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Erotic Road Trip Adventures
When a couple who lives and breathes to express and explore every opportunity of their most primal desire goes on a road trip with a couple who hasn’t done so much as have a threesome, viewpoints collide, opportunities open, and primal desires awaken.
And the real crazy part, both couples are having a hard time communicating with each other, even though they’re pretty much saying the same thing.
Welcome to Part 1 of the ASNAD series - Erotic Road trip Adventures.
Nate: “Never in my life have I ever been this excited by a couple. Their potential is limitless and I want Rayya and I to be the catalyst to their growth and usher them into their new life. I can’t believe this, but I’m truly frightened. They’re at the very edge. The spot where they can step of the cliff and fly into the horizon with us - or plummet - plummet down into the depths of their mundane, stale existence. We must be careful not to drive them down, while still maintaining the same level of pressure, if not more, so that they truly become a diamond. We need, we need to be subtle. Yes, subtle is force.”
And the real crazy part, both couples are having a hard time communicating with each other, even though they’re pretty much saying the same thing.
Welcome to Part 1 of the ASNAD series - Erotic Road trip Adventures.
Nate: “Never in my life have I ever been this excited by a couple. Their potential is limitless and I want Rayya and I to be the catalyst to their growth and usher them into their new life. I can’t believe this, but I’m truly frightened. They’re at the very edge. The spot where they can step of the cliff and fly into the horizon with us - or plummet - plummet down into the depths of their mundane, stale existence. We must be careful not to drive them down, while still maintaining the same level of pressure, if not more, so that they truly become a diamond. We need, we need to be subtle. Yes, subtle is force.”
77 pages, ebook
Published April 26, 2016
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O.M. Wills
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June 1, 2016
*****FOUR STARS*****
{ARC Generously Provided by Author}
So normally I don’t read this type of erotica. I mean down and dirty, pure smut!! I’ve tried and the dialog usually makes me laugh. I was contacted by the author and was asked if I’d like to review some of his books. At first, I declined because I am seriously up to my eyeballs in ARCs, but then he sent me the link to one of his blog posts and I was surprised at how hot it was. I then decided to give him a chance.
Let me just say, holy hell, this book is so freaking HOT & DIRTY!! I’m talking D-I-R-T-Y!! If you like a lot of dirty talking while getting it on, yeah this book is for you. It’s definitely one to put in your spank bank pile. Who knew a man could write some good smut?? I surely didn’t!!
So although I rarely read this type of literature, I will be returning to it whenever I feel the need to let off a little steam!! LOL
I have to add that this is about two married couples on a road trip together and there is a hotter than hell menage scene that takes place towards the end. But what I liked was that these couples really did have a deep and meaningful love for each other. It wasn’t just all about the dirty schmexy times!!
{ARC Generously Provided by Author}
So normally I don’t read this type of erotica. I mean down and dirty, pure smut!! I’ve tried and the dialog usually makes me laugh. I was contacted by the author and was asked if I’d like to review some of his books. At first, I declined because I am seriously up to my eyeballs in ARCs, but then he sent me the link to one of his blog posts and I was surprised at how hot it was. I then decided to give him a chance.
Let me just say, holy hell, this book is so freaking HOT & DIRTY!! I’m talking D-I-R-T-Y!! If you like a lot of dirty talking while getting it on, yeah this book is for you. It’s definitely one to put in your spank bank pile. Who knew a man could write some good smut?? I surely didn’t!!
So although I rarely read this type of literature, I will be returning to it whenever I feel the need to let off a little steam!! LOL
I have to add that this is about two married couples on a road trip together and there is a hotter than hell menage scene that takes place towards the end. But what I liked was that these couples really did have a deep and meaningful love for each other. It wasn’t just all about the dirty schmexy times!!
October 20, 2016
➦Ever thought about swinging? Let's face it, it's probably not the easiest thing to pull off in our society. If you set your eyes on a couple you actually know, how do you approach the subject? How do you tell them you want them? What if they think you are some kind of weirdos and proceed to spread rumors about you?
➦This short erotic novella revolves around two couples who go on a road trip together. One of the couples is an instigator and drops all kinds of clues, some subtle and some not so much, about their intentions.
