The evil Lord Dan-Tor has at last been driven out of Fyorlund and has retreated to Narsindal, the realm of his dread master Sumeral. But Hawklan and his allies have won no more than a breathing space, for Dan-Tor is gathering his forces for a massive onslaught on all the free lands.An alliance of the free peoples must be forged, even those of peaceful Orthlund, to stand against Sumeral's dark battalions. The dwellers in the air and the mysterious inhabitants of the lands beneath the mountains must also play their part.A brave alliance; yet so great are Sumeral's forces that it can do no more than stave off the hour of defeat a little while.For Hawklan and the raven, Gavor, the road ahead is lonely and unknowable, for they must confront Sumeral himself, and in so doing discover, at last, what secret lies buried so deep in Hawklan's soul. Into Narsindal is the fourth book of "The Chronicles of Hawklan".
Roger Taylor was born in Heywood, Lancashire, and now lives in the Wirral. He is a chartered civil and structural engineer, a pistol, rifle and shotgun shooter, instructor/student in aikido, and an enthusiastic and loud but bone-jarringly inaccurate piano player.
He wrote four books between 1983 and 1986 and built up a handsome rejection file before the third was accepted by Headline to become the first two books of the Chronicles of Hawklan.
It started off very strong and then kind of went off the rails in the last 100 pages. Too many times some characters refused to explain things and other characters did not question it. The ending relied on a very hard-to-believe sequence with a dea ex machina, a furry killer beast and an almost unexplained final confrontation. Not only nobody among the good ones gets killed, but they also get out of the final confrontation with barely a scratch!! The bad ones are quite ineffective here. Still, I enjoyed a good part of the book, and I appreciated the underlying philosophy on war and struggle (the author is a practitioner of oriental martial arts and their worldview permeates the tetralogy).
What a waste! The book begins well and Hawklan's flashback is well done. But the overall story is similar to Lord of the Rings and there any many, many parallel's to be found. Worst is, the big bad villains with earth changing cosmic powers are defeated at a single stroke without using any of their powers at all. What a complete waste!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
By the fourth book I knew what I was getting into. I thought the story would be enough and that I could look past the peg-legged, spur-wearing raven that not only talked but did nightingale impressions and bad jokes. I did in fact find that less annoying than the constant repetition of a concept in slightly varying ways – ‘It’s a great mystery, we can never know.’ Just about everything in this book is a great mystery and we can never know – including how I got to book four. A couple of things were revealed at the end. One of them was the identity of the character Gulda, which had already been revealed along the way – there were two hints and while the first one I remember seemed subtle enough, the second virtually beat you about the head with the fact.
Maybe it’s just me, but it took four books to get to the great battle and then it seemed to wrap up very quickly. Things in this book lacked credibility for me – all-powerful creatures who stay their hands for dubious reasons, people’s reactions, the fighting and hardly anyone on the good side hurt and game references for the sake of game references.
I liked the Queen, I liked the idea of Gulda and her history. Isloman and Loman were good characters. I liked a lot of the things the author was trying to say about life and war, but I don’t necessarily think that those things make a good story. There are plenty of things that are enjoyable in fiction and completely untenable in reality (vigilantes for instance).
There is another book after this one, which looks like it starts another adventure. Since this one didn’t really get settled to my satisfaction, I don’t think I’ll be going there.