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Immortal MC #1
The Return Of Marcus
Forensic Investigator Tatiana Storm finds herself swept into a world of gun-toting, leather-clad Immortals when her sister is kidnapped by a masked man one fateful day; leading her down a dangerous road with the President of Mobius Motorcycle Club, Marcus. What connection does the mysterious stranger have to her family, and can she survive a dangerous world of dark magic and demons in order to hold on to everything that matters to her the most?
What will she do when her love and unquenchable desire for him threatens to open up a terrifying world of everlasting blood and darkness that she cannot escape?
Marcus the Immortal had vowed to never return to the town of Bear Hills after losing his first real love to his closest friend and club president Bartholemeu, but fate and an old enemy leads him directly into the path of Tatiana Storm. The twenty year old beauty is the eldest daughter of his now deceased best friend, but the biker finds that she is a dangerous and untamed element that threatens to undo a thousand years of the warrior brotherhood her father built with his own hands.
Will Marcus risk losing everything he is in order to save his beautiful Angel from a fate he feels ultimately responsible for?
What will she do when her love and unquenchable desire for him threatens to open up a terrifying world of everlasting blood and darkness that she cannot escape?
Marcus the Immortal had vowed to never return to the town of Bear Hills after losing his first real love to his closest friend and club president Bartholemeu, but fate and an old enemy leads him directly into the path of Tatiana Storm. The twenty year old beauty is the eldest daughter of his now deceased best friend, but the biker finds that she is a dangerous and untamed element that threatens to undo a thousand years of the warrior brotherhood her father built with his own hands.
Will Marcus risk losing everything he is in order to save his beautiful Angel from a fate he feels ultimately responsible for?
- GenresParanormal
248 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 11, 2016
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November 19, 2017
What an AWESOME paranormal romance! Immortal MC, The Return of Marcus is a thrilling story full of sexy hot scenes and romance between the main characters while also being an intense and dark thriller with demons and magic. I LOVED the twists and turns and a fantastic cliffhanger ending that begs for more. I simply MUST know what happens next!
Marcus is one HOT sexy alpha male but sweet and charming too, my favorite kind of hero. Tatiana is a sweet, strong, and determined heroine who meets her match in Marcus. Add in the Immortal MC, demonic threats, and some nasty villains, and this story has it all. I couldn't read fast enough and I was totally enthralled by the excellent writing and unique plot. Soooo good.
This is one paranormal romance you don't want to miss! In fact, I've already got the next in the series ready on my kindle. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!!
Characters: 5/5
Plot: 5/5
Word Building: 5/5
Story Flow: 5/5
Picky Bitches OVERALL SCORE: 5/5
October 24, 2017
Difficult to get into. Constant repeating of scene from a different perspective was confusing.
January 13, 2018
When Tatiana Storm found out that her husband was cheating on her, she ran. However, she couldn't run forever. Now she is back in her hometown. But what was supposed to be a quick visit to see her mother turns into a nightmare that seemed too fantastical to real. Suddenly she is surrounded by immortals. And that is when things start to get interesting!!
Oh, my giddy aunt! I read Immortal MC: Book 1, The Return Of Marcus by J. Inchuan in one sitting. Once started, I simply could not put this book down. Filled with drama from the onset, this book pulled me in and did not let go until I had turned that last page.
I adored the characterisation of both Tatiana and Marcus. They are both flawed characters but I think that is why I loved them so much. J. Inchuan masterfully portrayed both points of view. As a reader, J. Inchuan lets us experience an event through both sets of eyes. This is a really hard thing to pull off without losing the momentum of the story, but J. Inchuan nailed it. Kudos, J. Inchuan.
The story was super fast paced and as I have said it kept me gripped until the end. I can't wait to read book 2.
I Highly Recommend.
Oh, my giddy aunt! I read Immortal MC: Book 1, The Return Of Marcus by J. Inchuan in one sitting. Once started, I simply could not put this book down. Filled with drama from the onset, this book pulled me in and did not let go until I had turned that last page.
I adored the characterisation of both Tatiana and Marcus. They are both flawed characters but I think that is why I loved them so much. J. Inchuan masterfully portrayed both points of view. As a reader, J. Inchuan lets us experience an event through both sets of eyes. This is a really hard thing to pull off without losing the momentum of the story, but J. Inchuan nailed it. Kudos, J. Inchuan.
The story was super fast paced and as I have said it kept me gripped until the end. I can't wait to read book 2.
I Highly Recommend.
November 30, 2017
Motorcycle bad boys, demons and bad guys a plenty
Tatiana Storm has no idea how much her life is about to change, when she sees a good looking stranger at a gas station.
Marcus doesn’t realize how badly he needs this woman, even as he is checking her out. Without either of them knowing, and without giving anything away, Tatiana and Marcus are linked in ways that she almost wishes she never knew.