➦The subject matter is certainly interesting and I do like the message the author is trying to send. However, I feel like the execution could have been better. The story is often hard to follow because of the 3rd person POV. I kept getting confused between the two men and even between the couples. And due to the fact that the novel jumps into the sex before any character development I had a hard time telling any of them apart.
➦From the very beginning I felt like I was in some kind of an 80's porn movie lol I mean, they scream dirty stuff and it's a bit repetitive.
➦Also, right after saying something dirty they go ahead and profess their love to each other. I don't know, it was all a bit OTT for me.
➦Aaaand, while I'm all for sex with strangers... I believe in practicing safe sex, so the bodily fluid exchange in this made me cringe a bit...
and even
➦And I'm totally not turned on by the smelly pussy lol I think some MEN might be, but once that image was in my head... I just kept thinking...
and may be some
➦Yeah, so this one is really dirty, for all you naughty peeps out there :) Give it a chance, a lot of my GR buddies liked this one. I just find it hard to care or get worked up over undeveloped characters, but that's pretty much a problem with a lot of novellas. This book was just "OK" for me.
Also, on a side note, there are tons of typos and punctuation mistakes, which are rather distracting. I do prefer the word "through" to be spelled out entirely instead of a shorter version of "thru."
July 14, 2016
4 “Listen to them Baby" stars
Erotic Road Trip Adventures (ASNAD, #1) was graciously provided by the author with the hopes that the ending will make me say "OMFG". Let's face it, if you know me, you know the range of my smut scale is pretty damn wide, so to get me to say "OMFG" is not an easy task. So while this didn't get me to utter those exact words, I found it highly arousing and wicked. However, I will neither confirm nor deny jumping the hubby while he was sleeping.
Two couples. Two rooms. One car...and a whole lot of temptation and possibilities. It was interesting to read, the dialog had me picturing two big breasted porn stars and their overly hung partners. Sounds fun right, well it totally is. This is the very beginning of their journey together, leaving us wanting more. Recommended read for sure, especially for those in need of something quick naughty!
Copy kindly provided by the author.
Erotic Road Trip Adventures (ASNAD, #1) was graciously provided by the author with the hopes that the ending will make me say "OMFG". Let's face it, if you know me, you know the range of my smut scale is pretty damn wide, so to get me to say "OMFG" is not an easy task. So while this didn't get me to utter those exact words, I found it highly arousing and wicked. However, I will neither confirm nor deny jumping the hubby while he was sleeping.
Two couples. Two rooms. One car...and a whole lot of temptation and possibilities. It was interesting to read, the dialog had me picturing two big breasted porn stars and their overly hung partners. Sounds fun right, well it totally is. This is the very beginning of their journey together, leaving us wanting more. Recommended read for sure, especially for those in need of something quick naughty!
Copy kindly provided by the author.
May 24, 2016
Genre: Erotica
Type: Novella 1 of 6 from ASNAD series
POV: Third Person
Rating:
3.5 Golden Cocks
Two couples embarked on a road trip from Bellevue to Chicago. Jay and Karman were having communication problem and wanted to use the trip as a de-stressor. They were reserved with their feelings towards each other and to what they wanted.
Nate and Rayya may seemed completely opposite with their more daring approach, but deep down inside both couple wanted the same thing. They just had to find a way to relay it without ruining their friendship.
This book is all about having the guts to do what you want and the key to getting it is by communication. In this case, both couples wanted to experiment with each other, but there were scoping each other out slowly in order not to damage potential future encounter.
I like the daring sex scenes, especially the one that might be a little out there for some. I’m a sexual deviant, so that kind of scene made my blood pump to the right places hahah!
Due to the multiple characters told in third person POV, I did have a few problems. There were several instances I got confused who were talking/addressing/referring to who. I had to go back a few sentences to make sure I got the right person. I was also hoping for certain scenes, but I guess, I can’t be greedy lol!
Note: One of the thing I like about the author’s work is his characters are racially diverse .
Books in the series:
Standalones
Series
For more reviews/reveals/giveaways visit:
Type: Novella 1 of 6 from ASNAD series
POV: Third Person
Rating:
3.5 Golden Cocks
Two couples embarked on a road trip from Bellevue to Chicago. Jay and Karman were having communication problem and wanted to use the trip as a de-stressor. They were reserved with their feelings towards each other and to what they wanted.
