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Earth
“Everything has a cycle of birth, death and rebirth. This is the only mall in the world where you will find all three…
Inside, you will find stores that don’t exist anywhere else - for this is no ordinary mall…"
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Lilly is in her senior year at high school. She looks forward to college in the fall and a bright future. But when Lilly meets Dion outside the local shopping mall, life as she knows it is about to change forever.
Dion is from a long line of elemental workers. Throughout history, his people have manipulated the elements of earth, air, water or fire.
But Dion is different...
Somehow he inherited the ability to manipulate all four elements. There is also a fifth element, of which little is known and no one has worked in hundreds of years.
The local shopping mall - The Fromatius Mall - appeared suddenly and with little announcement. What the regular mall-goers don’t know, however, is that the mall stands watch over an entrance to the Abyss, a place where the power of the fifth element is guarded by the mysterious builder of the mall. The mall has stores no one has ever seen before, and it's also the home to the four Elemental Grandmasters.
Dion’s parents vanished months ago and only he can bring them back. But to do that, he needs to find each Elemental Grandmaster in the mall to obtain full power for his abilities.
But the mall is guarded by dark forces who don’t want him to find the elemental grandmasters, fulfill his destiny or rescue his parents.
Will Lilly be able to help Dion on his quest? Will Dion return the affection she has for him? Will the dark forces within the Fromatius Mall prove to be too much?
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"Earth" is the first book in the "Manipulator Of Elements" series.
Inside, you will find stores that don’t exist anywhere else - for this is no ordinary mall…"
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Lilly is in her senior year at high school. She looks forward to college in the fall and a bright future. But when Lilly meets Dion outside the local shopping mall, life as she knows it is about to change forever.
Dion is from a long line of elemental workers. Throughout history, his people have manipulated the elements of earth, air, water or fire.
But Dion is different...
Somehow he inherited the ability to manipulate all four elements. There is also a fifth element, of which little is known and no one has worked in hundreds of years.
The local shopping mall - The Fromatius Mall - appeared suddenly and with little announcement. What the regular mall-goers don’t know, however, is that the mall stands watch over an entrance to the Abyss, a place where the power of the fifth element is guarded by the mysterious builder of the mall. The mall has stores no one has ever seen before, and it's also the home to the four Elemental Grandmasters.
Dion’s parents vanished months ago and only he can bring them back. But to do that, he needs to find each Elemental Grandmaster in the mall to obtain full power for his abilities.
But the mall is guarded by dark forces who don’t want him to find the elemental grandmasters, fulfill his destiny or rescue his parents.
Will Lilly be able to help Dion on his quest? Will Dion return the affection she has for him? Will the dark forces within the Fromatius Mall prove to be too much?
Read this unique, never before heard tale for FREE with Kindle Unlimited! Get your copy today and discover what's hidden in plain sight within the Fromatius Mall...
"Earth" is the first book in the "Manipulator Of Elements" series.
- GenresFantasyParanormal
122 pages, Kindle Edition
Published April 18, 2016
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October 27, 2016
Needs a little work
The story was good. Unfortunately there was a lot of tell and not show. There was a TON of background info which is interesting, but the delivery could have Ben different. I think the info was meant to develop the characters. Unfortunately the characters seemed flat still. By the end, the characters were starting the first stages of a dating relationship, but I am not sure how they got there. They barely got to know each other, there didn't seem to be much chemistry and the personalities (the whole tone of the story) seemed old fashioned and flat. The authors has a great story here; the delivery needs a bit of work though. I am not sure i will continue on with the story. The story itself is interesting so maybe.
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The story was good. Unfortunately there was a lot of tell and not show. There was a TON of background info which is interesting, but the delivery could have Ben different. I think the info was meant to develop the characters. Unfortunately the characters seemed flat still. By the end, the characters were starting the first stages of a dating relationship, but I am not sure how they got there. They barely got to know each other, there didn't seem to be much chemistry and the personalities (the whole tone of the story) seemed old fashioned and flat. The authors has a great story here; the delivery needs a bit of work though. I am not sure i will continue on with the story. The story itself is interesting so maybe.
I received this book free from one of the book subscription emails.
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