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Yes, Mr. Darcy: A Pride and Prejudice Novella
Elizabeth Bennet’s girlish dreams of love and romance are shattered. Her father has decided she will be the one to secure her family’s future through a marriage of convenience to his heir. Disappointment and sadness weigh her soul when she travels with her aunt and uncle—a consolation before she submits to duty. When she sees the reflection of her heartbreak in the face of an unknown young lady, Elizabeth reaches out to the girl, extending a hopeful outlook she herself has been denied.
Mr. Darcy regrets missing the opportunity to know the pretty stranger who helped his grieving, younger sister rise above her sadness. Hope keeps him seeking her face in every crowd. As time passes it seems the woman he admires might be an ephemeral dream born of his heart’s desire. Darcy finally finds her when he is forced to visit his friend, Mr. Bingley, but is she already taken? Can he restore hope to this woman he barely knows? Will she let him?
Mr. Darcy regrets missing the opportunity to know the pretty stranger who helped his grieving, younger sister rise above her sadness. Hope keeps him seeking her face in every crowd. As time passes it seems the woman he admires might be an ephemeral dream born of his heart’s desire. Darcy finally finds her when he is forced to visit his friend, Mr. Bingley, but is she already taken? Can he restore hope to this woman he barely knows? Will she let him?
138 pages, Paperback
Published April 24, 2016
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J. Dawn King
21 books183 followersI go by the name "Joy". There is a well-published author that uses my full name (including the same middle initial). Imagine that!
I also write as Christie Capps. These are all variations of Pride and Prejudice that are about 100-120 pages in length.
I also write as Christie Capps. These are all variations of Pride and Prejudice that are about 100-120 pages in length.
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March 2, 2019
4.5 stars
I read this as a Work In Progress online and now read it again in the published form. Additionally, I do so love the cover. I have read all of Joy's books and look forward to the next publication of The Abominable Mr. Darcy, which I have also followed online.
This story begins with Elizabeth walking through Lambton while her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner visit her old friends as Aunt Gardiner grew up there. Elizabeth overhears weeping and reflects on all the reasons for such. She, in her own right, has much to mourn as this little trip with her relatives is to be her last bit of freedom. Her parents have been informed that a Mr. Collins, the heir to Longbourn under the entailment, has decided to visit and select from among their five daughters a wife. M/M Bennet, after consideration, have jointly decided that Elizabeth is to be the offering.
So Elizabeth upon espying a weeping young girl in the cemetery goes into the grave yard and gently offers consolation. The young lady identifies her sorrow as that for her deceased nurse and governess, a Mrs. Northam, Norty, and proceeds to describe the wonderful relationship she and her older brother have had with this woman. One thing leads to another and soon it comes out that the young lady has acted in a manner she is sure Norty would not approve of and with that Elizabeth tenderly has this young lady consider lessons learned and how to precede. As that final word of advice is given and words spoken of how the brother might be judging her actions, he shows up and offers words of reassurance and physical consolation by hugging her to him. But when they turn to offer thanks or even an introduction, SHE is gone.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has overheard the caring and tender and gentle guidance offered to his sister and feels greatly indebted as he immediately sees the results of the grave side conversation. He then looks for this person in Lambton, in the surrounding areas and then even in London as he returns to the social scene there. Georgiana has taken the words of advice to heart and has continued to improve but Darcy wants to bring this wonder-worker into their circle of acquaintances, even to make her a close friend. Not finding her in London he accepts an invitation to travel with his friend, Bingley, to his newly leased estate, Netherfield in Hertfordshire and to help guide him in learning how to manage it.
And now we come to The Meryton Assembly, the dance at which canon has "The Insult" color the relationship of ODC...BUT here our variation takes a much sweeter tone. Read as Darcy now has a chance to return the favor, the great service, Elizabeth preformed for Georgiana and thus for him. He takes a much stronger approach to make amends and to set straight the Bennet debacle.
You will love how he manipulates events in a very timely and appropriate manner. He has not been a student of human nature for nothing (all that silent pondering from the sidelines has taught him a thing or two). Some of this is a near thing, a gamble, but he plays it all close to the vest and wins.
No, there is no angst between Elizabeth and Darcy in this tale. Sweet words and a "love at first sight" type of romance - at least from one side. And just wait until you read the results of the chess match! Brilliant. The epilogue is a choice but how can one not want to read on? Especially when one reads the result of Mr. Bennet's deal with Mr. Collins...justice served!
I reread this in paperback form on 3/2/19. Note that this story ends at 87% when we are given a prelude into The Abominable Mr. Darcy.
I read this as a Work In Progress online and now read it again in the published form. Additionally, I do so love the cover. I have read all of Joy's books and look forward to the next publication of The Abominable Mr. Darcy, which I have also followed online.
This story begins with Elizabeth walking through Lambton while her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner visit her old friends as Aunt Gardiner grew up there. Elizabeth overhears weeping and reflects on all the reasons for such. She, in her own right, has much to mourn as this little trip with her relatives is to be her last bit of freedom. Her parents have been informed that a Mr. Collins, the heir to Longbourn under the entailment, has decided to visit and select from among their five daughters a wife. M/M Bennet, after consideration, have jointly decided that Elizabeth is to be the offering.
So Elizabeth upon espying a weeping young girl in the cemetery goes into the grave yard and gently offers consolation. The young lady identifies her sorrow as that for her deceased nurse and governess, a Mrs. Northam, Norty, and proceeds to describe the wonderful relationship she and her older brother have had with this woman. One thing leads to another and soon it comes out that the young lady has acted in a manner she is sure Norty would not approve of and with that Elizabeth tenderly has this young lady consider lessons learned and how to precede. As that final word of advice is given and words spoken of how the brother might be judging her actions, he shows up and offers words of reassurance and physical consolation by hugging her to him. But when they turn to offer thanks or even an introduction, SHE is gone.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has overheard the caring and tender and gentle guidance offered to his sister and feels greatly indebted as he immediately sees the results of the grave side conversation. He then looks for this person in Lambton, in the surrounding areas and then even in London as he returns to the social scene there. Georgiana has taken the words of advice to heart and has continued to improve but Darcy wants to bring this wonder-worker into their circle of acquaintances, even to make her a close friend. Not finding her in London he accepts an invitation to travel with his friend, Bingley, to his newly leased estate, Netherfield in Hertfordshire and to help guide him in learning how to manage it.