“You’re damn right something was in my eye and it’s still there. Hell, I just saw wifey take a peak and she’s never been the bi-curious type.”
Nate and Rayya may seemed completely opposite with their more daring approach, but deep down inside both couple wanted the same thing. They just had to find a way to relay it without ruining their friendship.
“Because, when my pussy is being fucked, my ass is hungry. And when my ass is being fucked. My pussy gets hungry, really, really hungry,”
This book is all about having the guts to do what you want and the key to getting it is by communication. In this case, both couples wanted to experiment with each other, but there were scoping each other out slowly in order not to damage potential future encounter.
"I want my husband to see your desire for me, and know that you’re willing to give me your all when you fuck me in front of him,”
I like the daring sex scenes, especially the one that might be a little out there for some. I’m a sexual deviant, so that kind of scene made my blood pump to the right places hahah!
Due to the multiple characters told in third person POV, I did have a few problems. There were several instances I got confused who were talking/addressing/referring to who. I had to go back a few sentences to make sure I got the right person. I was also hoping for certain scenes, but I guess, I can’t be greedy lol!
Note: One of the thing I like about the author’s work is his characters are racially diverse .
Books in the series:
Standalones
Series
For more reviews/reveals/giveaways visit:
July 8, 2016
This is another fast and fun journey from O.M. Wills! I enjoyed reading this short story and enjoyed the characters. I enjoy a good story line along with the “hot” stuff. You get both in this short novella. The author did a great job and kept me entertained until the very end.
Complimentary copy provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Complimentary copy provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
May 2, 2016
4 "dirty luscious-way-to-push-one's boundaries" stars
O.M. Wills'work was only recently discovered and here I am reading his third book.
I know what to expect from this author when he himself states this:
i can only speak for myself and say that in each of O.M. Wills books so far, I have been whiplashed by different feels, and yes those are mentioned right above.
This book is no different!
We get a story of two married couples embarging on a road trip while they are trying to get to know each other by sharing their time in small talk but slowly trying to open up to various subjects of allure and sexual attraction. They are trying to share experiences and yet they find themselves locked in a self-frame of "stigma", "fear of judgement" and "miscommunication" by not actually verbalizing their true desires and inner thoughts.
They are left with pent-up sexual tension set upon the release under the highlightened hidden desires of sexual exploration and breaking the boundaries that are limiting them in being who they really are, sexually, physically, emotionally.
Even though, I knew what to expect I was thrown into this whirpool of bodies exploration that is not for everyone. If you are not open minded and get easily offended by extra dirty, non conventional, sexual exploration, don't read it.
BUT if you are intrigued...and curious, go for it.
The writing is good, the dialogues exchanged with inner thoughts of the characters were nice and fluent, sometimes the proclamation words were somewhat exaggerated but I wrote it down to the "in the heat of a passion" moments that the characters were swept from. The story somewhat ends in an undefined closure and is actually screaming for the sequel...
So, I am ready for the next installment in the series...
COPY provided by the author in exchange for an honest review
NEWS FLASH!
I am guest starring on my dear friend EBRU (Abby *wink*) blog...so you can freely check that out!
CLICK HERE:
O.M. Wills'work was only recently discovered and here I am reading his third book.
I know what to expect from this author when he himself states this:
When you day dream of someone you like, it's a hot, beautiful flash of lust, passion, hunger and desire.
This is what I want you to experience when you read my books.
i can only speak for myself and say that in each of O.M. Wills books so far, I have been whiplashed by different feels, and yes those are mentioned right above.
This book is no different!
We get a story of two married couples embarging on a road trip while they are trying to get to know each other by sharing their time in small talk but slowly trying to open up to various subjects of allure and sexual attraction. They are trying to share experiences and yet they find themselves locked in a self-frame of "stigma", "fear of judgement" and "miscommunication" by not actually verbalizing their true desires and inner thoughts.
They are left with pent-up sexual tension set upon the release under the highlightened hidden desires of sexual exploration and breaking the boundaries that are limiting them in being who they really are, sexually, physically, emotionally.
Even though, I knew what to expect I was thrown into this whirpool of bodies exploration that is not for everyone. If you are not open minded and get easily offended by extra dirty, non conventional, sexual exploration, don't read it.
