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To Capture Mr. Darcy: A Pride and Prejudice Variation Novel
Nature's a fickle thing. When four days of rain occur earlier in Jane Austen's Pride & Prejudice to trap Jane and Elizabeth Bennet at Netherfield Park, new romances, misunderstandings, and alignments are made. Volatile tempers never did well cooped up together. Not even when there's a chessboard to help pass the time.
Fall in love with the romance of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet all over again in this new variation by author Elizabeth Ann West. A stand-alone novel of over 300 pages in paperback, this story is sure to make you sigh and swoon many times over!
Fall in love with the romance of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet all over again in this new variation by author Elizabeth Ann West. A stand-alone novel of over 300 pages in paperback, this story is sure to make you sigh and swoon many times over!
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First published April 28, 2016
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Elizabeth Ann West
39 books142 followersA Jane-of-all-trades, mistress to none! Elizabeth Ann West is the author of 7 novels and 9 novellas, 15 of which are story variations of Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice. Her books have won reader conference awards and hit the Historical Bestseller lists on Amazon, Kobo, and the iBooks stores multiple times. A lover of all things geeky, Elizabeth codes websites, dabbles in graphic design, and is always looking for new technology to learn and master. A Navy wife and mother of two, her family has lived all over the United States, currently residing in upstate New York. Originally from Virginia Beach, Virginia, you can keep up with Elizabeth on Twitter @Eawwrites and on her website, http://elizabethannwest.com where she posts new fiction as she writes it!
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June 20, 2016
I love the simplicity of this premise: No deaths, kidnappings or other mayhem. Instead, several successive days of rain extend the stay of Elizabeth and Jane at Netherfield. This allows time for the romance between Mr. Bingley and Jane to progress much more quickly. It also provides lots of sparring opportunity for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth and seals his determination to pursue her. Unfortunately, it does nothing to help their misunderstandings; if anything, it increases them. I actually felt miffed with Miss Elizabeth, who always interprets Darcy's words in the worst possible way. The poor guy is further hampered by being tongue-tied and expressing his thoughts clumsily whenever he's with her. Things get even worse when Elizabeth returns to Longbourn, where the newly-arrived Mr. Collins drops the bomb that Darcy is engaged to Anne DeBourgh, sinking Darcy that much further in her esteem. She can't help feeling attracted to him, but she is convinced that he must be toying with her and would never consider actually marrying her.
There are two plot elements here that I particularly enjoy, starting with the two chess matches that the two have at Netherfield. Elizabeth begins the game with an anonymous opponent, and both she and Darcy keep sneaking to the board to move their pieces. The second is the wonderful characterization of Mr. Bennet, who is observant, wiley and wise, and who also leads ODC to the book's turning point.
Even the unedited version I read on a fan fiction site is beautifully written, as Ms. West's books generally are. She creates vivid characterizations and always provides lots of heat between D&E. As JAFF readers always enjoy, there are plenty of scenes between the two of them.
There are two plot elements here that I particularly enjoy, starting with the two chess matches that the two have at Netherfield. Elizabeth begins the game with an anonymous opponent, and both she and Darcy keep sneaking to the board to move their pieces. The second is the wonderful characterization of Mr. Bennet, who is observant, wiley and wise, and who also leads ODC to the book's turning point.
Even the unedited version I read on a fan fiction site is beautifully written, as Ms. West's books generally are. She creates vivid characterizations and always provides lots of heat between D&E. As JAFF readers always enjoy, there are plenty of scenes between the two of them.
January 10, 2018
This variation captured my attention quickly with the game of chess going on at Netherfield (while Elizabeth and Jane reside there due to Jane's illness) with both players unaware of just who their opponent is.
Elizabeth is both frustrated at having to stay at Netherfield but also at her interpretations of just what Mr. Darcy means with his various comments. She interprets the word mistress to mean its lowest form while Mr. Darcy is speaking of it as "Mistress" to his "Master" of Pemberley. Then there are her mixed feelings also reflecting her sister's wanting to stay longer as Mr. Bingley pays close attention to her and spends time at her side. Elizabeth doesn't want to take that away from Jane BUT with Caroline snipping at her and Mr. Darcy's confusing and seemingly insulting comments she wants the familiar uproar of her own home.
I don't play chess but found the use of the game, its moves and references as to how such could apply in relationships made this tale all the more interesting.
Mr. Collins is downright appalling in his actions and in his words. Lady Catherine shows up and there are added insults and untruths to confuse the relationship between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth.
Mr. Bennet seems to be stirred to add some wise words and even orders in regard to what he observes. Part of this is a reflection as to Mr. Darcy speaking to him early after the sisters return home.
This was a fairly quick read and kept my attention.
