The Origin Series is empire building at its finest, with 100 episodes and over 2.5 million words in the military science fiction serial detailing the rise of Star Force from corporate entity into an interstellar empire over the course of more than a millennium.
Follow a core group of characters known as the Trailblazers as they use alien technology and knowledge discovered in Antarctic ruins to obtain limited immortality and lead Humanity out into the galaxy, encountering, befriending, and fighting hundreds of alien races all the while desperately trying to prepare Earth for the unbeatable threat at the core of the Milky Way that is destined to return and reclaim their lost colony…and their former Human slaves.
Aer-ki Jyr is one of the top 20 science fiction authors on Amazon due to his extremely long and ongoing space opera epic STAR FORCE, one of the longest military science fiction series ever written.
I felt that the book was worthy of 5*s inspite of the almost total absence of proper editing and proofreading. This is an ongoing problem with the whole series. You often have to read and extrapolate to get the point of the sentence.
The wars that Star Force is engaged in have become vast and complex . This book cobbled together all of the different locations, with insight via a large range of races and SF commandos and archons.
While Paul and the other Trailblazers remain the bones of the story, we are given whole chapters were the protagonists show us the way things are going on the front lines.
Character development continues for the primary characters as we get a greater understanding of the way they think.
I know I said I wouldn't return to this series, and this particular installment has already made me regret doing so (due to the unrelenting homophobia, re: the arc-commandos nudity scene). Frankly, this is the fast food of science fiction and it's provided my brain a much needed break from more serious, more substantial authors like Charles Stross. I appreciate the continued diversification of Star Force's ranks as the empire expands and covers contingencies, even if the people in those new divisions are nothing but convenient mouthpieces for the author's own nonsense biorealism ideals. Also, vaguely interesting direction for the war efforts. I like to see the new combo tech (the crystal modular stuff, the new skeets, etc).
New rating for this series reflects authorial abuses.
Really, free use? Yet another hugely boring repetitive space battle, now even larger than before, bigger things, and more of them, much bigger booms, perfect solders with narry a thought in their heads but never ending war, never dying, never supposed to relax, eat, drink, share intimately with another human. Just train and kill for millena in seclusion. And this time we learn if you are a certain subsect you get sexy time! Woo! Scheduled rota included. No love, just schedule. Literally 3/4 of this book is useless dogeral that a good editor world have discarded, wild number of misspellings and poor word choices. I have set myself the goal of wading through this missive, but man my page skipping counts are getting to book fractions.
Very interesting blend of SyFy and actual potential science. I intend on reading the entire series of books and am interested in what other books the author wrote. In this latest book I only member seeing 3 grammatical and wrong word being used. The small number of mistakes is a good thing. I have seen a number of books that had so many errors I stopped reading.
Might need an editor who does not rely heavily on auto spell corrections or have the editor go through with auto spell and then reread the book!
It's more of the same formula, struggle hard for mental upgrades (nice trick on doing them piggy back), more combat with the lizards. Darn, I had a marvelous comment on the nude training, of everything I've lost over the years, I miss my mind the most. Knew I should have wrote it down.
With the Zoko and others helping the Lizard’s span of control are almost cut in two It takes the taking of a primary supply system to do it Star Force did it by themselves Then additional contributor to the lizard fight show up and are probably one of the rumored five factions of a race that they know
The quality of the edits has not improved with many poor word choices in this book. Additionally some poorly constructed sentences have started to appear. Still waiting for improvement.
Curious to know what happened to the singer. Always winning curious if that will end. Will there be more back stabbing? Remains a steady interesting read,.