And now we come to The Meryton Assembly, the dance at which canon has "The Insult" color the relationship of ODC...BUT here our variation takes a much sweeter tone. Read as Darcy now has a chance to return the favor, the great service, Elizabeth preformed for Georgiana and thus for him. He takes a much stronger approach to make amends and to set straight the Bennet debacle.
You will love how he manipulates events in a very timely and appropriate manner. He has not been a student of human nature for nothing (all that silent pondering from the sidelines has taught him a thing or two). Some of this is a near thing, a gamble, but he plays it all close to the vest and wins.
No, there is no angst between Elizabeth and Darcy in this tale. Sweet words and a "love at first sight" type of romance - at least from one side. And just wait until you read the results of the chess match! Brilliant. The epilogue is a choice but how can one not want to read on? Especially when one reads the result of Mr. Bennet's deal with Mr. Collins...justice served!
I reread this in paperback form on 3/2/19. Note that this story ends at 87% when we are given a prelude into The Abominable Mr. Darcy.
October 8, 2016
First Impressions set the tone
Purists take a break and just read a cute story that shows an entirely different side to ODC. Wow, how to describe this? I’ve read it twice. It is a quick read and delightful.
I was surprised by the emotional ride that this author evoked within my sphere of feelings. I ached, cringed, groaned, was moved to tears [but didn’t cry], touched beyond what I expected, gloried at the victory, grieved at the loss, laughed at the absurdity, and giggled at the revenge. Yes, J. Dawn King knows how to wring out every emotion you have so be prepared to experience it all.
This Elizabeth seemed younger, more naïve and innocent than canon. Even though she was different, that also allowed her a better understanding, more acceptance and a willingness to hear truth, believe it and then to act on it when needed.
Darcy also seemed younger and yet, was more bold, more decisive and demonstrated a willingness to go for what he wanted against all odds. I loved this guy. He was so cute and creative when in negotiations for what he wanted and surprise of surprises, it happened over a chess game. The face time with ODC was adorable, sweet, touching and I was moved by the creativity of the scene.
Elizabeth, Georgiana, and Darcy meet at the beginning of our story. They all liked each other and then Darcy spent the next few months trying to find her. He and Georgiana both wanted her in their lives even before they knew who she was.
Mr. and Mrs. Bennet are extreme in this version. I did not like them, and yet they added the needed tension, comic relief and that push that our dear couple needed to encourage their affections for each other.
Mr. Bennet was a disappointment and watching him fall in the eyes of his daughter was hard to endure. Even in canon, Elizabeth had a good understanding of her father and his actions [or lack thereof] in his marriage and with his protection of his daughters. Whatever relationship they had in this version fell with a loud crash as Mr. B. sacrificed his daughter’s happiness for his own comfort as easily as he would sacrifice his queen to an opponent. Since Mr. B. was a champion chess player from his university days, there were many chess related references. Even his plans were chess maneuvers.
Those plans were quite simple, Lizzy would marry Collins, they’d live at Longbourn [thus he wouldn’t lose her], when he died she’d become Mistress of Longbourn, taking on the responsibility of the estate and see to the comfort of his widow and her younger sisters. What could be simpler…and at very little expense to himself. He could then spend all his time in his book room and let Lizzy handle things.
Mr. Darcy did not respect the Bennet parents. He understood their dilemma; however, he did not appreciate Mr. Bennet’s lackadaisical conduct, nor his abdicating his responsibility for the care of his family. I loved Darcy comments regarding Mrs. Bennet’s disdain and ill treatment of his Elizabeth. Her future house would be “…small enough to match her thinking towards her second daughter…” I’ve never seen that response before. This Mr. Darcy was really straight forward in his thinking. He truly was a chess player and a good one at that. His strategies regarding Elizabeth’s family was awesome.
Darcy did not appreciate nor tolerate Mr. Collins or his attentions toward Elizabeth. What a toad of a man. He was awful. I cannot find words sufficient enough to describe his attitude and actions; clueless does not even come close.
Lady Catherine was livid regarding Darcy’s connections and relationship with such a family. Her revenge on Collins was swift and final. Her set-down of Caroline was fast and effective; I wanted to cheer.
Bingley and Jane found their HEA.
There was a most excellent Epilogue and a Post Script that was a delight. I LOVED them both, such surprises and a most excellent reveal. I cannot discuss anything in either as that would be a terrible spoiler. So you HAVE to read it.
Problems: Editing: I don’t know whether or not it was an ebook problem, but sentences were broken as though enter had been hit instead of allowing for text to wrap properly. That left the rest of a sentence dangling on the next line. That happened several times.
Purists take a break and just read a cute story that shows an entirely different side to ODC. Wow, how to describe this? I’ve read it twice. It is a quick read and delightful.
I was surprised by the emotional ride that this author evoked within my sphere of feelings. I ached, cringed, groaned, was moved to tears [but didn’t cry], touched beyond what I expected, gloried at the victory, grieved at the loss, laughed at the absurdity, and giggled at the revenge. Yes, J. Dawn King knows how to wring out every emotion you have so be prepared to experience it all.
This Elizabeth seemed younger, more naïve and innocent than canon. Even though she was different, that also allowed her a better understanding, more acceptance and a willingness to hear truth, believe it and then to act on it when needed.
Darcy also seemed younger and yet, was more bold, more decisive and demonstrated a willingness to go for what he wanted against all odds. I loved this guy. He was so cute and creative when in negotiations for what he wanted and surprise of surprises, it happened over a chess game. The face time with ODC was adorable, sweet, touching and I was moved by the creativity of the scene.
Elizabeth, Georgiana, and Darcy meet at the beginning of our story. They all liked each other and then Darcy spent the next few months trying to find her. He and Georgiana both wanted her in their lives even before they knew who she was.