Elizabeth is both frustrated at having to stay at Netherfield but also at her interpretations of just what Mr. Darcy means with his various comments. She interprets the word mistress to mean its lowest form while Mr. Darcy is speaking of it as "Mistress" to his "Master" of Pemberley. Then there are her mixed feelings also reflecting her sister's wanting to stay longer as Mr. Bingley pays close attention to her and spends time at her side. Elizabeth doesn't want to take that away from Jane BUT with Caroline snipping at her and Mr. Darcy's confusing and seemingly insulting comments she wants the familiar uproar of her own home.
I don't play chess but found the use of the game, its moves and references as to how such could apply in relationships made this tale all the more interesting.
Mr. Collins is downright appalling in his actions and in his words. Lady Catherine shows up and there are added insults and untruths to confuse the relationship between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth.
Mr. Bennet seems to be stirred to add some wise words and even orders in regard to what he observes. Part of this is a reflection as to Mr. Darcy speaking to him early after the sisters return home.
This was a fairly quick read and kept my attention.
May 11, 2016
To Capture Mr. Darcy: A Pride and Prejudice Variation Novel
Loved the Darcy in this story. He was taken with Elizabeth from the beginning. His comment from the Meryton Assembly still left him in hot water with Elizabeth, but she began to see a different Darcy when staying with Jane at Netherfield. Darcy was still socially awkward and Elizabeth still misunderstood his comments. An innocent chess game started Darcy's determination to win Elizabeth's love. At first neither knew who the other player was, but when he found out it was Elizabeth playing the game, he was impressed especially since she won the game. Both Jane and Elizabeth were at Netherfield when their silly, stupid cousin, William Collins arrived. Before leaving Netherfield, Bingley asked Jane to marry him. Returning home, he focused his attention to Elizabeth. However, Elizabeth's interest in him was nonexistent and she tried to push Mary for him to marry him. Bingley tells Caroline to plan a ball to honor their engagement. Caroline was her usual obnoxious self fawning over Darcy and sending barbs at Elizabeth constantly. Elizabeth's witty rejoinders went over Caroline's head every time Elizabeth commented. Darcy had to stifle many laughs. Darcy asks Elizabeth for a courtship, and she agrees. Then Collins tells Elizabeth that Darcy is engaged to his cousin, and Elizabeth calls him a cad and liar. When that lie is laid to rest, Elizabeth and Darcy's relationship is restored by her father showing her misunderstandings in front of Darcy. At this time she realizes that she loves Darcy. Collins is still smarting from her refusal. Not knowing that Collins wrote, under Caroline's direction, to his most esteemed patroness, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, she invites herself to Netherfield. So we have an angry aunt, a refused suitor, and a very jealous Caroline Bingley. The day of the ball, Lady Catherine shows up to berate her nephew's choice of bride in front of all Meryton. Add to that a very vindictive refused suitor, Collins grabs her and rips her dress. Between the verbal and physical attack, Elizabeth loses her self control and is taken home. Darcy tells her ladyship that he will marry Elizabeth and threatens to do harm to Collins. Mr. Bennet calms him down and Bennet tells him call on Elizabeth tomorrow. In the morning, Elizabeth hopes to avoid everyone to go for her walk, but unfortunately Collins is down. When he repeats his offer of marriage telling her that she needs to set her sights lower and that Darcy will never propose to her. Grabbing her pastry she hurries out the door to walk to Oakham Mount. As she approaches the summit, she sees Mr. Darcy sitting on the rock sleeping. Startled, he jumps up, calling her name, and begins to apologize for his aunt's behavior. She tells him that he is not responsible for the behavior of others. He proposes on the mount, she agrees. Mr. Bennet gives his approval and blessings, but he wants Elizabeth to have a season in town. Finally, they are married in June. When their children about their whirlwind romance and Elizabeth tells them that all she did was move a a pawn to capture Mr. Darcy. Good story with a little less pride and a little less prejudice.
