Guess I should have done more research to figure out which was the first book in this series. Although from the page before the book starts, it lead me to believe this was the first book, Master of Darkness was the 2nd, I Burn from You the 3rd... but clearly that is incorrect. While it wasn't exactly difficult to figure out the overall workings of the universe we are in here, there were a few things that weren't explained at all (and I hope they are in the first book) - like what exactly the deal is with Family vs. Clan vs. Tribe. 'Cuz I still don't know. And how exactly does one become a "Prime"?
I had a number of issues with this book. First, the love scenes weren't so much steamy as mushy. And they were overly mushy. I'm all for the romance, and I know in this genre it tends to develop fast without much basis, but this took that to a whole new level. And, since the steaminess was just "ah" (another reminder I need to come up with a good steaminess scale to use!) I didn't even feel like it was balanced out with scenes good enough to make me blush.
Second problem with this book was the bad guys. You could eliminate the reading of those chapters/sections and you wouldn't miss them. And you wouldn't be confused. So, from a plot development perspective - they were really not very integral or good. Octavia - seemed to have so much potential, but who knows what the heck happened to her. And she wasn't, as a character, really developed at all.
The writing - well, I think a 6th grader could do better. There were dialogue scenes where I had to trace backwards after reading to figure out who said what. The jumping from character perspective (Mike, the wolf's and then the various vamp's) was just that - jumpy. Plus, it wasn't really about switching perspectives so much as simply switching scenes and I often felt like those witches were at awkward times, didn't move the plot forward, or were simply a waste of ink. And for someone who tried to keep the identity of the evil vamp a secret, relatively early on there is a slip (I assume it was a slip anyway) that totally gives the gender away. After that - I totally didn't get the point in not using the correct gender articles to identify "her" (versus "it"). When you add in the fact that there wasn't enough info to set Jason up as the bad guy red herring, it was no surprise at all as to the identity of the bad vamp. And, as stated earlier, we didn't get enough development of Octavia to really care that she was the bad guy.
Finally, the heroine in this book... yuck. I expected to find out she was dying of some incurable cancer or something - not to merely hear she is diabetic. I know a number of diabetic who live perfectly normal lives - but this woman? No, not her. Instead she is a whiny little girl... boo whoo she needs to test her blood sugar. And she's supposed to be some tough cop? Please... Reading about her made me sad for women of the world - I certainly wouldn't want to be identified in the same breath as this woman. Even the little bit of Jo - the sister - seems a better heroine and someone tougher. If the author did any research or knows anyone who lives with diabetes and this is what she based that portion of the story line off of I wonder about the quality of her research skills or the moral fiber of the person(s) she based this off of... anyway...
I probably wouldn't bother with the other in the Primes series - except I got them free a year ago, so I have 4 more. Might as well read them before sharing them. But unless the rest of these do a major turn around I won't exactly be purchasing any of Ms. Sizemore's titles for myself.