BUT if you are intrigued...and curious, go for it.
The writing is good, the dialogues exchanged with inner thoughts of the characters were nice and fluent, sometimes the proclamation words were somewhat exaggerated but I wrote it down to the "in the heat of a passion" moments that the characters were swept from. The story somewhat ends in an undefined closure and is actually screaming for the sequel...
So, I am ready for the next installment in the series...
COPY provided by the author in exchange for an honest review
NEWS FLASH!
I am guest starring on my dear friend EBRU (Abby *wink*) blog...so you can freely check that out!
CLICK HERE:
December 9, 2017
Holy. Freaking. Schnitzel!! I realize I got just what the doctor ordered with this batch of smutty deliciousness by O.M. Wills.
Two seemingly different couples embark on a road trip. Each stop tells us more about the intricacies of their relationships. Both were unexpectedly freaky, with one couple taking it up a notch. Both couples are in love, but one couple wouldn't mind making it a foursome. The author explored the doubts, insecurities and frustrations that can be found when trying to forge a bond with other people. Aside from all that, this story was freaking HOT!! This author sure knows how to craft a sex scene.
Two seemingly different couples embark on a road trip. Each stop tells us more about the intricacies of their relationships. Both were unexpectedly freaky, with one couple taking it up a notch. Both couples are in love, but one couple wouldn't mind making it a foursome. The author explored the doubts, insecurities and frustrations that can be found when trying to forge a bond with other people. Aside from all that, this story was freaking HOT!! This author sure knows how to craft a sex scene.
May 27, 2016
This book writing style is different from what I've read so far - but it really captured me. It feels like I'm there with the characters and experience what they are experiencing. And I've definately would like what they are experiencing =P. What I've really like the most is the rawness of their personal feelings from each of the characters. There was a deep undercurrent of love and affection throughout the whole book and it seems that the author take the time to highlight the character showing love to each other such as kisses on the forehead and checks. The last two chapters - OMFG - hot menage scene beyond my imagination.
I can't wait for the next installment of the series.
I can't wait for the next installment of the series.
July 18, 2016
4 Salacious Stars!
Wow...that was smokin Hot!
Dirty, filthy, sexy, "Oh Yeah"
A bit different style of writing, but still
Ticked all my box's lol... ;) ;)
Four people on a road trip thats turned into exploration and Sexual self discovery...continues in book 2! More
Revelations to be revealed....
Wow...that was smokin Hot!
Dirty, filthy, sexy, "Oh Yeah"
A bit different style of writing, but still
Ticked all my box's lol... ;) ;)
Four people on a road trip thats turned into exploration and Sexual self discovery...continues in book 2! More
Revelations to be revealed....
July 18, 2016
Okay this actually was a trip, a sexy hell of a trip of discovery about sexuality.
So we have 2 married couples here, that are about to ride along sharing the same air in a car to their destiny, and in which they will find more than just one similitude.
Rayya & Nate
An Arabian girl & a Jewish hot guy that live life at its FULL no need to say more.
They are happily married and enjoy life with all its perks and they don’t mind about what other people would think but rather what his/her partner will think of the other one, so their only goal in life, apparently it’s living it as it’s fully which also includes sexually , of course.
But they do know how to play their cards, being both blessed with attractive bodies they both do enjoy of an open marriage where other people can jump in, participate and let them go crazy at any rate they want…but this lil thing of them will see frustrated when they meet a couple…that, by the looks of it are the only ones that can actually reject them.
Karman & Jay
An Spanish woman & Black sexy guy, happily married as well but that rather take their own pervy bussines in private as any other conservative regular married couple, right?.
So thinking that they are about to endure one of the most boring road trips of human kind, they both won’t even see coming that they are actually being the target of two hot sexy predators that are more than alluring, and that would do anything to have them at their mercy
And by calling to their realseves, the real feeling they have for each other will come to the surface straightening in an unimaginable way their marriage.
The question here is…would they actually be up to it? Allowing to show themselves as they really are or keeping themselves in private for so long has already summoned them to a boring life of silence where the perks of sexy crazy life is no further to their reach.
what would it be?
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Quite entertaining & interesting with crazy and pretty not-your-normal-neighbors-characters.
Last scene..WOW!