Loved the Darcy in this story. He was taken with Elizabeth from the beginning. His comment from the Meryton Assembly still left him in hot water with Elizabeth, but she began to see a different Darcy when staying with Jane at Netherfield. Darcy was still socially awkward and Elizabeth still misunderstood his comments. An innocent chess game started Darcy's determination to win Elizabeth's love. At first neither knew who the other player was, but when he found out it was Elizabeth playing the game, he was impressed especially since she won the game. Both Jane and Elizabeth were at Netherfield when their silly, stupid cousin, William Collins arrived. Before leaving Netherfield, Bingley asked Jane to marry him. Returning home, he focused his attention to Elizabeth. However, Elizabeth's interest in him was nonexistent and she tried to push Mary for him to marry him. Bingley tells Caroline to plan a ball to honor their engagement. Caroline was her usual obnoxious self fawning over Darcy and sending barbs at Elizabeth constantly. Elizabeth's witty rejoinders went over Caroline's head every time Elizabeth commented. Darcy had to stifle many laughs. Darcy asks Elizabeth for a courtship, and she agrees. Then Collins tells Elizabeth that Darcy is engaged to his cousin, and Elizabeth calls him a cad and liar. When that lie is laid to rest, Elizabeth and Darcy's relationship is restored by her father showing her misunderstandings in front of Darcy. At this time she realizes that she loves Darcy. Collins is still smarting from her refusal. Not knowing that Collins wrote, under Caroline's direction, to his most esteemed patroness, Lady Catherine de Bourgh, she invites herself to Netherfield. So we have an angry aunt, a refused suitor, and a very jealous Caroline Bingley. The day of the ball, Lady Catherine shows up to berate her nephew's choice of bride in front of all Meryton. Add to that a very vindictive refused suitor, Collins grabs her and rips her dress. Between the verbal and physical attack, Elizabeth loses her self control and is taken home. Darcy tells her ladyship that he will marry Elizabeth and threatens to do harm to Collins. Mr. Bennet calms him down and Bennet tells him call on Elizabeth tomorrow. In the morning, Elizabeth hopes to avoid everyone to go for her walk, but unfortunately Collins is down. When he repeats his offer of marriage telling her that she needs to set her sights lower and that Darcy will never propose to her. Grabbing her pastry she hurries out the door to walk to Oakham Mount. As she approaches the summit, she sees Mr. Darcy sitting on the rock sleeping. Startled, he jumps up, calling her name, and begins to apologize for his aunt's behavior. She tells him that he is not responsible for the behavior of others. He proposes on the mount, she agrees. Mr. Bennet gives his approval and blessings, but he wants Elizabeth to have a season in town. Finally, they are married in June. When their children about their whirlwind romance and Elizabeth tells them that all she did was move a a pawn to capture Mr. Darcy. Good story with a little less pride and a little less prejudice.
February 19, 2018
While staying at Netherfield Jane and Elizabeth find themselves spending a lot of time with their hosts. For the weather has made it impossible for anyone to leave. Does this bring Jane and Bingley together quicker, do Darcy and Elizabeth come to understand each other or will they always misunderstand each other.
An enjoyable, well-written variation.
An enjoyable, well-written variation.
May 29, 2016
What could come from a few extra days spent together at Netherfield?
Though I have a majority of Ms West's books, To Capture Mr Darcy is the first I've gotten around to reading, and I must say I loved it!!! I loved the simplicity of this story plot: No deaths, kidnappings or other major mayhem. In this story we find Jane and Elizabeth at Netherfield as Jane recovers from her illness. They are thus prolonged in their stay by continued rains for several days longer. Elizabeth at first enjoys this idea for Jane's sake to get to know Mr Bingley further, but it proves very challenging for her in the way of Mr Darcy (and a very tiresome Miss Bingley).
In between periods of rest for Jane, Elizabeth meanders down to the library in search of new books to read. While there she noticed a chess board and starts a game, though notices that someone else is playing along. What she didn't not realize was that it was Mr Darcy thinking he was playing a game against Mr Bingley. So when he sees Elizabeth make a move he feels irritation that she would choose to make a play on a game she is not involved in, therefore when he looks at the move he realizes he is actually playing against Elizabeth.
This prolonged time provides lots of sparring opportunity for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth and seals his determination to pursue her. Unfortunately, for Mr Darcy this extra time does nothing to help their misunderstandings; if anything, it increases them. What I get irritated at is that Miss Elizabeth continues to interpret Darcy's words in the worst possible ways. The poor guy is can't seem to dig himself a whole further by being tongue-tied and expressing his thoughts clumsily whenever he's with her. Then there's the newly-arrived Mr. Collins dropping details about his beloved patroness' daughter's impending marriage to Mr Darcy, sinking Darcy that much further in her esteem. She can't help feeling attracted to him, but she is convinced that he must be toying with her and would never consider actually marrying her. For all Elizabeth's wit, she sure is a numbskull!!!
I have to say that I love Mr Darcy's persistence and Mr Bennet's excellent observation and wit. I love how Elizabeth finally spoke back to Miss Bingley, even though Jane continues to reprimand Elizabeth for it. I LOVED how Mr Bennet finally yelled at Mr Collins to put him in his place, even though Mr Collins is still too stupid to realize when it's in his best interest to shut up!!!!
Yes, Lady Catherine and Mr Wickham make a show of things only they know how to. Mr Collins truly demonstrates what a toad he is. And Miss Bingley is the same delusional harpy as always.
If this is what to expect from Ms West's other books, then I will surely enjoy them. I highly recommend this to all JAFFers, there is no mature themes for those who are squeamish.
Though I have a majority of Ms West's books, To Capture Mr Darcy is the first I've gotten around to reading, and I must say I loved it!!! I loved the simplicity of this story plot: No deaths, kidnappings or other major mayhem. In this story we find Jane and Elizabeth at Netherfield as Jane recovers from her illness. They are thus prolonged in their stay by continued rains for several days longer. Elizabeth at first enjoys this idea for Jane's sake to get to know Mr Bingley further, but it proves very challenging for her in the way of Mr Darcy (and a very tiresome Miss Bingley).