Mr. and Mrs. Bennet are extreme in this version. I did not like them, and yet they added the needed tension, comic relief and that push that our dear couple needed to encourage their affections for each other.
Mr. Bennet was a disappointment and watching him fall in the eyes of his daughter was hard to endure. Even in canon, Elizabeth had a good understanding of her father and his actions [or lack thereof] in his marriage and with his protection of his daughters. Whatever relationship they had in this version fell with a loud crash as Mr. B. sacrificed his daughter’s happiness for his own comfort as easily as he would sacrifice his queen to an opponent. Since Mr. B. was a champion chess player from his university days, there were many chess related references. Even his plans were chess maneuvers.
Those plans were quite simple, Lizzy would marry Collins, they’d live at Longbourn [thus he wouldn’t lose her], when he died she’d become Mistress of Longbourn, taking on the responsibility of the estate and see to the comfort of his widow and her younger sisters. What could be simpler…and at very little expense to himself. He could then spend all his time in his book room and let Lizzy handle things.
Mr. Darcy did not respect the Bennet parents. He understood their dilemma; however, he did not appreciate Mr. Bennet’s lackadaisical conduct, nor his abdicating his responsibility for the care of his family. I loved Darcy comments regarding Mrs. Bennet’s disdain and ill treatment of his Elizabeth. Her future house would be “…small enough to match her thinking towards her second daughter…” I’ve never seen that response before. This Mr. Darcy was really straight forward in his thinking. He truly was a chess player and a good one at that. His strategies regarding Elizabeth’s family was awesome.
Darcy did not appreciate nor tolerate Mr. Collins or his attentions toward Elizabeth. What a toad of a man. He was awful. I cannot find words sufficient enough to describe his attitude and actions; clueless does not even come close.
Lady Catherine was livid regarding Darcy’s connections and relationship with such a family. Her revenge on Collins was swift and final. Her set-down of Caroline was fast and effective; I wanted to cheer.
Bingley and Jane found their HEA.
There was a most excellent Epilogue and a Post Script that was a delight. I LOVED them both, such surprises and a most excellent reveal. I cannot discuss anything in either as that would be a terrible spoiler. So you HAVE to read it.
Problems: Editing: I don’t know whether or not it was an ebook problem, but sentences were broken as though enter had been hit instead of allowing for text to wrap properly. That left the rest of a sentence dangling on the next line. That happened several times.
June 21, 2016
I had downloaded this sweet novella onto my kindle as Your Pain-My Heart (its working title when it was a WIP) with a bunch of other completed JAFF stories a while back from a fan fiction site and (shame on me!) forgot it was there! At only 10 chapters, it doesn't take long to read, so I was quick to rectify this oversight when I came across it yesterday.
While the premise that Mr. Bennet agrees that Elizabeth must marry Mr. Collins is not unique, in this case he has granted her some time to accustom herself to that reality by taking a trip with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. During her journey, she encounters Georgiana Darcy, who is distraught at the gravesite of a beloved nurse after her shame and foolishness in being Mr. Wickham's dupe. Even though Elizabeth has been dealing with her own kind of heartache, she reaches out and offers a shoulder to cry on as well as some wisdom and encouragement. Mr. Darcy comes upon them, overhears a little of their conversation, and echoes Elizabeth's sentiments to his sister. As he and Georgiana embrace, Elizabeth slips away without seeking or offering an introduction. When Mr. Darcy later finds her at the Meryton assembly on the cusp of being formally engaged to Mr. Collins, he intervenes.
The interactions between Elizabeth and Darcy touch the heart. Since he's already had a glimpse into her soul, there are no misunderstandings between them to work through, but they do have to contend with Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine deBourgh. Short and sweet.
While the premise that Mr. Bennet agrees that Elizabeth must marry Mr. Collins is not unique, in this case he has granted her some time to accustom herself to that reality by taking a trip with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner. During her journey, she encounters Georgiana Darcy, who is distraught at the gravesite of a beloved nurse after her shame and foolishness in being Mr. Wickham's dupe. Even though Elizabeth has been dealing with her own kind of heartache, she reaches out and offers a shoulder to cry on as well as some wisdom and encouragement. Mr. Darcy comes upon them, overhears a little of their conversation, and echoes Elizabeth's sentiments to his sister. As he and Georgiana embrace, Elizabeth slips away without seeking or offering an introduction. When Mr. Darcy later finds her at the Meryton assembly on the cusp of being formally engaged to Mr. Collins, he intervenes.
The interactions between Elizabeth and Darcy touch the heart. Since he's already had a glimpse into her soul, there are no misunderstandings between them to work through, but they do have to contend with Mr. and Mrs. Bennet, Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine deBourgh. Short and sweet.
May 22, 2016
Another romantic home run by Ms King!!!!
I adored this novella by J Dawn King, she writes so marvelously and thoroughly that you believe you are right there in the book!! She just keeps getting better and better and has me hooked, line and sinker!!!
This story begins with Elizabeth walking through Lambton while her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner visit her old friends as Aunt Gardiner grew up there. This little trip with her relatives it to be her last bit of freedom as her parents have informed that a Mr. Collins, the heir to Longbourn under the entailment has decided to visit and choose a wife. Elizabeth's sorrow comes from the fact the her parents have decided that Elizabeth is to be the sacrificial lamb and informs her of it via letter requesting her to come home immediately..
So when Elizabeth comes upon a weeping young girl at the cemetery on her walk, she goes into the cemetery and gently offers consolation. The young lady identifies her sorrow as that for her deceased nurse and governess, a Mrs. Northam, Norty, and proceeds to describe the wonderful relationship she and her older brother have had with this woman. One thing leads to another and the girl spills all her worries and sorrow to Elizabeth, and her concern for her brother's reaction. Unbeknownst to them, the brother came upon them and heard part of the conversation before he intruded to give his sister his reassurance of his love. Elizabeth carefully and quietly excused herself, though she left a huge impact on the brother and sister.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has overheard the caring and tender and gentle guidance offered to his sister and feels greatly indebted as he immediately sees the results of the grave side conversation. He then looks for this person in Lambton, in the surrounding areas and then even in London as he returns to the social scene there. Georgiana has taken the words of advice to heart and has continued to improve but Darcy wants to bring this wonder-worker into their circle of acquaintances, even to make her a close friend. Not finding her in London he accepts an invitation to travel with his friend, Bingley, to his newly leased estate and help guide him in learning how to manage it.
