Let me say from the start, I enjoy Amish romance for the most part. It is usually pretty sweet and fairly quick to read. Sometimes it makes me tear up or feel all tender and squishy inside when a character does something especially precious and sweet. I don't have to worry about anything heaving or bulging overly much and there is none of the poorly written sex scenes to have to slog through. However, a lot of it is awkwardly written and makes me giggle a lot because I am not sure how some of the characters manage to get themselves dressed or fed on a day to day basis. That does NOT represent every book or character ok? Just a general rule that I have observed in my 44 years.
So, I downloaded this one today. Oh the angst!!!! Will he look at her? Will she look at him? What about the babies? So much drama and most of it could be solved with two sentences if just ONE of the people involved would adult for a moment and say it. But then again, maybe the Amish people don't do that sort of thing? I don't know. I would make a terrible Amish lady. I would have been banished early on. Probably have my picture posted in Amish stores and such just to warn others of my subversive behavior. But back to the book. I like to know what my people look like. I know Eli has brown eyes and seems to be fit. Is he tall? Short? Warty? Does he have 6 toes on one foot? What about Sarah? What color hair does she have? I know it is all covered with her hat but I still need to know. Does she have a hook nose or is she pidgeon toed? I like to form a connection to the characters and I did not feel like the start of this one gave me that. Maybe in the next few chapters it will be revealed. But I don't know that I will ever know because it feels like too much work to go find the next 3 chapters or whatever it is and buy it. I feel like this is going to be a good series but I feel a little tricked. I downloaded the first one for free on Amazon and did not realize it is really just a few chapters of the book. Like it took me 10 minutes to read it while I am sitting at my desk at work. Then I realized the whole book is broken into just a few chapters before you have to buy the next one. Sigh.......I guess right now I will have to wait and see if I get around to finding the next few chapters.