In between periods of rest for Jane, Elizabeth meanders down to the library in search of new books to read. While there she noticed a chess board and starts a game, though notices that someone else is playing along. What she didn't not realize was that it was Mr Darcy thinking he was playing a game against Mr Bingley. So when he sees Elizabeth make a move he feels irritation that she would choose to make a play on a game she is not involved in, therefore when he looks at the move he realizes he is actually playing against Elizabeth.
This prolonged time provides lots of sparring opportunity for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth and seals his determination to pursue her. Unfortunately, for Mr Darcy this extra time does nothing to help their misunderstandings; if anything, it increases them. What I get irritated at is that Miss Elizabeth continues to interpret Darcy's words in the worst possible ways. The poor guy is can't seem to dig himself a whole further by being tongue-tied and expressing his thoughts clumsily whenever he's with her. Then there's the newly-arrived Mr. Collins dropping details about his beloved patroness' daughter's impending marriage to Mr Darcy, sinking Darcy that much further in her esteem. She can't help feeling attracted to him, but she is convinced that he must be toying with her and would never consider actually marrying her. For all Elizabeth's wit, she sure is a numbskull!!!
I have to say that I love Mr Darcy's persistence and Mr Bennet's excellent observation and wit. I love how Elizabeth finally spoke back to Miss Bingley, even though Jane continues to reprimand Elizabeth for it. I LOVED how Mr Bennet finally yelled at Mr Collins to put him in his place, even though Mr Collins is still too stupid to realize when it's in his best interest to shut up!!!!
Yes, Lady Catherine and Mr Wickham make a show of things only they know how to. Mr Collins truly demonstrates what a toad he is. And Miss Bingley is the same delusional harpy as always.
If this is what to expect from Ms West's other books, then I will surely enjoy them. I highly recommend this to all JAFFers, there is no mature themes for those who are squeamish.
April 20, 2017
What if Darcy and Elizabeth were allowed a bit more time at Netherfield before Mr Collins arrived, before the ball, before Wickham?
A very entertaining story, that's what!
I really felt that West did a great job keeping most of the characters IC (with the exception of Darcy near the end, and Jane once she recovered). It was good to see a stubborn Elizabeth, and to see a Jane with a backbone. While Jane is all that is good in the world, it was nice to see her be described in a more well-rounded, honest way.
A wonderful stand-alone from Elizabeth Ann West!
A very entertaining story, that's what!
I really felt that West did a great job keeping most of the characters IC (with the exception of Darcy near the end, and Jane once she recovered). It was good to see a stubborn Elizabeth, and to see a Jane with a backbone. While Jane is all that is good in the world, it was nice to see her be described in a more well-rounded, honest way.
A wonderful stand-alone from Elizabeth Ann West!
January 8, 2018
Poor Darcy! Elizabeth seems to wilfully misunderstand him at every turn! I really wanted to sit down and give her a right talking-to, but Mr Bennet understands his daughter more than she does herself. I really liked Mr Bennet in this story, showing that he understands his family well and does care for their welfare. An enjoyable read with a truly obnoxious Mr Collins that even Mary would not want and a patroness to match! I would have liked to have seen them pay for their actions more than we did but it worked fine as it was.
June 30, 2017
My Rating: 2.5 * rounded up to 3*
I read several years ago Ms. West collection "Longbourn to Pemberley" which I quite enjoyed. So when 'To Capture Mr. Darcy' went on sale last year, I bought it. I quite liked the premise of this book and the fact that it was mostly contained at Netherfield during Jane's illness.
'That he was already in very grave danger of more than a passing fancy with this dark-haired, bright-eyed creature was a foregone conclusion, but now he was in the the thralls of a very thrilling chess match with a worthy opponent.'
The anticipation with which Elizabeth and Darcy looked forward to moving their chess pieces against each other was delightful. For two very intelligent individuals, they certainly knew how to set each other off and misunderstand the others words...Elizabeth most of all.
The drama going on within Netherfield was high, and I found it came across to me as if I was watching a play. Miss Bingley was her usual rude and obnoxious self but Charles has bit more spirit and understanding with what was going on. He also didn't let anyone come between him and Jane!
Mr. Bennet in this story had a much better handle and understanding of the women in his household. Mr. Collins is more greedy and nastier than ever! Wickham himself plays a very limited role, and I felt his presence was truly not necessary to this variation. Lady Catherine does make her entrance, but she is for the most part ignored despite her viciousness.
Overall, this variation did not capture me. I enjoyed parts but at times found little inconsistencies that nagged at me. One being the scene where Darcy knocks on Elizabeth's bedroom door. One editing issue that jumped out at me is the beginning of Chapter 5...it states her 'third morning' when Chapter 2 already stated her 'fourth day'. That being said, I do look forward to reading another book by Ms. West.
I read several years ago Ms. West collection "Longbourn to Pemberley" which I quite enjoyed. So when 'To Capture Mr. Darcy' went on sale last year, I bought it. I quite liked the premise of this book and the fact that it was mostly contained at Netherfield during Jane's illness.