So off to Meryton, where low and behold he runs into the very lady he's scoured Lambton and London for!!! At the Meryton Assembley, when Darcy spies Elizabeth, all he could do was to engage her as soon as possible. This is much better Assembly versus the one in canon, 'The Insult' does not happen, in fact events are a complete 180 degrees from canon. Read as Darcy now has a chance to return the favor, the great service, Elizabeth preformed for Georgiana and thus for him. He takes a much stronger approach to make amends and to set straight the Bennet debacle.
I love how Darcy manipulates the events to his liking. There is no angst between Elizabeth and Darcy in this tale, only sweet words and a "love at first sight" type of romance - at least from one side. And just wait until you read the results of the chess match! Brilliant. The epilogue is a must read, especially when one reads the result of Mr. Bennet's deal with Mr. Collins....justice served!
I have to say that this was just what I needed at the time, a low angst novella, that has not strife between ODC!!!! I would highly recommend this novella to all JAFFers, and say to keep it close at hand for a second, third, etc, perusal. I look forward to more masterpieces by Ms King!!!!
I adored this novella by J Dawn King, she writes so marvelously and thoroughly that you believe you are right there in the book!! She just keeps getting better and better and has me hooked, line and sinker!!!
This story begins with Elizabeth walking through Lambton while her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner visit her old friends as Aunt Gardiner grew up there. This little trip with her relatives it to be her last bit of freedom as her parents have informed that a Mr. Collins, the heir to Longbourn under the entailment has decided to visit and choose a wife. Elizabeth's sorrow comes from the fact the her parents have decided that Elizabeth is to be the sacrificial lamb and informs her of it via letter requesting her to come home immediately..
So when Elizabeth comes upon a weeping young girl at the cemetery on her walk, she goes into the cemetery and gently offers consolation. The young lady identifies her sorrow as that for her deceased nurse and governess, a Mrs. Northam, Norty, and proceeds to describe the wonderful relationship she and her older brother have had with this woman. One thing leads to another and the girl spills all her worries and sorrow to Elizabeth, and her concern for her brother's reaction. Unbeknownst to them, the brother came upon them and heard part of the conversation before he intruded to give his sister his reassurance of his love. Elizabeth carefully and quietly excused herself, though she left a huge impact on the brother and sister.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has overheard the caring and tender and gentle guidance offered to his sister and feels greatly indebted as he immediately sees the results of the grave side conversation. He then looks for this person in Lambton, in the surrounding areas and then even in London as he returns to the social scene there. Georgiana has taken the words of advice to heart and has continued to improve but Darcy wants to bring this wonder-worker into their circle of acquaintances, even to make her a close friend. Not finding her in London he accepts an invitation to travel with his friend, Bingley, to his newly leased estate and help guide him in learning how to manage it.
So off to Meryton, where low and behold he runs into the very lady he's scoured Lambton and London for!!! At the Meryton Assembley, when Darcy spies Elizabeth, all he could do was to engage her as soon as possible. This is much better Assembly versus the one in canon, 'The Insult' does not happen, in fact events are a complete 180 degrees from canon. Read as Darcy now has a chance to return the favor, the great service, Elizabeth preformed for Georgiana and thus for him. He takes a much stronger approach to make amends and to set straight the Bennet debacle.
I love how Darcy manipulates the events to his liking. There is no angst between Elizabeth and Darcy in this tale, only sweet words and a "love at first sight" type of romance - at least from one side. And just wait until you read the results of the chess match! Brilliant. The epilogue is a must read, especially when one reads the result of Mr. Bennet's deal with Mr. Collins....justice served!
I have to say that this was just what I needed at the time, a low angst novella, that has not strife between ODC!!!! I would highly recommend this novella to all JAFFers, and say to keep it close at hand for a second, third, etc, perusal. I look forward to more masterpieces by Ms King!!!!
May 1, 2016
A sweet novella, beginning with a meeting earlier than canon in Lambton. Elizabeth finds a young lady in the cemetery, and her sweet trusting nature allows the girl to open up to the stranger, who gives her advice to help both her and her brother heal. This singular encounter sets the stage for the events that follow. Darcy spends the next few months searching for her, even attending the Meryton Assembly on the off chance she would be there, for which he is rewarded. During their first dance, he discovers her parents' plan to marry her to Collins to save their family from their own ineptitude and selfish natures. This more decisive and caring Darcy then proceeds to do anything he can to save her.
December 8, 2025
Very Good Short
Reviewed in Canada on September 28, 2019
Great short story. Well written. Loved the different first meeting and how Darcy rescues Elizabeth from Collins. Bingley’s words to Darcy were wonderful. Five boys to Mrs. Bennet’s five girls. Gotta love it.
April 2, 2023 - Audiobook
Good narration by Catherine O’Brien.
Reviewed in Canada on September 28, 2019
Great short story. Well written. Loved the different first meeting and how Darcy rescues Elizabeth from Collins. Bingley’s words to Darcy were wonderful. Five boys to Mrs. Bennet’s five girls. Gotta love it.
April 2, 2023 - Audiobook
Good narration by Catherine O’Brien.
May 5, 2016
The high ratings for this novella are absurd. It's cliché-ridden and full of overused romance tropes, and the central "conflict" is resolved so easily (and in such a ridiculous way) that there is absolutely no emotional authenticity either to the love story or the social barriers to that love story. In fact, I'd be hard-pressed to find any hint of actual plot development as opposed to discrete tableaux cobbled together with bits of sugary endearments. I've read one-shots with greater depth of feeling and more believable romance in one paragraph than I read in this entire novella. I stubbornly refused to end my agony until I finished it, but I'm genuinely puzzled by the high praise.
