-1 Predictable-Star ☆
After much thought, i realized why this book didn't wow me, it wasn't believable. Mia's mom just marries some guy 2 weeks after introducing him to her daughter, sells everything in their house, including her house and moves in with him despite taking into account her daughter's feelings. I understand she has a right to be happy, but how about easing everyone into it. And when she finds out about their relationship, the mother says her daughter is disrespectful and shaming the family!?! What?... -1★
-1★ I know Talon is supposed to be hot, but once a guy thinks of himself as god to all women... he actually becomes less hot. This is what Talon thinks if himself, when left to his own thoughts...“Everyone wanted a piece of Talon f#%kin’ Reed. I was the God of p#ssy eating. I could make a girl come with a wink. My job was to satisfy the female population of Central Heights.” -Really? Your job? I don't think the word 'job' qualifies when your doing it for free. ;) ...but what do i know?
-1★ I didnt like how from the very beginning Mia cant stand, basically hates Talon to death. Why? Chapter after chapter... she hates this, hates that. I mean maybe if i was a miserable fart like her, id hate everyone too. I dont know, it seemed like the author didnt take much time in developing the story and just relied on stepbrother-stepsister sex.
“I ordered a Caramel Macchiato, extra caramel” -Thats just wrong. Who orders extra caramel?! Basic caramel is more than enough caramel! -1★ for stupidity.
-1★ i didnt like it when Talon referred to himself in the third person, which he did a lot. "Talon F#%kin' Reed"
The ending... (-1★) ...wow, what a horrible ending to a luck-laster story. I cant even fathom why the author thought this was how she wanted it to end. Im dumb-struck! 'I don't care what you think mom, if you don't like it, you can leave our lives...' or something of the sort. A lot of whiney babble about throwing her mother out of her life and then a big THE END was slapped on.
I deleted this book so fast from my reader, i think it got whiplash, lol.