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Room Service: The Belmont Hotel Series
Welcome to The Belmont Hotel. Your room is ready. Please don’t hesitate to ask for anything.
Our staff is always here to please.
I like the bartender. Sexy, hot, ass looking fine in those blue slacks, Neil. I have forty-eight
hours, one conference, and a private sauna. Time to order some room service.
Our staff is always here to please.
I like the bartender. Sexy, hot, ass looking fine in those blue slacks, Neil. I have forty-eight
hours, one conference, and a private sauna. Time to order some room service.
35 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 20, 2016
About the author
Pauline Allan
10 books153 followersPauline shares stories that she holds close to her heart. By day Pauline is a special care baby registered nurse and by night a hopeless romantic. She loves to travel to New Orleans twice a year to recharge her creative battery and enjoy a bag full of powdered sugar covered beignets. Sit down, relax and Laissez les bons temps rouler!
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August 23, 2017A true 5-Star hotel is always eager to please.
July 7, 2018
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February 7, 2017
Overall book rating: 2.5
Audio Book: Joel Leslie - 4
Book Cover: 3.5
Short and....hot? I won't say sweet because it doesn’t make the cut for that in my humble opinion. It's sex. As simple as that, no strings attached. Not usually my kind of thing as I'm an avid HEA or if I have no choice HFN kind of girl. There is no promise of anything other than a weekend fling in this story, a whiff of a possible round two should there be a next weekend booking but that really is the gist of it. It was hot though.
Audio Book: Joel Leslie - 4
Book Cover: 3.5
Short and....hot? I won't say sweet because it doesn’t make the cut for that in my humble opinion. It's sex. As simple as that, no strings attached. Not usually my kind of thing as I'm an avid HEA or if I have no choice HFN kind of girl. There is no promise of anything other than a weekend fling in this story, a whiff of a possible round two should there be a next weekend booking but that really is the gist of it. It was hot though.
August 12, 2017
Check in the service in excellent
The interesting thing when u ready anything that is called or related to erotica in any way shape or form. U can automatically assume that it's all one sided about sex and sex alone. In this case we have a story that has some flirting and some naughtiness but more than anything does it's best to mix sensuality and sexuality to the same degree. U also have very sexy men who have fun with one another while never putting more demands on them then are called for. U see there passion grow, u see them have fun with one another and u see them revel. In there manliness and never once show any shame because none should be called fore. Can't wait to read the next installation.
The interesting thing when u ready anything that is called or related to erotica in any way shape or form. U can automatically assume that it's all one sided about sex and sex alone. In this case we have a story that has some flirting and some naughtiness but more than anything does it's best to mix sensuality and sexuality to the same degree. U also have very sexy men who have fun with one another while never putting more demands on them then are called for. U see there passion grow, u see them have fun with one another and u see them revel. In there manliness and never once show any shame because none should be called fore. Can't wait to read the next installation.
January 23, 2018
Choppy Flow But Not Bad For A Quick Read
It didn't love it but I also didn't completely hate it. I believe that the flow could have been much better. There were portions that left me scratching my head because they felt misplaced within the story or they simply didn't flow well. There were also portions I felt could have been omitted for reason of being overly repetative. Two paragraphs in one section stating exactly the same thing. However, the read was easy so I can't complain much. It wasn't the best, but it wasn't horrible.
It didn't love it but I also didn't completely hate it. I believe that the flow could have been much better. There were portions that left me scratching my head because they felt misplaced within the story or they simply didn't flow well. There were also portions I felt could have been omitted for reason of being overly repetative. Two paragraphs in one section stating exactly the same thing. However, the read was easy so I can't complain much. It wasn't the best, but it wasn't horrible.
March 23, 2019
Great introduction.
Wow. The characters better be careful or they might fall in ****. Or that is just my opinion. Enjoyed Gordon and Neill very very much. Apologies if I spelled your name wrong Neill! Wink. I hope they show up in more episodes of their own novel. Again my thoughts only. Easiest review I have written. More please.