November 6, 2016
A Wonderful Meet Cute for Darcy and Elizabeth!
In this novella-length variation, Mr. Bennet looks favorably on Mr. Collins pursuit of Elizabeth, and does not allow Elizabeth to consider rejecting his proposal. Having been negligent in preparing for the future, Mr. Bennet decides this is the best way to ensure protection and support for his wife and other daughters. Elizabeth has a very bleak outlook on her future and her small ray of happiness is traveling with her beloved aunt and uncle to Derbyshire before any marriage arrangements officially begin. While there, Elizabeth encounters a heartbroken young girl who is grieving the loss of someone important in her life and desperately needing some advice and counsel. Elizabeth, with quiet sympathy, listens to the young girl’s despair and recent troubles and tenderly provides some comfort.
Elizabeth never suspects that her kindness and compassion greatly effect and impress the young girl’s older brother who overheard the endearing exchange. So much so that he continued for months to look for her all around Derbyshire, Lambton, and London. Only to find her where he least expected to…
I love seeing adorable first encounters for Darcy and Elizabeth! It is always interesting to explore how the course of their relationship changes when they meet with no pride or prejudice! As you might imagine, their second meeting happens at the Meryton Assembly and it is there that Mr. Darcy learns about Elizabeth’s predicament with Mr. Collins and comes up with a swift and surprising solution! Who doesn’t love to see Darcy come to the rescue, right? I especially enjoyed how Elizabeth thinks Darcy is only rescuing her to repay the kindness she showed his sister! No, no Lizzy, Mr. Darcy has his own agenda!
While the romance develops rather expediously from this point, Darcy and Elizabeth do face some obstacles as Mr. Bennet prefered his original plan of Elizabeth marrying Mr. Collins and remaining near him at Longbourn. I might say that romanitc feelings and decisions came about a little too rapidly and easily for my taste, but this is a novella – I was prepared for it to be fast-paced and succinct. And knowing Ms. King has a true romantic heart, I knew I could anticipate some beautiful and romantic scenes. Even though this work is shorter in length, Ms. King made sure there were plenty moments of tender devotion and heart-stopping exchanges. I loved how Lydia and Kitty would witness many of these scenes and begin to fantasize about having romantic suitoirs like their sister’s!
What I enjoyed most about this variation was how Ms. King accentuated some of Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s most admirable and praiseworthy characteristics. Elizabeth’s heart-to-heart with Georgiana is handled with such beautiful sympathy and gentleness. And this Mr. Darcy will easily win over everyones’ heart with his integrity, strong sense of responsibility, and loyal protection for all those who depend on him. I loved seeing him stand up to both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. It was wonderful to see such a focus on these commendable and inspiring qualities.
Is your heart craving a sweet romance and happily-ever-after? Then pick up a copy of J. Dawn King’s delightful Yes, Mr. Darcy! A perfect choice for readers who want a low-angst romance featuring a decisive, determined, and devoted Mr. Darcy! Yes, indeed!
In this novella-length variation, Mr. Bennet looks favorably on Mr. Collins pursuit of Elizabeth, and does not allow Elizabeth to consider rejecting his proposal. Having been negligent in preparing for the future, Mr. Bennet decides this is the best way to ensure protection and support for his wife and other daughters. Elizabeth has a very bleak outlook on her future and her small ray of happiness is traveling with her beloved aunt and uncle to Derbyshire before any marriage arrangements officially begin. While there, Elizabeth encounters a heartbroken young girl who is grieving the loss of someone important in her life and desperately needing some advice and counsel. Elizabeth, with quiet sympathy, listens to the young girl’s despair and recent troubles and tenderly provides some comfort.
Elizabeth never suspects that her kindness and compassion greatly effect and impress the young girl’s older brother who overheard the endearing exchange. So much so that he continued for months to look for her all around Derbyshire, Lambton, and London. Only to find her where he least expected to…
I love seeing adorable first encounters for Darcy and Elizabeth! It is always interesting to explore how the course of their relationship changes when they meet with no pride or prejudice! As you might imagine, their second meeting happens at the Meryton Assembly and it is there that Mr. Darcy learns about Elizabeth’s predicament with Mr. Collins and comes up with a swift and surprising solution! Who doesn’t love to see Darcy come to the rescue, right? I especially enjoyed how Elizabeth thinks Darcy is only rescuing her to repay the kindness she showed his sister! No, no Lizzy, Mr. Darcy has his own agenda!
While the romance develops rather expediously from this point, Darcy and Elizabeth do face some obstacles as Mr. Bennet prefered his original plan of Elizabeth marrying Mr. Collins and remaining near him at Longbourn. I might say that romanitc feelings and decisions came about a little too rapidly and easily for my taste, but this is a novella – I was prepared for it to be fast-paced and succinct. And knowing Ms. King has a true romantic heart, I knew I could anticipate some beautiful and romantic scenes. Even though this work is shorter in length, Ms. King made sure there were plenty moments of tender devotion and heart-stopping exchanges. I loved how Lydia and Kitty would witness many of these scenes and begin to fantasize about having romantic suitoirs like their sister’s!
What I enjoyed most about this variation was how Ms. King accentuated some of Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s most admirable and praiseworthy characteristics. Elizabeth’s heart-to-heart with Georgiana is handled with such beautiful sympathy and gentleness. And this Mr. Darcy will easily win over everyones’ heart with his integrity, strong sense of responsibility, and loyal protection for all those who depend on him. I loved seeing him stand up to both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. It was wonderful to see such a focus on these commendable and inspiring qualities.
Is your heart craving a sweet romance and happily-ever-after? Then pick up a copy of J. Dawn King’s delightful Yes, Mr. Darcy! A perfect choice for readers who want a low-angst romance featuring a decisive, determined, and devoted Mr. Darcy! Yes, indeed!