'That he was already in very grave danger of more than a passing fancy with this dark-haired, bright-eyed creature was a foregone conclusion, but now he was in the the thralls of a very thrilling chess match with a worthy opponent.'
The anticipation with which Elizabeth and Darcy looked forward to moving their chess pieces against each other was delightful. For two very intelligent individuals, they certainly knew how to set each other off and misunderstand the others words...Elizabeth most of all.
The drama going on within Netherfield was high, and I found it came across to me as if I was watching a play. Miss Bingley was her usual rude and obnoxious self but Charles has bit more spirit and understanding with what was going on. He also didn't let anyone come between him and Jane!
Mr. Bennet in this story had a much better handle and understanding of the women in his household. Mr. Collins is more greedy and nastier than ever! Wickham himself plays a very limited role, and I felt his presence was truly not necessary to this variation. Lady Catherine does make her entrance, but she is for the most part ignored despite her viciousness.
Overall, this variation did not capture me. I enjoyed parts but at times found little inconsistencies that nagged at me. One being the scene where Darcy knocks on Elizabeth's bedroom door. One editing issue that jumped out at me is the beginning of Chapter 5...it states her 'third morning' when Chapter 2 already stated her 'fourth day'. That being said, I do look forward to reading another book by Ms. West.
August 18, 2016
I enjoyed this story very much. The additional time at Netherfield basically helped solidify Darcy's feelings for Elizabeth, although they appeared to really confuse the issue for her. Darcy is still his totally awkward, socially inept self when it comes to wooing a woman. Elizabeth, however, seems to be a bit more unforgiving and quick to judge negatively pretty much every time there is any kind of misunderstanding or disagreement. I give it 4 stars and a definite recommend.
May 31, 2020
Elizabeth is staying at Netherfield to care for Jane while she is ill. She finds herself playing chess with with a mystery person (she thinks it is Bingley). Imagine her surprise to find that it is Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Further storms prevent the Bennet ladies from leaving, which gives our dear couple a few more opportunities to get to know each other. Although, Caroline Bingley will do everything in her power to keep them apart.
Further storms prevent the Bennet ladies from leaving, which gives our dear couple a few more opportunities to get to know each other. Although, Caroline Bingley will do everything in her power to keep them apart.
June 19, 2016
Who knew chess was the game of love
This was a quick read that had all the elements for a HEA between our dear couples [Jane and Bingley, Elizabeth and Darcy]. Since that was the outcome, then I suppose you could say it was predictable. All points leading to everyone getting their hearts desire.
There really wasn’t anything new to add to the mix, other than Jane and Elizabeth being stuck at Netherfield extra days due to excessive rain. During that time a lot happened.
Bingley had more time to solidify his feelings for Jane Bennet and secure her affection for him.
Caroline was a bit more creative in her attempts to garner Darcy’s affection, or at least demonstrate her qualifications to be Mistress of Pemberley.
Cousin Collins was a mean, conniving man. Even Mary wouldn’t have him after his behavior at the Netherfield Ball. Her comments that he shouldn’t be a man of the church said it all.
Lady Catherine was more obnoxious than canon. The author’s description of her did the poor lady no favors. Her appearance mirrored her behavior.
Mr. Bennet kept surprising me with his actions and behavior. I rather liked him in this variation.
Mrs. Bennet, Sister Mrs. Philips, Kitty and Lydia were the same characters as canon.
Wickham made an appearance but was whisked away as quickly as he showed up. That was a very creative way to get rid of him. I’ve not seen it done exactly that way before.
Darcy and Elizabeth…man. What can I say? When you have two passionate people, you have all the ingredients for fireworks. Their marriage will not be dull. That is for sure. It was hard watching them struggle. You have all those misunderstandings, pride and prejudice and anger combined with raging feelings. How do they do it?
I felt for Darcy in this version. It seemed that he couldn’t do or say anything right. Elizabeth was misunderstanding at every turn. It was their differences that kept getting in the way of their understanding. Their expectations were different and their problem solving skills were skewed toward what they knew and have experienced. It was no wonder they were constantly at each other’s throats. And then, when you fire up that passionate side…fireworks!!
I liked the epilogue.
Note: I, like other reviewers, thought the price too high for work this short. If it wasn’t for the fact I had read parts of it as a WIP [work in progress], and was anxious for the release, I wouldn’t have bought it. That is one disadvantage to reading a WIP. You don’t know what the purchasing price will be until it is launched. Note to self….reconsider WIP.
This was a quick read that had all the elements for a HEA between our dear couples [Jane and Bingley, Elizabeth and Darcy]. Since that was the outcome, then I suppose you could say it was predictable. All points leading to everyone getting their hearts desire.
There really wasn’t anything new to add to the mix, other than Jane and Elizabeth being stuck at Netherfield extra days due to excessive rain. During that time a lot happened.