Wow. The characters better be careful or they might fall in ****. Or that is just my opinion. Enjoyed Gordon and Neill very very much. Apologies if I spelled your name wrong Neill! Wink. I hope they show up in more episodes of their own novel. Again my thoughts only. Easiest review I have written. More please.
October 21, 2018
Entertaining short M/M Erotica. I didn't understand the importance of the chocolate pie and really thought the steam room scene should have gone a different way. Some of the 'relationship' discussion was contradictory and pointless, wasting pages in this 'short story'.
September 13, 2019
Room service at the Belmont
Interesting Reading from the start I could see the book up before it happen but I felt let down when the book plot stoped at make out what happened at the end
Interesting Reading from the start I could see the book up before it happen but I felt let down when the book plot stoped at make out what happened at the end
September 20, 2020
Nice short story
It was a nice and quick read. Kept my attention. And it's worth reading. I sometimes lost what was going on and what positions people were in(!) But overall I enjoyed the sex scenes and the writing was good too
It was a nice and quick read. Kept my attention. And it's worth reading. I sometimes lost what was going on and what positions people were in(!) But overall I enjoyed the sex scenes and the writing was good too
November 10, 2017
loved the story line feel in love with the bartender in the book
May 25, 2018
Good
Very descriptive of male sex written by a woman. She did a great job of describing the tension and action of the guys.
Very descriptive of male sex written by a woman. She did a great job of describing the tension and action of the guys.
October 31, 2018
I liked it.
This is a 3 out of 5. I really enjoyed reading this short story. It was all I expected. Liked the tention in the beginning and what happened next, I loved it.
This is a 3 out of 5. I really enjoyed reading this short story. It was all I expected. Liked the tention in the beginning and what happened next, I loved it.
February 11, 2019
Chocolate pie, smooth as silk
Great storyline. Short fun read with a lot of heat. A lot packed into 2 day stay. Wish it had been longer.
Great storyline. Short fun read with a lot of heat. A lot packed into 2 day stay. Wish it had been longer.
February 19, 2025
A really enjoyable and interesting experience, I found I couldn't put it down until I finished it 😀 😅
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January 10, 2023
Roman is at the hotel for a finance conference. He’s the guest speaker.
Roman is extremely full of himself. Like, irritatingly so.
Neil and Roman have an instant attraction. Neil is the bartender at the hotel, but he performs other jobs there as well.
Their flirt game is painful…talking secondhand embarrassment here. The prose is odd and disjointed. Dialogue is not sexy.
Action is cold and clinical. The sauna scene had a lot of potential, but it's wasted.
Not even an HFN, so unsure what the point is here.
Roman is extremely full of himself. Like, irritatingly so.
Neil and Roman have an instant attraction. Neil is the bartender at the hotel, but he performs other jobs there as well.
Their flirt game is painful…talking secondhand embarrassment here. The prose is odd and disjointed. Dialogue is not sexy.
Action is cold and clinical. The sauna scene had a lot of potential, but it's wasted.
Not even an HFN, so unsure what the point is here.
April 22, 2016
The summary is pretty straightforward, and you get what you expect with a story like this - a nice, sexy quickie!
I admit it, I'm more of a romance girl so part of me just wants everyone to stay together and have a HEA, but if you're looking for some porny goodness, this might be just what you need!
I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I admit it, I'm more of a romance girl so part of me just wants everyone to stay together and have a HEA, but if you're looking for some porny goodness, this might be just what you need!
I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
July 26, 2016
Really good but I want more!
Felt Roman and Neil's chemistry right from the start but the story ended too soon!
It was hot and sexy and daring.
Maybe another encounter to come.
Felt Roman and Neil's chemistry right from the start but the story ended too soon!
It was hot and sexy and daring.
Maybe another encounter to come.
October 31, 2016
3.5 stars
April 8, 2017
I'm not into gay erotica. Good writing and short story if you like male on male sex.
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August 7, 2018Started reading it found out it was M/M wasn't in the mood to read. Cover art is sexy. Honestly it was the reason I grabbed this freebie from Kindle.
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