August 30, 2022
This is one of my favorite comfort reads, and I've read and listened to it many times. Yes, Mr. Darcy is one of the sweetest stories I've read...I can't say it's my favorite King because that title belongs to whichever J. Dawn King book I'm reading at the time! I'm being silly, but I love this book. I'm not here to offer plot reveal because other's have done it already and it's so short it's too easy to spoil it for others.
I wasn't reviewing when I enjoyed this so many times before, and for this very reason: I don't know how to review well and I'm afraid there's no way to do it justice but say how much I want to tell everyone to just read it.
On a personal note; I had been slogging through a very long sad angsty book struggling to see it through to the end. I needed multiple 'comfort read' breaks along the way, and who did I choose? J. Dawn King and Christie Capps, same wonderful author. Bless you Ms. King.
I wasn't reviewing when I enjoyed this so many times before, and for this very reason: I don't know how to review well and I'm afraid there's no way to do it justice but say how much I want to tell everyone to just read it.
On a personal note; I had been slogging through a very long sad angsty book struggling to see it through to the end. I needed multiple 'comfort read' breaks along the way, and who did I choose? J. Dawn King and Christie Capps, same wonderful author. Bless you Ms. King.
December 18, 2025
Why did I hesitate so long?! It was so good!
The story practically starts in Lampton on a cemetery where Elizabeth meets Georgiana and little later also Darcy.
It takes months until our dear couple see each other again, but unfortunately Elizabeth is somehow promised to Mr. Collins, not by her own choosing though. From there on Elizabeth and Darcy are spending a lot of time together and coming up with a plan to separate her from Collins.
However, be aware, Elizabeth is definitely the least favorite at Longbourn.
You want a short well written novella? This might be for you.
I recommend this book.
The story practically starts in Lampton on a cemetery where Elizabeth meets Georgiana and little later also Darcy.
It takes months until our dear couple see each other again, but unfortunately Elizabeth is somehow promised to Mr. Collins, not by her own choosing though. From there on Elizabeth and Darcy are spending a lot of time together and coming up with a plan to separate her from Collins.
However, be aware, Elizabeth is definitely the least favorite at Longbourn.
You want a short well written novella? This might be for you.
I recommend this book.
August 8, 2016
This is a very quick read as well as a very quick paced story. If you read it on the Concorde you might travel back in time (that's a joke)
What makes this Pride & Prejudice novella so unique is that it contains none of either - at least not from the main characters. Beginning in Lambton when Lizzy Bennet encounters a grieving Georgiana Darcy at the grave of her governess. Lizzy gives Georgiana advice and feedback and witnesses her embraced by a caring brother before fleeing.
Lizzy has her own problems- her parents have decided that she will save their bacon by marrying the heir to Longbourn sight unseen. When she and Mr. Darcy reunite at the Meryton Assembly it is a very different Darcy who finds his 'Cinderella' and immediately sets out to rescue her from her predicament.
There are two 'odd' things about this story it happens in a remarkably short amount of time and all the real 'action' happens off stage. Since Darcy spent months searching for the woman who 'healed' his sister's heart; he also spent the time reforming his prejudices and pride. Thus the man who meets the Bennets is so in love with Lizzy nothing his family does can make him flinch. But we the reader never see this 'Proud' Darcy. Lizzy falls in love with an unknown man because he embraces his little sister. We don't even get to read about the wedding.
Then there is a long epilogue that is really pointless (personal preference I rarely like epilogues). And 22% of the story is a preview of another book.
What makes this Pride & Prejudice novella so unique is that it contains none of either - at least not from the main characters. Beginning in Lambton when Lizzy Bennet encounters a grieving Georgiana Darcy at the grave of her governess. Lizzy gives Georgiana advice and feedback and witnesses her embraced by a caring brother before fleeing.
Lizzy has her own problems- her parents have decided that she will save their bacon by marrying the heir to Longbourn sight unseen. When she and Mr. Darcy reunite at the Meryton Assembly it is a very different Darcy who finds his 'Cinderella' and immediately sets out to rescue her from her predicament.
There are two 'odd' things about this story it happens in a remarkably short amount of time and all the real 'action' happens off stage. Since Darcy spent months searching for the woman who 'healed' his sister's heart; he also spent the time reforming his prejudices and pride. Thus the man who meets the Bennets is so in love with Lizzy nothing his family does can make him flinch. But we the reader never see this 'Proud' Darcy. Lizzy falls in love with an unknown man because he embraces his little sister. We don't even get to read about the wedding.
Then there is a long epilogue that is really pointless (personal preference I rarely like epilogues). And 22% of the story is a preview of another book.
May 17, 2016
A nice short story - Mr Bennett plays an unexpected role and the usual characters find a very strong love very quickly.
June 26, 2016
2.5 Stars
May 14, 2018
4.5⭐️
October 8, 2016
Oh, this was just what I needed after reading three high angst P&P volumes. Ms. King's novella is exquisitely endearing and beautifully conveyed. This is an alternate path from canon with low angst between Darcy and Elizabeth, however, they do still have to contend with Lady Catherine, Mr. Collins and Mr. and Mrs. Bennet. How Darcy manipulated events to ensure Elizabeth did not marry Mr. Collins was well done.
I have yet to be disappointed in Ms. King's novellas/novels. I find all my emotions are engaged and my heart invested in the story. Just in the first chapter alone, my throat constricted and my heart was touched:
'Elizabeth could not take her eyes away from them. So much pain for two people so alone. Remembering her own troubles, she was surprised at her longing to climb inside those strong arms and hear his promises of comfort.'
I highly recommend this short but absolutely lovely story of love at first sight...
I have yet to be disappointed in Ms. King's novellas/novels. I find all my emotions are engaged and my heart invested in the story. Just in the first chapter alone, my throat constricted and my heart was touched:
'Elizabeth could not take her eyes away from them. So much pain for two people so alone. Remembering her own troubles, she was surprised at her longing to climb inside those strong arms and hear his promises of comfort.'
I highly recommend this short but absolutely lovely story of love at first sight...
October 21, 2018
This is a very sweet and cute novella, taking about an hour to read with a chapter of 'The abominable Mr Darcy' at the end (which is something I usually hate but have downloaded this already and cant wait to get started!)
