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A world where magic is real. Where being Human just means you are not a Dwarf or an Elf. See a cynical young man who is working towards getting past level one. Add some rich powerful old people trying to take over the Ingame world. Throw in a abandoned haunted orphanage, a mysterious dragon and Gods that cannot be trusted. Add a huge city and young Donators buying their way through the game. Ingame, anything might happen. This story has adult content, please be aware of this.
A world where magic is real. Where being Human just means you are not a Dwarf or an Elf. See a cynical young man who is working towards getting past level one. Add some rich powerful old people trying to take over the Ingame world. Throw in a abandoned haunted orphanage, a mysterious dragon and Gods that cannot be trusted. Add a huge city and young Donators buying their way through the game. Ingame, anything might happen. This story has adult content, please be aware of this.
- GenresFantasy
193 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 18, 2016
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June 14, 2018
Lots of typos
Lots of typos. Punctuation and grammar need work. For supposedly being such a smart guy, Tor can't seem to connect the fact that him being able to use magic irl means that the game is very real. Im not quite sure what the writer was thinking there. It just doesnt seem logical for him to be so stupid. Proof read please
Lots of typos. Punctuation and grammar need work. For supposedly being such a smart guy, Tor can't seem to connect the fact that him being able to use magic irl means that the game is very real. Im not quite sure what the writer was thinking there. It just doesnt seem logical for him to be so stupid. Proof read please
January 4, 2020
A nice attempt
This book needs a lot of editing. The errors can interrupt the flow of the story. The sex scenes are mostly gratuitous, but not too lengthy. The story itself was rushed at the end and ended abruptly without a compelling cliffhanger. I did enjoy the storyline and I will buy the sequel to see if things have improved.
This book needs a lot of editing. The errors can interrupt the flow of the story. The sex scenes are mostly gratuitous, but not too lengthy. The story itself was rushed at the end and ended abruptly without a compelling cliffhanger. I did enjoy the storyline and I will buy the sequel to see if things have improved.
September 27, 2016
Entertaining
It would be a four star if the author hadn't shifted to another character for the last few chapters, otherwise it was a good little book.
It would be a four star if the author hadn't shifted to another character for the last few chapters, otherwise it was a good little book.
February 17, 2017
Good
I liked how this author approached the world they created and greatly enjoyed reading this story. I suggest it to anyone who has wondered where the game ends and life begins.
I liked how this author approached the world they created and greatly enjoyed reading this story. I suggest it to anyone who has wondered where the game ends and life begins.
June 13, 2016
Car crash aweful
Poorly written mysoginistic pap, the main character has everything handed to him on a plate and thinks a shallow back story will build rapport.
I actually managed to finish the book in order to see if it got any better it didn"t.
Thankfully the typo's didn't slow down my ability to finish it in a day the only saving graces were the incredulity at the poor prose, stupid similes and impoverished plot.
The sex scenes were written by a prepubescent with a hormonal deffisit.
Poorly written mysoginistic pap, the main character has everything handed to him on a plate and thinks a shallow back story will build rapport.
I actually managed to finish the book in order to see if it got any better it didn"t.
Thankfully the typo's didn't slow down my ability to finish it in a day the only saving graces were the incredulity at the poor prose, stupid similes and impoverished plot.
The sex scenes were written by a prepubescent with a hormonal deffisit.
July 2, 2017
One of the bests
I wont deny, it could use some editing but only in the talking parts. Sometimes it is kinda difficult to understand but in time you can get used to it.
Have read some chapters before release and i am really glad i left it half, so can have a proper reading time.
There is some part, which i do not catch (the balls mainly) but still awesome.
There is erotic actions in it which i gladly accepted, and am glad it is just in right amount. All time fav.
I wont deny, it could use some editing but only in the talking parts. Sometimes it is kinda difficult to understand but in time you can get used to it.
Have read some chapters before release and i am really glad i left it half, so can have a proper reading time.
There is some part, which i do not catch (the balls mainly) but still awesome.
There is erotic actions in it which i gladly accepted, and am glad it is just in right amount. All time fav.
September 18, 2016
Interesting story, in desperate need of editing
This book is a good, if fairly standard, example of the LitRPG genre. It is an enjoyable read.
Unfortunately, like so many self published books, it is in desperate need of editing. The biggest problem, found constantly through the book, is missing, improper, and mangled quotes. Almost every line of dialogue is improperly quoted.
This book is a good, if fairly standard, example of the LitRPG genre. It is an enjoyable read.
Unfortunately, like so many self published books, it is in desperate need of editing. The biggest problem, found constantly through the book, is missing, improper, and mangled quotes. Almost every line of dialogue is improperly quoted.
April 24, 2016
I read the last 25% of the book just so I could review.
LitRpg books are becoming more common now and most have better fleshed out characters and more compelling challenges. I wanted to like this book but recommend looking elsewhere.
LitRpg books are becoming more common now and most have better fleshed out characters and more compelling challenges. I wanted to like this book but recommend looking elsewhere.
June 4, 2016
Great read wonderful storyline
This has me of those storylines that make you really feel for the mc and his friends. I'm really looking forward to the next book!!
This has me of those storylines that make you really feel for the mc and his friends. I'm really looking forward to the next book!!
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