Letting go is the hardest thing you'll ever have to do.
Coming to the realization that it's time to let go, is a close second.
When someone you love is ripped violently from your life it can be nearly impossible to sort through all of the emotions and it can be tempting to hide in the numbness created by shock. But you can't hide forever.
The mind is a mysterious thing. The way it processes things is fascinating. Reading the process of the characters grief was hard. Hard to look away, hard to stop reading, a little hard to breathe. I'd love to see more, to know more about this grieving process. And how she's at fault.
The story captured me from the first sentence, it was so well written and I just couldn't stop reading it. I really liked how you gently flowed from past to present, I could see it all happening in my mind (I think). I so look forward to the next story or chapter - we must know more!! Great work!
Without giving anything away, this story is brilliant. Jones's writing is crisp, clean, and flows with undeniable talent. The story isn't meant to be a thriller, but it almost does read like a panic attack. The reader is brought into the story instantly. They are immersed into what the main character is feeling and thinking in such a way that it almost feels like the reader IS the main character. Like, you experience what the MC does. So again, don't want to give anything away, but this is well worth picking up. But if you're like me, you'll leave the story wanting to hear more! :)