**Rev on it's way**
So we have 2 married couples here, that are about to ride along sharing the same air in a car to their destiny, and in which they will find more than just one similitude.
Rayya & Nate
An Arabian girl & a Jewish hot guy that live life at its FULL no need to say more.
They are happily married and enjoy life with all its perks and they don’t mind about what other people would think but rather what his/her partner will think of the other one, so their only goal in life, apparently it’s living it as it’s fully which also includes sexually , of course.
But they do know how to play their cards, being both blessed with attractive bodies they both do enjoy of an open marriage where other people can jump in, participate and let them go crazy at any rate they want…but this lil thing of them will see frustrated when they meet a couple…that, by the looks of it are the only ones that can actually reject them.
Karman & Jay
An Spanish woman & Black sexy guy, happily married as well but that rather take their own pervy bussines in private as any other conservative regular married couple, right?.
So thinking that they are about to endure one of the most boring road trips of human kind, they both won’t even see coming that they are actually being the target of two hot sexy predators that are more than alluring, and that would do anything to have them at their mercy
And by calling to their realseves, the real feeling they have for each other will come to the surface straightening in an unimaginable way their marriage.
The question here is…would they actually be up to it? Allowing to show themselves as they really are or keeping themselves in private for so long has already summoned them to a boring life of silence where the perks of sexy crazy life is no further to their reach.
what would it be?
----------------------------------------------------
Quite entertaining & interesting with crazy and pretty not-your-normal-neighbors-characters.
Last scene..WOW!
**Rev on it's way**
July 28, 2016
Hot, Hot, Hot from beginning to end. I needed a breather before the second book.
Actually, nope, I'm gonna start the second one right now ;P.
Actually, nope, I'm gonna start the second one right now ;P.
July 12, 2016
Erotic Road Trip Adventures is my second book by O.M. Wills and wow this book was truly hot and definitely erotic. I do not normally read pure smut books and I try to avoid them but I was pulled from the start by this book. It certainly delivered on the goods. Try reading this book in the early hours of the morning and see what happens to you because damn the amount of sexual content in this was enough to cause my ovaries to combust.
Erotic Road Trip Adventures centers on two couples, Jay and Karman and Nate and Rayya. Jay and Karman are a couple who are reserved and conservative decide to take a trip from Bellevue to New York. They offer to give a ride to Nate and Rayya, a fun and outgoing couple. Little do they know that this couple are swingers and are attracted to them. This book was so mind-blowingly hot. I mean, it started with both couples having amazing, hot and wild sex and damn I was just shocked. While reading, my jaw dropped because I was just in a trance. Totally did not expect that all. This book was more than just a a smut book in my opinion but it was more of exploring one's sexual desires. I was in awe of this book. It had me bewitched from the first page to the last page. Although short, it actually packed a punch and gave a certain edge. I followed this story and I was able to sink into the book. I actually commend the author for actually giving me a direct picture to these two couples' world.
The characters were just perfect. I loved the author used characters of diverse backgrounds. There was a Jew, a Colombian, a Lebanese who each had so much dynamic characteristics that added so much depth to the book. I loved that each character in the book had different backgrounds that clearly made me enjoy the book. They were all so captivating and I was just lost in their world. I wanted more.
I truly enjoyed this book. It was fast paced book that had edge of my feet and I wanted to know what was going to happen next. It was totally different from all the smut books I have read thus I was able to really enchanted by the story. It is a quick read and as reader like me, I devoured this book so fast that I was even shocked. This is a book that you do not want to read in public at all.
ARC provided by author O.M. Wills in exchange for an honest review.
Erotic Road Trip Adventures centers on two couples, Jay and Karman and Nate and Rayya. Jay and Karman are a couple who are reserved and conservative decide to take a trip from Bellevue to New York. They offer to give a ride to Nate and Rayya, a fun and outgoing couple. Little do they know that this couple are swingers and are attracted to them. This book was so mind-blowingly hot. I mean, it started with both couples having amazing, hot and wild sex and damn I was just shocked. While reading, my jaw dropped because I was just in a trance. Totally did not expect that all. This book was more than just a a smut book in my opinion but it was more of exploring one's sexual desires. I was in awe of this book. It had me bewitched from the first page to the last page. Although short, it actually packed a punch and gave a certain edge. I followed this story and I was able to sink into the book. I actually commend the author for actually giving me a direct picture to these two couples' world.