I digress... this story starts with a scene in a graveyard in Lambton between Elizabeth and Georgiana... personally I didn't find it a particularly interesting encounter, but Mr Darcy did and tries to find the woman who was so kind and lovely to his sister. At the same time, we have Elizabeth being forced into a marriage with Mr Collins by Mr Bennet. Darcy finds her the night before Collins intends to make his proposal... not much time here to make your mind up Darcy!
This was a really sweet, romantic book where Darcy and Elizabeth come to understand each other quickly. There are some very unlikely public displays of affection... but I don't care! I'm clearly in the mood for a tale with no messing about or misunderstandings! I quite like stories that take this more aggressive view of Mr Bennet's lack of regard for the future of his family. He is quite the villain in this story and I very much liked disliking him!
I digress... this story starts with a scene in a graveyard in Lambton between Elizabeth and Georgiana... personally I didn't find it a particularly interesting encounter, but Mr Darcy did and tries to find the woman who was so kind and lovely to his sister. At the same time, we have Elizabeth being forced into a marriage with Mr Collins by Mr Bennet. Darcy finds her the night before Collins intends to make his proposal... not much time here to make your mind up Darcy!
This was a really sweet, romantic book where Darcy and Elizabeth come to understand each other quickly. There are some very unlikely public displays of affection... but I don't care! I'm clearly in the mood for a tale with no messing about or misunderstandings! I quite like stories that take this more aggressive view of Mr Bennet's lack of regard for the future of his family. He is quite the villain in this story and I very much liked disliking him!
October 23, 2018
Sweet and romantic novella.
The interpersonal relationships carried the story rather than drama or angst.
Elizabeth destiny was set as the sacrificial lamb of the Bennet family with her upcoming nuptials to Mr Collins. A chance encounter at the cemetery in Lambton, changed her course though as she helped a young girl overcome with grief.
Darcy had searched high and low for the young lady who had comforted his sister and he found her at an assembly in Meryton.
No one would doubt the out come although the courtship was a rather unusual one.
Ends in a lovely epilogue.
Recommend!
The interpersonal relationships carried the story rather than drama or angst.
Elizabeth destiny was set as the sacrificial lamb of the Bennet family with her upcoming nuptials to Mr Collins. A chance encounter at the cemetery in Lambton, changed her course though as she helped a young girl overcome with grief.
Darcy had searched high and low for the young lady who had comforted his sister and he found her at an assembly in Meryton.
No one would doubt the out come although the courtship was a rather unusual one.
Ends in a lovely epilogue.
Recommend!
May 5, 2022
Darcy falls for the woman who comforted his sister
A better first impression leads to a less contentious relationship and instead of a refusal and quarrel, there are numerous heartfelt questions that Elizabeth must respond with an equally heartfelt, "Yes, Mr Darcy." I loved this for the romantic dialogue. There is a fateful chess game and confrontations with Lady C, Collins and Mr Bennet. Some ways the author recycled original dialogue were quite clever.
Steam level: kissing.
A better first impression leads to a less contentious relationship and instead of a refusal and quarrel, there are numerous heartfelt questions that Elizabeth must respond with an equally heartfelt, "Yes, Mr Darcy." I loved this for the romantic dialogue. There is a fateful chess game and confrontations with Lady C, Collins and Mr Bennet. Some ways the author recycled original dialogue were quite clever.
Steam level: kissing.
May 29, 2016
Yes, Mr. Darcy is an unusual variation on Pride and Prejudice which takes the reader quite a distance from the original. It is well written and enjoyable, and I do recommend it, but purists be aware.
Mr. Bennet has determined the only way for his family to survive while he continues to spend his indolent life as he chooses is to arrange a marriage of his convenience between his second daughter, Elizabeth, and his heir, Mr. Collins. He would like the couple to marry and live at Longbourn so they can care for the estate for the rest of his life.
Elizabeth is given a short reprieve to travel to Derbyshire with her aunt and uncle Gardiner. While there she has a very life changing conversation with Georgiana Darcy. She recently returned from Ramsgate where George Wickham almost convinced her to elope. She is feeling terrible guilt and shame, and needs someone to talk to. Elizabeth comes to her rescue and Mr. Darcy sees this and wants to know her. But, Elizabeth disappears before any names can be exchanged. Darcy goes to every ball, dinner, etc. he can trying to find her. Finally, he heads to Netherfield to visit Bingley.
Now, Darcy finds Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly and he does not insult her. There actually is not any problem between the two of them. All issues are between them as a couple and those who do not want them to marry. Of course, we have our HEA, but there are a few worrisome moments.
I enjoyed the characters of Elizabeth and Darcy, and found the conversations very romantic. This was a fun read and I recommend J. Dawn King novels.
Mr. Bennet has determined the only way for his family to survive while he continues to spend his indolent life as he chooses is to arrange a marriage of his convenience between his second daughter, Elizabeth, and his heir, Mr. Collins. He would like the couple to marry and live at Longbourn so they can care for the estate for the rest of his life.
Elizabeth is given a short reprieve to travel to Derbyshire with her aunt and uncle Gardiner. While there she has a very life changing conversation with Georgiana Darcy. She recently returned from Ramsgate where George Wickham almost convinced her to elope. She is feeling terrible guilt and shame, and needs someone to talk to. Elizabeth comes to her rescue and Mr. Darcy sees this and wants to know her. But, Elizabeth disappears before any names can be exchanged. Darcy goes to every ball, dinner, etc. he can trying to find her. Finally, he heads to Netherfield to visit Bingley.
Now, Darcy finds Elizabeth at the Meryton assembly and he does not insult her. There actually is not any problem between the two of them. All issues are between them as a couple and those who do not want them to marry. Of course, we have our HEA, but there are a few worrisome moments.
I enjoyed the characters of Elizabeth and Darcy, and found the conversations very romantic. This was a fun read and I recommend J. Dawn King novels.