When her sister goes missing, or dead, killed by a mysterious beast (or so she thinks) it feels like the end of the world. her ex-husband, and a demon that grows larger and more powerful inside Marcus every time he uses magic, and you have a recipe for disaster. There are all kinds of bad guys, the worst of all is named Lastly, and you’ll eagerly flip through pages wanting to know what is going to happen next.
An adult book, with adult language and situations, I found the storyline to carry such things quite well, and I think readers can get a little of everything from the story.. even some spicy romance.
Tatiana Storm has no idea how much her life is about to change, when she sees a good looking stranger at a gas station.
Marcus doesn’t realize how badly he needs this woman, even as he is checking her out. Without either of them knowing, and without giving anything away, Tatiana and Marcus are linked in ways that she almost wishes she never knew.
When her sister goes missing, or dead, killed by a mysterious beast (or so she thinks) it feels like the end of the world. her ex-husband, and a demon that grows larger and more powerful inside Marcus every time he uses magic, and you have a recipe for disaster. There are all kinds of bad guys, the worst of all is named Lastly, and you’ll eagerly flip through pages wanting to know what is going to happen next.
An adult book, with adult language and situations, I found the storyline to carry such things quite well, and I think readers can get a little of everything from the story.. even some spicy romance.
February 14, 2018
A Dark Fantasy Adventure
In Immortal MC, The Return Of Marcus, the mystery of the dark forces is a character of its own in this storyline. This book already has a lot of action which has taken place in ancient history, yet the battle is brought to present time and seems to be coming to an end until fate steps in, yet again, to change the course of many people’s lives. It is still uncertain why these people, in particular, are chosen, but the action is fast-paced and keeps you turning the pages. The ending is the perfect tie-in to Emerick’s Demon, the next book in the series.
In Immortal MC, The Return Of Marcus, the mystery of the dark forces is a character of its own in this storyline. This book already has a lot of action which has taken place in ancient history, yet the battle is brought to present time and seems to be coming to an end until fate steps in, yet again, to change the course of many people’s lives. It is still uncertain why these people, in particular, are chosen, but the action is fast-paced and keeps you turning the pages. The ending is the perfect tie-in to Emerick’s Demon, the next book in the series.
March 4, 2018
I expected this novel to be like most are when it comes to paranormal romance so I was pleasantly surprised that it was different. I loved the fact that the good guys had their dark side present as well! It makes it a breath of fresh air amongst the rest of the protagonists in this genre that are almost always bad boy turned good. I will definitely recommend for all to give it a go. The editing could use some work but I was so interested in the story that it didn’t bother me as it usually would
February 5, 2018
This is a fast-paced fantasy about a young woman whose life is about to change when someone kidnaps her sister in addition to the fact she meets immortals... So enter an array of intriguing characters, action and mysteries.
The characters suit the story and we see it from two points of view, which gives more depth and interest to the story. The plot, if not original, is good and some scenes are written very well (I don't give spoilers).
Overall, an enjoyable tale, especially for those who like this genre.
The characters suit the story and we see it from two points of view, which gives more depth and interest to the story. The plot, if not original, is good and some scenes are written very well (I don't give spoilers).
Overall, an enjoyable tale, especially for those who like this genre.
February 22, 2018
My personal view and should not influence yours.
This book had a lot of potential but it just fell flat.
The repeating of an incident one after the other in a different character's POV. Rushed plot that never got fleshed out. And for the good guys being immortal they kept getting caught and or jailed. I was expecting a little more from these guys.
This book had a lot of potential but it just fell flat.
The repeating of an incident one after the other in a different character's POV. Rushed plot that never got fleshed out. And for the good guys being immortal they kept getting caught and or jailed. I was expecting a little more from these guys.
February 18, 2018
Captivating read
Really enjoyed this book, with all the twists and turns along the way. Marcus is brilliantly written as the flawed hero, and I really enjoyed reading his story as it all came out. Looking forward to catching up with these characters in the next book!
Really enjoyed this book, with all the twists and turns along the way. Marcus is brilliantly written as the flawed hero, and I really enjoyed reading his story as it all came out. Looking forward to catching up with these characters in the next book!
February 8, 2017
This story was absolutely fantastic! Well worth the read. The only reason I gave it four stars was because it could've used some editing. Other then that, however, it was very enjoyable and entertaining.
May 8, 2016
Like sand in the hourglass.
I l liked the premise. This was not a bad book. I loved the concept.
But for some reason I couldn't get into the book. I tried reading another book, then coming back to this, but unfortunately I just couldn't bring myself to finish.
I l liked the premise. This was not a bad book. I loved the concept.
But for some reason I couldn't get into the book. I tried reading another book, then coming back to this, but unfortunately I just couldn't bring myself to finish.
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