Bingley had more time to solidify his feelings for Jane Bennet and secure her affection for him.
Caroline was a bit more creative in her attempts to garner Darcy’s affection, or at least demonstrate her qualifications to be Mistress of Pemberley.
Cousin Collins was a mean, conniving man. Even Mary wouldn’t have him after his behavior at the Netherfield Ball. Her comments that he shouldn’t be a man of the church said it all.
Lady Catherine was more obnoxious than canon. The author’s description of her did the poor lady no favors. Her appearance mirrored her behavior.
Mr. Bennet kept surprising me with his actions and behavior. I rather liked him in this variation.
Mrs. Bennet, Sister Mrs. Philips, Kitty and Lydia were the same characters as canon.
Wickham made an appearance but was whisked away as quickly as he showed up. That was a very creative way to get rid of him. I’ve not seen it done exactly that way before.
Darcy and Elizabeth…man. What can I say? When you have two passionate people, you have all the ingredients for fireworks. Their marriage will not be dull. That is for sure. It was hard watching them struggle. You have all those misunderstandings, pride and prejudice and anger combined with raging feelings. How do they do it?
I felt for Darcy in this version. It seemed that he couldn’t do or say anything right. Elizabeth was misunderstanding at every turn. It was their differences that kept getting in the way of their understanding. Their expectations were different and their problem solving skills were skewed toward what they knew and have experienced. It was no wonder they were constantly at each other’s throats. And then, when you fire up that passionate side…fireworks!!
I liked the epilogue.
Note: I, like other reviewers, thought the price too high for work this short. If it wasn’t for the fact I had read parts of it as a WIP [work in progress], and was anxious for the release, I wouldn’t have bought it. That is one disadvantage to reading a WIP. You don’t know what the purchasing price will be until it is launched. Note to self….reconsider WIP.
August 9, 2016
This is an excellent stand alone P&P variation. Originating during the Bennet sisters stay at Netherfield due to Jane's illness after Mrs. Bennet's embarrassing visit. Lizzy and Darcy begin to play a chess match not knowing the opponent. Unfortunately Lizzy seems determined to willfully misunderstand Darcy and really everyone else.
This Lizzy is a little neurotic (O/T I am seeing this character trait in a lot of books and I don't understand it nor do I like it) thinking that Darcy and Bingley want them for doxies and will not make a respectable offer. Every time Darcy attempts to explain his meaning or intention she storms off.
Quickly Jane & Bingley are engaged but this doesn't calm Lizzy's overactive imagination. And she continues to jump to the offended position at every statement. It is a little tiresome. I also felt the ending felt out of balance.
This Lizzy is a little neurotic (O/T I am seeing this character trait in a lot of books and I don't understand it nor do I like it) thinking that Darcy and Bingley want them for doxies and will not make a respectable offer. Every time Darcy attempts to explain his meaning or intention she storms off.
Quickly Jane & Bingley are engaged but this doesn't calm Lizzy's overactive imagination. And she continues to jump to the offended position at every statement. It is a little tiresome. I also felt the ending felt out of balance.
May 21, 2023
This is trash. Do not buy
February 2, 2019
Elizabeth and Jane's visit to Netherfield gets prolonged due to heavy rain, and Elizabeth and Darcy unknowingly start a chess game with each other.
This had so much potential... which it promptly fell short of.
Bullet points:
- Iffy grammar and spelling. Commas either missing or all over the place. Also iffy word usage .
- Though the book is technically written in third person, the point of view kept switching between Elizabeth and Darcy, sometimes even within the same paragraph, which was extremely distracting.
- Such drama. Such fighting. Such insults. And here I was, stupidly expecting to read a Regency story where all disagreements are handled in with kid gloves because that's part of the fun...
- The whole Darcy/Lizzy arc was just kind of there. And was more of a straight line than an arc. Most of the disagreements seemed manufactured. Hmph.
- I wish the chess theme had been woven throughout the book, rather than used up at the very beginning.
- The low-key fat shaming of Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine was unnecessary, to say the least. Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine as such were pretty unnecessary too, come to think of it.
Also, 'Lizzie' and 'Mariah'. I kept expecting the latter to start riffing.
This had so much potential... which it promptly fell short of.
Bullet points:
- Iffy grammar and spelling. Commas either missing or all over the place. Also iffy word usage .
- Though the book is technically written in third person, the point of view kept switching between Elizabeth and Darcy, sometimes even within the same paragraph, which was extremely distracting.
- Such drama. Such fighting. Such insults. And here I was, stupidly expecting to read a Regency story where all disagreements are handled in with kid gloves because that's part of the fun...
- The whole Darcy/Lizzy arc was just kind of there. And was more of a straight line than an arc. Most of the disagreements seemed manufactured. Hmph.
- I wish the chess theme had been woven throughout the book, rather than used up at the very beginning.
- The low-key fat shaming of Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine was unnecessary, to say the least. Mr. Collins and Lady Catherine as such were pretty unnecessary too, come to think of it.
