Basic unimpressive writing that lacks follow through. There are many incongruities throughout the story that just make it a very unsatisfying read. It’s frustrating to read how the writer makes the daughter of an alpha, 2 brothers, and royal blood descendent out to be completely meek. It’s hardly admirable that any time Clarissa is faced with an issue she runs off which is something I would expect from a child and not a young adult who is supposed to lead others and set an example. For being shifters, they seem to have terrible senses as well. Overall disappointing read.
**Spoilers below**
I find it unfathomable that the children of the alpha and luna of the pack don’t know their own pack warriors nor that their friend’s parents are warriors for the pack. I also find it difficult to believe that Clarissa would have no idea that there was a training room in the house that she’s grown up in for 18 years.
There’s also the issue with Shaded Wolves having powers whether they’re royal or not which the triplets seem to be lacking and have no knowledge of. It also doesn’t make any sense why their parents would decide to keep knowledge of the powers from their children for their “protection”. I find that extremely ignorant, narrow minded, and short sited when harnessing those powers should give them an advantage over others. Unfortunately, but not unsurprisingly, you get no closure on this item.
Then there’s the issue that when their pack is attacked by rogues, the family leaves Clarissa without a word. Then Clarissa’s mother is surprised/worried when she wasn’t in the safe house? Another item that appears lacks thought.
The writer also decides to cast suspicion around one of Clarissa’s friends and you never find out what her issue is. What is the point of mentioning and adding that detail if the reader won’t get closure?