearted Halfling" by Melanie Meadors (2015) - Kendra is a young halfling who's been training with her village's primary defender, a human mage named Gaeben, who possesses a powerful magic staff. She's recently learned disturbing news about him which leads her to avoid seeking his aid in dealing with a malicious ogre threatening the town.
10. "Vendetta" by Richard Lee Byers - A mercenary in search of riches stops in a small town to lodge for the night. He's only just arrived when he's forced to protect a woman and her child that are being attacked by their father who's been transformed into a monster. The townspeople, grateful for his help, say they believe the transformation is the result of a spell cast on the town by an evil wizard from their nearby rivals. As none of them are trained fighters, they want to hire him to slay the wizard.
11. "True Monsters" by John Helfers - This story begins with a group of young dwarves sneaking into a graveyard to catch a glimpse of Torg, an orog serving as its gravedigger. Terrified by his appearance, they flee the area. In truth, Torg is a gentle giant who constantly resists the darkness inside him to be a productive servant to the local church. Later, when the eldest of the dwarven children named Ella takes charge helping to find a friend who has run off and become lost, she encounters a deadly danger.
12. "Books Are No Good" by Cat Rambo - After a book-loving inn-keeper's inn is accidentally burned down, she and her adopted daughter head out seeking adventures such as those she loves from her books.
13. "The Secret of The Holy Crystal" by Marc Tassin - Eathen is a young scholar traveling the realm documenting accounts of interest from those who participated or witnessed them. He's frustrated when every monk he interviews about a group of heroes battling an evil creature relates the exact same account word-for-word. This is explained by the fact that the order share a hive-mind connected by a magic crystal. He's about to leave when a spirited young acolyte points out a flaw in the story they all told him. This leads the two to try and figure out why the monks would break their solemn codes to lie about the battle. This is a very fun adventure with great characters.
14. "The Undercity Job" by Dave Gross - A band of undersized adventurers of various races take a job that requires them to go beneath the city of Hawk's Crest to find a lost boy. The ruins of a forgotten city sprawled out below the sewer system is filled with traps, monstrous creatures and an evil cult. The crew must survive these menaces to complete their task, while dealing with a group of heavies after them above ground. This is a fantastic, imaginative heist story filled with great characters and lots of fantasy adventure goodness.
15. "A Deeper Darkness" by David Farland - A young, immortal dragon rider breaks into a rogue orcish prison in order to save an important Atlan noblewoman being held captive there. She was brought to the prison by a powerful entity made of shadow. Aside from these dangers is the mysterious vapor in the torture chamber that transforms anyone who contacts it into hideous monstrosities. This was a fantastic story! I really loved it and wanted it to continue on.
16. "Never A Moon So Bright" by Elaine Cunningham - Oxamia, a shopkeeper who caters to adventurers, is brought a powerful, but cursed, magic staff. This leads her, along with her halfling cleric and elvin mage friends, into conflict with the nefarious necromancer to whom it belongs.
17. "The Wailing Temple" by Mel Odom - In this novelette Crightin and his crew are hired to take Tavesi, a beautiful channeler, to an underground lost city to release a horde of spirits trapped there by a being with god-like powers. Desperate to pay for much needed repairs to his ship and the wages of his crewmen, he agrees to the dangerous mission. The descriptions of the journey to the underground city are really awesome.
April 21, 2017
This was such an awesome anthology and a fun ride. I enjoyed almost every story here were a few of my favs in no particular order:
Mother of Catastrophes by Erin M. Evans
The Warlady's Daughter by Lucy A. Snyder
True Monsters by John Helfers
The Wailing Temple by Mel Odom
I seriously would love to see some novels set in Aetaltis from Mechanical Muse in the near future.
All-in-all a great book and well worth the money!
Mother of Catastrophes by Erin M. Evans
The Warlady's Daughter by Lucy A. Snyder
True Monsters by John Helfers
The Wailing Temple by Mel Odom
I seriously would love to see some novels set in Aetaltis from Mechanical Muse in the near future.
All-in-all a great book and well worth the money!
June 6, 2017
This anthology started out as a kickstarter, but I'm so glad that it got released to the general public, because the stories inside it are all excellent. While some were just good reads, some shone out as diamonds among the gold. "Mother of Catastrophes", "The Bridge", "Ashes of Victory", "The Warlady's Daughter", "True Monsters" and "The Wailing Temple" were the stand-outs among a list of great authors stories. I hope that more stories from this world appear soon.
January 25, 2017
A nice collection of new fantasy stories. My favorites were My Doom May Come Soon (Greenwood), The Bridge (Correia), Ashes of Victory (Vaughan), A Whole-Hearted Halfling (Meadors), Vendetta (Byers), Books Are No Good (Rambo), and Never a Moon So Bright (Cunningham).
December 6, 2020
Pretty good collection of short stories nothing that blew my mind but good.
August 6, 2022
An anthology of 17 short story epic fantasies and one novella set in Aetaltis, where the main character discovers that being the hero isn't what they always set out to be, but ended up becoming one by circumstance or morals they were unaware of.
Here's what I didn't like: I wish that the map and numbers for the stories were in the same order as they were in the book. Would've made it far easier to find them on the map. Wish some of the authors had followed editing suggestions by the editor, especially when it came to action tags vs dialogue tags. Formatting issues with closed quotes caused spacing to disappear so either a better proofreader or a more thorough proofreader or perhaps trusting the proofreader was needed. Some of these short stories felt unfinished, like I had questions about what was happening next because it didn't feel like there was closure. Other stories/novella had so much fighting in them that I skimmed through it to get back to the plot. I only skipped about three of the stories included, and skimmed a whole heck of a lot of the wailing temple.
Here's what I liked: Most of the short stories reminded me why I enjoy epic fantasies and they were well written. Most of these were approx 25 pages long and easy to follow along. While I know nothing of this world, in large I feel like I know it now and it wasn't usually hard to follow.
Overall, writing short stories to have a beginning, middle, and end is tough business, especially if you're used to writing over 100K words, and most of these stories reflect good storytelling, character, sometimes even major character growth, and a satisfying ending.
Here's what I didn't like: I wish that the map and numbers for the stories were in the same order as they were in the book. Would've made it far easier to find them on the map. Wish some of the authors had followed editing suggestions by the editor, especially when it came to action tags vs dialogue tags. Formatting issues with closed quotes caused spacing to disappear so either a better proofreader or a more thorough proofreader or perhaps trusting the proofreader was needed. Some of these short stories felt unfinished, like I had questions about what was happening next because it didn't feel like there was closure. Other stories/novella had so much fighting in them that I skimmed through it to get back to the plot. I only skipped about three of the stories included, and skimmed a whole heck of a lot of the wailing temple.
Here's what I liked: Most of the short stories reminded me why I enjoy epic fantasies and they were well written. Most of these were approx 25 pages long and easy to follow along. While I know nothing of this world, in large I feel like I know it now and it wasn't usually hard to follow.
Overall, writing short stories to have a beginning, middle, and end is tough business, especially if you're used to writing over 100K words, and most of these stories reflect good storytelling, character, sometimes even major character growth, and a satisfying ending.
June 25, 2022
As a Dungeon Master running Aetaltis as a campaign setting for my 5th Edition D&D players, this has turned out to be a fantastic tool for grounding my knowledge of the setting in an in-game manner. The short stories in this book are quick to read and offer tons of flavor and feel text for the Aetaltis universe. I whole-heartedly recommend this book to both players and DMs, however, since anyone in the Aetaltis universe can benefit from the greater experience with the world this book gives.
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