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The Bloody Chocolate #1-3
The Bloody Chocolate Series
Books included:
BOOK 1: The Bloody Chocolate (Book 1)
BOOK 2: The Bloody Chocolate (Book 2)
BOOK 3: The Bloody Chocolate (Book 3)
BOOK 1: The Bloody Chocolate (Book 1)
BOOK 2: The Bloody Chocolate (Book 2)
BOOK 3: The Bloody Chocolate (Book 3)
198 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 14, 2016
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April 26, 2016
Need a proofreader?
There were so many errors in these stories it drove me crazy. I'd be willing to proofread for a small price.
There were so many errors in these stories it drove me crazy. I'd be willing to proofread for a small price.
June 14, 2016
Horrible
I love a good mystery but this is something I would expect from my 6th graders, who are just learning to write short stories.
The author must not have had anyone proofread. She uses the same phrases over and over again. She uses the same wording. If she had used a thesaurus it might have improved the writing. But there is no improvement for sentence structure or punctuation. She will capitalize a proper noun one time but forget the next 6 times.
Very hard to follow with out proper use of quotation marks, periods or commas.
I love a good mystery but this is something I would expect from my 6th graders, who are just learning to write short stories.
The author must not have had anyone proofread. She uses the same phrases over and over again. She uses the same wording. If she had used a thesaurus it might have improved the writing. But there is no improvement for sentence structure or punctuation. She will capitalize a proper noun one time but forget the next 6 times.
Very hard to follow with out proper use of quotation marks, periods or commas.
November 15, 2020
So poorly written I could not get past the first chapter.
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