Also, 'Lizzie' and 'Mariah'. I kept expecting the latter to start riffing.
May 24, 2021
The Games of Love!
A variation on the beloved Pride & Prejudice by Jane Austen with all the known characters but a rearranged storyline including a chess game, a detailed extended stay at Netherfield Park, and a confrontational Ball. It’s an interesting enough rearrangement, though the personalities of various characters seem more pronounced. Elizabeth seems more aggressive, more fickle, and a bit bolder. Mr. Bennet is more astute; Caroline Bingley is cattier and Mr. Collins is more aggressive and odious. Overall, it an average, interesting read.
A variation on the beloved Pride & Prejudice by Jane Austen with all the known characters but a rearranged storyline including a chess game, a detailed extended stay at Netherfield Park, and a confrontational Ball. It’s an interesting enough rearrangement, though the personalities of various characters seem more pronounced. Elizabeth seems more aggressive, more fickle, and a bit bolder. Mr. Bennet is more astute; Caroline Bingley is cattier and Mr. Collins is more aggressive and odious. Overall, it an average, interesting read.
January 29, 2018
To Capture Mr. Darcy: A Pride and Prejudice Variation Novel
The love story of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. This a story about how Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy romantic begin and end OK story if you like Pride and Prejudice you like this take on it.
The love story of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. This a story about how Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy romantic begin and end OK story if you like Pride and Prejudice you like this take on it.
October 13, 2016
Okay, this book came highly recommended, so I hate to say this...but I didn't like it as much as I expected. It wasn't bad or anything--really more like a 3.5 star book for the writing and basic flow of the plot--but the story itself was nothing special, and thus the minor annoyances I had with it seemed that much bigger, when in a more complex or involved story those things might have faded into the background.
My annoyances were as follows:
Regardless of these opinions, thanks so much to Lenora and Debbie for the recommendation, and to Lenora for the loan of the kindle book!
My annoyances were as follows:
Regardless of these opinions, thanks so much to Lenora and Debbie for the recommendation, and to Lenora for the loan of the kindle book!
March 27, 2018
I read the first chapter as a free sample on Kindle, thought it was a great premise and purchased the book. What a waste of money! There were a lot of things I didn't care for, the worst of it is that Elizabeth is childish, hot tempered and rude.
August 2, 2020
I have not read a book quite like this one just yet and I really enjoyed it. However, there were a few problems I had with it as well.
I loved! First, that with so much rain the stay at Netherfield was allowed to last a week and Jane was given the time to show her feelings to Mr. Bingley and no misunderstandings were allowed to brew. Elizabeth considering Mr. Darcy's good qualities more, if slightly forced by continued interactions with him due to staying under the same roof for a period of time. The ability to work out some misunderstandings.
I didn't like....Elizabeth seemed to misunderstand Mr. Darcy at every turn even when it seemed fairly straight forward what his intentions were. The rudeness by Elizabeth toward Miss Bingley, while deserved it does not seem in character. Mr. Collins' behavior turned from not just bumbling oaf, to outright evil and Elizabeth's following behavior; I do not feel she would have thrown a drink in his face. Mr. Darcy is known for being proper and gentlemanly, so to have him show up at Elizabeth's room asking to enter was very unlikely. And, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bennet discussing Mr. Wickham, but not including Elizabeth was quite odd. Additionally, the ending felt a little rushed between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy.
I know that each author views things quite differently and while it felt out of character to me, perhaps not so to other people. I did give this one 4 stars so obviously I enjoyed it quite a bit, regardless.
I loved! First, that with so much rain the stay at Netherfield was allowed to last a week and Jane was given the time to show her feelings to Mr. Bingley and no misunderstandings were allowed to brew. Elizabeth considering Mr. Darcy's good qualities more, if slightly forced by continued interactions with him due to staying under the same roof for a period of time. The ability to work out some misunderstandings.
I didn't like....Elizabeth seemed to misunderstand Mr. Darcy at every turn even when it seemed fairly straight forward what his intentions were. The rudeness by Elizabeth toward Miss Bingley, while deserved it does not seem in character. Mr. Collins' behavior turned from not just bumbling oaf, to outright evil and Elizabeth's following behavior; I do not feel she would have thrown a drink in his face. Mr. Darcy is known for being proper and gentlemanly, so to have him show up at Elizabeth's room asking to enter was very unlikely. And, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bennet discussing Mr. Wickham, but not including Elizabeth was quite odd. Additionally, the ending felt a little rushed between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy.
I know that each author views things quite differently and while it felt out of character to me, perhaps not so to other people. I did give this one 4 stars so obviously I enjoyed it quite a bit, regardless.
April 13, 2020
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Lizzy and Jane are rained in during their stay at Netherfield Park. With four extra days with Bingley and Darcy, Lizzy and Jane learn more about their suitors and come a little closer to understanding each other.