The characters were just perfect. I loved the author used characters of diverse backgrounds. There was a Jew, a Colombian, a Lebanese who each had so much dynamic characteristics that added so much depth to the book. I loved that each character in the book had different backgrounds that clearly made me enjoy the book. They were all so captivating and I was just lost in their world. I wanted more.
I truly enjoyed this book. It was fast paced book that had edge of my feet and I wanted to know what was going to happen next. It was totally different from all the smut books I have read thus I was able to really enchanted by the story. It is a quick read and as reader like me, I devoured this book so fast that I was even shocked. This is a book that you do not want to read in public at all.
ARC provided by author O.M. Wills in exchange for an honest review.
July 28, 2016
Hot doesn't even cut it for this book....steaming, melting, raging, burning, all of those words belong in front of HOT!!!! I cannot believe how raw this book is, I think has to be one of the most open stories about relationships and what makes them tick.....namely SEX...and there is a lot of it, starting on the first page.
Jay and Karman are taking a road trip to New York which they do about once a year it's a way for them to get away and distress from their everyday lives, and this trip will hopefully open up their lines of communication. Nate and Rayya are joining them on the road trip but their destination is Chicago. The two couples are polar opposites, Jay and Karman are a conservative couple (strictly vanilla), while Nate and Rayya are outgoing and sexually adventurous (like Rocky Road). Can these two couples get along in a car for so many hours? And what will their nights bring?
Jay and Karman are taking a road trip to New York which they do about once a year it's a way for them to get away and distress from their everyday lives, and this trip will hopefully open up their lines of communication. Nate and Rayya are joining them on the road trip but their destination is Chicago. The two couples are polar opposites, Jay and Karman are a conservative couple (strictly vanilla), while Nate and Rayya are outgoing and sexually adventurous (like Rocky Road). Can these two couples get along in a car for so many hours? And what will their nights bring?
July 5, 2016
Spoiler Ahead This book opened up with a bang I mean a couple going at it so hot and heavy that it got the other couple started. This was a short quick read that I liked and wished was longer. What happens when two couples go on a road trip and one couple lives and breathes to express and explore every opportunity of their most primal desire and the hasn't done any wild in exploring sexually. Nate and Rayya and Karman and Jay are having a hard time connecting with each other. They all have a lot of pent up sexual tension breaking down barriers and exploring ones sexual desires. I liked both couples in the story while they each explore both emotions and sexual and their limits. The sex scenes in this book were hot and I didn't want it to end. This was my first time reading this author the book was well written with no errors in spelling or grammar. I am looking forward to the next book in this series.
July 24, 2016
I read Erotic Road Trip Adventures #1 and #2 back to back. It is true what everyone is saying, it is really steamy. It left me wanting for more. I read a lot of steamy books before but this one really rope me in. It's like watching a movie but closer so it makes the steaminess 10 times more.
I really love Rayya and her free spirit. I would like to experience what Rayya experience in this book (i.e.: M/F/M). Hot Reggie and Nate, what can a lady ask for in her life. I really recommend this book if you have not read this.
I really love Rayya and her free spirit. I would like to experience what Rayya experience in this book (i.e.: M/F/M). Hot Reggie and Nate, what can a lady ask for in her life. I really recommend this book if you have not read this.
July 17, 2016
This was a very sexy read. The sentences and the thought processes were very clear. This is my first book by this author, who I found out was a male author, I'm astounded how well he was able to seamlessly transition between female and male point of view.
The fact that he was able to write the last two chapters in a female's point of view to me shows how attentive to a woman's nature. I feel that he really captures the moment, and as a woman I really felt like I was right there. If you have never read this author's work before, please do and start with this one.
The fact that he was able to write the last two chapters in a female's point of view to me shows how attentive to a woman's nature. I feel that he really captures the moment, and as a woman I really felt like I was right there. If you have never read this author's work before, please do and start with this one.
August 2, 2016
The first book was totally, amazingly, and tortuously hot. I can't believe how open Nate and Rayya are. The only thing that was disappointing was that it stopped before the trip was over. Luckily the second book is already out so I bought it immediately. This is not the type of book that you can read just anywhere, unless you want to be squirming around people. It's a start of an amazing trip.