May 10, 2016
I toggle between this rating and a higher one.. I enjoyed this short story but it wasn't Elizabeth and Darcy to me. And Dan it really be true love within 24 hours of seeing a person again? Elizabeth consoles Georgiana, a stranger in a cemetery at the start of the novel and thus starts Darcy's pursuit of this unselfish caring woman. Elizabeth must reconcile herself to accept Collins and I could not picture Mr Bennet really being this cruel.. Darcy is a romantic but I didn't think it was realistic, it was too easy, too quick of a resolution. So even though I enjoyed it, it didn't have the depth I expected.
July 5, 2017
A beautifully writer short story with Darcy and Elizabeth falling in love from the beginning. The Bennets are selfish and lazy, not caring about Lizzy's happiness. My main complaint is, that everything happened too fast between ODC. But otherwise it's a heartbreaking and heartwarming love story.
4.5 stars
4.5 stars
April 6, 2018
As a last trip before marriage, Elizabeth Bennet is touring the north with the Gardiners. As her father has informed her that she is to marry Collins against her wishes. There she meets and consoles Georgiana Darcy. Overheard by Darcy he is determined to find this young lady. Months later her meets her again. Is there a HEA for anyone.
A sweet short novella
A sweet short novella
January 20, 2021
A Good P&P Variation
I enjoyed this little novella. I loved how sweet Darcy was to Lizzy, even if he was a little ooc for me. The Bennetts are terrible, of course, which I expected. It tidied up nicely at the end. Overall, I'd recommend this.
I enjoyed this little novella. I loved how sweet Darcy was to Lizzy, even if he was a little ooc for me. The Bennetts are terrible, of course, which I expected. It tidied up nicely at the end. Overall, I'd recommend this.
May 7, 2024
A sweet, fluffy, low angst story with a bit of OOC behaviour from ODC. Short and sweet.
May 7, 2016
Nice variation
Only failing is there is no explanation as to why it was so difficult for Darcy to track Elizabeth down. Surely a simple enquiry at the inn would have put him on the track of the Gardiners
Only failing is there is no explanation as to why it was so difficult for Darcy to track Elizabeth down. Surely a simple enquiry at the inn would have put him on the track of the Gardiners
May 4, 2016
Very enjoyable
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and would recommend it to Darcy lovers. It has a warm feel good factor through out and I just wished it had been longer.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book and would recommend it to Darcy lovers. It has a warm feel good factor through out and I just wished it had been longer.
July 29, 2016
Awww! This was so precious. Very lighthearted, easy and sweet. The title was perfect too. "Yes, Mr. Darcy.".....
January 12, 2017
Say yes to this book. Darcy was lovely.
May 9, 2022
This was a very boring story that gave me zero romantic feels. Maybe this author is not for me?
February 23, 2018
Elizabeth is taking one last trip with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner before her arranged marriage to Mr. Collins takes place. When she comes across a distraught young girl in a graveyard, she can't help but offer comfort to another miserable soul. Mr. Darcy overhears her gentle words of wisdom to his sister but before he can speak to Elizabeth, she disappears. Darcy spends the next several months searching for her and finally discovers her in Hertfordshire at the Meryton assembly.
This was a quick listen at almost three hours, easy enough to listen to in one sitting. If you're looking for a cute read with plenty of sweet interaction and conversation between Lizzy and Darcy, this is a good choice. If you're a purist looking for an adaption that is faithful to the characters, this one veers from canon. I know in a book with no Wickham and Lydia drama, there needs to be another antagonist, but I was sorry to see it was Mr. Bennet. I love Mr. Bennet in the original, I love his sarcastic wit and his obvious love for his daughters. He was self-aware enough to mock himself. He loved Lizzy enough to threaten to not speak to her if she married Mr. Collins, and made sure Lizzy actually wanted to marry Darcy. This Mr. Bennet doesn't deserve Lizzy's love or respect. He's forcing Lizzy to marry Mr. Collins for his own comfort, he's selfish, arrogant, and rude to Darcy. Mrs. Bennet is also very different from canon, she physically manhandles Lizzy and constantly disparages her. Lizzy describes Mrs. Bennet as living day to day with no thought to the future, which is a very strange way to describe the husband-hunting mamma! These changes didn't detract from my enjoyment of the story, but I did go back and reread my favorite parts of the original to reassure myself that Mr. Bennet was still his sly witty self.
The interactions between Lizzy and Darcy were lovely and were the real star of the story, as they should be. Their relationship was low angst and developed quickly with plenty of sweet moments. I loved the epilogue. The narration was done well, with different voices for each character and a lovely accent. I'd recommend this to Austen fan fiction fans!
This was a quick listen at almost three hours, easy enough to listen to in one sitting. If you're looking for a cute read with plenty of sweet interaction and conversation between Lizzy and Darcy, this is a good choice. If you're a purist looking for an adaption that is faithful to the characters, this one veers from canon. I know in a book with no Wickham and Lydia drama, there needs to be another antagonist, but I was sorry to see it was Mr. Bennet. I love Mr. Bennet in the original, I love his sarcastic wit and his obvious love for his daughters. He was self-aware enough to mock himself. He loved Lizzy enough to threaten to not speak to her if she married Mr. Collins, and made sure Lizzy actually wanted to marry Darcy. This Mr. Bennet doesn't deserve Lizzy's love or respect. He's forcing Lizzy to marry Mr. Collins for his own comfort, he's selfish, arrogant, and rude to Darcy. Mrs. Bennet is also very different from canon, she physically manhandles Lizzy and constantly disparages her. Lizzy describes Mrs. Bennet as living day to day with no thought to the future, which is a very strange way to describe the husband-hunting mamma! These changes didn't detract from my enjoyment of the story, but I did go back and reread my favorite parts of the original to reassure myself that Mr. Bennet was still his sly witty self.
The interactions between Lizzy and Darcy were lovely and were the real star of the story, as they should be. Their relationship was low angst and developed quickly with plenty of sweet moments. I loved the epilogue. The narration was done well, with different voices for each character and a lovely accent. I'd recommend this to Austen fan fiction fans!
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