I really enjoyed this one! With four extra days together, Lizzy and Darcy spent a lot of time on the page together, and their conversations were always fun. I loved that Lizzy was able to show her intelligence to Darcy with the chess match. Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins were awful versions of themselves, but luckily Darcy and a very sweet Mr. Bennet were there to save the day. I'll be reading this one again.
The narrator, in my opinion, wasn't the best choice for this story, I do prefer a British accent for the Pride and Prejudice variations. I would recommend listening to the sample before purchasing. I requested a copy of the audiobook, and I'm voluntarily leaving a review.
I really enjoyed this one! With four extra days together, Lizzy and Darcy spent a lot of time on the page together, and their conversations were always fun. I loved that Lizzy was able to show her intelligence to Darcy with the chess match. Lady Catherine and Mr. Collins were awful versions of themselves, but luckily Darcy and a very sweet Mr. Bennet were there to save the day. I'll be reading this one again.
The narrator, in my opinion, wasn't the best choice for this story, I do prefer a British accent for the Pride and Prejudice variations. I would recommend listening to the sample before purchasing. I requested a copy of the audiobook, and I'm voluntarily leaving a review.
January 21, 2018
Check and checkmate
This story does not offer much in the way of action and adventure, merely the gentle and gradual process of falling in love and courtship. While Jane recovers at Netherfield, Elizabeth finds respite in the library with books and a game of chess with an unknown opponent.
In true Lizzie fashion, she misunderstands and finds fault with Mr. Darcy's every word and action. But she hasn't yet encountered the disgustingly odious Mr. Collins who believes he only has to make his choice from among the sisters in order to gain a wife.
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This story does not offer much in the way of action and adventure, merely the gentle and gradual process of falling in love and courtship. While Jane recovers at Netherfield, Elizabeth finds respite in the library with books and a game of chess with an unknown opponent.
In true Lizzie fashion, she misunderstands and finds fault with Mr. Darcy's every word and action. But she hasn't yet encountered the disgustingly odious Mr. Collins who believes he only has to make his choice from among the sisters in order to gain a wife.
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June 23, 2024
Story of forced proximity here. Rain stops Bennet girls from leaving Netherfield when they should. Also it is a story of constant misunderstanding of Darcy and Elizabeth. She is tending to think ill of him on every corner and is frustrated with her attraction to the man. He is thinking she is acting with the same agenda as all of the ton women he has met before her. Very strange indeed. Mr Bingley here is not as gullible as in original story, which is nice.
Heroes fall in love over game of chess. Know your opponent as they say.
Heroes fall in love over game of chess. Know your opponent as they say.
January 17, 2018
Sweet novella
This is a light-hearted story of the fluffy sort and I don't think the author intended it to be anything else. As such I found it enjoyable and entertaining and can certainly recommend it. I bought it from Bookbub for 99p so have no complaints about price! It is what it is ... a quick lift-me-up read..
This is a light-hearted story of the fluffy sort and I don't think the author intended it to be anything else. As such I found it enjoyable and entertaining and can certainly recommend it. I bought it from Bookbub for 99p so have no complaints about price! It is what it is ... a quick lift-me-up read..
May 21, 2020
A quick read
I was intrigued by the premise of the book. However, I found Elizabeth's character to be more childish and poor Mr. Darcy a bit out of his depth. I enjoy the sparring between the two but these characters we're just far too antagonistic. It was difficult to find real substance in any of the characters.
I was intrigued by the premise of the book. However, I found Elizabeth's character to be more childish and poor Mr. Darcy a bit out of his depth. I enjoy the sparring between the two but these characters we're just far too antagonistic. It was difficult to find real substance in any of the characters.
May 27, 2020
Emotion filled
Great storyline with little plot twist and a little dramatics. I highly recommend this for anyone who wants to read an interesting, clean, funny, and a touch of dramatics. This author brought a whole new meaning to playing chess. Truly love that Elizabeth made Darcy Stop and think. Amazingly written
Great storyline with little plot twist and a little dramatics. I highly recommend this for anyone who wants to read an interesting, clean, funny, and a touch of dramatics. This author brought a whole new meaning to playing chess. Truly love that Elizabeth made Darcy Stop and think. Amazingly written
February 9, 2019
This variation is captivating - not only is it G rated (Thank you, Mrs. West) but it stays true to the characters of Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth, giving a different but altogether believable variation of the meet-cute, the slow fall and the conclusion of a love story.
July 1, 2020
I listened to this on audiobook and I have to say that all the voices sounded like an American doing an impression of the queen and they’ve never actually heard a British person speak it was an alright book.
December 26, 2017
This was really good and great fun to read. Really liked this one and it is definitely one of the best variations I have read so far!!
January 10, 2018
This was one of the better Pride and Prejudice remakes I have read. Not amazing, but fun and engaging.
January 17, 2018
To capture Mr Darcy
What a fun book to read loved how the have nots show up the have and made their snobbery so evident
What a fun book to read loved how the have nots show up the have and made their snobbery so evident
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