July 15, 2016
I really enjoyed this book!! I think the only reason I gave it a 4 stars is that it was to short for me, yes I do know it does say short stories, but overall I really enjoyed the way the author wrote with the thoughts of the characters it really helps to relate to them. Highly recommended read.
July 1, 2016
Anxious for book two.. What is the deal with these peeps? I must know.
I would recommend this one.
Happy Reading :)
I would recommend this one.
Happy Reading :)
July 14, 2016
Rating: 3.5★
Erotic Road Trip Adventures is as what the title suggest and then some. Erotic. Adventure. Sexuality.
My read was actually hot and eye opening at the same time. It was hard for me to organize my thoughts though because I have a hard time what I really wanted to say. I know my thoughts well while reading and after it, but I guess it got muddled or something.
Anyway, this is only book 1 and there’s more to come. Yum, I think. This is about two couple who are a complete contrast of each other but are heading towards the same thing. The first couple wanted to explore their sexuality, had their own kinks, but are closed mind because of some past that happened to them. They aren’t just wary, they’re confidence deflated and thus the reason they are just content of what they have even if they could be so much more.
The other couple, however, are those kind of people that knows what they want and go for it. They are confident with themselves and their sexuality and are just open about anything. They see something in the other couple and thinks that they could nudge them in the right direction.
And so the road trip begins.
I know this would be long, but I hope it wouldn’t up being like a novel. Anyway, there’s actually also something underlying of what I think there is of the novel. I think it’s about what we want and that sometimes we really want to do something to make it happen but we are held back by what society thinks, or what other people think, or more importantly, what we would think of ourselves. Our greatest enemy being ourselves that holds us to do something so daring and adventurous, to act upon our desires without any care about the consequences that left us feeling unsatisfied.
I’ve also had a long thought. I think I was laughing at myself while reading, because I was like the other couple sometimes. I look at people and then I try to imagine how they are in bed, how they have sex, what are their kinks or if they are those that are plain vanilla. I know, I know. It’s not judgment placed on others or anything. It’s what I learned about in the book. It’s like you’re searching or looking for a person or people and wanting them to be like you. To be your perfect match, or just to be the one you’re looking for to share your thoughts, and passion and desire.
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May 15, 2016
2.5 star rating
**CAUTION ~ VERY HONEST REVIEW**
I thought this was not the best I have ever read.
Mostly throughout the entire book I was annoyed and frustrated. The story or plot was ok, but could have been written better. The characters were written alright.
The biggest problem here was the third person writing. I personally believe the author does not write in third person very well. To me it seems all over the place at times, and then at other times the characters are talking to much in their heads. As a reader, I have read many books and stories in third person, and yes there are sometimes commentary from the characters, but when it goes on and on it gets annoying at a point. When reading in a certain POV the reader should understand what your trying to portray without all the commentary, specifically when reading in third person. If one can't do that successfully two different times (this is the second book I have read by this author) than you can try another POV that works better.
I'm sorry to be so harsh, but I like to be honest in my reviews on books.
The erotic parts of this book added to my frustration. I just felt it was just a whole lot of YES! and OH! How did the character feel? What is going on in their heads? (And yes this is the time to add commentary)
So overall the erotic parts were ok for me.
Had much potential, but to me it did not go as I planned it to go. I will still read this author though so I can truly see if the author improves.
2.5 rating
**ARC provided by author for an honest review**
**CAUTION ~ VERY HONEST REVIEW**
I thought this was not the best I have ever read.
Mostly throughout the entire book I was annoyed and frustrated. The story or plot was ok, but could have been written better. The characters were written alright.
The biggest problem here was the third person writing. I personally believe the author does not write in third person very well. To me it seems all over the place at times, and then at other times the characters are talking to much in their heads. As a reader, I have read many books and stories in third person, and yes there are sometimes commentary from the characters, but when it goes on and on it gets annoying at a point. When reading in a certain POV the reader should understand what your trying to portray without all the commentary, specifically when reading in third person. If one can't do that successfully two different times (this is the second book I have read by this author) than you can try another POV that works better.
I'm sorry to be so harsh, but I like to be honest in my reviews on books.
The erotic parts of this book added to my frustration. I just felt it was just a whole lot of YES! and OH! How did the character feel? What is going on in their heads? (And yes this is the time to add commentary)
So overall the erotic parts were ok for me.
Had much potential, but to me it did not go as I planned it to go. I will still read this author though so I can truly see if the author improves.
2.5 rating
**ARC provided by author for an honest review**
May 15, 2017
3.5 Stars
I think when you want to rate a book, it should be compared to other books in its own genre, not with masterpieces of other genres. Plus you should gauge that how much it's been successful in fulfilling your purposes of reading such a book. With this formula, I've rated it 3.5 stars.
I was shocked by the prologue, because the very first line started with the depiction of a steamy sex. I just thought it would be just a story with lots of sex scenes and little content. My judgment had been proven wrong when I finished the first chapter, though. The plot was funny and interesting, the characters were also very well depicted and described. I should confess that I like "Nate & Rayya" more than "Jay & Karman". Sometimes I wanted to smack Jay in the face.
I can't wait for the sequel to come. I really want Nate to be able to fulfill his dark desires :)
It's a short read and the first one in a series, so I can't say much without spoiling the story. So, if you like an adventure about swingers and their loves and fears, it'll be a good book for you. I should also warn you that it's filled with kinky stuff, so be prepared.
I think when you want to rate a book, it should be compared to other books in its own genre, not with masterpieces of other genres. Plus you should gauge that how much it's been successful in fulfilling your purposes of reading such a book. With this formula, I've rated it 3.5 stars.
I was shocked by the prologue, because the very first line started with the depiction of a steamy sex. I just thought it would be just a story with lots of sex scenes and little content. My judgment had been proven wrong when I finished the first chapter, though. The plot was funny and interesting, the characters were also very well depicted and described. I should confess that I like "Nate & Rayya" more than "Jay & Karman". Sometimes I wanted to smack Jay in the face.
I can't wait for the sequel to come. I really want Nate to be able to fulfill his dark desires :)
It's a short read and the first one in a series, so I can't say much without spoiling the story. So, if you like an adventure about swingers and their loves and fears, it'll be a good book for you. I should also warn you that it's filled with kinky stuff, so be prepared.
June 16, 2016
This book is different from all the book I've ever read !
It’s so wrong yet so hot.
If you want to read something very short, crazy hot, m/f/m taboo read and don't want to spend so much time and thought on it, this one's your winner!
Sometimes we just need a little smut in our life ♥
Now if you'll excuse me...I'll need to take a looooong cold shower.
Ahem.
It’s so wrong yet so hot.
If you want to read something very short, crazy hot, m/f/m taboo read and don't want to spend so much time and thought on it, this one's your winner!
Sometimes we just need a little smut in our life ♥
Now if you'll excuse me...I'll need to take a looooong cold shower.
Ahem.
December 8, 2016
HAWT!
Look out naughty girls and boys.. light your reading device aflame! ♡ come on, everything thing you are about to read, you want to try. . It's okay.. do it. Read this short you won't be sorry!
Look out naughty girls and boys.. light your reading device aflame! ♡ come on, everything thing you are about to read, you want to try. . It's okay.. do it. Read this short you won't be sorry!
November 30, 2016
1st read by O.M. Wills. What an adventurous, explosive trip! These couples didn't hold back! Full of hot scenes, I thought this was a good short erotic read!
May 15, 2016
OM keeps me behind the characters all the time!! Every move is visually and mentally inviting... My inside tenses and definitely couldn't put it down... Panda likes!
June 1, 2016
Rated 3.5 Stars
Erotic Road Trip Adventures is a quick dirty read with a bit of hotwifing thrown in that I liked but did not love because of some of the word choices as well as the typos, they kept throwing me off and taking me out of the zone.
Copy gifted by author
Erotic Road Trip Adventures is a quick dirty read with a bit of hotwifing thrown in that I liked but did not love because of some of the word choices as well as the typos, they kept throwing me off and taking me out of the zone.
Copy gifted by author
May 23, 2016
Hot!! Not a book to read while in line at a tax office :) hot and sexy adventure...
July 14, 2016
3.5 Stars
August 7, 2016
this book was hot!!! especially the last couple chapters, loved the scenes and how you connect with the characters and feel the love, trust and pation between the couples.
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